Jaane tu yaa jaane naa……by saku ishqie.. Part 6

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Hello guys…saku ishqie is back wd JAANE TU YAA JAANE NAA….thanks alot for all ur love nd support…silent readers plz comment…k enough of my bakbak.. .let’s get into story…

So the episode starts wd anika nd saumya hugging Gauri.. .suddenly saumya witness gauri’s bags
Sau:- di…y r u packing ???….r u going anywhere???
Gauri:- woh.. .woh..
Ani:-woh …??..plz tell whts going in ur mind…
Gauri:- actually di …i m leaving today…dat only I was trying to tell om but.. .
Ani:- leaving…but y??..
Gauri:-di..nothing is left here…whts reason I should stay here??..
Sau:-di (emotional)…plz don’t say like this..
Gauri:- u both promise me…u will not tell anything to omkara…nd plz take care of him..(tears were rolling through her cheeks)..
AniSau:-Gauri.. .no we can’t make such promise…i will go nd tell this to om..
Gsuri:-no di…if u both consider me as ur sis then plz don’t tell him…plzz
AniSau:- ok..take care of urself..
(Both of them leaves dat place
Ani:-saumya we shuld tell this to shivaye nd rudra…come fast..
Sau :- yes di…u r right..
(They both hurriedly goes to rumya’s room..)

In Rumya Room..
Shivika nd rumya gathered there….
Shiv:-I want to tell u some important thing..
Ani:-Me too…
Shiv:- first I will say …mine is more imp..
Shiv:-no …i will say …mine is more imp..
Ani:- aagaye naa…apni SSO wali avtar main…bagad billa ???
Shiv:-why did u just say???.
Ani:-bagad billa..tadibaaz..aur bolu bola ki bas h..?
Shiv:- u…let it b it’s waste to talk we u..
(Same drama continues for 10 min…rumya where sitting holding their heads..)
Rudy:- agar bagad billa aur bagad billi..ka hogaya ho toh kaam ki baat Karen?? ?…
Shivika:- (a bit in shock)..ok..
Shiv:- rudy..tu bhi kabhi kabhi point ki baat krta..
Sau:-..ok stop all this….matter is serious..
Shivru:-hmmm…
Ani:-there is someone in omkara’s life…..
Shivru:-.(in shock) wht…
AniSau:- yes..nd narrate whole incident which Gauri told them…including gauri’s lie..
ShivRu:- this means their is great misunderstanding among them…they Both narrate them incident which om told them..
Ani:- oh bete ki….dat means both of them love each other but thinks other one is commited..
ShivRuSau:-haan…
Ani:- iska Matlab dono me so dusre Se zhut bola…
Waise toh bada satyavadi harishchandra bana phirti h ab kya hua???..
(Dat means both of them lied to each other…but wht abt om..he pretends to b satyavadi.. what happened now..y he lied??..)
Shiv:-..sometimes circumstances make people lie…but his intention were not bad..
AniSauRu:-hmmmm..
Ani:-phail gaya raita…
Ru:-y bhabhi wht happened..
Sau:- Gauri di..gauri di is leaving for London.. .
ShivRu:-wht??..
Ani:-yes…we hv to do something…
Shivika nd rumya joined hands..nd chants..MISSION GAURIKA…

Omkara’s room..
Omkara was sleeping…gauri visit his room …nd stares him wd wet eyes…
Paas aaye…duriyan phir bhi kam naa hui..
Ek adhuri si humari kahaani rahi….
Aasma ko Zame ye zaroorI nai
Jaa mile..jaa mile..
Ishq sacha wahi jisko milti nahi manzile manzile…
Rang the noor tha
Jab karreb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha ye jhaan…
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa likh k chod gaya tu kahaan…….
Humari adhuri kahaani…
Humari adhuri kahaani…
She looks around…..nd remembers their happy moments…..she touches his head..but while turning he holds her hand tightly.. she gets emotional..
Khushbuon se Teri.. .
yunhi takkara .gaye…
Chalte chalte dekho naaa..
hum kaha aagaye…
Janate dar yahi tu dekhe kyun nahi..
Chand Suraj sabhi hai yaha..
Intazar tera sadiyoon se kr raha…
Pyaasi baithi h kabse yaha…
Humaari adhuri kahaani…
Humaari adhuri kahaani…….
Gauri tries her best to remove her hand.. .run from there crying….meanwhile omkara gets up nd shout
Gauri…
Om:-y I felt like she was here …wd me…no I must n dreaming…y will she come here who m I for her???nd cries…
Pyaas ka yeh safar khatam hojayega…
Kuch adhura sa jo tha…
Pura hojayega……
Jhuk gaya asaman
Milgaye do jahan…
Har taraf hai milan ka sama…..
Doliyaa hai sajhi…
Khushbuye har kahin…..
Padhne aaya khuda khud yaahaa…
Humaari adhuri kahaani…
Humaari adhuri kahaani……
(Song humaari adhuri kahaani.. frm film humara adhuri kahaani plays in BG)…

Gauri takes her bags nd memories wd her nd starts leaving….she was abt to cross main door.. .but someone frm.back said STOP….
Yes it was our shivaye…
Shivaye:- Gauri…stop plz don’t go…
Gauri:- no bhaiya…i can’t…plz let me go…i can’t handle it anymore…(cries)..
Ani:- will u not stay for omkara also?? ?…
Gauri:- om (in confused state)
Shi:-plz don’t go Gauri.. ..my brother needs u..
Gauri:-needs me??..i m not getting anything..
Rudy:-bhabhi….i will explain u everything..
Gauri:-(in shock) bhabi???
Sau:-yes..
(All of them explains everything to her…dat hw om lied to her…same way she did)..
Gauri was very much happy…learning dat om was talking abt her only…her pale sad face suddenly turned into bright nd happy place….there was no limit of her joy…

Rudy:-bhabhi…ab jaldi se bhaiya ko bhi bol do…kabse devdas ban hum rahe h…
Everyone laughs…
Gauri :- omkara Singh oberoi GAURI KUMARI SHARMA is coming…
Nd she share her plan wd everyone…which was obviously muted…shivija rumya nd Gauri joined hands…

Gauri goes to omkara’s room..
Omkara was still sitting nd crying…
Gauri:- hi om..
Om:- hi (lil rude way)..y u came here?? ? I told u naa I m not interested in talking wd u…
Gauri:- I will leave but before dat I wanted to tell u something…
Om:-wht…??..tell fast I don’t hv time to waste..he takes glass to drink water..
Gauri:-woh.. u wanted to meet my bf na..he came back to Mumbai.. so we can meet him..
(Hearing this glass frm omkara’s hand falls down…nd he was left shock.. saathiya male version plays in BG)
Gauri:-so be ready…sharp at 7pm ..bye..she goes nd stand beside his room door..
Om throws cushions nd cries..gauri hide nd watch this nd say sorry om..plz bear this pain for sometime latter I promise their will b just happiness in ur life…nd she leaves..

After sometime
Gauri goes to call om..
Gauri:-om lets go…
Om:-i don’t want to come..u go nd meet him…he look towards her nd was mesmerized seeing her beauty..
(She was wearing off shoulder skiny black colour evening gown…wd light make up )
Shiv:-uhh uhh…
This made om come to his senses…
Rudy:- no o…u should go.. Afterall aapko dekhna chahiye kon h woh jo aapko bulbul ko uda legaya..
Shiv:- yes om ..rudy is right..
Om:- thinks ….ok..wait for 2 min..i will just come..
ShivRu:-signs all the best to Gauri..
Gauri brings om to some XYZ place..
Their was darkout…none of the light was on…
Om:- Gauri…wht kind of place is this..nd where is ur bf..tell him to come fast
Gauri:-my bf is very much punctual.. .nd don’t say anything abt him..
Om was literally burning frm inside…
Om:-accha…so tell me abt him..
Gauri:- he is very much caring ..descent…nd most important loving …u knw he also has long hairs..nd is more handsome than u…he looks dashing in shades…nd his jackets…ufff (this made om more jealous)…
Om:- now will u introduce him or not???..
Gauri:-come wd me…
She claps…nd lights start getting on…om was awestruck seeing the place…place was beautifully decorated wd red colour flowers nd lighting..
She dragged om nd make him stand in heart which was made on floor…infront of wall like something which was covered wd red colour cloth..she removed cloth…there was a mirror…she makes omkara stand in front of it..
Gauri:-meet my love ….my life..my someone special.. ..its none other than u omkara…
She bends on her knees…nd propose him saying..
I love u Mr. Omkara Singh Oberoi….will u marry this mad girl??…
(Raabta..form movie agent vinod plays in BG)

Omkara was shock seeing all this..his happiness was beyond limit….khushi k aansu…uske aanko se beh rahe the…
Om speechless was staring her wd wet eyes…
Gauri:-dabbu…tell fast will u marry me??…my knees r paining..
Om:-i love u too…nd has I will marry u…
He sits down nd hugs her…she hugs him back….
Yeh moh moh k dhaage
Plays in BG..

Gauri:-I m so sorry om…cz of me u cried alot…i m sorry.. but when u said u had gf I was broken..so I lied i m sorry…
Om:-no …y r u saying sorry…it was all my mistake.. .I shouldn’t hv lied dat day…i m sorry for hurting u…i was indicating u…but u didn’t understand…i m sorry…my way was wrng..
Gauri:-I m sorry..i should also not hv lied…
Om:-I promise…i will never hurt u again..i will keep u so happy dat u will forget abt this pain which u hv suffered in these two days..
Gauri also says same..
They both wipes each other’s tears….
He lifts her …they dance romantically on song SOCH NAA SAKE…frm film airlift…..
Om:- I LOVE U GAURI
GAURI:- I LOVE U TOO…
Both touch heads….
Happily ever after…
THE END..

I knw it’s not dat gud…i don’t knw u all will like it or not.. but here is a request don’t thinks abt LOGIC IT’S MAGIC…
Verna di…u told dat it shuld b very special…i don’t knw u will like it or not…but I tried my level best…sorry if I hv disappointed u…

So this is it guys….thanks for all ur luv nd support which u had given to me…thanks for bearing my stupid story…nd my writing mistakes…i m very happy dat i got many new friends cz of this ff…my regular commenters I will miss u all..nd silent readers plz do comment on this last episode…share ur views….stay happy..stay blessed…Lots of luv frm saku ishqie….bye guys..
Luv u all
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39 Comments
  1. Rasika

    THE END , I was like what but it ok it’s nice good ending shreyanvi ,short and sweet ???

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks rasika dear..i one u all night b disappointed but..my holidays over..by tomo college..so I will not h able to post it regularly..dats y i ended it..thanks for ur luv nd support..luv u?

  2. Karina

    OMG sweety this was so beautiful, but why you ended the ff so soon ??? I wanted to read more. I hope you will come back with another ff . Lots of love sweety…take care…

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much di…..dont knw abt ff…but I will try to post OS in middle…

      1. Karina

        Its ok sweety, school is more important. If u have time then post some OS, i ll surly read them, but if you re too busy then just focuse on you re work and the OS can wait…love u..

  3. Jayanti

    end???…not fair yaar…its damn amazing……superb part and their confession was sooo cute..loved it

    1. Shreyanvi

      Sorry dear…even I want to write..but my college is gonna reopen..then I will not get time..so I thought it’s better to end it…luv u..thanks for appreciation..

  4. Ssn

    It was one of my fav story . So i think u will be back with another story soon☺☺☺☺

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks alot dear…i will try to come back…till then stay blessed.. .

  5. Very nice

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear.. ..

  6. Renimarenju

    What…..It come 2 an end!!! I will not talk 2 u……Skau…..U break my heart,…..Why u finished it so soon……dear….just now only it was started……I will miss dabbu to the core….. Oh god!!! why saku….why…this was able 2 make a smile on every one’s face and i can’t believe that now i will not get that smile…..I miss u really i will miss this ff……And am literally crying as u are ending this one…….Not fair……But haa…..How sweet was the confession……Hamari adhuri kahani song…..Oh it just cpatured the whole moment……This was written so beautiful by u dear…..But ….u said its an end….It’s giving me pain only…….But i love this pain because i love this ff a lot from the depth of my heart and it will stay as a beautiful cum painful memory in my heart forever…….I will miss this work and i will miss u also…… Pls come back with another beautiful story on rikara or ishkara or rumya……Because these are the couples which i want 2 read …..I
    will surely wait for ur next story…….

    KUCH LAMHEIN DIL KO BEHALAKE YUN HI CHALE GAYE….
    KUCH JAZBEIN BEHADH MUSKURAHAT DI……
    KUCH LAFZEIN ABBH GUM KE BAADAL BARSAKE JAAYEGI……
    KUCH KAHANIYAN PURE HOKE BHI ADHURE HEIN……
    KUCH BAATEIN BINA BOLE BHI SAMJHE JAATE HEIN…..
    KUCH TUM ISS KADAR DIL MEIN CHHA GAYI HO…..

    I LOVE U DEAR…..I MISS U…..AND UR FF…..UMMAAAA…..

    1. Shreyanvi

      I m so sorry Reni di….even I don’t want to end it but my college is gonna start so it won’t b possible for me to continue it…so I thought it’s better to end it now rather than to leave it incomplete…..plzzz di dont b upset…i knw I hv disappointed u but plz try n understand my POV…..nd phirse kabhi mat bola ki u will not talk wd me.. .plzz..nd once again I m sorry..but I promise I will come back wd bang…dont one when but I will surely come back…luv u…take care?

      1. Renimarenju

        Hey i can understand it….dear…But this was quite unexpected …..Now u are student and i can understand u have 2 give priority for ur studies only…..As for ff u can write them when u gets semester break or vaccation…..Even i am a working girl but the thing is i have completed my studies and all and some how i will be able 2 find time for writing even though not on regular basis , but some how i will try 2 update my articles……But i will miss ur work…..When u will be free , pls write and i will wait 4 u….. Love u 2…bye..

  7. Yashu

    It was so sweet…bt it ended so early….dis will b one of my best reads…..pls do come back with another amazing story….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much yashu for all ur luv nd support….i knw u will b very disappointed by my decision.. sorry for dat…see u soon.. .luv u?

  8. Nita D

    Hey. Read all the episodes now…..
    Nice story!

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks for reading dear….

  9. Anujohnson

    Oh this is so sweet…I loved it!!!

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear

  10. AWESOME SWEET CUTE BEAUTIFULL SUPERB???????

  11. Awesome dear…. But I want you to write an another ff….. U were giving a cute episode… I loved it… I will miss your ff….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much for ur appreciation dear..

  12. Niriha

    Awesome….nice ending loved it..I hope you will come back soon with ur another ff

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear really means alot…

  13. Verna

    Oh My GOD!! My saku darling.. u made my day.. I was waiting for this part and was eager to know what special way u’ll use.. I’m speechless.. I really didn’t expect such a great proposal.. Awwww

    And thank u so much that u have done this minding my words.. it really means a lot.. I’m greatful that I got such a good frnd and lovely sister in.this site.. Thanks for that..

    About this part.. I loved from beginning till end.. the way she showed him In mirror.. just awww.. I was thinking Om’s reaction and started dreaming.. then only I read rest of the story.. Love tooooooooo much my dr.. and pls come back with a bang.. I don’t want miss such a good writer’s imagination to end so soon.. I’ll be waiting for ur comeback 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Shreyanvi

      Veru dii..even I m lucky to hv sweet diii like u????…i will try to come back as another one..nd it will b laughter blaster I promise??…

      1. Verna

        I’m waiting my dr 🙂

  14. what!!!!the end soo sooon oh no…shrii epi WS too gud finally gouri end om united….itni jaldi khtam hoga expect nhi kiya that ….we will miss u too soo much dear…end hop u will cm back with another ff….tak car dear….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks ayeshuuuu….i will miss u too…lets see what happens nxt…i will try my best to come back soon..

  15. Aashi26

    beautiful ending………….loved it…….but don’t u think di it ended too fast……hope u remember me………

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks alot aashi….
      Nd ofcourse I remember u yaar….u r my new new friend….do u r registered member now…so welcome to TU…ne in touch…

  16. Dhar

    Whatt did u just end it?? I was hoping more from you , plzzz plzzz do come back with another one

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks for it support dear…i will try my best to come back wd bang…

  17. Alekhika20

    Beautiful ending

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear

  18. Archiya

    Saku
    That was ala beautiful, why ended so soon??
    I expected the story would do ahead.. But I guess u only wanted to concentrate on ur sweet ♥ om..
    I loved the proposal.. Especially that gauri proposed him..

    Pls pm me the link of ur next FF whenever u write.. Lots of love ? ?

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much diii.. nd yes I will surely pm u link whenever I will write another ff…

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