#Ishqbaaz Few Shots… shot (2) by #annie

Hey buddies hope yuh know me well by now!

So I’m back with next Part of my long FEW SHOTS…

I’m very happy you enjoyed the first part and I’ll do my best to make this one your favourite one…

Thanks alot for the comments…❤

Pinky calls someone and leaves the hall fuming…

Shivaay locks the door and sat beside annika caressed her hair “i hope you wake up soon…” he kisses her and sat holding her hand

There’s a knock on door *knock knock*

He goes and opens the door to see doctor standing…

S – doctor come…

He enters shivaay locks it again…

Doctor checks annika and give her some injections

D – Mr.oBeroi she’ll be fine soon and the result of the test i did has came and i got to know what has happened to her…

S – *eagerly* tell me doctor?

D – Mr.oBeroi… from last 3 months she’s passing through high depression and stress… I’ve even saw some suicidal attempt on her body… she was prescribed to some medicines but she didn’t took them regularly… it lead her to some fainting strokes… she may faint
Anywhere without any perfect reason… haven’t took proper diet the cause of weight lose… and the thing u told lips turning blue is caused by weakness when you’re not able to handle the cold due to weakness your sensitive body parts starts turning blue its usually happens but in this case you can take it seriously… the trauma she has been in… caused her serious damages sudden happiness and sudden sorrow can cause her faint and if you really want her to be fine so take her care as you take care of small child… she must comeout from that trauma depression and stress I’ll give you the medicines and take serious precaution else you may lose her her condition may turn worse with your one mistake…. i hope you understood Mr.oBeroi…

Shivaay just nodded and doctor left shivaay locked the door and lay beside her hugging her tightly “I’ll take your proper care I’ll leave all the other things annika i promise I’ll bring you back and you’ll again have a hope to live… i promise” shivaay whispers… and he slips into deep slumber…

Scene in the room of omkara…

Omkara was sleeping hugging gauri when she gets conscious…

Her pov

“What am i doing here? And what are these machines attached to me? Why I’m not able to remember anything *she sees om hugging her tightly * hein? Why omkara ji hugging me like I’m running away? *she tries to slip out,om wakesup* leh he woke up what I’ll do now …”

Pov ends…

G – omkara ji I’m sorry but i was just moving out…

O – No need to move sit quietly! How’s you feeling now?

G – me feeling? Why?

O – don’t you remember you just woke up from 3 months comma…

G – hey bhagwan 3 month comma? I was sleeping from 3 months? Mean i didn’t woke …

O – yes… now stay quite and tell me how’s you feeling?

G – i ain’t feeling anything special… infact now I’m feeling hungry i haven’t eaten anything since 3 months OMG!

O – are you sure you aren’t feeling anything strange?

G – umm… one thing is strange that is you caring about me…

There was a total silence…

O – well come I’ll give you something to eat… whatever you’ll ask!

G – okay…

They both left the room om was holding her her hand as she was weak and wasn’t able to walk properly… they reached kitchen…

Om ” i think you can’t stand for long so come sit here *pointing toward the counter*”

Gauri “okay…”

She tried sitting but wasn’t able to sit so om lifted her little and she sat and om started making soup for her…

G – you’ve not answered my question?

O – it’s just because you went into that condition because of me and i was just rectifying it by caring…

G – really? But it doesn’t seem to be like that… i mean you could’ve sent me to some hospital and get rid of me? Or you could have filed a case against me for hurting your buamaa?

O – I’m sorry for mistaking you!

G – sorry? You think that your sorry will bring back those 3 months? You never trusted me om… never? Why? Because i helped you every time without even thinking about myself…Or you just hated me for lying to you about being gauri and acting as Chulbul for these things you always blamed me? Or there is something else? Which I don’t know and you know? I told you about bua Maa but you’re omkara singh oberoi how can you be wrong or someone from your family can be wrong oberoi’s don’t lie? Or oberoi’s don’t do mistakes? I’m still saying bua maa is not good she wants to take revenge from you but you will never believe me because I’m not an oberoi na…

O – okay enough gauri…! You’re speaking without even asking me… I’m sorry for the thing I did to you… I’m sorry for not believing you… I’m sorry for hurting you, I’m sorry for blaming you, I’m sorry for pushing you and giving you such pain I’m really sorry and yeah you’re right I hated you because you lied but I hated you for taking the life of thakurain and I still hate you for that but now the hatered isn’t the same as it was b4 because some realities are in front of me and your clean chit from them… like you were right about bua maa like you were right all the time while in OM mean every time you tried leaving someone stopped you… but the truth is still same because of you someone died and you’re not even bothered about it? You tried to took her place just for the sake of money?

G – waah? You made your own theories about me? Who told you I was the reason behind thakurain’s death? Who told you I took her place for money and all?

O – what was left to tell? I know I have seen everything by my own eyes…

G – okay so you’ve seen everything? Right? Then did you see how kaali brought me from my house? How he threatened me? How he locked me up? How he captivated me in chains? How he tortured me? How he was marrying me? How his brothers were going to marry? Do you know any of these if yes than tell me?

Om looked down in deep thoughts

G – I know you don’t know so you can’t blame me for the thing which you don’t even know if you want to blame me? Go learn the truth first…! Then come and blame me for the right thing I’ll happily accept…

Saying so she turned her face to other side om looked up at her with tears in his eyes

“she’s right I should learn the truth properly this time I won’t repeat the same mistake again, I’ll dig out the truth and will apologize if needed and will tell her know that I love her…” thought om

O – okay gauri I’ll get to roots of this truth till then we won’t talk about this matter and yeah you won’t stop me from taking care of you…
G – why? You to hate me na? then why you want me to be fine? You should let me die…
O – enough of your nonsense dammit… just now shutup and have this soup…
He fed her soup and the both left to their room he lays her down gives her medicine and lay’s beside her “now don’t say that you can’t sleep with me because you’re sleeping with me from last 3 months” said om to gauri who was about to say something saying so he smiled and turned to other side and switched off the lamp’s
“I think he has gone mad none acts this much sweet while hating someone” thought gauri and soon slips into deep slumber in the effect of the sedatives

Scene to dadi’s room where Jhanvi is laying on recliner closing her eyes…
“what annika will think when she will get to know the truth that we broke our promise? I just wish shivaay don’t tell her the truth and do something else…” “I wish that day we hadn’t discussed anything in his room but the whole game was of fate, we couldn’t help in that *flashback of 3 months b4* (shivaay had a minor heart attack and everyone left his room after the doctor left he was sleeping when Jhanvi omru were staying in his room)
R – mom this all is happening because of choti maa, I feel ashamed calling her my choti maa how could she do this with our bhaiya? He’s even her son na, I’ll tell bhaiya everything once he gets conscious
O – have you gone mad? We can’t break our promise made to Bhabhi that whatever the situation will be we will not tell anything to shivaay… and Bhabhi did such a big sacrifice for shivaay’s sake we can’t tell him and waste her sacrifice which she made for his betterment…
R – I know o, but still he’s not better the way she thought he’ll stay after her exit he got pain only and this heart attack is also because of her exit and choti maa isn’t even bothered about it and still blaming Bhabhi… and I can’t see this anymore she only thought that bhaiya love his NKK theory but never thought but never thought how much he loves her and the love which is toward her is way more than the NKK obsession we were mad to give her promise about the thing which we knew will break this family nothing else her exit not only effected bhaiya only but effected the whole family and that’s very very clear to me I don’t know if that’s also clear to you or not? that’s why you’re still thinking about the promise…

J – I know rudra whatever you’re saying is 100% correct but we can’t do anything, even if we tell it to shivaay he’ll just get more hurt nothing else as annika will never re-turn after all this she will never try to come in-between pinky-shivaay again, I know this in-between thing was just pinky’s insecurity but it reached the high level where it wanted to go she wanted annika to leave not only leave she wanted her to make shivaay hate her and throw her out so he did what she wanted and we can’t only blame annika or pinky for this shivaay is equally responsible for this he should have believed annika on the time where she was right but shivaay thought she’s lying because the matter was of pinky so in this matter annika did what situation demanded none is wrong except pinky and her exit is because of the pressure which pinky put on her but it was successful because shivaay never trusted her the way he should have trusted her…

O – I think mom you’re right shivaay is the real reason behind her exit she knew It that even if she gives him proof he’ll still not believe her and only believe her mother and If she had told him being an illegitimate child of shakti dad he would have still thrown her out whatever the thing is done now we should support him and Bhabhi they are only apart in documents and in world and still connected by heart’s… I have a hope GOD will make them meet once again by hook or crook…I hope shivaay gets to know the real reason of her doing that and regret… and knows how his so called mother blackmailed his innocent wife to leave his beloved husband and I wish he regret a lot…

“I’m already regretting it om” shivaay’s voice shocked them all…
O – shivaay you…
S – yes me om, I knew it there was some reason behind annika’s doing or some pressure on her because her eyes were saying something else and she was speaking something else *sits on bed with a thud and red teary eyes* but never even imagined the reason will be my MAA…

Omru and Jhanvi ran to be his support
O – relax shivaay…
S – Relax om? Really you think I can relax after knowing all this I really regret that I believed my mom instead of my wife badi maa you were saying right the big fault is mine I made that situation successful… but shivaay singh oberoi will never let that happen for forever I’ll do everything alright I’ll bring my annika back with all respect… I’m illegitimate I could have handled that rather than her absence which is killing me I wish I could undo everything right now but no I can’t but I can rectify it by doing everything right by bringing her by kicking maa out by…

R – by bringing Mahi bhaiya?
S – Mahi bhaiya?
O – yes Mahi your twin brother 2nd illegitimate son of shakti dad and kamini aunty…
S – mean annika was right he could be my brother… why this all happened with me only I’ll make everything alright send this time no mistake’s
J – better late than never…
They 4 hugs eachother
Next day they went to good luck chawl and met Mahi and informed him about the truth and convinced him to stay with them but he refused saying he want to know the truth from OMM mouth only which was very hard so they decided to keep him in ground floor of mansion on which he agreed and none confronted pinky as promised to Mahi because he wanted to hear the real truth from her as the truth which was known by everyone was not fully real truth the took him do dadi and dadi was happy hearing him being her another grandchild but when she knew the plan which pinky made she was shocked and fainted and was not in her senses for 3 long months none was fine and situation wasn’t right for them to even made pinky reveal the truth they all were quite for their own reasons and none even looked after her *annika* as none was known to her location not even shivaay as Annika asked Khanna to never tell shivaay about her real location…

*flashback end* Jhanvi sighs…
“everything happens for a reason and this all also happened for a reason now slowly everything will get on their track…” thought Jhanvi and sleeps …

Scene in Rudra’s room
He gets a call from some unknown number first he ignores it but when he got the call again he felt something and picked it up
“rudraaaaaaaaa” –POC
R – Somu?
S – yes cry baby…
R – you’re in India? The number is of India only…
S – yeah I just came back… I was feeling alone there so I short It to 3 months and came back to India…
R – 3 months are short for you? They were very hard for me, where are you I want to meet you right now…
S – duffer that is really impossible I’m in Delhi…
R – I don’t believe you moti Somu I can sense you here… * he said while going down*
S – really dumbbell oberoi?
R – yes and I’m 100% sure you’re near my mansion…
S – no… right now I’m *sneezes*
R – I Got It right now you’re drenching in rain your sneezing tells it…
S – yes, now I’m having ice-cream in Delhi with reeyan in rain *sneezes*
R – I still don’t believe because *hugs her from back* I caught you… I knew it you’ll only come to meet me first…
Keeping phone down
S – so much confidence…
R – yes because I know Somu will never meet anyone first except her cry baby… after all I’m your husband na?
S – what a change rudra?
R – *hugging her* I missed you so much soumaya…
S – *reciprocating* even I missed you so muchhh…
R – I think you should move in we are fully drenched and you’re already sneezing much…
They both got in and rudra took her to his room with her luggage’s…
R – for tonight you have to stay here tomorrow we will do something for your stay here forever…
They both changed and when soumaya was changing he brought hot tea for her and himself and they both settled on bed and he started telling him the happening of 3 months and b4 she was teary eyed and so does he but they both consoled eachother and fell asleep talking…
Scene in Mahi’s house…
Mahi was holding a pic “I really miss you maya, but I can’t meet you because after a long time I got my family and they got me and they don’t want to lose me so does me that’s why I can’t come to you I really miss you…” he kissed the photo kept in wallet and turns to sleep…

Scene in shinky’s room
S – pinky I don’t know what shivaay was telling mean about what he was saying or why you hate annika but let me clear you one thing if you made shivaay angry one more time I’ll forget you as my wife and you very well know that when I forget I never look back so behave and never try to blame anyone from my family…and for your information annika is also the part of our family…

P – oh my maata annika and family’s? cheap sadakchap ladki like her can’t be the part of our family no backgrounds?
S – enough pinky I already said I won’t bear any misbehave toward my family otherwise I won’t mind slapping you again…
P – but the truth will never change that she’s some sadakchap ladki with no backgrounds, no good qualifications a blackspot on the name of oberoi’s…
S – *claps* wow look who is talking about qualifications and backgrounds you are from same line pinky no good qualifications and belong to a low class family from a village it was maa because of whom you’re in this family and enjoying this title of oberoi otherwise you would have married someone of your class and known even had any idea about a pinky so never taunt annika about this as she’s much better than you… and for the last time I’m saying behave…

Saying so he went to his bed and lay to sleep

“OMM, taunting me about low class because of manhoos annika now I’ll not even think once b4 killing her” thought pinky and lays down fuming

Scene in morning…
Shivika room
Annika was the one to wake-up b4 she was very surprised to see him hugging her and holding her hand’s
“Annika stop dreaming so much… how can you imagine thiz” she shooked her head… and opens eyes to see him still hugging her and holding her hand ” oh bete ki it’s reality? What happened that I’m here?” She closes her eyes and tries remembring and soon everything gets clear and tears made their way out from her closed eyes “so he want me tk mend everything here and blackmailing me about chutki? But how did he know about chutki? And why he was hugging me if he hates me” she moves and shivaay woke up…

S – annika you woke up? How’s you? Are you still feeling cold? Should i bring something for you to eat?

A – I’m fine *she stands up and stumbles shivaay tries to hold her but she stops him by showing hand to stop* no need to act Mr.oBeroi… i know what you want from me… but don’t bring chutki In between… i beg you

S – annika you need rest sit please…

A – *starts panicking* why sit? So you’ll feel easy to torture me? Han? I won’t let you come near and will not even let you harm my chutki…

S – annika what are you saying i will not torture you… trust me…

A – i know you very well… you…you..yo…

S – annika don’t take the damn stress *shouted*

A – stay away i..i. *looking at the knife and picks it from fruit basket* I’ll kill myself! *placing it on her wrist* trust me I’ll kill

S – annika stay calm I’ll not come near you nor go near your chuthki please leave the damn knife *he begged*

A – *losing her mind in depression* i know you’re lying i hate lie you’ll harm me so it’s better i harm myself i know if i come near you your mom will kill me so it’s better i kill myself… *cries*

S – my mom? Kill you?

A – yes… she’ll again try to kill me and i don’t want to die from her hands and… and… * she starts trembling* I’ll kill myself *cuts her wrist* i won’t die from her hands…

She falls shivaay runs to her and sees her wound that wasn’t very deep so he bandages her after laying her down on bed sprinkles some water on her face and she gains consciousness

Shivaay “annika don’t panic please, I’ll not harm you not even your chuthki trust me and will not even force for anything… i don’t even hate you… trust me i need you i don’t care about whatever you did with me 3 months ago and don’t even want to care in future please forget everything and be mine? Be with me please i need you and i know somewhere you also feels that you need me alot so keeping everything aside let’s be by Eachothers side please?” He requested her and she in response just hugged him

Annika ” i wonder why you still care for me? After whatever i did to you… i don’t know why but yeah I’ll be by your side till you want me to be by your side… i don’t know what happens to me sometime so if i said something please forgive me… i really don’t remember what i said to you just sometime b4 ” she cries

“No don’t think much whatever you said was good not bad 🙂 so don’t take stress come I’ll help you in freshing up” said shivaay and took her to washroom and after sometime they both got fresh and went down in hall just to see everyone already present there

R – bhabhi i missed you so much *hugs her* om joins and jhanvi gauri and somu too…

A – i too missed you… *reciprocate*

R – come sit with us i want to tell you alot *holds her banded wrist and she winces in pain* I’m sorry i didn’t knew you’re hurt I’m sorry…

A – even i didn’t knew *chuckled *

Shivaay was very tensed…

S – annika let’s go meet Dadi? Then come back?

A – but…

S – come na…

He took her from their and left her in dadi’s room and came to hall

Shivaay “omru and badi maa i need to talk… and yeah she’s not very good in health i don’t want anyone to stress her and hurt her anymore weather it is omru! *winking at them* so it’s better to take my sentences seriously and stay 100000 metre away from the thoughts to hurt her because if she will get hurt I’ll not leave the one because of whom she’s hurt…” warned shivaay…

Scene in dadi’s room…

Annika ” i never knew because of me you’ll land into this situation and never thought shivaay will forget this all so easily i failed to realise how much he loves me ? Dadi now you need to wakeup!” She said while squeezing her hand…

“I’m already awake annika puttar just resting” dadi said with difficulty and smiled

A – I’m sorry dadi… *kissed her hand*

D – no need to be sorry i know…

J – yeah she knows whatever her bahu do will be for some reason and whatever you did was to make shivaay realize his love for you right?

D – yeah…

Annika confused but smiled

D – none can hate you ever annika everyone needs you only… everything got fine after you came…

She squeezes her hand lil

A – i love you dadi…

She hugs her and jhanvi joins…

Scene in hall where jhanvi and annika arrived…

T – annika beta don’t you want to meet your bade papa…

Annika smiles and went to him to take his blessings by touching his feets…

T – daughter’s hug they do not touch feets… *and he hugs her* i missed you beta…

A – even i…

S – I’m still left…

A – sorry uncle *she goes to him*

S – don’t call me uncle, I’m your dad…

A – sorry dad.. *she hugs him*

Now she goes to pinky and touch her feets pinky was going to take aback when she looked at the pair of blue orbs galring her angrily and another 2 pairs giving warning to her through eyes…

P – stay happy…!

Annika goes back and shivaay stands by her side…

“Bhaiyaaaa papa maaa” a very sweet voice echoed the hall of mansion everyone was overwhelmed hearing the voice of the girl to see their baby girl prianku standing at the main door with ranveer by her side

“Prianku” they said in unity and she runned to her brother and hugged them her 3 brother’s carefully embraced her in their arm

Shivaay “prianku how’s you?” Asker her overprotective elder brother caressing her hair

Pri – I’m fine bhaiya…

R – how come you remember us after 3 months?

Pri – bhaiya ranveer was on 3 months training and aunty was alone so she didn’t allowed me to go…

O – but…

Ran – I’m sorry from maussi side… when i got to know she haven’t visited you for 3 months i immediately bring her here…

T – you did good…

Prianku 1 by 1 hugged everyone and now she asked about her maa…

J – I’m here *brings dadi on wheel chair*

Prianku hugged her and kneel down to hug dadi… *ahhh..*

D – what happened?

Pri – n.no.othing how’s you?

D – I’m fine now as my whole family is one again…

They all settles in hall on sofa’s chit-chatting…

Every one was overwhelmed happy but one was fuming seeing them like this… (you know very well)

Annika hold her head…

S – annika are you fine?

A – umm yeah shivaay just felt some dizzy…

S – oh god forgot to have breakfast you need to take medicine’s too…

O – let’s make breakfast…

R – me too…

A – *dizzy* take me too please don’t leave me a..a.lone

S – yeah yeah ofcourse…

He held her hand and they left for kitchen…

G – i think we should help them…

Somu – yeah you’re right…bhabhi…

J – okay go and prianku ranveer you also rest sometime…

They all nods and leave …

D – jhanvi take me to my room…

They too leaves…

P – oh my maata none even bothered to ask me anything… just because of that manshoos I’ll kill her…

T – have control on your tongue pinky, she’s my daughter and I’ll not bear anything against her…

S – i warned you don’t force me to take some bad steps…

P – everyone just warns me… *she leaves crying*

Scene in kitchen…

The three ladies sit on the back counter of the kitchen and their husband’s starts cooking…

Shivaay “annika what you want to eat?”

A – whatever you give me by love?

R – haha bhabhi then bhaiya will only give you hugs and kisses…😘😂

O – shutup rudra…

Somu – btw i heard rudra you’ve put on alot…

R – hein? Who told you whose the one ditched rudra singh oberoi…?

O – I’m the one duffer you’ve put on alot…

R – yeah O you’re right… when i used to kiss somu i used to eat her favourite paratha’s…

Shivaay – did you just said kIss rudra…

R – oh i mean miss… and i used to miss her all the time that’s why i have put on…

Somu – awww *sneeze*

R – bhaiya i think we should only make soup… annika and gauri bhabhi are sick and this somu is getting sick so we need to make soup only…

A – no shivaay i don’t want soup…

S – what you want?

A – aloo puri…

S – that’s impossible first get fine then have as much as you want…

Annika makes puppy face *pleasee*

S – this ain’t gonna work…

They make soup and have chit-chat…

After finishing cooking they pour it in bowls and walk to their lady loves…

Somu – rudra I’m telling you i don’t like it and you’ll regret forcing me…

R – i don’t care your health matters most…

He puts in the soup filled spoon in her mouth and they both looked into Eachothers eyes…

G – omkara ji in night you fed me this only i want something chat-pata…

O – really you think I’ll bring something chat-pata for you you will just have this and I’ll bring you gol gappy once you get completely fine… i promise…

G – okay…

And he feeds her the soup and they smiles…

A – billu ji please no…

S – ssshhh have it…

And feeds her…

A – oh garam garam *hot hot *

S – I’m sorry… *blows*

A – *laughs* billu ji dar gaye… *billu ji got scared*

S – now have it silently…

A – have it… *feeds him*

S – now you have it… *feeds*

A – now it’s great so yummy 😋😋

S – you’ve changed alot *mummers*

A – what?

S – nothing have it…

They trio were feeding their lady loves…

A – okay enough i won’t eat more *pushes the bowl little the soup falls on shivaay…*

Everyone shocks…

A – b.b..b..

S – it’s okay annika nothing to worry… stay calm…

G – I’ll cleann

And tries to move because of which the soup bowl in Om’s hand falls on him…

Somu – oh let me help you

And here rudra one’s fall on him too…

A – gauri soumaya i have an idea *obro are shocked* run…

They three runs…

And obro chases them…

Shivaay hears his phone ringing and turns to the sound…

Somu and rudra end up chase in their dadi’s room…
Gauri and om end up near tej shakti sitting in hall…

And shivaay just moves to pick the phone and annika bumps into pinky…

P – OMM very happies… *clutches her by her arm hurting her by her nails* i told you to not come in this house again and in my son’s life but you never listens… why you’re back *shivaay sees his annika in her clutches from far in mirror and b4 picking the call runs out to reach them annika starts crying* don’t act like crying and being ill i know your these antics very well… I’m warning you last time otherwise last time you got saved by chanda and chawl people this time I’ll make sure you die…

She pushes him and goes without looking back …

Shivaay caught her on time and was fuming but calmed himself to calm annika down… annika looked up at him and hugged him tightly crying…

“S..s..s..hivay i.i..i. t.t..told .y…ou …s.s.s.he w…w.w.illl .kk…k.ill me” she cries and shivaay just tightens the hug he sits with her till she calms and stopped crying he lifted her up in his arms and walked toward his room cleaned himself and annika and gave her the medicines and did first aid of her wrist then applied ointment on her arm’s *shivaay was fuming* he kissed annika on forehead and she hygged him…

“You won’t leave me alone na” she asked while trembling “never” he tightens the hug…

And soon she slipped into sleep in the effects of sedatives… he kissed her agian and made her lay on bed fron her lap…

And he goes out from room silently but fuming…

Scene in a car where a police uniform suited person is trying to call someone again and again “why shivaay bhaiya isn’t picking up this information is very necessary for him i need to tell him b4 it’s too late” the person thought…

And shivaay missed the very important call for the 30th time…

#TBC…

I hope you won’t hate me for landing annika in this situation i have a reason behind this and I’ll tell you now only as after her this behaviour she will be very close to shivaay the obsession of shivaay will be annika only not NKK and they’ll be sharing cute moments…

And leave any suggestion which you think is missing

And one more thing suggest me an actress for the role of maya opposite to mahi…

Thanks and stay tuned bye….

REGARDS
#ANNIE

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    Maryam_ishq

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    When i saw u wrote this i quickly opened it and read it. It is just awesome. Shivay caring for anika is just 😍😍😍😍 and am really happy tht he knws pinky’s real evil side, and it’s so good to see mahi back 😀. It’s so good to see om caring for gauri even though his misunderstanding is still noy cleared… and am really glad tht finally gauri took a stand for herself infront of om and shut his mouth. Good to see tht rudra loves his somu and tht they are together now. I actu

    • Maryam_ishq

      Maryam_ishq

      |Registered Member

      I actually like u for puttin anika in this condition as we get to see our billuji caring for her more thn anythin else. How abt preetika rao or his wife janki for maya 🤔

  2. Simrat_14

    Simrat_14

    |Registered Member

    Do not hate you for putting Annika in this situation. That’s how a story grows, right? Anyway, amazing update 👍😊😍😘❤️

    • Barbieannie

      Barbieannie

      |Author

      Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤ yeah she’s much more strong than anyone and also disturbed much more than anyone and when these to combine shivaay gets a baby annika 👀❤ for whom he’ll fall again and take care of her that’s the basic point only…

  3. Madhuani

    Madhuani

    |Registered Member

    No not at all hate you as coz of this we got to see shivaay caring for anika.
    I think why not his wife jankee only as maya as duo look great.

  4. UF

    AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING SWEET SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘

    Dear Annie
    Main tho pinky ka part padke gusse se pagal ho raha hu😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠agar uss boothni budiya ne Meri sweet heart anika ko kuch kiya na main usse nahi chodunga.main usse knifse uski pet pe attack karung🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪aur isse🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨sar pe maarunga⛏⛏⛏⛏⛏⛏⛏⚒⚒⚒⚒⚒⚒⚒isse bhi main usse bahuth zorse maarung.and 🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫isse uski full body pe shoot karunga.wo Meri anika ko marna chaatha hai.agar usska Baal bhi touch kiya na .ye Jo saari tools ki saath aur bhi aise cheezon se usse maarunga door rahna usse boothni motty devil budiya pinky😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠.please annie anika ko kuch math hona.warna patha nahi next time pe main uss pinky ka Kya karunga.mujhe tho emoji ka ek app bhi download karna hoga uss budiya boothni ke liye.waise Mera saara feeling Jo pinky ke liye Hai wo aise bahar aayi😂sorry yaar aap tension tho nahi hua na.aapki story ke liye main detha hu.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁ye sab aapki beautifull and brilliant storys ke liye.

    Take care and keep writing😊😊😊

    • UF

      Dear Annie
      Mahi ki opposite prrethika Rao ko add karo.agar aapko acha laga tho.all the best👍

    • Barbieannie

      Barbieannie

      |Author

      thankyousomuch for all the tareef❤❤❤❤❤❤ and your anger is much more than anyone else’s will torture her alot… and I’ll search bcz i don’t really know rao one

  5. jane

    wow fantastic.. you are really great so creative…i loved how shivay cared for his lady love and i’m happy he knows his mom truth…thanks for the great episode…hope you’ll post soon the next one

  6. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

    |Registered Member

    Fantastic…. Loved it. Especially shivaay’s warning! And I enjoyed pinky yuckkk ponky’s slap….yayyyyy!!! If possible finally put her in mental asylum! What happened to Anika in chawl?? Did pinky yuckkk ponky tried to kill her??? If yes then kill her… Rikara n Rumya parts are also awesome dear…. Loved Tejvi n Shakti!

    And Maya, what about Disha parmar??? Or Nakuul Mehta’s real life partner n love Jankee Mehta????

  7. Pooja26

    Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    pinky why don’t u die ???
    fantastic part……..
    post asap……
    tc….
    ya for maya -pretika rao…….

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