Hey guys, I am new on IB page. I had a idea on my mind nd I wanted to share with u all. I hope u all like it.
So characters r same. If I add any new character, I will inform u later.
Promo:
Scene 1 [at a dark isolated place]
boy: hume ye karna parega. (we have to do this)
girl: par ap…(bt u…)
boy interrupts: hume ye karnahi parega, mai apni family k liye kuch v kar sakta hu. (we will have to do this, I can do anything fr my family.)
boy looks at girl, girl nods. Boy fills hr hairline with sindoor, girl closes hr eyes.
Scene 2 [aftr 2 mnths]
Her pov:
I donno if it ws a ri8 decision or nt, bt the ni8 changed our lives. We r happy, bt in a corner of my heart, I feel pain. Each day, each hour, each minute, Each second.! “I donno y, bt may b it is better to die!!!”
so is it? I hope it is fine. I knw it ws too short bt I cant add anything mre. Nd the POV, I wanted to ri8 it in Hindi, bt didnt understand what to wri8. So it is my 1st IB ff, in the show all 3 bros r main lead bt in my ff Shivika r the main lead, so I will wri8 mre fr Shivik, sry.
Suggetion needed, I cant strt this frm this mnth as my exms r going on. So shld I start it frm December or nxt yr? Pls cmnt, I need ur support. Shld I continue or stop? Pls cmnt, good or bad, both r accepted.
Bye bye, luv u all- Neeti
50 Comments
It’s a unique concept neeti… update next one soonest
Thank u, Priyali di. I will pst wen I get time.
Sure dear. Do check out my ff as well . It’s ishqbaaz ff by Priyali.
I will surely check it, I am reading every ff of IB frm frst prt nw…
nice come back soon
thank u, i will cme back asap
Continue Dr it was. Nice
thank u, i will continue
NICE CONCEPT…BUT I HAVE ONLY ONE REQUEST PLZ DONT USE SO MUCH SHORT TERMS…
PLZ RIGHT UR FF SOON….AND DONT TAKE ME WRONG NEETI…
thank u, nd am i so bad that i will take my sister wrng… i will post asap
Lovely..dear neeti…strt frm dec..dear
thank u, nd if i get time i will pst it this mnth only…
Interesting but start it soon
thank u, i will strt wen i get time… pakka
Nice. Please upload next part asap.
thank u, i will post nxt prt asap
Nice… Even I liked EDKV… Plz start this ff asap
thank u, i will strt it asap
It was really nice n diff 😀
But toooo short
Make it lengthier n try to update soon
I mean whenever you get time
And m also obsessed wid shivika 😀
thank u
it ws just a prologue na, i cant reveal more so it was short
i am tooooo much obsessed with Shivika 😛
surely update wen i get time…
hi5 😀 .. n am waiting fo it
Superb awesome next episode must be update asap luv uuuuu
thank u, will try to pst soon… luv u too
nice dear plz upload fast
thank u, will try to update fast
Nice one neeti..ypdate soon..
thank u, will post asap
Are you in medical college?
no no, i am too small…
Ya off course
thank u
It’s great and a new concept please continue
thank u, nd i will continue
Hey neethi…awwsumm prologue…luvd it….continue it aftr ur exams
thank u, Tulasi di. I will pst asap
Nice… You can start whenever you are free
Thank u, Vincy di. I will surely pst wen I am free.
O bety ki…..neeti tu yahan kya kar rahi ha edkv ka page chor diya kya…….wahan koi post hi nahi
Are kya bol rahe hai! Mai aur EDKV page ko chor du! Hoi nai sakta! Anika k bhasha me kahu to mujhe aisa sochne me hi michmichi hoti hai! Oto mujhe ek idea a gaya tha, isliye aha likh rahi hu, edkv pe pehlei meri ek ff, ek ts nd ek os pending hai aur udhar ek aur likhna thik nai hai, so maine socha aha likhu, kiuki mai IB fan v hu.
Dekha di, koi pst nai kr raha, isiliye mai nai chahti thi edkv khatam ho, kiuki mujhe pata tha ahi hoga, I hate Sony fr this!
Waise ap aha!!!??? Ap v IB fan ho? Aur apki beti kab hui:-P, mujhe bataya v nai!!!
Nd thank u. Mai jald pst karne ki koshish karungi bt may b nt this mnth.
Luv u, bye- Neeti
Oye neetu meri koi beti veti nahi ha ma to anika ka famous dialog bol rai thi and yeah me too ib fan but i never commented on this page i sent a private msg to a writer on this page but she did not replied me back so i got disappointed and then i decided to never comment again
Waise ff is really amazing start soon dear
Nice plz continue
thank u, I will continue
nice…
thank u…
Oye oye Neetu tu to kamal ki likhti he !! Sounds really interesting !!!
kya, di… apne par v liya??? itni jaldi, mujhe jaha tak pata hai kal mera ff 3rd page pe chala gaya tha, apko nam kaise malum para??? are jo v ho, thank u,… lekin mai makkhan nai khati, ghee chalega ;)….umeed hai ap bad me v paroge…
Hi neeti di finally I read your ff the prologue seems to be really interesting. Please keep writing.
Wishing you lots of luck and love for this ff
Hi ! Neeti I have finally read your ff and the prologue is amazing, keep going and sorry for such a late comment.
Wishing you lots of love ❤ and luck dear .
You are a beautiful writer.
thank u, I have wrote the part 1 also, bt I got really less cmnts there so I am nt writing fr few days…. ur also a wonderful writer, di… btw what is ur real name??? thanks fr cmnting…. luv u- Neeti.