Ishqbaaz- the night changed our lives [proologue]

Hey guys, I am new on IB page. I had a idea on my mind nd I wanted to share with u all. I hope u all like it.

So characters r same. If I add any new character, I will inform u later.

Promo:
Scene 1 [at a dark isolated place]
boy: hume ye karna parega. (we have to do this)
girl: par ap…(bt u…)
boy interrupts: hume ye karnahi parega, mai apni family k liye kuch v kar sakta hu. (we will have to do this, I can do anything fr my family.)
boy looks at girl, girl nods. Boy fills hr hairline with sindoor, girl closes hr eyes.
Scene 2 [aftr 2 mnths]
Her pov:
I donno if it ws a ri8 decision or nt, bt the ni8 changed our lives. We r happy, bt in a corner of my heart, I feel pain. Each day, each hour, each minute, Each second.! “I donno y, bt may b it is better to die!!!”

so is it? I hope it is fine. I knw it ws too short bt I cant add anything mre. Nd the POV, I wanted to ri8 it in Hindi, bt didnt understand what to wri8. So it is my 1st IB ff, in the show all 3 bros r main lead bt in my ff Shivika r the main lead, so I will wri8 mre fr Shivik, sry.
Suggetion needed, I cant strt this frm this mnth as my exms r going on. So shld I start it frm December or nxt yr? Pls cmnt, I need ur support. Shld I continue or stop? Pls cmnt, good or bad, both r accepted.
Bye bye, luv u all- Neeti

50 comments

  1. Tinni

    |Registered Member

    NICE CONCEPT…BUT I HAVE ONLY ONE REQUEST PLZ DONT USE SO MUCH SHORT TERMS…
    PLZ RIGHT UR FF SOON….AND DONT TAKE ME WRONG NEETI…

  2. Priyanka_22

    |Registered Member

    It was really nice n diff 😀
    But toooo short
    Make it lengthier n try to update soon
    I mean whenever you get time
    And m also obsessed wid shivika 😀

    • Neeti

      |Author

      Are kya bol rahe hai! Mai aur EDKV page ko chor du! Hoi nai sakta! Anika k bhasha me kahu to mujhe aisa sochne me hi michmichi hoti hai! Oto mujhe ek idea a gaya tha, isliye aha likh rahi hu, edkv pe pehlei meri ek ff, ek ts nd ek os pending hai aur udhar ek aur likhna thik nai hai, so maine socha aha likhu, kiuki mai IB fan v hu.
      Dekha di, koi pst nai kr raha, isiliye mai nai chahti thi edkv khatam ho, kiuki mujhe pata tha ahi hoga, I hate Sony fr this!
      Waise ap aha!!!??? Ap v IB fan ho? Aur apki beti kab hui:-P, mujhe bataya v nai!!!
      Nd thank u. Mai jald pst karne ki koshish karungi bt may b nt this mnth.
      Luv u, bye- Neeti

      • Rukhsar

        |Registered Member

        Oye neetu meri koi beti veti nahi ha ma to anika ka famous dialog bol rai thi and yeah me too ib fan but i never commented on this page i sent a private msg to a writer on this page but she did not replied me back so i got disappointed and then i decided to never comment again

    • Neeti

      |Author

      kya, di… apne par v liya??? itni jaldi, mujhe jaha tak pata hai kal mera ff 3rd page pe chala gaya tha, apko nam kaise malum para??? are jo v ho, thank u,… lekin mai makkhan nai khati, ghee chalega ;)….umeed hai ap bad me v paroge…

  3. Shivika22kapoor

    |Registered Member

    Hi ! Neeti I have finally read your ff and the prologue is amazing, keep going and sorry for such a late comment.
    Wishing you lots of love ❤ and luck dear .
    You are a beautiful writer.

    • Neeti

      |Author

      thank u, I have wrote the part 1 also, bt I got really less cmnts there so I am nt writing fr few days…. ur also a wonderful writer, di… btw what is ur real name??? thanks fr cmnting…. luv u- Neeti.

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