Ishqbaaz- the night changed our lives [Part 12]

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Hmm… I asked in activity area if I should continue my ff or not, no response, so obviously not, so consider this as the last epi of my ff… enjoy your reading…

[Dedicated to “Surbhi Sharma” di and ” “Sara” di, read the note at last]

Scene 1 (Shivaay’s bedroom)

She: Shivaay, when you don’t love me, why do you pretend to love me?
Shivaay: look jaan, I don’t wanna argue today, I am very happy so please stop this.
She: please stop calling me jaan, there’s no one in the room so you don’t have to act here. My name is Annika and you can call me that.

[I know sab bade intelligent hai pehle se hi jante the??]

Shivaay: Annika, don’t raise your voice! I’m in good mood that’s why I’m talking sweetly, don’t force me to be harsh.
Ani: I know and that’s what I’m saying, you don’t need to be sweet to me. We both know that there’s nothing like husband and wife between us, so stop it “almost crying”

Shivaay melts a bit seeing tears in her eyes. Tears escape from her eyes. Shiv cups her face with his palms. He makes her look into his eyes.

Shiv: jaan, I don’t like tears in your eyes. I know you will never be able to accept me as you husband after what I did to you and you also know very well that I won’t be able to accept you as my wife. We are happily married couple just in front of the world, we have to pretend. But still I will try to keep you happy. Please don’t cry.

He wipes her tears.

Shiv: get ready tonight at 8pm, I have another business dinner, they want to meet you.

He goes from there.

Annika cries sitting on bed. (if you remember the prologue of this ff, this is the same scene)

Annika’ POV:
Why Shivaay, why? When you can’t accept me as your wife then why do you care for me? Why you always act so sweet to me? I can’t bear this pain. I donno if it was a right decision or not, but the night changed our lives. We are happy in front of the world, but in a corner of my heart, I feel pain. Each day, each hour, each minute, Each second.! “I donno why, but maybe it is better to die!!!”

POV ends.

Annika gets up from bed and goes to have bath. She didn’t have her breakfast because it was almost noon now.

Scene 2 (kitchen)
She wanted to make something especial for the family today {mai agayi na isiliye??} so she came to the kitchen. Rudy came there.

Rudy: “in his usual funny tone” bhabi,.. bhabi what are you doing???
Ani: oh Rudra, I just wanted to make something especial for you all today.
Rudra: why today bhabi?
Ani: I haven’t made anything from so many days to I wanted to make something today.
{Ha maine usse ane kaha diya????}

Rudy: so what are you making bhabi?
Ani: baked pasta for you, Aloo puri for him (unke liye), for Om pizza and for others I haven’t decide.
Rudy: wah bhabi! Apke “unke” liye especial aloo puri, hah? *teasingly*
Ani: nothing like that Rudra, I don’t know his choice, na. “sad smile”

Rudra understands that his bhabi was sad so he tried to divert the topic

Rudy: even I couldn’t understand his choice till now, pata nahi kya kya khate peete rehte hai, saira bano/ meri mano (Americano???), very very meet the ball which is spicy (he meant peri peri meatball with spaghetti???) aur bhi ajeeb ajeeb cheez

To this Annika laughs.

Rudy: bhabi always keep laughing like this and be happy. I love you bhabi. “He side hugs her”
Ani: I love you too. Now go to Saumya, she was looking for you.
Rudy: hein?? OMG! I totally forgot, we were suppose to go to lunch date! Sorry bhabi, don’t make my baked pasta now. Make it at night for my dinner. Now I am going. If I get late Sumo will kill me. Bye bhabi, love you, tata.

He runs from there

Ani: sambhal ke. Yeh Rudra bhi na… (Carefully! This Rudy na…)

Scene 3 (O.M garden)

Om: look Ridhima I already told you I’m not gonna change theme of my bedroom’s wall so don’t ask me to change it again and again.
Rid: Om do at least this for me. You are not telling your family about our relation, I’m not forcing you to do but please change the theme.
Om: Ridhima, don’t argue with me. I am not gonna change it. Please change the topic.
Rid: ok then, come with me for a dinner date today, please please please please!

Om smiles.

Om: ok. Anything for you.
Rid: yeah and that’s why you are not changing the theme of the walls. “Ha-dekh-hi-rahi-hu look”
Om: let’s not spoil our mood. I have to go to my gallery now. Bye.
Rid: even I’m going to hospital. Bye. Tata, love you.
Om: love you too. “Kisses her on cheek”
They both leave.

Scene 4 (some restaurant)
{Let’s keep the restaurant’s name as, “kha kha ke mote ho gaye restaurant”?????? sorry sorry, you all read}

Rudy and Somu are sitting and chatting.

Rudy: Sumoooooo “he calls her”
Somu: what?
Rudy: sorryyy
Somu: Rudy please, I won’t accept you apology this time, you always get late.
Rudy: Sumo please yarr, I was talking to bhabi so I forgot about our date.
Sumo: oh so now you are blaming bhabi?
Rudy: oh hello! I am not blaming bhabi, she is my pyaara pyaara sweet sweet bhabi after all. It was just that she was sad so I was talking to her.
Somu: yeah Rudy, bhabi is upset from the day of her marriage. Donno why? I really feel sad seeing her like this.
Rudy: me too. We even tried to get bhaiya-bhabi close but they scolded us saying what stupidity we are doing.
Sumo: hmm… let’s order something.
Rudy: you say what you wanna eat?
Sumo: umm.. I donno.
Rudy: ok let’s check menu….

They order food and eat it. After eating they go to many places. Finally they go back to home at evening.

Scene 5 (Shivika’s bedroom)
Annika is crying sitting on floor.

Fb:
Shivaay was working on laptop on couch. Annika comes with food.

Ani: Shivaay, I made aloo puri for you.

Shivaay looks at her.

Shiv: why did you make food, Annika? And that too aloo puri? You know I don’t like all this, right? Who told you you to make food?

Anger was clear in his voice and eyes. Annika got scared.

Ani: Shi… Shi.. Shivaay I just wanted to make something especial for you. I didn’t know what you would like to have so I made aloo puri.
Shiv: “shouting” did I ask you to make? And what especial? You don’t have to make anything for me, you… you just… forget it! I’m going. I will have food outside.

He went from there. Food tray fell from Annika’s hand. She sat on floor and started crying. She was crying from noon to evening, cursing her fate, remembering how she had to suffer after her marriage. She was not that khidkitod Annika anymore, she was broken. Tej’s taunt, Shivaay’s anger and Pinky’s hatred all this effected her. She was not much effected by Tej or Pinky, she was effected by Shivaay. She was confused what Shivaay felt for her. Sometimes Shivaay was like a psycho lover. First he hurt her then take care of her. He was really unpredictable, when he was angry and when happy, no one could say. He was changed again.

Screen freezes on Annika’s face.

P.S: don’t curse Shivaay, you don’t know his POV till now so without knowing don’t say anything about him.

THIS ONE IS DEDICATED SILENT READER OF MY FF “Surbhi Sharma” DI AND “Sara” DI. THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVE. LOVE YOU. BUT I CAN’T WRITE FURTHER, SORRY. I DIDN’T GET ENOUGH COMMENT AND NO ONE INTERESTED IN MY FF. THANKS AGAIN.

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69 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Amazingggggg I just read this episode of this series…could u plz pm me the links for the previous

    Would be really grateful if you could continue

    1. Trolls.Nets

      I am really happy you liked it but you know na that I can’t continue it with less comments. I will surely send you the links, thank you so much. Love you- Neeti

  2. I’m interested in your ff and will read from start ???

  3. Kanfi

    Hey neeti,,..
    How can u forget me,,,”!!
    I wss waiting for ur ff since long,,,,
    It ws amazinghhhg,,,,,
    I loved it,…..!!!
    U have to post nexf part””understoood?????
    I m telling u i’lll be waiting,,.,,
    Posttt soooonnnn

    Loveeee uuuuuu
    Gd night

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Sorry, I forgot..
      Anyways thank you
      But but but I can’t continue, neither I got response on activity area nor a really good response in ff, it hurts, u must know that, after all you are also a writer of a ff, right? How would you feel after getting no response?
      So thank you soooooo much but sorry, kan pakad ke? (emoji galat hai pheelingz sahi hai???)
      Love you too and good morning????- Neeti

      1. Kanfi

        Maine activity page p post ni dkga wrna zrur commmnt krti,…
        Ssseee,,kitne logo ko psnd arha h….
        Atleast give it a good end,no,.!!
        Soo i ‘ll wait…..
        Postttt next partttt,,,…..

        Or mera ff q ni prh rhi,,,.
        Gd morning

    2. Trolls.Nets

      Ek min, pehle toh apne pehle jo commet kiya tha ussi pe reply karti jao, dono ko notification milega. Nd next, apka toh waise bhi pata tha, no one “else” is interested. If it is called a “good” response then “bad” response kya hai? Apka ff padha, lkn silent reader u knw? mai bhed bhao nahi karti, apje pe cmnt karungi aur bakiyo k nahi, yeh toh ohi bat ho gayi jaise mai sirf dulhan ki behen banke baithi hu, dulhe ki sali nahi? (bad joke?????)
      Good morning again. Love u- Neeti

      1. Kanfi

        Okkk….m happy tm prhi rhi ho,…..!!!!
        Bt still i want u to give a good end rather than wrapping up like this…!!
        Gd afternoon…..!!

  4. In ur next ff please mention the link of previous episodes….looks intresting..!!!

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Umm… sorry no ff now. I’m stopping writing on TU bcz of low response. http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Ishqbaaz-+the+night+changed+our+lives here’s the link, if you want to read this ff. Thank you. Love ya- Neeti

  5. Surbhi Sharma

    Aree , now you are making me cry like anika . Huhh . This is not fairrrrrrrr.
    U mean to say this is last epi . I won’t leave you . Plzzzzz , meri behna continue na .
    And who told u no one is intrested in ur ff ?? It’s not like that .
    Plzzzzz , don’t stop . A big request.(puppy eyes) .
    This part was as usual amazing . Loved it .
    But plzz , do continue na . Pleeeeeeejj .
    Love u ???

    P.s , neeti , plz don’t call me di . U are 13 na . Toh mai konsa 100 sa ki budhiya hu . ? . I mean mai bhi just 14 ki hi hu . So , no di vi ha .

    Once again , plzz di continue . ????

    From your biggest fan ,
    Surbhi .??

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Ok di, I won’t call you di, I know di is for 10 years old kids, di is not for me, you don’t like di so I won’t call you di, ok na di????

      and you are not understanding my feeling, how would you feel when your ff is “ignored” or “not liked by most of the readers” obviously not good. Even I don’t feel good. It hurts, no one will understand it. I am really very sorry but I can’t.

      Thank you, thank you, thank you sooooo much but sorry. And stop calling me di, okay di???

      Love you too- Neeti

      1. Surbhi Sharma

        Arey !! Now only you called me 9 times di and telling you won’t call me di ha .behen I am just 1 year older than u na . So no di .
        And once look at ur comments . See , how many comments . Now too , u won’t continue. I know when u don’t get much comments we feel bad . But we are here for showing our talent . I mean , just look . How good u write. U are really a good writer . U should continue . Plzzzzz no , no plz . I am not telling you but ordering you . U should continue . Varna , varna ….. Ya I will call u neeti di . Sachii .
        Post soon .??

    2. Trolls.Nets

      Nahi ap meri di ho! Mujhme michmichi mat machao! Aur ff ka sochungi. I will try. Thank u. Love you???

      1. Surbhi Sharma

        Hey bhagwaan !! Iska kuch karo . Itne sare comments milne ke baad bhi , mai sochungi Haa . Matlab agar mai tumhara jagah hoti na , toh mai toh cloud 9 me hoti . Itne comments ke baad . Aur abhi bhi ye sochengi. Dekho , kya din aa gye hai . Ab di , bola hai (mujhe michmichi ho rhi hai) . Haa di bola hai toh, meri baat sun padega . Ab toh likha hi padega Haa .
        Love u too . ???

  6. Hey i am interested pls continue so awwwsome ff i love it very much pls write the next one pls

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thank you. But sorry, not continuing, please try to understand my feelings. Thank you again. Love ya- Neeti

  7. Akshaya_13

    Arrey kis. Ne kaha aapse ki none’s intrested ? I’m very much intrested plzzzzzz continue naa….

  8. Akshaya_13

    Arrey kis. Ne kaha aapse ki none’s intrested ? I’m very much intrested plzzzzzz continue naa dii…..

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thank you but I got really response so not continuing. Sorry. Thanks again. And don’t call me di, I am just 13? itni choti bacchi ko di kahenge toh paap lagega, paap????
      Lots of love- Neeti

      1. Akshaya_13

        really?! u too are of 13?!! me too!! toh iss baat pe toh ff continue kar yaar…waise by reading ur comments i feel tum bohoooott mazedaaar ho…friends?! reply soon…(and TU me mere koi friends nahi hai..cz pata hi nahi chalta kaun bhaiyya hai, kaun didi hai ya who’s from my age grp..pehli baar i found someone of 13!!)aur itnaaa respect nahi chahiye..tum khud rakh lo..(for kahenge)

    2. Trolls.Nets

      Poor response*

    3. Trolls.Nets

      Obviously friends, hum toh pehle se hi frnds the, haina???? accha toh mai tu bui nahi bol sakti nahi tum, mujhe michmichi macchti hai, I can say tu sometimes but jyada tar ap warna michmichiI ke marre marr na jayu?????? ok I will think abt continuing. Thanks. Love u- Neeti

  9. Hey pls continue your ff,its really interesting.

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thank you. I will try. Love ya- Neeti

  10. Di, your writing is awesome. Please don’t stop it.

    1. Trolls.Nets

      No di! I am not di, I am 13 years old kid! And thank you. I will try. Lots of love- Neeti

  11. Jaya Darshini

    OMG I just chanced upon this ff. Where have you been all along. I sat down and read from first chapter to this one now. It’s too good. I really really loved it. Please please please continue. Please don’t stop. You have got some really good die hard fans and we truly appreciate your work. O really hope you continue this. This ff has got good scope to develop. Please continue.

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thank you. I know I have genuine readers also that’s why I continued till now. I will try to continue it. Thanks again. Lots of live- Neeti

  12. Haridhra

    Hey it’s awsm dr… Don’t feel bad becoz if writing is ur passion then don’t except comments one day or the other u will be recognized by ur work not by the no.of comments n Neeti I have just read now it’s simply superb u have portrayed the characters well so plz continue 4 the sake of the regular readers .. I hope u will post the next part soon n that u will accept me also as ur frnd..☺ All the best my dr ???

    1. Haridhra

      expect*

    2. Trolls.Nets

      Thanks a lot. I continued it till now because of everyone’s support only. It was really heartbreaking when I didn’t get good no. of cmnt. Thanks for the encouragement. I will try to continue. And obviously I am ur frnds, right???? love ya- Neeti

      1. Haridhra

        N that’s like a gud gal dr … I will be waiting to see ur ff soon n main thing post it only when u feel to do so k..

        Love you too – Hari ?

  13. Hey! I have been a regular reader of ur ff nd I was so glad seeing ur update nd now you are telling that you cant write more…Plzzz dont stop this ff dear, you are an amazing writer so, dont end it abruptly…Will be waiting for ur nxt update…

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Hi Bhavana di. I remember you. I will try to continue. Thank you. Love you- Neeti

      1. Nooo, dont call me di. I’m just 14..
        Post asap!! Waiting for it.. 🙂 🙂 🙂

  14. Anagha

    Hey…don’t end it dear..even I don’t get much comments but that doesn’t mean I should stop ..neither should you. Continue posting your creativity dear…please….consider it as a request. Just bash your hands over those who didn’t gave u your importance.dont stop.. complete your passion . Will be waiting for your ff. Iam new to tell update and Iv read this part of urs…and it’s awsum pls continue

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thank you. I really don’t read ffs, only because of the thing that I can’t comment. I would have surely commented on your ff if I had read but there are many who doesn’t comment even after reading. I really used to feel bad that I enjoy other’s ff but can’t comment. Thanks for your support. I will try. Love you- Neeti

  15. Hey!!! It’s an Amazinggg ff dear… Pls don’t end it…. I’m regular reader of ur ff…. Pls cont. Waiting 4 nxt…

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thanks. I will try to continue. Lots of love- Neeti

  16. Hey!!!!!!! It’s an Amazingggg ff dear… don’t end it…. I’m regular reader of ur ff it’s Superbb dear….pls cont.

  17. Alekhika20

    Nice update

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thanks. Lots of love- Neeti

  18. Hye di.. I ‘m one of d silent readers of ur ff… n i really luv ur story.. please don’t stop it…. pls pls pls..n today’s post was really nyc..
    But feeling really bad for ani…
    Please post d next epi soon…??

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Di!????????? kis kis ko samjahyu that u I am just a 13 years old kid! Anyways thanks for commenting. Even I feel sad for Ani??? I will continue because I am really with the response. Thanks. will try to post soon. Love ya- Neeti

      1. O dat means we r of same age group.. and thanku so so much 4 continuying.. post soon

  19. Arthi

    Hi dear….. Am sry I didn’t read ur ff and today oly I read ur ff and ll the previous parts……..and it was nice dr… . Jus do post it dr….may be all were busy so do post dr….

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Hey di, don’t be sorry. It’s ok. Thank you. I will continue. Love ya- Neeti

  20. Amazing update… n plz continue ur ff…

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thanks a lot. I will continue. lots of love- Neeti

  21. It really hurt to see you stopping uour ff please continue writting for us who didnot know that you asked for our opinions.

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thanks a lot. I will continue it. Love ya- Neeti

  22. Awesome update. Plz….Plz….Plz…. Don’t stop this. Now I became a fan of yours. Waiting 4 d next update. Really like it yaar.

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thanks. And I will continue. Don’t say fan, u r my sis. Love ya- Neeti

  23. hi di aap kaise ho

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Hi buddhi behna!??? ap mujhse lakho saal bade hoke bhi mujhe di bulayo, accha toh nahi lagta na buddhi behna. Mai thik hu budhiya behen???? ap kaisi ho? Tabiyat toh thik hai na??

      1. budiya hogi tu

    2. Trolls.Nets

      Arre nahi nahi apka khitab ap rakkhe, hum uske layak kaha????

  24. Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz………continue I just read all your episodes it’s superb….and will u be my frnd I’m also 13…….

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thanks. I will continue it. I am already ur frnd??? love you- Neeti

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thank you. Lots of love- Neeti

  25. plz continue ur ff and don’t bother about comments if u get less comments also don’t get disappoint. writing is passion so don’t giveup for anything

    1. Trolls.Nets

      Thank you. I am continuing. Lots of love- Neeti

  26. Plzzzzzz continue as I really want Shivay’s POV.p Also I read all the epis in one go,they are really beautiful and unique also. Can give some flaahback scenes if what happened at the time of their marriage and why Anika cant accept Shivay as her husband and most important what happened to Tia?

    1. Trolls.Nets

      I am continuing because of the love you all gave me. Thanks for reading and commenting. Comments really matter to the writers. And that FB scenes are most important so you have to wait. I will also give Shivaay’s POV, you just have to wait and also comment regularly ?. Thanks again. Love you- Neeti

  27. Chanya

    Hi neeto..you should continue it..I’ll surely read…pinky promise..I will read it from the first part..don’t be sad ok..i can’t see any of my friends sad..love you neeto..

  28. Deepika12

    Wah wah wah wah wah wah wah???????. Superbbbbbb!! Mindblowingggggggggg!! Darwaza tod????. Loved it??????????????????????????????????????????.

    Sabse pehle toh itne late comment karne ke liye Solllyyyyyy…. phir yeh solllyyy bolne ke liye sollyyyyy….. phir yeh phirse solly bolne ke liye sollyyyyy….. aur aise hi uncountable baar sollyyuuuu aur uske liye bhi sollyyyy…… aur aise hi sollyy ka pahad…. aur ha uske liye bhi sollyyyy…

    Yeh solly solly toh chalta rahega. Ab episode pe aate. Bada aaya jaan bolne wala….. ek taraf jaan bolta h… dusri taraf meri ani pe chilata h……. aur uske POV of view mein kya dikhayegi ki “main pagal hu”. Obviously aise reaction changing aur mood changing toh ek pagal ke hi ho sakta h. Ab jyada nhi bolungi kyunki iska chehra mere Naku se milta h?????. Aur chalo dekhte h aage aage hota h kya.

    Dusra mujhe ani ke mood changing ka kuch samajh nhi aaya. Subah subah toh uthte hi jab shivay ache mood mein tha tab aag babula ho rhi thi. Aur achanak hi jab shivay ka mood kharab hua tab uska achanak bina kisi kaaran ke acha ho gaya aur aloo puri bhi banai.

    Declaration- dono pagal h

    Kya iss ff mein ridhkara h?? I think tunne iske barre mein bataya hua. Par ab 5 mahine baad ff post karegi toh yaad thodi hi rahega??.

    Rumya scenes were awesome. Par isme mein bhi bichme shivika ki mrg ke baare mein bataya. Aisa kya raaz h shadi ka?? Main bhi na ekdum pagal hu. Tu thodi na reveal karegi??

    Aur kya bola?? Tej’s taunts, pinky’s hatred aur…. letme see SHIVAY’S ANGER. This last one was reallyyy..???????. Ok lets see shivay’s POV. But iske liye next episode jaldi post karna. Ok?? For i cant wait too long.

    Aur aage se FF ko band karne ki baat muh se bahar nikali toh dekh lena?????.

    Aur ha. You are toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooodddddddddddddd at writing. I love your writingggg the mostttttttttttt???????????????????????????????????????????

    Sooo please for my and al your reader’s sake aapna yeh FF chalu rakh. Aur else i wil wanna kill you??????

    I love youuuuuuuuuu??? my cutie pie(pleasee… tu janti h kya??)

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