Jaane tu yaa jaane naa……by saku ishqie.. Part 2

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Hello frndz…saku ishqie is back wd another episode of jaane tu yaa jaane naa…thanku so much for all ur luv nd support…i m touched…..nd silent readers of u r liking my story then do show it support via comments…ok enough of my chatters…now I will go into story…happy reading guys…
So episode starts wd…

Gaurika were lost in each other’s eyes……
Gauri breaked eyelock..
Gauri:- om leave me..
Om:- r u sure??..
Gauri:- yes ofcourse…
Om:- ok then..he leave her nd “dhadammmm”..
Gauri was on floor….
Om:- now enjoyed??…ek toh Maine tumhe girne se bachaya..aur uparse tum mujhe hi attitude deri….
Gauri:- yaa r8 u saved me….then wht the hell I m doing on floor???….
Om:- u only said naa leave me so I did wht u said….
Gauri:-ok fine my back…now will u pull me up..jata dhari hippi..
Om:- sure..womaniya…
He pulls her up..

Om:- so for hw many days u came here dis time??…(he was expecting long time duration)..
Gauri:- oh..i m sorry I forgot to tell u dat..i m here just for a week..
Om:- what just a week…
Gauri:- yaa…i have came here to search place for my new office…(guys Gauri is an interior designer)…
Om:- hey..i knw one agent he can help us…
Gauri:-superb then..arrange my meeting wd him…tommorow..
Omkara:- ok..
Gauri:- whts going on in ur life..
Om:- well…u knw naa…i don’t have any intrest in business…frm childhood only I use to like to play wd clay/mud..
Gauri:- (just to tease him)…not bad yaar dabbu…i didn’t knw ki the oberoi’s gardening bhi krte..
Om:-hahaha..very funny..
Gauri:-sorry bad joke naa.. .so u r artist r8..
Om:-yup
Gauri:- so when r u gonna show me ur art gallery..
Om:-today only..after dinner..
Gauri:-perfect..
Om:-b ready at sharp 8:30pm ok..
Gauri:-ok.

In Gauri’s room …
Om:-Gauri chal yaar…nd he suddenly turned his face away..
(Actually Gauri was trying to tie dori of her dress)…
Gauri:-dabbu wht is this yaar..u shuld knock nd come naa…
Om:-u should lock ur room naa…
Gauri was unable to tie her dori….
Om:- may I..
Gauri:-ok..

Then om slowly turned his face towards Gauri.. he picked one dori to tie …gauri closed her eyes ..when om touched …her heart was beating rapidly….nd sensations were rolling through all over her body… …om was looking at Gauri through mirror…he turned her towards himself nd forced her to look into his eyes…he was holding her waist….
Dekha hazaron dafa aapko…
Phir bekarari kaisi h…sambhale sambhalta nahi yeh dil..
Kuch aap main baat aisehi h…..
Lekar ijajat ab aapse saanse ye aati jaati hai…
Dhunde se milti nahi h hum…
Bas aap hi aap baaki hai…
(Plays in backgroung)….
Someone coughs frm behind ….yes it was our anishivru…
Gaurika come to their senses …nd r embarrassed…
Ani:- whts going on haan..??…
Om:-wohh……wohh..bhaa…b..hi..
Rudy: -woh who kya haan???…abhi bolti kyun band hogayi aapki…waise toh bade shut up shut up..krte aaj Kya Hua.. ..
Om:-Kuch nahi hua…i was just helping her…
Shiv:- yaa.. we watched hw u was helping her…haan Gauri u don’t want to say anything…
Gauri.:- bhaiu woh actually..(she was becoming as red as tomatoes cz of shy)…actually..kuch nahi bas help…
Anirushiv:-laugh on them…while gaurika r throughly embarrsed ..
Rudy:- o kuch kuch hua kya??..
Om:- just stop it rudra.
Shivani :-yes rudy..now enough…dekha nahi dono
Kaise lal hore …

Rudy:- where r u both going tonight haan??..
Om:- at my art gallery..
Rudy:-raat ko konse murtiya dekhne wale ho aap unko..(in suspicious way)….
Om:-will u just shut up…
Rudy:-shut up shut up..kya…i think u only knw dis
words only dats y keeps saying shut up….
Om:-tum logo ka hogaya ho..toh hum jaye..???..
Anirushiv:-yup…go njoy…
They left dat place..nd so gaurika…..

Precap:- DAWAT- E-ISHQ….

I hope u guys will luv this episode also…keep reading nd supporting..luv u all…
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40 Comments
    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear..keep reading?

  1. Verna

    Wow.. such a lovely part.. I loved gaurika moment.. expecting more like this

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much di….i will surely try to give more n more such scenes….keep reading?…

      Di i m not getting ur Sunday shot…can u plz pm me link….so dat u can read it…
      Thank u…

  2. Awesome,lovely,superb

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks so much dear…keep reading..?

  3. Renimarenju

    Oh I just sat on my desk @ office right now for continuing my annoying work as again its monday which means mushkil day has started again…..Ok….i read it now as u send links for me….and thanks for it…..This was such a lovely, cute and amazing episode ….haaye….om keens 2 tie the dori of gauri……uff…..how romantic that was….awwww….so beautiful and that bgm also ……i was able 2 visualize that in my mind…..best moment of this episode….and i loved the way rudy pulled omie….haa haa..haa…now omie can’t say shut up….and all…..of course no one can hide from our mr. cool agent rudy…..oo7….superb…..yaar…and gauri-omie eyelocks and their convo was damn cool and am enjoying this new gauri womaniya very well and our romantic singh zulfi singh oberoi……Want 2 see more……waiting for it… I enjoyed this part and specially thanks 2 u as it brought a smile on my face as i was totally tensed today….I really liked this part a lot…..saku…….And when u update do send me links via pm….bye…love u dear…
    Keep writing more …..will be there 2 read….bye….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much di….i made u smiled..this is the best compliment for me…u know it’s very hard to make someone smile..nd I must say I followed it foot step as u always makes smile????…..luv u too.. nd I will surely pm u links..whenever i will post nxt part..stay tuned ..keep reading.???..

      1. B_isha

        (Sob) no one leaves words for me this time Renima di took but it’s cool Becoz I revere her good self and seriously saku yeh wala ek dam dimaag toot tha I mean brain was shut will was stuffed with tension etc due to ur lovely articles my heart was laughing loud…..I mean rudra was awesome …..and kunnu is romantic huh …. whatever just loved it but y did it end yaar I wanted to read more and more as it was awesome ….tu toh writer nikali so happy to read ur articles.

  4. Yashu

    So Sweet…..loved it….eagerly waiting for nxt episode….

    1. Shreyanvi

      Awww…thank u so much….i m glad u liked it…i will post nxt part soon…keep reading?

  5. pls write in english

    1. Shreyanvi

      I m trying dear…nxt part I will write more in English..

  6. Dhar

    Lovely part ??, enjoyed it thoroughly

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much dear…really means alot…keep reading?

  7. Niriha

    Lovely update…..waiting for next

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear….i will post next one soon..keep reading?

  8. Gaurika romance makes me blush???.. aise hi likhte rehna.. aur precap toh kuch aur tha na?.. i know that.. phir ye daawat kaha se aaya?????
    Anyways next epi start kar dena???

    1. Shreyanvi

      Haan di…i changed it cz I thought it’s too early for it…i will post it after 5-6 episode??

  9. IME

    Awesome dii
    Mera 1st epi read karna bhi baaki tha huh
    abhi kr ke aaiye
    aap bhi naa
    muje pm karna
    link ya fir bas bol dena ki update ho gaya
    coming to this epi
    it was superb
    amazing
    loved it
    love u
    take care
    byee

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanku ishu..finally tujhe tum mil hi gaya haan…chslo koi nai.. tune padha yahi bahot h..

  10. CUTE SWEET NICE SUPERB????????

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much uf…..keep reading?

  11. Karina

    Omg Gaurika scene was amazing and the way Shivay, Annika and Rudra make fun of them was hilariouse…waiting for next part sweety…keep writing…

    1. Shreyanvi

      I m glad karuuu diii…thank u so much for reading nd commenting..luv u?

      1. Karina

        No need of thank u sweety 🙂 love u too…take care..

  12. Alekhika20

    lovely updt

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks dear…nxt part is also updated..plz share ur views…

  13. dear shrii such a nice epi. loved it.end rudra scene was amazing shri in the next epi increase a litle bit rudra scene bcz he s my fev end funny …end han can I cl u shrii dear its such a sweet nam js like u

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thanks alot ayshuuu…yeah I will give more nd more rudra nd rumya scenes in nxt epi…keep reading..stay tuned?…
      Nd u can call me anything u want…z???

  14. sweet of u dear

  15. Criz

    Nice one dear

  16. Chandini

    Sakuuuuuu this is superb nice awesome marvellous outstanding….???rudra shivaay annika scene was wonderful and funny and sorry for commenting so late…now only read the first part and I loved it??

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much chandini diiii?????…..i m so happy to see u …..i m glad ki u liked it….keep reading?…luv u…

      Btw hws u yaaarr.. ..we r interacting after a long long tymmmm…..i missseddd u yaar…but no problem …now I will b in touch wd u…

      1. Chandini

        I am fine darling how are you and ya we interact more often waise did you change your number not in group also??

  17. Mrunal

    rudy nahi sudhrega…
    kabab mai haddi..
    and iss baar shivika ne bhi saath diya…
    romance ki omm kar di yaar…
    chalo koi nahi…
    dawat e ishq toh hai next epi mai…

    once again amazing episode dear…

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much di..but I hv doubt sach main accha likha ki aisehi bolre aap..??

  18. Kehkasha

    Arrey yaar not fair…har koi apne ff mein….wrong time par wrong entry karwata hai….. And Tu bhi….privacy jaisi koi cheez suni hai….but seriously….han…. I laughed like hell…..kya tha yeh saku madam….matlab…full on sixer….
    Awesome one yaar…..jaa rahi next part padhne…
    See u..

    1. Shreyanvi

      Thank u so much diii.. ..nxt part pr milti hoon????…nd haan rudy k hote hue kisiko bhi privacy nahi Milne wali????

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