Jaanemaan Part 11

Hey guyzzz this z supriya…. I wanted to update yesterday but TU site was not opened so here z the next part…..hope u enjoy it..
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Radhika was enjoying the breeze sitting in the lawn which was pleasant to both mind and soul with Arjun’s head buried in her lap…
He had closed his eyes to enjoy the feeling of her silky smooth hair strands on his face…..they were covering his face as if protecting him…..he wanted to stay in their shade whole his life….He was appreciating the way they framed her face…..she looked more irresistible with wide open hair….
Radhika caught him staring at her…..
Radhika….. Don’t stare arjun….
Arjun…..you should have thought about this before looking this beautiful….. I can’t wait anymore……I wish papa agrees soon….I want to take you back home as soon as possible…..
Radhika…… He will…I will talk to him today….
Arjun…..Radhika….do you remember our first meeting???
Radhika…. How can I forget that day…..you scared me to death that day…..you lifted me up thinking m sam and I painted your shirt…..I laugh when I think about our previous encounters……
Arjun…..you spoilt my shirt most of the times……I wonder what joy you got doing that….
Radhika…..I didn’t do it purposely…..but haa I loved your angry expression on my crazy tactics…..
Arjun……I use to laugh on your tactics when I use to be alone……you irritated me to the core but I missed all your kiddish behavior in this two months…… It was so much hard for me to pass my time….I became a boredom without you but you didn’t find it necessary to call your husband once……
Radhika….. I missed you but I didn’t wanted to come between you and Sam that time….
Arjun got up and cupped her face…..

Arjun…..you know you are stupid….it was never Sam not even one day or a moment after I married you…..I was bound by my responsibilities towards nandu but in that too I only wanted you….. I asked you to sign divorce papers and leave me alone but inside I was scared that what if you really sign them….you don’t know what fears I faced from the day we married…..all those days I only saw loyalty towards Sam in your eyes….you don’t know how much I burst into flames seeing your selfless love for Sam…radhika I always wanted to be the center of your world….
She had tears in her almond eyes after listening to his heartfelt confession….
Radhika buried her face in his chest and while patiently listening to his heartbeat…… she replied…….you are the centre of my world now…… I love you more than anyone…… no one can replace you in my life……
He removed her face from his chest and kissed on her forehead….
Arjun…..This z more than my imagination….
Radhika…. When you started having dreams?
Arjun……everyone has dreams but this z more than anything I could have dreamed of….
Radhika placed her forefinger on his lips….
Radhika….. we made a deal that we will not talk about past….
He simply kissed her hand and nodded…..
Arjun…. I think everyone must be waiting for you back home……come I will drop you home….
She claimed her place back in his chest…
Burying her head deep in his chest and inhaling his scent she replied….. I don’t want to leave you…..why can’t I stay with you in your farmhouse?
He simply smiled at her innocence…..
Arjun…..just few days then we will always stay together…… I bet you will get bored of having me hooked upto you every time……
Radhika kissed his neck and replied….. Nahh….. I will enjoy your affection and I love it when you display your love without setting any limits….
He tucked her hair behind her ear and continued caressing them with his rough fingers…..
Arjun…I love you radhika….
She closed her eyes and rested her head again on his chest….hugging him tightly she whispered….. I don’t want distance between you and me…..
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Here dilip was lost in his thoughts….. he was still stuck on adi’s reply to his proposal…..
His POV……Maybe adi z right…..I will only hurt radhika if I talk about adi infront of her….I only want her to be happy but somehow I m not able to forget arjun’s past deeds….I want to believe that he z changed but I fear that he might hurt my radhika again……I have seen her suffering for two months and if he hurts her again…..she will live with the pain whole her life….I only want her happiness and if it z with arjun then I can’t do anything now…….I will test arjun first….if I find him worthy of my daughter then I will gladly give her hand in his…..
He was brought out of his thoughts by mala’s voice…..
Mala…..What are you thinking about?
Dilip….I m thinking about arjun…..
Mala……What about him?
Dilip……mala tell me something about arjun…
Mala…..arjun z my second son…..if you don’t know him properly then you will not like him…if you know him very well then he z the best person to be with…..he loves radhika more than you…I know he has made few mistakes but because of that we can’t deny that he z a very good person….he z a person who can love anyone unconditionally without expecting anything in return…..first I use to think that he z lucky to have choti but now I think choti z more lucky to have him…..plz dilip he z a good man…give him one chance …
Dilip…..I have decided to give him a chance…..call him for lunch tomorrow…….
She was more than happy to hear this…..Arjun was never her son-in-law……she loved him as her own son…..
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Here adi was playing his guitar and thinking about how to make dilip think good about arjun…..
He was brought out of his thought zone when he heard the door bell….
He ordered someone to open the door……
After few seconds he found radhika standing infront of him….
Adi…..radhu what are you doing here?
Radhika….. Do you welcome a guest with questions?
Adi…..first…you are not a guest….you are m y friend…. second I asked because I don’t want your husband to doubt on our friendship….
Radhika…. Don’t worry about him….he knows that I m here….I want to talk to you..
Adi….about what?
Radhika….. about your life….
Adi…..What about my life?
Radhika…. I want you to move on and forget me….
Adi…..it z too late radhika…. I can’t forget you at this stage…..maybe it was possible early but now it z impossible…..
She came and sat beside him….
Radhika…..do you know the story of earth,sun and sea?
Adi….No…
Radhika…. I will tell you….you know sun loves earth but earth loves the sea….sun knows that if he gets closer with earth he will burn it down and earth stays away from sun because it z concerned about the life on it which needs water for survival and if sun gets closer than he will dry the sea which means no life on the earth…..This z the case between you and me….if I stay in your life then you will never move on and I will stay with the guilt of giving you pain whole my life…..so I want to break my friendship with you….
Adi fumed and replied…..How could you even say that radhika??your friendship z all I have in my life….I never tried to come in between you and arjun because I know that you can never be mine and you only belong to him but I always wanted your friendship in my life….if I am the sun in this story then I m maintaining enough distance from you for your happy married life….but why you want to eliminate me completely…..
Radhika….. You think I am doing all these for me no you are wrong I want you to think about someone else who will love you which I can never do….please adi life z too much long to spend alone…..everyday you will only face loneliness keeping me in your heart….my thoughts will only give you pain and I can’t see you like these…..please release me from your heart because someone else deserves to stay in it…..
He angrily replied…I can’t love anyone again radhika….. I will not let you break our friendship….
He walked away from there leaving radhika guilt stricken….
So guyzzz this z it…..hope you liked it…..plz plz do comment and let me know if there are any suggestions from your side…..they are always welcome….will update next one soon…till then love you all..

PRECAP……. Manya develops crush on adi in very first meeting…… New girl’s entry…….dilip and arjun’s convo……aradhika’s brewing romance……
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42 comments

  1. Hey darling u can call me as ur wish (gayu)….episode was awesome & so manya going to develop luv on adi wowww waiting for next update dr…. luv u tc

    • Supriya

      Gayu my sweetie thanks for the ossum comment…. u make me smile….will update soon….loads of love????

  2. Gauri

    Amazing Supriya…this was so good..I like the Sun Sea and earth story…well now my question will Adi fall for Manya or New girl…please post others too…loads of love…stay blessed πŸ™‚

    • Supriya

      My beautiful di u made me feel special…. abt ur question adi z not ready to fall for anyone r8 now…..will update soon dear…love u alot….tc????

  3. Awesome episode, you explain sun, earth, sea very well, Manya and Adi pairing would be interesting because she would understand one sided love if you remember she was in love with Neil. Waiting for next update. πŸ™‚

    • Supriya

      Thx brin….I loved ur comment and yes I remember manya’s one sided love for Neil……u wait for next update dear….loads of love….tc

  4. aastha

    The opening scene was very beautiful……loved Adi…..he is a great friend….a lovely personality and selfless like Rahika………….he certainly deserves a second chance in his life….happy that you will bring a girl for him……….the story of Sun Earth and Moon was also beautiful……it explained lot of unspoken things………………happy that Dilip is going to give Arjun a second chance……………loved Mala’s dialogue………the precap looks very interesting ad happy……………who is that new girl ???? a villain ????? I ve a request plzz dont make Manya Adi’s life partner……he certainly deserves someone special, lovely and cheerful like Radhika……………a sunshine to admire the beautiful world of love…..a rain to bloom the flowers of love…………..plzz bring someone like that………………I conclude by saying that u rocked it as usual…………..love u………….muah………….TC………………how are your classes ????

    • Supriya

      My darling assthu u made me feel so much special well u always do I love you for that….adi z male version of radz abt manya and him den don’t worry adi deserves someone better but I want to spice up my story…..abt this new girl u will know in coming updates…..r8 now adi z too much stubborn to give any girl chance….. abt my classes I m bearing everything silently….. Love u soo much….muaaaaahhhhhh tc?

  5. It’s really nice n aradhika confession was really awesome πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ I loved sun sea n earth love story πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ u r awesome dear πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ take care love u πŸ™‚

  6. Rg

    Missed ur updates supriya. Becoz of tu…. I loved d way they discussed d past . It’s wonderful. We never got to c it in real so now through ur ff v saw. Thanks to u. I liked d ff tats beautifully unfolding thou I want u to write slightly bigger update and more ardhika moments… By d way adi s pair will b manya or d New gal ? And who is d New gal? And how is dilip going to test arjun???

    • Supriya

      Dear Rg even I missed ur comment…. Thx for appreciating my efforts….. I will surely update long one next time…..promise…. abt adi he z too much stubborn to give any girl chance but I will make him happy at the end…..u will know more in upcoming updates….. will update asap…..loads of love tc

  7. Hey my jannu how r u ?….yesterday i continuously visiting this page….I really missing u….finally u update…very happy my dear….amazing one …ardhika remember their first meet part is lovely…dilip and mala convo nice…finally dilip give one chance to arjun..good decision …even he want test him…adi radhu convo superb..especialy rads sun, earth, nd sea story amazing yaar….nd I really loved adi z replied for radhu…wow new girl entry adi keliye na…over all excellent dear…u nailed it as usual…I enjoyed to read it…waiting for next one …love has no limits too soon update…love u loads..tc..muaaaaahhh…

    • Supriya

      m fn my choco pie….wht abt u????thx for such a lovely comment even I wanted to update yesterday itself but TU was not opened…..dear I loved ur analysis and haa wait for more adi z too difficult to impress…..abt love has no limits maybe tom morn or evening….. will update asap……loads of love….muaaaaahhhhhh…. Tc…..stay blessed….?????

  8. Dev

    Hey supriya sorry dat im late in reading n commenting 2de……
    How hav u been…..n a vry love filled slowly made me fall in d starting convo n scene of ardika………n happy dat dilip is letting arjun hav a chance 2 win his sasurs heart……hihihji……n adi……lovd d frnd bond dat he doesnt want to break ……ovral a good epi with all scenes pitch perfect…..

    • Supriya

      Thx dev for the ossum comment…. I wanted to update soon but TU was not opened so did it today…..will asap….loads of love tc

  9. feby

    nice one……keep going….sry tat i was late to comment…my situations r worst i have to say…..welll… ur story is bcumng intrstng….. update soon…..iam eagrly waitng…..

    • Supriya

      Dear don’t be srry…all fn in ur life????hope u sort out everything soon…thanx for the lovely comment….. will update asap…stay blessed…tc

    • feby

      nothng fine till now…..iam waitng for my 12th result and i lost jee by just 9 marks… totally frustrated…but now i have made up my mind for a battle…..and thanks for ur reply……love u….

      • Supriya

        Dear m sure u will shine with flying colors in ur result….. my best wishes for ur career darling….. I m in 12 now….I understand the pressure we teenagers face …….take a chill pill nd don’t stress urself……loads of love tc

      • feby

        supriya dear…b prepared…entrance pressure will b more than board exam pressure….r u a science student..??? if so i say tat u start studying ur subjects as if u r studying for entrance…take it as a request frm me…last year i was always pressurised and but i didnt study coz i didnt knew its importance…but whn i am facing its consequences i dont want anyone else to face it…iam not afraid of 12th results..but for getting admission we need to clear our entrance…tats the most challenging part…and tats y i am not able to help myself from my stress….all the best for u too dear…stay blessed…..well..aftr i got to know u r in 12th i will not tell u to update it fastr…study dear….reach the top of the world whr we all can c u and become happy….

  10. Roma

    Awesome episode, just awesoooooome no other words…ardhika lovely moments n past encounter talks were beautiful n arjun’s heart touching confession was really very lovelyyyyyy. …dilip ready to give arjun a chance, wowwww, Mala aunty’s praising words for arjun were fantastic…loved it…rads n Adi convo was really heart melting, the sun, earth n sea story was fantabulous, it’s really hard to convince Adi as whoever come to his life she has to erase rads name from his heart n make her space there, which is a tough task, but I loved the precap, it’s exciting, manya having crush on adi n new girl entry?it’s getting very interesting, keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh πŸ˜‰

    • Supriya

      I think I shud invent new words to praise u……I m speechless dear…..thanx for the lovely analyst sweetie….. abt new girl u will know in upcoming updates nd my story will be filled with twist and turns……will update asap…..loads of love….tc???

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