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Home»Fan Fiction»Ishqbaaz- the night changed our lives [Part 4]
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Ishqbaaz- the night changed our lives [Part 4]

NeetiBy NeetiNovember 26, 201633 Comments10 Mins Read
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hey, I am back to bore you all….. Today the part is dedicated to Shivika fans, so njy. Sorry again Ishkara and Rumya fans but pakka nxt1 will be Rumya nd Ishkara scenes.

Part 4
Scene 1 (Outside the mall)

Shivaay: What is pipuri!!!???
Annika: arey wo barbar bina waja ek hi bat kehte rehte haina gaane ki tarha, use pipuri kehte hai. (repeating time and again without any reason is called pipuri)
Shiv: oh, u mean chanting…..
Ani: haayyyhhh….!!! aha chant aur badmas kahase a gya???! (from where did clever and bad came frm???) [actually chant in Hindi means clever])
Shiv: whattttt!!!!!!!!????

Ani: arey wo……. (actually that…….)
Shiv: “cuts her in between” ok…ok…just stop it!!!! mujhe aur kisi chezz ka matlb nhi janna… (I don’t wanna know anymore meanings)
Ani: thik hai, chaliye andar….. (ok, let’s go inside)
they went inside….

Scene 2 (Inside mall in a shop)

Ani: bhaiya, wo wala dikhaiye na…
(Mr., show that one na)
Shopkeeper (Sk) shows her 1
Ani: bhaiya, ye wala nhi, wo wala dikhaiye,
(not this one, Mr, show that one) “she points towards a dress”
Shopkeeper shows the dress…..
Ani: ha ye wala….. (yes this one…..) “she turns” Billuji ye dekhiye na kaisi hai???
(Billuji, see this na, how is it?)
Shivaay was busy with phone. Shivaay gets embarrassed as she called him Billuji infront of all…..
Shiv: Annika, mera nam Shivaay hai….. (Annika, my name is Shivaay)
Ani: to maine kab mana kiya? ap ye sab choriye, ye bataiye ki ye dress kaisi hai? mjhe try krni padegi, kiuki Tia ne mjhe bola try krne….. (so, when did I refuse? you forget that na, tell me that how is this dress? I have to try, bcz Tia asked me to try)
Shivaay without looking: nice, just make it fast…..
Ani: accha to mai ye dress try krke ati hu (ok, then I am going to try this dress) “turns” bhaiya trial room kha hai??? (Mr, where is the trial room?)
Sk: that side mam “he points towards trial room”
Ani: ok, thank u…..
Annika went to trial room, some boys watch her going there and heads towards trial room. Shivaay notice this and follows them…. as the boys were about to enter trial room, Shivaay stops them

Shiv: tum kha jrehe ho?? (where are you going??)
1 boy: kiu tujhe usse kya??? (why what do you have to do with that???)
Shiv: tum is ladies trial room mai kiu ja rhe ho??? (why are you going to ladies trial room???)
anthr boy: kn hai be to hero? (who are you hero?)
boy3: lagta hai girlfriend hai iski… kya hero kaise pataye is pataka ko??? (looks like she is his gf… how did you impress her hero???)
boy1: ek din k liye hume vi pataka ko rakkhne de….. (let us to keep her along for one day)
the boys laugh, it was enough for Shivaay, he was burning in anger and boom!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shivaay punched one of them, the boy started bleeding. other boys got in to fight with Shivaay. Shivaay hits them hard, security guards come……..
security: sir rukiye….rukiye hum inhe police ke pas le ja rahe hai…… (sir stop….stop we are taking them to police)

Shiv: ye apki security hai, aha sare am aise besharam ladke ghum rahe hai aur ap log tamasha dekh rahe hai!!!!!!!! (this is your security, shameless boys are roaming around here and you are enjoying the scene)
Sk comes: sorry sir, we are very very sorry…… hum age se khayal rakhenge (we will be careful from next time)
Shiv: just take them out of my sight!!!!!!
guards take the boys…… Shivaay does his signature step….. the trial room’s door was nearly opened, Shivaay saw this, and also he could see Annika struggling with the back lace of the dress

Shiv: oh God!!… is ladki ne darwaza vi band nhi kiya!!! aur ye kya kar rahi hai…… (this girl haven’t even locked the door!!! and what is she doing)
Shivaay knocks the door….. Annika looked at the door
Ani: phail gaya raita!!!…… kaun hai???! {don’t know what’s “phail gaya raita”} (who is there???!)
Shiv: Annika, it’s me…..
Ani: Billuji ap!!…. ( billuji you!!)
Shiv: ha mai, tumne door lock kiu nhi kiya….. (yes me, why didn’t you lock the door)
Ani: “in mind” what to do??…now what should I say to him, Oh God! how can I be so careless!!!
now as Annika was not replying, Shivaay got in (yaar, kitna battamiz hai ye Shivaay???)…

Scene 3 (inside t.r.)
{1min, I am closing my eyes?, I think mai ye dekhne ke liye bohot choti hu??????}
Annika sees him with shock….. She tries to hide her back….
Ani: Billu ji ap andar kiu a gaye!!! (Mr.cat?????????????????? why did you came inside)
Shiv: tum jawab nhi de rhi thi, isliye mai andar agaye (you didn’t reply so I came in) “he sees her hiding her back”
Shiv first closed the door and turned her around, Ani got double shock…..
Ani: Billuji ye ap kya kar rahe hai!!!???? (What are you doing, Mr.cat??????????!!!???)
Shiv without saying anything tied her back lace of the dress….. Ani feels his touch, Shiv too got lost….. after some time he got in senses… he went out (note: no1 noticed him going in or coming from trial room……)
Ani was a little embarrassed but also a lil happy inside…..she went out t.r.
Shiv: kya tumhe kisisne shikhaya nhi ki t.r. ka door lock karna chahiye, wo ladke tumhe kaise dekh rahe the!!!!!! (didn’t anyone teach you that one shld lock the door of t.r., u know how the boys were staring you!!!!!!)

Ani was shocked hearing this: kaunse ladke….!!!!!!!!!! (which boys….!!!!!!!!!!)
Shiv narrates the whole incident….
Ani gets more embarrassed and shocked….. Shiv keeps lecturing and suddenly Ani hugged him, yes she hugged him and starts crying….. Shiv hugs her back consoling her
Shiv: shhh, shhhh…. Annila, wo log chale gaye, unhe police ke pas le gye security guards…. (they went, security guards took them to police)
he tried consoling her but she kept crying….. this time it was noticed by everyone present there, Shiv saw this….
Shiv: “in very low voice” Annika hume sab log dekh rahe hai…. (every1 is watching us)
Ani leaves him, Shiv too leaves her. they feel embarrassed (aj to kuch jyadahi embarrassing part hai???)

Ani: bhaiya, ye dress pack kar dijiye (mr, pack this dress) {don’t get confused, she already changed the dress, she was struggling with her own dress}
Sk: ok mam…

Scene 4 (another shop)
Ani kept rejecting things, this irritated Shiv
Shiv: Annika, jovi lena hai jaldi lo!!!!! isiliye maine kaha tha ki hum engagement ke kapre vi designer k passe lete hai, but tumne aur Dadi ne milke mujhe phasa diya! (buy the one quickly which you want!!!!! that’s why I said to buy clothes of engagement also from designer, but you and Dadi trapped me here!)
listening to the word engagement, sk thought them to be couple.
Sk: sir, madam ko kharidne dijiye na jo kharidna hai, avi adat dal lijiye, badme apki sari shopping to madam hi karegi na…. (sir, let madam buy what she wants, make it habit now, madam only will shop your things later)
Shiv: what!…. ye kiu meri shopping karegi!!! (why will she shop my things!!!)
Ani: ap ye sab choriye na Billuji, bhaiya, ap dusra kuch aur dikhaiye…. (forget all this na, Mr.cat???, mr, you show something else)

sk: ji, mam (ok, mam)
Shiv was now angry and embarrassed…
Shiv: Annika, mera nam Shivaay hai!!! (my name is Shivaay!!!)
Ani: ha mujhe pata hai billuji. (yes, I know that, Mr.cat???)
Shiv: just stop!!!!! don’t call me that, ok!!!???
Ani: kiu kya hua Billuji??? (why what happened, Mr.cat???)
Shiv: Pannika, stop calling me Billu!!!
now Ani was angry…
Ani: o, hello! mera nam Annika hai, Mr. Baghad Billa! (my name is Annika, Mr.Arrogant cat?)
Shiv: what!!!!…. you Pannika!!!
Ani: kya what what lagake rakkha hai SSO!!! aur mera nam thik se boliye warna Dadi ko bata dungi,mai bata rahi hu apko! (why are you repeating what what SSO!!! and take my name properly, else I will complain to Dadi, I am telling you!)
Shiv: wo, to tum ab mujhe merehi Dadi ka nam leke daraogi! (so, now you will scare me by taking my grandma’s name!)
sk: wah, kya jodi hai! Shaadi k pehlei aisa khatta mitha pyara pyara jhagra! (wow, what a couple! sweet+sour and lovely lovely fights before marriage)
Shiv and Ani hear this….
Ani: bhaiya… ye… ye mere pati nahi hai (mr…he… he is not my husband)
Sk: wohi to hone wale pati, shaadi se pehlei kitna pyar hai, pyar se kitne sare pyare pyare nam vi de diya….. (yes, I am also saying that he is your to-be-husband, you have so much love before marriage, you have gave such sweet sweet names with love)
Shiv: excuse me, Mr… ye…ye meri wedding planner hai…..! (she… she is my wedding planner…..!)
sk gets shocked: o…o… sorry sir….””’
Shiv: it’s ok, Annika chalo waha se (Annika let’s go from here)
Ani: par…. par.. Sh
Shiv drags her from there, without listening whwt she was about to say

Scene 5 (Outside Mall)
Ani: Shivaay, ap mujhe aise khich k kiu laye (Shivaay, why did you dragged me from there)
This time also he couldn’t hear her, bcz he already sat in the car. Ani also sat inside.
Ani: ap woha se chale kiu aye, avi vi bohot kuch kharidna baki hai (why did you came from there, there is still a lot of things remaining to buy)
Shiv: tumne already bohot shopping karli, jabse ayi ho, at least 6-7 shop ghum kar 9 chize kharidi hai, pure 5 ghante 8min mai….(you have already shopped a lot, you have visited at least 6-7 shops and bought 9things in full 5hours and 8min)
Ani: arey, wah! apne min vi gin li! (wow! you have counted even mins!)
Shiv: Annika ab chup chap baitho, aur mujhe driving karne do! (Annika now sit quietly, and let me drive!)
Ani gets quiet.

Scene 6 (OM)
Ani and Shiv was coming from main gate. suddenly Ani was about to fall but u all know our hero will not let her. Shiv holds her, they share a cute eyelock, they were lost in each other
Phir kabhi plays…..

ye lamha to thehra hai
mera hai ye tera hai
ye lamha mai jilu jara

Shiv starts going close to her

Tujhme khoya rahoon mai
Mujhme khoyi rahe to
Khudko dhund lenge phir kavi…

he got more close

Tujhse milta rahoon mai
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khudse hum milenge Phir kavi…
ha phir kabhi…

Servant comes with shopping bags… they realise their position, and come back to normal position… they feel awkward
Ani: sorry
their instrumental music plays (not O jaana but their instrumental one)…
Shiv: no… it’s… it’s ok
Ani went from there…..
Screen splits on their awkward type face….

Precap:Rumya and Ishkara moments (sorry again the same precap)

bye bye, luv you all- Neeti / Leeti (late+Neeti) / {Sadti (sad+Neeti)/ Angti (angry+Neeti) bcz of low response}

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Neeti

    proud Dil bole oberoi nd Ishqbaaz lover. biggest drama queen ?. my wall=latest DBO nd IB updates nd edits. #ShivIka<3 #GauriKa<3 #RuMya <3 #PriVeer <3

    33 Comments

    1. anujohnson on November 26, 2016 10:05 pm

      Hey neeti…I am gonna call you neeto…and ya neeto this was such an awesome episode…i was laughing all time while reading this…good one…..and ya pls do update soon!!!

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:06 pm

        ok, no prob, u can call me anything, btw people also call me Neetu, Nets, Jaan, Princess and more even Neeto, so anything is accepted by me. thank u, even I thought it to be funny but donno why I didn’t laugh ???……. I will update it today only, just need to proofread it….. Luv u, bye- Neeti

    2. Jayashree on November 26, 2016 10:18 pm

      shivika part was osum 🙂

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:07 pm

        thank u and it was especially for Shivika fans…- Neeti

    3. priyanka_22 on November 26, 2016 10:18 pm

      Awsum neeti
      Loved shivika moments
      Update soon

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:08 pm

        thank u… I especially wrote it for Shivika fans, keep reading- Neeti

    4. shivika on November 26, 2016 10:20 pm

      It was amazing i liked it a lot….lots of embarrassing momenys today…???

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:09 pm

        thank u, and yeah it was very embarrassing ???- Neeti

    5. Mukta on November 26, 2016 10:26 pm

      So awesome update Neeti???? u know what the way u portray Shivika nok jhok is beyond amazing?? seriously lovely episode????????

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:11 pm

        thank u di??? I really donno why but I didn’t laugh while reading it, may be because maine likha???….. thank u again… luv u- Neeti/Neeto/Neetu

      • Mukta on November 27, 2016 4:34 pm

        Ya right only becoz u wrote it wrna it’s just flawless????

    6. Jazz1 on November 27, 2016 1:15 am

      Awesome. Loved shivika scenes ?????

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:12 pm

        thank u and it was for Shivika fans?- Neeti

    7. Sat_9492 on November 27, 2016 1:45 am

      Awsm episode…..

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:12 pm

        thank u- Neeti

    8. Liara on November 27, 2016 1:49 am

      Awesome episode ??

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:13 pm

        thank u???- Neeti

    9. anjaly on November 27, 2016 6:58 am

      amazing episode

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:14 pm

        thank u???- Neeti

    10. Adhya on November 27, 2016 7:02 am

      Very Nice…. dear plz upload next part soon…

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:15 pm

        thank u and yeah I will upload it in sometime after proofreading -Neeti

    11. Dini on November 27, 2016 8:18 am

      WOW I LOVED SHIVIKA PART. THE WAY FIGHT IS LOVELY.

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:16 pm

        thank u, it is dedicated to Shivika fans only- Neeti

    12. Niriha on November 27, 2016 8:49 am

      Awesome shivika scene

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 3:17 pm

        thank u???- Neeti

    13. shivika22kapoor on November 27, 2016 3:22 pm

      Hi ? Neeti finally you are back dear and you are and trust me dear you are back with a bang. Today’s epi was mind-blowing you nailed it completely. I was laughing ? badly in the entire episode, it was too hilarious and amazing.
      Now pls don’t go on any long holiday again and try updating next part asap.
      ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 4:23 pm

        hey, I would have uploaded it till the time but the one ane only irritating problem is “battery low”, so it took long to charge but I will post it today only as it is ready, just need to proofread it…. my xms were going na, so I was late…. thank u, luv u, bye u, oh! I mean bye!!- Neeti

    14. anah on November 27, 2016 3:42 pm

      nice one dr……
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/back-zid-epi-13/

      • Neeti on November 27, 2016 4:19 pm

        thank u, and yeah I read it but I am a silent reader of every ff- Neeti

    15. prettypreeti on December 1, 2016 7:35 pm

      Neeto I read ur parts awesome too good as always loved it fab.me ur preeti do toooo goods.
      Well done.
      Keep it up

      • Neeti on December 10, 2016 2:24 pm

        thank u di….. I am really happy to see ur cmnt here. keep cmntng, luv U- Neeti

    16. Mrunal on December 8, 2016 10:39 am

      awesome one
      loved their fight….??

      • Neeti on December 10, 2016 2:25 pm

        thank u…… I am happy that you like it….- Neeti

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