Jaanemaan Part 10

Hey guyzz this z supriya….. I loved all your comments well I know you wanted me to update soon but owing to my classes and other ff I had to take time….so here z the part 10…
Happy Reading……?

The party had just started…..
The hall was filled by guest….everything was beautifully decorated in the hall…Mr diwan was introducing adi to everyone but adi was least interested in this party….he use to get bored in such parties….
But then something which was out of the world grabbed his attention…..
There she was elegantly dressed in red sari…..
her midnight black hairs were teasing on her face and she was tucking them again and again….her face had more glow than the moon…..yes she was radhika….most beautiful in his whole party….her big brown eyes were actually searching for someone…. she had that desperate look on her face as if she was waiting for someone to come but just then the one for whom she was waiting grabbed her waist and pulled her to himself……. yes ofcourse it was arjun…..her husband….
Adi was pained to see her with him but he did not forget to fake a smile at them….
Here,love birds were lost in eachother…..
Arjun….you look breathtaking, wifey….
Radhika gave him a shy smile in return…
Arjun….don’t give me that smile….I may lose my control so you won’t introduce me to your friend…..
Radhika….. I thought you don’t like him that much….
Arjun….I don’t have any grudge against him….
I am just protecting what’s mine…
Radhika…. So you don’t hate adi?
Arjun….yes but that does not mean I like him…..it’s not necessary that should like everyone around us….moreover he can never be my competition because what’s mine stays mine forever…..
Radhika entangled her hand in his muscular arm
and dragged him to meet the her friend…..
She left both the man alone to have a man to man convo to sort out their differences….
Adi greeted arjun with a smile…
Adi…hi arjun…
Arjun….hi aditya…
Adi….I am sorry for that day…
Arjun…I am the one who should apologize…. I don’t have any grudge against you it z just that I can’t see my radhika with another man…
Adi….you are a lucky guy that she only loves you…
Arjun….indeed I am very lucky…
They could not talk more than that because it was impossible for them to be friends as they loved the same girl….
Neil entered the party with sam….
He walked towards arjun and gave him hug…
Neil…you have not even answered my calls since last two days…..I think you are very busy with your wife…
Sam…..Neil you are talking as if two years have passed….
Arjun….are you jealous Sam?
Sam….no but he irritated me to the core in this two days…by the way where z chashni?
Just then they heard radhika’s voice who was hosting the party for her friend….
Radhika….I sincerely want to thank all of you for
being present in my friend adi’s happiness and making this evening more special for him…well what can I say about adi….he has always been there for me since childhood….I don’t have words to describe adi because if I try do it won’t be enough…. Today after so many days I have seen him smiling and I want that smile to stay forever…I am so happy after seeing him like these…well very few people present here know that adi’s sings very well so I will request him to sing a song for us and make this evening more special…
Adi refused first but then how could he ever refuse radhika…..
Adi took his guitar and claimed the chair which radhika had kept for him….
Adi started his song….
Tune Jo Naa Kaha…
Main Woh Sunnta Raha…
Tune Jo Naa Kaha…
Main Woh Sunnta Raha…
Khamkha Bewaja Khwaab Bunnta Raha…
Tune Jo Naa Kaha…
Main Woh Sunnta Raha…
Khamkha Bewaja Khwaab Bunnta Raha..
Jaane Kiskii Hame Lagayi Hai Nazar..
Iss Sheher Me Naa Apna Thikana Raha….
Door Chahat Se Mai Apni Chalta Raha…
(He glanced towards radhika)
Khamkha Bewaja Khwaab Bunnta Raha…

Dard Pehle Se Hai Jada….
Khudse Fir Ye Kiya Wada…
Khamosh Nazare Rahe Bezubann…
Aab Naa Pehle Si Baatein Hai…
Bolo Toh Laab Thartharate Hain….
Raaz Ye Dil kaa Naa Ho Baya…
Hogaya kii Asar Koi Hum Pe Nahi..
Humsafar Mein Toh Hain Humsafar Hain Nahi…
Dur Jata Raha Pass Ata Raha…
(He closed his eyes to remember all his childhood memories with Radhika)
Khamkha Bewaja Khwaab Bunnta Raha….

Aya Phir Woh Nazar Aise…
Baat Chidnee Lagi Phir Se…
Ankhon Mein Chubta Kal Ka Dhuaa…
Haal Tera Naa Humsa Hain….
Kis khushi Mein Kyun Ghum Sa Hain….
Basane Laga Kyun Phir Woh Jahan….
Woh Jahan Tum Jise Gaye Thee Nikal….
Fir Se Yaadon Mein Kal Kii Hai Jaise Pehel..
Lamha Beeta Hua Dil Dhukhata Raha…
Khamkha Bewaja Khwaab Bunnta Raha…
(He remembered the time when radhika told him that she z married now and only loves her husband.)
Tune Jo Naa Kaha..
Main Woh Sunnta Raha…
Khamkha Bewaja Khwaab Bunnta Raha…
Jaane Kiskii Humhe Lagayi Hai Nazar….
Iss Sheher Main Naa Apna Thikana Raha….
Dur Chahat Se Mai Apni Chalta Raha….
Buzgayi Aag Thi…
Daag Jalta Raha…
(He glanced towards radhika who was happily staring arjun with immense love in her eyes and he again acknowledged the fact that the girl he loves will never be his.)
Adi POV….I know that you don’t love me and you will never love me.I always tried to make you smile but only arjun’s presence around you keeps you happy.I just want you to be happy always.I will never come between you and arjun but I can’t love someone else.I can’t forget you and move on because love can never happen twice….you will always stay in my heart…
He was lost in his thoughts when dilip tapped his back…..
Adi….hi uncle..
Dilip….I wanted to talk to you about radhika and your alliance….
Adi was shocked to hear this…
Adi….I can’t believe you are saying this….you demand that you care for radhika and now you want to hurt her….you know when I look at radhika I only see arjun in her eyes….I only want her friendship nothing else….
Dilip…..but you love her…what about that?
Adi….yes I love her not from now….but from the day I understood the meaning of love….she only loves arjun….I have accepted this and I don’t have any wrong motive to get her in my life….please uncle stop thinking all this….I can never think of hurting radhika also I will not let anyone hurt her..
He walked away from there…..
Dilip was bewildered by this reaction…..
Here,arjun and radhika were in the lawn away from the party….
Arjun wrapped his hand around her….
Arjun….you never told me that adi sings…
Radhika…..I forgot and moreover you don’t like me talking about adi….
Arjun….yes that’s true because he loves you and I can see that in his eyes….
Radhika…..he has always loved me since childhood but I always wanted him to move on in life…..
Arjun…..did you move on when you left me…..radhika if you were not able to forget me than how do you expect him to do that…
Radhika…. I just wish that he forgets me someday…
Arjun….radhika…. we can love only once for the lifetime…..
Radhika hugged him…
Radhika….I feel guilty when I see the pain in his eyes….
Arjun cupped her face and placed a tender kiss on her forehead….
Arjun….you should talk to him…
Radhika…. Are you okay with it?
Arjun…radhika I can’t see the guilt in your eyes and I can’t see you hurt for anything in this world…
Radhika….I love you…
She hided her face in his chest and gave him a tight hug….
………………………………………………………………………
It was night which had the beautiful moonlight surrounded by stars…..
Radhika was sad about adi….
Radhika POV…..I feel so much guilty for hurting you…..I don’t know how many times I have hurt you by talking about arjun infront of you….I wish I could reduce your pain….I have to talk to you about moving on…..I will try my best to make you happy, adi…..because you are my best friend who has always wiped my tears…….now it’s my turn to wipe your tears….
She was determined to spread happiness in his life but will she succeed?
So guyzzz this z it I know you people want adi to be happy but I feel we can love only once….if we get that person in our life then we are lucky but if we don’t than to memories of that person will always stay till our last breath….. I feel adi will and should always keep radhika in his heart…..but that’s what I feel…. I always ask your suggestions this time too I won’t disappoint you lovely people….so plz tell me should I bring someone for adi…..I will always consider your opinions first because they are special to me…..
Give me your reviews…..
Precap….. Adi and radhika fight…..dilip decides to give arjun one chance…..romance z in the air..

39 comments

  1. Dev

    Wow dat was an good epi supriya….n nc dat adi reacted dat way 2 dilip…..he made his stand clear now……
    I wud suggest to make adi move on….bcoz in life its pretty sure tat 1st love cant leev u in ur lif tim bt if v dint gt dem d memories vl surly b till ur death bt with tim u vl move on in life…..so adi shud move on
    Well a lovely epi….
    Happy sunday….love u n tc

    • Supriya.

      I loved ur comment dev…..srsly now even I think that I shud bring someone for adi becoz he z really a good person and deserves love….thanx for the lovely comment….. will update soon….love u alot…tc….happy Sunday?

      • natasha

        Hey supriya srry forgot to say yaar ur fiction’s are amazing they are mindblowing plz post the nxt part tmrw naa pls plz plz
        if its possible only

  2. Yaa dr luv happened once n our life bt I felt bad fr adi too he deserve luv fr his lonely life so think…evry1 deserves 2ndchance so bring someone his life make him fall fr her it’s my opinion if u don’t mind….luv u loads tc dr

    • Supriya.

      Thx darling….. ossum comment will bring someone for adi but before dat radz needs to convince him…..loads of love….tc….happy Sunday???

  3. Rg

    Hi supriya.. I loved it as usual… In a way wat u say is right. But if tat is d way of the world then gud majority of ppl will never b happy…. Every body deserves a chance at their happily ever after…. And whn love is one sided without nourishment how long can it go on without making tat person bitter? If adi keeps loving radz he will become a sad bitter person. And radz will live with guilt forever. Sam was first in love with Arjun then it ws Neil whn she realized it. So if it can happen for Sam. I hope it can happen for adi. Besides he seems like a genuinely nice person so I hope he can move past his unrequited love. Hey this is just pov.. u r d writers so d ball is in ur court….

    • Supriya.

      Thx for the marvelous comment…. I loved what you said….I also liked Sam’s example yes most of the people want adi to be happy becoz he z a very gud human….so I will bring someone for adi…..but before dat radz needs to convince him….will update soon….loads of love tc?

  4. M

    Hmmmmm……I dnt believe in the fact that u cn only love once…..na….f u hv someone in your life who love u to the deepest core of his/her heart…u hv no other option nd respect also matters here….like if ur patner respect ur feelings…u CNT spare yourself from fallen in love for 2nd tym……..n I m 200% sure about this……coz I was a victim for this…..lol……nd one more times ago this was my favourite song……but now……high heels te bachhe te tu badi jachhe,…

    • Supriya.

      Thx cutie pie….I loved ur comment…. well I don’t have any exp abt love becoz I didn’t even fall in love once…..but all of u want adi to be happy….so I will bring someone for adi…will update soon dear…..loads of love….tc cutie pie….

  5. Adi has all rights to be happy ………..bring someone who can speed happiness in his life ……. its my wish bring someone who is matured enough to understand him …….. not an idiot girl plz here matter is sensitive bcoz he lost his mom n love he need care affection love someone who can understand him …………. if u have your own wish then go for it baby …….. it just my wish if u felt bad then sorry …….love n take care …….:-):-):-):-)

    • Supriya.

      Thx for the ossum comment dear……I have also thought abt bringing someone in adi’s life…..all want adi to be happy so I will surely think abt new girl’s entry…..will update soon…..loads of love tc

  6. Oh my sweety… Today am very impress to adi…he is only d honest truely frd fr radhu…really he is amazing character yaar…..yes i want adi life mein someone…not yet feature mein ….kyunki radhu unka pehella pyaar hai..bhool na mushkil hai unkeliye …isliye he have take some time..no one force to him..radhu too..this is my view….over all amazing dear…nice song selection…pls update soon dear.,.love u ..tc..
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    • Supriya.

      Thx darling…..I wanted adi to be the most positive guy ever….yaa abt someone in adi’s life will take time…..but I will surely bring someone…. for now let’s focus on dilip……will update soon…loads of love… tc

  7. deeva

    Awesome episode……………….. I thing u should bring one character for…………
    Becaz I believe thAt life is all about secs nod chance its not that k if love person truly we can’t move or love some one else every one should get second chance…………….. u
    Nd we should love the person who loves us not whom we love………
    Sorry if l hurt you but I feel like that only………..
    Byee tc??

    • Supriya.

      Hii deeva plz don’t say sorry…..I was the one who asked everyone’s opinion so why I will feel bad…..abt adi dear…I will bring someone but it will take time….we need to focus on dilip…..loads of love…tc?

  8. aastha

    hey!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m extremely sorry for tha late comment………..well I loved adi’s answer to dilip……. but sd that he is in pain…….well I dont think love only happens once…….love can happen twice too………….whoever the person we love we will only geet the person god has meant for us………..so I still think Adi needs some1 in his life….loved radhika-adi friendship bond…………I alsolikes sam saying that Niel felt as if 2 years had passed………………the precap leaves me both tensed an happy….. love u………….muah……

    • Supriya.

      Hii assthu…I was waiting for ur comment…..m happy u loved it….well dear I don’t know anything abt love becoz I have not exp the feeling with anyone….but m a extremely committed person…..abt adi I will bring someone but it will take time….I need to focus on dilip….loads of love tc muaaaaahhhhhh?????

      • aastha

        Happy that you’ll bring some1 for Adi………….well I too dont have any experience in love………sorry to keep you waiting….but I had gone to my cuz’s house…….sorry……love u……

  9. supriya super epi..actually want adi to fall for another girl n move on in lyf….n adi n rads fight.abt what?? quite excited dear..update soon

    • Supriya.

      Thx dipika…abt someone for adi then I will do it but it will take time becoz I need to focus on dilip more….will update soon….loads of love?

  10. Gianna

    Really loved it and Adi is such a sweetheart pls find love for him too and I mean in your story.

  11. Gauri

    Sorry Supriya for the late comment….I loved the way Adi cares for Radhika’s happiness he is a true friend…it must be so difficult for him to see his love with someone else…Loved Aradhika…now waiting for their romance….love you dear 🙂 keep smiling million hugs for you 🙂

    • Supriya.

      Don’t be sorry di….first billion hugs for u….abt adi I have decided to bring someone but it will take time…..will update soon di….loads of love muaaaaahhhhhh tc

  12. Roma

    Hi supriya darling, it’s really very lovelyyyyyy n beautiful episode. …loved the way arjun n Adi met n talked….adi’s reply to dilip uncle was pretty good, he’s a gem n he really deserves true love for himself…he loved rads all his life but when he knew about arjun, didn’t make any hurdles for ardhika. …he is very caring n gentleman n I personally think he needs a very good life partner who truly love him knowing his past n support him…ardhika convo for adi was really awesome. …keep it up honeyyy. ….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Supriya

      Thx dear….I will surely bring someone for adi…..he has every r8 to be happy….sweety I loved ur comment to core…..keep loving my ff…..will update soon dear….loads of love….muaaaaahhhhhh tc???

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