Jaane tu yaa jaane naa……by saku ishqie.. Part 4

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Hello frndz…saku ishqie is back wd another episode of jaane tu yaa jaane naa…i hope u guys r liking it…nd haan don’t forget to show ur support via comments…nd silent readers do tell me I m doing gud or not….nd a big big thanks to all my supporters…so I will shut my radio here…nd get into story..
In case if u hv missed any episode here r links..

part-1
part-2
part-3

So episode starts wd gaurika thinking abt current….
Omkara just to check dat whether they got current or not try to touch Gauri by legs…he touches someone by his legs..Nd he didn’t get current..nd becomes happy…gauri was looking at him this made him believe dat it was Gauri s leg only..but….
Rudy:- O…wrng number…
(Yeah u r r8 it was not Gauri but it was rudra …..actually omkara’s weird behaviour made Gauri look towards him nd he missunderstood……)
Shi:- wrng number???..
Rudy:- haan bhaiya.. wrng number…..bhaiya dis O is trying to seduce me…He not at all thinking ki i m his bhai….MAA DA LADLA BIGAD GAYA bhaiya (in crying tone)…
Listening rudy’s statement omkara splits juice…in shock.. nd starts coughing…
Om:- rudra…r u mad???..
Rudy:- mad mad kya???….bolo aap kya kr rahe the bolo sabko..
Om:- arre…dumbo it was not for u but for.. …(he was abt to take gauri’s name but takes pause…nd thinks
This will give rudy nd shivika another chance to tease him)….
Rudy:- for????……
(Gauri senses omkara is in trouble..nd to save him she changes topic..by asking abt meeting)..

Gauri:- om ..wht happened abt meeting..???
Om:- oh..yaa I forgot to inform u ….meeting is fixed today itself…..
Gauri:- thanks yaar..u did a big favour on me..
Om:- no..need to say thanxx..(in mind…thanks yaar Gauri.. today u saved me..u r my true frnd?)

In shivika room..
Rudy:- Bhaiya..there is something fishy amid Gauri di nd Zulfi Singh oberoi…..u knw at dinning table also..he was seeing at her only….
Shi:- shut up rudra….u keeps thinking such silly things…
Ani:- no shivaye…i also feel same…i mean look at them when they r together they r most happiest persons….
Shi:-ok…i will talk wd om…
Ani:- nd I will wd Gauri.. .
Rudy:- nd me???…whom wd i will talk..
Shivika:- it’s better u talk wd saumya….ask her where is she???..nd when she is coming home????..
Rudy:- oh…yaa..sumo…main toh bhul hi gaya tha ki meri ek biwi h..(Oh.. .sumo…i forgot dat I hv wife)
Shivika gives impossible look to him…
Gauri:- in shock…what????..ur wife???…when u got married..nd y no one informed me..???…nd where is she…
(Someone frm back says …i m here….yes she is none other than our saumya….. )
Sau:-Hiii.. .I m SAUMYA RUDRA SINGH OBEROI…..
Rudy:- sumo….i missed u yaar…nd he hugs her tightly…nd he ask her wht she brought for him???
Sau:- Grow up rudra….i hv went their to represent our college (guys saumya was representative of her college. in intercollege competition …nd this competition was held in goa)..
Shi:- hw was ur competition..nd who won???..
Om:- ofcourse my sis.. .nd he side hugs her…nd says m I r8 sisso???…
Sau:- yeah…bade baalwale bhaiya ….
(Gauri was pleased by saumya nd omkara’s bond)…

Gauri:- hii..i m GAURI SHARMA …
RUDY: nd soon to be GAURI OMKARA SINGH OBEROI..(he said this in low voice ..but gaurika nd shivika heard dis…)
Gauri:- what did u just say????..
Rudy:- nothing …i didnt utter single word frm my mouth(omkara hints rudy saying he will deal wd him later nd gives him angry look showing him his hand)..
Gauri:- anyways….but rudy when u got married…nd y didn’t any1 informed me.nd is ur love marriage or arrange marriage….any1 will plz say….??..
Rudy:- no our’s alcohol marriage.. .
Gauri:- wht???..nd u no one told me abt it…??
All getting iriked by her continuous question …
Rumya omkara nd shivika in voice…kyunki humko hi nahi pata tha ki humari Shaadi kab hui( cz we only don’t one when they got married..)
Gauri:- wht do u mean by dat???
Om told her everything abt hw they got married under influence of alcohol…
Gauri:- ohhh…. rudy I use to think u r most wanted mundda….but tu toh chupa rustum nikla haan…
Rudy:- wht do u mean by dat…i m still most wanted mundda..
SAUMYA shows him her hand…rudra getting afraid says dat woh woh..sumo joke…i was joking..
Everyone laughs on him including saumya….
Om:- rudy..now u r married man stop flirting now..
Rudy:- O..plz yaar..meri shaadi nd meri biwi fikr karna chod do….aap apni fikar karo..zara jaldi jaldi aage badho warna koi aur aapki bulbul ko uda lejayenga…. [o Plz stop worrying abt my marriage nd my wife…u think of urself..common speed up otherwise someone else will propose ur lady…pointing towards gauri]..
Om was abt to say something but before dat rudra speaks nd say so omkara Singh oberoi’s epic dialogue is in the way…SHUT UP RUDRA…r8 u was abt to say dis only naa???…
Everyone say’s yes..
Rudy:- sumo…y u came so late??..u where supposed to come yesterday only naa???
Sau:- ohh…just before a minute u said u don’t remember u hv wife nd now so much care haan???..
Rudy:- woh toh main apne rishtey ko kisiko najar nahi lagni chahiye issiliye bola Maine.. ..(pointing towards gaurika nd shivika)…
Gaurika nd shivika:- oh really???…saumya tumhe dekhkr iska attitude hi change hogaya….
Sau:- haha bhaiya…dont worry ab main aagayi hoon naa..dekho iska Kya kya change krti hoon…
Gauri:- dabbu..lets go..we r getting late..
Rudy:- where r u going. ….i will also come along…
Om:- we r going for meeting..nd where dis meeting is organised naa…they hv one condition dat people wd brain are only allowed…so sorry my dear..u can’t come as u don’t hv brain… (saying dis he gives hi5 to shivaye)..
Rudy:- Gauri di I can understand u r going vs u hv brain……but y dis bade baalwale prani is coming ?……i mean I m his brother so logically he also don’t hv brain naa….(nd he laughs…but all were giving impossible look…)…ok ok mere jokes samjhne k liye bhi dimaag chahiye…
Gauri:- come on lets go..we r getting late…
O:- yup..
(Gaurika left dat place)..

In xyz cafe…
Gaurika where waiting for agent ….
Om:- so wht r ur nxt plans???…
Gauri:- my goals r all set…after getting place..i will start it’s interior nd open my office their…
Om:- gud yaar…
Gauri:- so…do u hv any girlfriend????…(hoping dat his answer should be no only.. )
Om:- Yes .i hv got my someone special…..(just to check whether Gauri gets affected or not he says this)…
(Gauri was very much affected by omkara’s answer dat ..cz from childhood Gauri use to consider om more dan frnd)
Gauri:- (with fake smile on her face)….so tell me why it someone special .
Om:- woh meri girlfriend hone se pehle meri dost h..wo mere mann ki baat mere bina bole samjh jaati hai.. ….jab who smile krti toh meri aankhe use se batati hi nahi…jab koi problem aati h toh who mujhe support krti h.. most important who mujhe mere bhaiyon se kabhi dur Nahi karti infact who unlogo ko mujhse bhi jyada pyaar karti hai ..nd meri mom ki ko respect karti hain…..(while saying dis he was looking at Gauri only….indicating her dat is talking abt GAURI only)…

Gauri:- oh….gud…
(Omkara was dat Gauri didn’t get affected by knowing abt her girlfrnd…nd thinks dat may b she considers him frnd only…)
Om:- what abt u???……do u hv boyfrnd???…(expecting her ans to b no..)
Gauri:- Yes I do….he is frm Mumbai.. .nd for him only I m planning to shift here…( she was talking abt om only)…
Omkara didnt realised dat gauri was speaking abt him nd was left heartbroken after learning dat Gauri has boyfriend….cz for him Gauri was more dan friend…
Om:- so …y didn’t u informed me before abt it….???..
Gauri:- I was waiting for r8 time…
Om:- I want to meet him….(om was burning frm inside)…..
Gauri:-..being tensed says no I can’t.. .
(This made omkara more angry )
Om:- y can’t i meet him..??..
Gauri:- actually…..woh…w..o.h…haan..he is in London for his meeting…so he can’t meet u…as soon as he will come back..i will make u meet him…
Om:-ok…om I gota go……u attain meeting..i hv to delivere statue today….(om lies nd leaves dat place…leaving Gauri alone…)
Gauri:-om..but listen to me…

In car…
Om was heart broken nd was thinking abt his nd gauri’s moments…he remembers rudy’s words dat someone else will propose ur lady…nd cries badly. Thinking he lost Gauri forever……..
Main toh jiya na mara
Hai ve das main ki kara
Dil jude bina hi tut gaye hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne
Baar baar rod akhiyan tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne
Kataan main ki ve din teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara
Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna
Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage
Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage reeeeeeeee
Suna Lage Reee
Roothi rothi sari raatein
Fikhe fikhe sare din
Virani si Virani hai
Tanhai si tanhai hai
Aur ek hum hai pyaar ke bin
Har Palchil
Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

At cafe….
Gauri was also thinking abt her nd om’s moments….
Nd was completely broken learning abt his gf….omkara’s words when he described his gf was echoing in her ears….she was crying badly.thinking she lost om forever……)

Patharo ki is nagari mein
Pathar chehre Pathar dil
Phirta hai mara mara
Kyun rahon mein tu awara
Yahan na hoga Kuch hasil mere di
Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage
Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lag
Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage reeeeeeeee –
Plays in background….

Guys I hope u r liking it…nd if u think I m going out off track plz tell me…thank u..lots of luv..
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40 Comments
  1. Jayanti

    hi shreyanvi……..though its my first comment….. but your ff is awesome …….fabulous…please unite them soon….waiting for the next part asap

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear….keep reading…nd I will post next one soon….?

  2. Renimarenju

    Saku…..U are doing well with the episode, no need of worries…ok….I loved omru moments and rudy …haaye….that was so hilarious…anika will talk with gauri sso with omie and what abt rudy… he has 2 talk with his sumo….hehee hee…i laughed a lot…..thanks for that scene….the humor sense of u is very well shown in this episode….it sounds as so natural and rudy teasing omie like….bhaiya O is trying 2 seduce me….That was damn funny yaar….ur ff is actually a relief from stress…..U are wonderful in expressing fun on ff, ok every thing was gud…..but u made om 2 lie today….I mean mazak mein hi sahi….om ne kabhi jhoot nahi bola heinn…..in show whatever be the situation….may be he will remain silent for a while… for eg…. when thst gayatri case was happening and prinku got worried and was talking 2 omie…shivaay came there and omie was finding hard 2 convey truth….but we see his pain in his eyes…..never om will lie…. always he prefers truth over family…. whatever be the circumstance, he will not lie…u could have shown that scene like …. om gets affected….but he will deviate the topic by saying 2 gauri…. like….”I think now we have 2 leave ” That was the best way….matalab..omie ko jhoot bhi nahi bolna padega…phir bhi uske dil ki dard dikh jaayega…aur gauri ke dil ke dard bhi…. She is his childhud friend naa..so if om lies then perhaps it will be easy for her 2 find it … .. okay…..take care of three bros….first is omie is the best man…though he is not ideal now, but he always favors truth and has become more realistic now…. And sso is like mr. perfect, but with anika he is learning 2 see world in a new way….. Rudy is always hero. super cool… and he has not changed …. Ok….Just i am suggesting only, baaki u are writing really gud….the song which u chose was simply touching 2 show the pain ……And u are not going out of track….bas whatever i have told abt the three bros…bas uska dhyaan rakhnaa…likhte waqt…. The episode was rocking…. And i really appreciate u for showing shivomru very well through this episode as in show we are badly missing bromance…And i liked the way u portrayed omie’s view abt gauri and gauri’s view abt omie…which was their untold feelings abt each other, and that’s what the way their intense love has 2 took place @ initial stage and u portrayed it very well and i loved that to the core…thanks for giving such a wonderful episode and haa..take my suggestions with light hearted way…. Sorry if u felt any thing as bad, i just expressed my view only…bye…love u….next time also pakka send me links via pm…..

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much diii.. ..nd don’t worry mujhe bura nahi laga.. .I will surely work on ur suggestions…..nd being my dii..u hv full right to show me my mistakes.. .I promise I will take care of it in nxt episodes…pr kya h naa ff likhne waqt mere dimaag main serial wala om nahi aata..aur main usse apne hisab se hi bana deti nd dats my big problem…but I m working on it..thanks for being there for me…keep giving me suggestions it really means alot…thank u ….luv u…?

  3. Dhar

    Superb episode ??

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear….keep reading?

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear…keep reading…?

  4. Yashu

    Awesome……loved the episode….esp omru yaar they were so cute….it was really nyc..waiting 4 nxt….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much?

  5. Alekhika20

    Nice update

  6. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear….keep reading ?

  7. IME

    Awesome!!
    Amazing!!
    Loved it!!
    Dying for next!!!!!!!
    Post soon
    varna hahahahahaha don gussa ho jaaye ga heeeehaaaaaa
    Aaj neeto ko daat ke bhaut accha kaam kiya
    iss baat pe Don khush hua
    Love u
    take care
    byee

    1. Shreyanvi

      Hahaha ishu…..tu bhi neeti k saath rehkr nautanki sikh gayi haan….???..
      I m glad ki u liked it..nd haan keep reading?

  8. Karina

    Superb sweety…thanks for rumya scenes…glad to see all of them together…gaurika, shivika and rumya…keep up the good work…love u

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much di….i hope u liked rumya scenes….keep reading..luv u too?

  9. O’s wrong no.
    Whom will I talk to?
    I forgot I have a wife too.
    Soon to be Gauri Omkara Singh Oberoi.
    Meeting condition that only people with brains are allowed and Rudra’s logic that followed.

    All was so hilarious. I’m still smiling. 🙂 🙂
    All of them bond so well. Wish for similar bond in show too.

    Om and Gauri’s conversation was soooooo emotional.

    I could not stop laughing in first half and could not stop feeling for the two in second half.

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear….i m glad u liked it…keep reading?

  10. oh shrii dear I don’t HV words to sy about this epi.tooooo gud very funny too end feeling sad for om…as I HD told u about mor rudra scene u just did disss thnxx dear…tody when I saw ur updat na I started dancing with joyyy …it was toooo gud ….each scene was really awsom dear ..mera man kar RHA that me ye part khtam hi na ho…great work dear…lots of love ishuuuu…

    1. Shreyanvi

      Oh thank uhh so much ayeshuuuuu….i m glad ki u liked it….keep reading..?

  11. sory..shriiii

  12. Kiya

    Its amazing dr… Sorry for late comment….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear…..keep reading?

  13. Verna

    Wow.. such a beautiful part.. I really loved the way they describing their loved ones.. it got more interesting by their misunderstanding.. I’m waiting for their reunion.. and dream abt how happy wil be their face when they knew that they were talking about themselves

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear…even I m excited for their reunion…..keep reading?

  14. Savera

    Just now Read all ur ff parts and i become the fan of ur ff plz post soon yr can’t wait plz…

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear….u really made my day..keep reading?…i will post next one soon dear..

  15. Anu16

    Funny n awesome post soon..

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u..keep reading?

  16. Mrunal

    awesome and hilarious episode dear…
    thank god u showed rumya’s relation in good terms… I’m missing them badly yaar….
    aur tere pj toh yaha pe bade kam aa rahe hai…
    rudy ki behan….???

    1. Shreyanvi

      Rudy ki behen..lolzzzzz??..seriously yaar di ….mujhe bhi kuch aise hi feeling aari…main sirf rudy convo pr book hi likh dalu uske dialogue likhne main mujhe aasani hoti h….apne aap ko assume krke likh deti?????

      1. Mrunal

        Haan likh de… Kafi popularity milegi I’m damn sure…
        Tune na omri ki jagah rumya ff likhna chahiye… Blockbuster hoga woh… Akhir tu rudy ko jo portray karegi…???

  17. AWESOME SUPERB????

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks…keep reading?

  18. Kehkasha

    Pehle toh ye bata ki kya tune next part post kiya…. Jab bhi post karna….do send me the link..

    And this part….o gosh….its so humorous…. I loved the whole part…
    Each and every convo was perfect….. No overdrama….everything up to the mark….superb…
    And jaldi jaldi next wala post kar do….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Work in progress…till then stay tuned…?

  19. B_isha

    Oh my gosh this is the thirteenth time I am typing and trying to post comments on your ff ……. bad network but still I am sorry for late comments.

    I agree to Renima di in all terms as usual. ….. talking upon ur articles if you tell me to pin down a favorite moment then it’s impossible because all in all I have given your fiction a title. …
    “Laughter Blaster” each and every Pj actually makes my grin wider you always force me to the heights ….To grab my stomach and laugh mostly I read ur articles at night so my situation will be my mumma sleeping next to me and I am cupping my mouth hard as I laugh out loud. ….

    Oh I loved each n every bit of it
    Take care
    Love you to infinity

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks alot shama di….luv u tooo??

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