Ishqbaaz ff by Tulasi (Part 3)

Hlooo darlngs….thnks a ton to evryone who commented…n plzzz silent readers drop ur comments…dey boost me up….i m quite happy wid d comments i got bt i stll want sum moreeee……n if u feel bored or not satisified wid wat i wrote plz let me knoww..n negative comments r always welcumd…..n nw i m makng dis into a ff soo i wanna clear out sumthngs…..soo i ll strt nw….

Oberoi mansion ….evng…
Ani: arey ye sahil ko kya ho gaya??? Phne kab se try kar rahi hoon….koi ans hi nahi…!!!😟😟😟
She is soo worried n movng to n fro continuosly….dadi comes…..
Dadi: anika puttar..kya hua?? Itna pareshan kyu ho??
Ani: wo dadi sahil ke baare me soch rahi hoon!! Phne nahi lag raha hain….
Dadi: puttar jab wo mumbai mein hi hain…to use hstl mein kyu rakhna….yaha lekar aa …tumhare saath hain tho use accha lagegaa….!!!!

(Sahil is studyng 3rd cls in mumbai…he lives der in a hstl….)

Ani: dadi…apne mujhe rehne diya wahi badi baath hain….ab sahil ko kyu…dadi interferes n tell her hame koi pareshani nahi…bring him here….

Ani: thnk u sooo much dadi…!!!! N she hugs her……
She dnt know mumbai well…soo dadi asks om n ru to go wid her…..
Omru n ani go to his skool….n completes all d formalities to take him home…
Ru: ani didi…kaha hain sahil?? Waise bhi i ll be bored at home…i cn have a lot of time pass wid him…
Ani: woh ek saithan hain…..itna naughty hain ki mein kya bolu!!!!
Om: baccha hain anika aisa hi thi hoga….yeh duffer bhi bachpan mein aisa hi thaa…!!
Ru: u called me duffer o!!!! N keeps puppy face!!!!
N then cums our cutieeee sahil…..
Runs to anika n hugs her….!!!!
(In my story he is well…healthy n cute)
Ani hugs him tightly….n asks him phne utha kyu nahi raha tu??
Sahil: di wo phne silent pe hain aur i m writng diary….
Ani: oo diary..kiske baare mein???
Sahil: he strts tellng abt roll no : 11…ajj usne mujhe cute bolaa…n she won my heart di….
Om n ru laughsπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Ani: acchaa….phirse bolaa….n she smiles….
Ru: oo..i m far btr than him..hai naa?? Meri bachpan me aise stories hain nahi…
O: shut up rudra….ab kitne gfs hain tujhe…
Ru: strts counting…riya..tina…romi…
Om gives him a look….
Ani turns towards them n introduces sahil to omru
Sahil liked them a lott..especially om ….😍😍😍
They goes to oberoi mansion…..

Evryone meets sahil…..n jhanvi tells him tht he looks soooo cuteee……
Ru: maa mujse bhi jyadaa???
N evryone laughs….
Shivaay cumss…..om introduces him….
N sahil says sooo today onwards i have 3 more bhaiahs…n hugs shivaay….
A call cums to shivaay n he goes frm der….!!!!!

Precap: tias entry!!!!!

Ssooo frnds plz tell me d views abt d story plzzz….n dis is mainly abt shivika becoz i luv them a lottt….n next abt om…as a person i luv him a lottttt n lottt…..soon ishana n soumya ll enter…bt dey ll have less scenes than shivika….plzz let me know ur views…soo tht i cn continueeee….

25 comments

  1. Janvi

    I liked this part and keep going dear. And plz don’t make shitia too close. I prefer Shivika to be closer.
    Best wishes are always wid u.

  2. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Wow, tulasi, sorry for commenting late as I went to hospital for treatment. And coming to the epi,
    It was mind blowing Yar. And em cheppanu, sahil’s entry is nice and the diary is really funny.
    But please i want longer updates and please continue dear.
    Waiting for more shivika moments.
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  3. malu

    Nice epi dr.. Pls write in english dr.. I dont understand hindi bt feel to read ur ff.. Nd upload long story yar

  4. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Tulsi dear sorry for late comments actually I was sick and can’t even getup from bed .. I saw ur part clicked it but it was not loading fully now it opened.. So here comes my views..
    1. Super happy that our Sahil is fine in this..
    2. Suggestions show shivika cute fighting scenes..
    3. Rudy is jealous from Sahil due to his cuteness..
    4. Check ur pm…
    5.. Good work dear but needed improvement

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