Jaane tu yaa jaane naa……by saku ishqie.. Part 3

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Hello frndz…thanks for all ur luv nd support..silent readers if u r liking my story then plz show ur support via comments…as much comments…I will get more motivation to write it further….ok..enough of my bakbak..lets get into story…

In car…
There was a pin drop silence in car..neither Gauri nor om was uttering a single word….both of them where thinking of that moment…nd both where feeling awkward….to avoid awkwardness om turned on radio…
First song played was
bheege hont tere….
Pyaasa dil mere…
Gaurika where in shock..nd looked at each other…nd this turned the situation more worst..
Gauri:-I will change song…
Om:-Ok..
Gauri changes song..the next song..
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya h..
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya h..
Behad aur beshumaar aaya h..

Plays..
Gaurika was again hell shocked..
Gauri:-I will change it..
Om:-let it b..its better to off it..
Nd they both burst into laughter…
Gauri:- om..r u ok..naa???..nothing is fishy naa??.
Om:- wht the wuck!!!!….dont think also…hv u ever seen ur face…i m so dashing ..tall ..handsome mundda..nd u..short nd moti…
Gauri:-excuse me…nothing is their frm my side also…woh toh bas aisehi puncha…nd what u called me..short nd moti again..hw dare u??…i will not talk wd u..katti..
Om:-sorry..sorryyyy…plz forgive me I was just joking..
Gauri:-I was also joking dumbo..saying this she became silent nd started thinking (she was still stuck in dat moment…flashes from their childhood..their first fall..first eyelock..everything was revolving in her head…..she says to herself..gauri stop it..he considers u only best frnd..nd nothing more than dat…so stop thinking abt him.. ..nd she consoles herself..her thoughts were disturbed by omkara…)
Om:-gauri…(no response)…..gauri…
Gauri:-yes..
Om:-where r u lost..??…come we reached my gallery..
Gauri:-oh..
(They both entered gallery…gauri was mesmerized by the entrance.. she was excitingly seeing each nd every statue nd paintings made by omkara..)
Om:-so hws it???..
Gauri:-It’s just amazing..superb..mindblowing..fantastic ..fabulous……(she was saying this in one breathe…nd om was lost in her cuteness…he was just staring her..nd Gauri was talking continuously in short Gauri was mesmerized by omkara’s talent …nd omkara was mesmerized by her beauty nd her cute little actions… ..)

Hum na rahe hum jo thhe kabhi
Khud ko hai chhoda, peeche kahin
Hum naa rahe hum, jo the kabhi
Khud ko hai chhoda, peeche kahin
Teri ore badhne lage
Teri tarah ban’ne lage
Ab toh mohabbat mein lutne chale
Jeene ki khwahish mein marne chale
Ab toh mohabbat mein lutne chale..
Jeene ki khwahish mein marne chale
Dard bhi hum seh lenge, tu jo saath raha
Saari duniya bhula denge, yeh waada raha
Chahe jitni mulaaqatein ho mujhe kam hi lage
Tere sath guzaraun har din par dil na bhare
Ek waqt baad hasne lage
Raah teri hum takne lage
Ab to mohabbat mein lutne chale
Jeene ki khwahish mein marne chale
Ab to mohabbat mein lutne chale..
Jeene ki khwahish mein marne chale

Frm movie creature plays in BG..
Gauri:-om..wht happened ???kuch toh bolo…
Om:- (come to his senses)..haan..agar mujhe bolne dengi toh bolunga naa..
(If u will let me then only I will talk naa)
Gauri:-so mean yaar..
Nd they both laugh.. .
Om:-sab dekh liya ho toh chale??(If u have seen everything…then should we go??..)
Gauri:- haan chalo..(ok ok.. let’s go)
(Nd they leave for home )

In shivika room..
Shivaye was shouting anika’s name cz he was not getting his file…
Shi:- why the hell she(ani) touches my file..now I m not getting it..
Ani:-wht happened..kyun chilla rahe ho??(why r u shouting???..)
Shi:-I m not getting my file..tommorow I hv important meeting ..i hv to make presentation..where u kept my file..
Ani:- r u sure..u really don’t knw where is ur file???
Shi:- sure sure..100% sure..
Ani:- u keeps calling rudra dumb..but in reality..he is intelligent dan u..
Shi:- what do u mean by dat..???..
Ani:-I mean….
Shi:–haan..u mean..go ahead..
Rudy:she means..ki file aapke haath main hain. (Nd he bursted into laughter)….??
Anika nd rudra..give’s hi5 nd make fun of shivaye…
Shivaye just to cover up his mistake..
Shi:-woh.. .woh…mujhe pata tha..i was just checking dat u can visualise clearly or not..
Rudy:-oh plzz…stop making excuses …accept dat u r fool..
Shiv:..haan..woh..kabhi kabhi..intelligent logo se galti ho jaati hain…warna tumjaise baddimaag logo ki najar lag jati.. (pointing towards anika nd rudra)
Rudy:-very funny..(nd goes to his room)…

Nxt day morning…
All were gathered at dinning table for breakfast…
Gauri:-gud morning Aunty..
Pinky:-gud mornings beta..
Janvi:-come..join us…
Gauri:-sure..
Gauri sits..meanwhile omkara comes their nd was abt to sit beside her but rudra forcefully occupies dat sit..which make omkara sit opposite to Gauri.. .
Om:-gabbu..paas me butter plz (as it was on Gauri’s right side.. )
Gauri:-sure..nd she forwards it to him.. accidently their hands touches…nd as usual current…both of them jerk their hand..gaurika at same time…KUCH HUA..
Om:-tumhe bhi..??[u too???..] Gauri:-tumhe bhi matlab..mujhe kuch nahi hua..tumhe hua kya??..[wht do u mean by u too ???…nothing happened wd me…] (she lies.. thinking om didn’t got current)..
Om:-no..nothing..bilkul bhi nahi.. (om thinks..tere taraf hi mamla gadbad h om…)
All were looking at them confusingly.. .
Members:-all ok..
Gaurika:yes…. perfectly fine..lets do breakfast..
Every1 hv their breakfast….while gaurika thinks abt current….

So this is it guys…i will stop her today….plz share ur views….lots of luv…
By saku ishqie….

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36 Comments
  1. Rasika

    Awsm… Sreyanvi

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanxxx yaar…keep reading?

  2. amazing..mindblowing…superb…fantastic…fabulous…I stole dis dailoug from did ff…BT from the bottom of my heart I’m commenting gazab ka epi …solo funny too..keep updating like this…love u

    1. Shreyanvi

      Awwww…thank u so much dear….u r soooòo sweeeetttt…i m glad ki got frnd like u…keep reading dear…luv u too?…
      Nd I won’t mind if u stole dialogue frm my ff????

  3. whr is 2 part dear..I 4rgot to ask

    1. Shreyanvi

      Dear they hv posted it on dbo page just now check once..or check on ishqbaaz page…

  4. Awwwwesome

  5. Karina

    Superb sweety…gaurika scenes were too good and i also enjoied shivika scene as well…pls write a bit about rumya too…love u.. keep up the good work…

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks di….yaa di surely I will write any rings in nxt epi….keep reading?

  6. Yashu

    Awww…it was so cute yaar…n ya I really loved that songs playing in car n gaurika…yaar too good….waiting 4 nxt…

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear….keep reading…nxt part I will try to post as early as possible…?

  7. AWESOME CUTE NICE???????

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear?

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear?

  8. ooppps sory dear now everything is fine its my confusion.dear..

    1. Shreyanvi

      Wht r u talking abt Dear??

  9. IME

    Awesome!!
    Loved it!!
    post soon!!
    amazing !!
    love u
    take care
    byee

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks ishu…keep reading?

  10. Hi Shreyanvi. Sorry I couldn’t comment on your previous episodes. I really loved it yaar. Keep writing.

    1. Shreyanvi

      It’s k dear…i m glad ki u liked it..keep reading dear?

  11. Verna

    Wow.. such a cute episode and their car scene was amazing

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks veruu diii…keep reading..?

  12. Kiya

    Its really very amazing Saku… I am little busy so I read ur previous parts today… And really they r awesome too… I am also a big fan of Gaurika or Sreenal…. So post ASAP dr….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Sure dear…i will post nxt part soon…keep reading ?

  13. nothing dear leave it I got 2part.end I read it…soooo sweeeet every part

  14. Renimarenju

    Oh the first thing i did after catching the bus 2 office was reading ur ff. the episode was really wonderful…..I enjoyed the current ….which is reminding me chulbul, omie and rudy…..maa daa laadla bigad gaya….and today also u made me 2 smile…..thanks a lot for that…….and gaurika convo was really nice 2 read….but haa…i have one pretty complaint…..U know omkara is the best man, he is not like sso though situations made him 2 change him…..still he has not changed completely…That “what the wuck ” doesn’t suits our omkara….u made it just for the light moment of fun…but even in fun also we have never find omkara saying like that…..that what the wuck is an epic dialogue for sso only….not for omkara…..so take care of that…..Apart from that every thing was gud in the episode…..especially aniru making fun of gaurika was awesome….i was able 2 visualize that part in my mind….and it’s really nice omie is taking gauri 2 art hub….That was something too gud yaar……and u described it beautiful as i was wondered with ur writing skills….And shivika…..nok-jhok was also so cute and it was well depicted in the episode….i could say in short this has brought the feel of IB before my eyes…..Thanks for sending links….else i would have missed it , and it’s impossible for me 2 miss my choti behna’s exclusive ff….Love u lot…..See as u post next one….send links via pm without any fail….. I will not be able 2 comment in time….but will definitely read it when i will be free…bye……love u….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanku so much do for bringing it into my notice…i will take care of it….nd thanks for reading yaar..really means alot….keep reading…luv u too?

      1. B_isha

        Well , so finally I have fulfilled my promise dear I have covered limited edition ff by the choti ….I just loved it to the core and Yaa Renima di is right and really you have skills which creeps a smile on our faces ……

        That current wala scene aniru all were good but I too have a suggestion if you don’t mind …..

        In your storyline you have shown that sharma ‘ s and Oberios are business partners n friends now my point is try to show some bond between gauri n family so that your storyline gets more grip .
        Hope you didn’t mind
        Good to read
        Cu
        Keep writing n do send the links on insta or whatsapp meri Jaan

        Love you

  15. Mrunal

    hey dea…
    i found episodes little short…
    try to make them longer…
    and todays episodes was fantastic…
    specially shivika and rudy scene..
    and the zatka scene was lol…??
    nice updates dear keep it up…

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u di..i will try to make it lil longer..

  16. Kehkasha

    Oh aaj lag raha hai…ki Mrunal di se bhi late ho gayi Mai…… Well amazing update….. Shivaay ka cover up dialogue….uff…. That was the best line…..in the whole part….
    Short….simple….light….yet meaningful update…
    See u in the next part ka comment section..
    Aaj toh padh kar khatam kar hi doongi Mai….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Zaroor khatam krna di..kyunki jab tak aap khatam karoge main nxt part update kr dungi???….aage k update pr milti hoon??…keep reading?

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