Ishqbaaz ff O SAATHIYA by KEHKASHA (CHAPTER 37)

Hello dear friends…….KEHKASHA is back with CHAPTER 37 of O SAATHIYA…… Firstly…..let me thank u all for ur awesome response……u know what I never cared for the no of comments…….coz somewhere or the other I thought and I know that there r few readers who always wait for my article…….though they can’t say that……still……. I knew it…..through rest other compliments that I kept on receiving from past all the updates……… I am just overwhelmed by the way u all described ur views……and my talent through ur compliments……… A big thanks to all those who read and complemented even once till now…….

Thank you so much for making my days……with ur special and magical words…….. And a big sorry as I couldn’t reply to those for last few parts…….and hopefully till the time this will get posted I will end up doing the reply part…….for all the chapters that I have missed……. Plz forgive me for not replying…..

And lets continue the suspense and try to disclose it
……in this part……

*FAIR WARNING*
This part is literally the longest till date…..plz read with full control on ur emotions…….. Hope u will like it…

RECAP- ishi surprised everyone…..with her special deal of forgetting the past……and move on…… Another truth that Om knows about his not being an oberoi is disclosed…….. Then ishi take a stand for Anika…….and leave oberoi mansion with Mamu…..

CHAPTER 37..

Ishi and mamu left the mansion in their car……..while all the o’bros were in shivaay’s room along with Anika……

@ Ishi and mamu…
Mamu was driving the car……while Ishi was sitting in a complete silent mode……actually she didn’t even moved a bit from the posture that she was in when mamu entered the car…….to now when they had covered almost distance of 15 mins……

She was lost in her deep thoughts……..seeing so…..mamu suddenly applied the breaks…….to which her body reacted……and her posture from being a statue to a girl finally changes…..

@O’Bros…
Silence was prevailing here also……. Anika was sitting in a corner…….recalling the incidents of whole day………while Om was lost thinking all his moments with……his family……brothers……and the girl…..whom he wanted to share his life with……….

ShivRu were also recalling their famous O’bros moments…….and few kitchen scenes……along with senior Oberoi moments at dining tables……

Everyone was lost……but they heard Rudra laughing suddenly……..and everyone’s attention got diverted…..

@Ishi and mamu…
Mamu- Seems like someone is hurt to extreme…..

Ishi- no response….

Mamu- Ok fine…..talk to me….say whatever u want…….

Ishi- again no response….

Mamu- Ishi….won’t u share ur heart with ur mamu……??

Ishi- Again no response……she was still lost….

So mamu also composed himself……and rested his back on his driving seat…….and the silence continued………with a pause in their journey…..

@ O’bros…..
Om asked through gestures…….that why is he laughing like mad…….for no reason…….

To which rudra replied…..
Rudra- O did u remembered ur paint fight with ishi di…….??

Om-yeah (and a beautiful smile appeared on his face)

Rudra- Then u might also remember that moment when ishi di dashed with dad……in the gallery with hands full of paint…….and dad said nothing in return……

Om- Of course…… I too was amazed……how he didn’t reacted…..

Rudra- Then move to more flashback…….did u remember that epic day……when ishi di scolded dad for not understanding u…….

Om- Yeah…
Shiv- yes….that was an epic moment coz then also bade papa didn’t reacted as we expected……

Rudra-Exactly…… Then do u both remember the garden scene……(he said to shivika)……when dad said that he found ishi di’s scarf familiar to some old precious thing…..

Shivika nodded in positive…….while on continued…..

Om- And I still can’t forget the new side of Mr. Oberoi……. How he held ishi’s hand and took her back to the mansion to stay with us…….not even scolding her with his harsh behaviour……….

All were surprised to know that Om witnessed that scene…….which was a miracle in itself……

Anika- But Rudra…..what do u actually wanna say…..??

@ishi and mamu….
Breaking the silence that was prevailing for last 10 minutes…….mamu exclaimed…..

Mamu- BAYAN KAR DO HUMSE….
APNE DIL KA HAAL…
KYA PATA KAL HUM….
SUN PANE KE LIYE MAUJOOD HI HON…..

Ishi who by now was lost in her world……looked up finally……and a lone tear escaped her eyes…….. She looked at mamu……and almost in a scolding tone…….she said….

Ishi- I warn u mamu…..if u again said something like that……. I won’t spare u…… I won’t talk to u ever…….if u said something like that again……. U have to be with me………in any condition……and this is ur punishment for hiding the truth from me……did u get that…….

She said all this in one go………and mamu was looking at her amazed……

Mamu- Till now someone was too quite to be digested…….and now someone is too quick to reply…… How many shades do u have dear daughter……??

Ishi made a cute innocent face and looked in the other direction…….

Mamu- Ok fine…..then we will go to ur favourite place right now……… Hope u will feel good……
And he drove off……while Ishi relaxed herself……with some thoughts….

@O’bros…
Rudra- Bhabhi I want to make u all understand……..that the truth was always in front of us………its just we never focused on it…….

Om- Meaning….??

Rudra- O u r asking the meaning…….??!! U should be the one who should have said this philosophical line………..but now u r acting as a duffer……..

Shiv- Rudra……actually u r right…….truth was in front of us always in these incidents………but we never focused…….or tried to find out the reasons………

Om- I am still not getting about what r u both talking about…..??

Rudra- (irritated) O have u ever seen papa or chote papa…….scolding prinku…….even for the biggest mistakes that she committed……

Om- No…

Shiv- Coz they r fathers…….and fathers r always more attached to daughters……..they care for them more than their sons…….

Om- Yes….

Anika- That means……they already got instincts of ishi being related to them……..that’s why they never scolded her for her kiddish acts…….

Om-(realising what all r trying to convey) Yeah……coz each time ishi was around Mr. Oberoi……..he was something different as a person……

Shiv- And we kept on calling it ishi’s magic……yeah it was so……. It was a magic……that we all felt ourselves close to ishi………..and look today……..its proved…….that there is a magic in this girl……

Rudra- I agree bhaiya…….the way ishi di handled the situation……… I mean if I might be at her place……..then I would have gone mad at everyone……..

They all saw Anika lost somewhere……. Om moved forward to her………took her hand gently……and sat down on his knees………to match her level……as she was sitting on the bed……..and exclaimed……

Om- I know what u have gone through has no measure to what happened now………… I know u were the most affected and suffered one…….but I literally don’t have words to lighten ur pain………

Anika looks on with moist eyes……..

Om- I know u have suffered a lot coz of all that happened years back………and ishi was right indeed………(he takes a long breath…….and smiled an impossible smile and continued) I am not getting what to call u now………

ShivRu were completely drenched in tears…….listening what om said……..

Anika- Seems like u have not heard what ishi said……..let me repeat……. She said……that…..she don’t accepted the truth……and now she don’t want the truth to enter and change her life………. She asked all of us to forget that happened today……..or years before……. So it is quite clear na……..that u r still my devar……..and I am still ur bhabhi…….. Untill and unless……u turn my brother…….from being a brother in law……..

All were happy with this lil and sweet speech of Anika…….. They actually didn’t ever thought that both of these girls can be so mature to handle the situation so lightly……..as if nothing had happened…….

Om smiled brighter than before………and simply hugged her sister in law cum sister……..while Anika caressed his hairs with utter most love and affection of an elder sister…….

@ishi and Mamu….
They reached a beautiful place…….actually a kind of hill side………both get down the car………and sat near a big rock……

Breaking the unwanted and undesirable silence………mamu continued….
Mamu- Ishi….now say what do u felt……after listening all this…….how did u handled the situation so maturily……… I mean I never expected such behaviour from u………i thought that u will shout on me…….u will almost eat me up untill my ears would bleed………but u just went silent……..leaving me shocked………this unexpected behaviour of urs just broke me from within……. And look at urself now…….still u r silent…….only I am speaking……

Ishi looked at Mamu…….and passes a pale smile…..and continued…
Ishi- Mamu…..u r asking me how did I reacted so cool……. Did u forget that from my childhood till now u always taught me to be strong……..think practically……..and more than that think and live for other’s………

Mamu was teary eyed…….and this side of Mamu was a new virtue for ishi….

Ishi- Not fair Mamu……. It was u who promised me……and took a promise from me…….that neither u will cry nor I will…….and u urself r breaking it….

Mamu wipes his tears…….and exclaimed….

Mamu- Ishi u might have heard about tears of happiness……….and sadness……but these tears r special…….

Ishi- o really……special tears……how….

Mamu-Yes…..special tears……coz these r proud tears………those tears…….which r feeling proud to shed themselves on the maturity of my lil angle……… So these r special……..and u will not ask me to stop these…….

Ishi laughed a lil……actually she giggled on this statement………

@ Police station……
Ranveer gets a call……and…
RV- What….r u sure……is this news true….
POC- Yes sir…… Its 200 % true….
RV- ok fine….do one thing……trace the location……and update me….
POC- Ok sir…
And the call ends…

@ O’bros….
Anika- Om….if u really want to do something to me……..then plz bring my sister back…….here at ur place…….plz I don’t wanna loose her……

Rudra- Yes O…..even I agree……ishi di had done a lot for us…….and now we don’t wanna loose her……

Prinku who just entered……
Prinku- Yeah Om bhaiya…….. Even I miss her…….she understood me more than u all……..and I also want her back…….plz bring her……. I want both of u here…….plz bring her back…….and only u can do this…….plz….and she hugged him….

Shiv- Yeah…… Om…..she is trying to run from all of us…….but hte fact is……that this we all have seen……

Om-What…??

Anika- The closeness between u two……

Om reminisces his moments with ishi……and a sweet smile appeared on his face……..

@ishi and mamu…
Mamu- Ishi don’t run away from them…….its destiny coz of which u got to know aboutt them……..plz don’t ignore ur feelings…..plz don’t punish urself for what happened years back……

Ishi- Mamu……what r u exactly trying to say……??

Mamu- so u want a direct approch…….fine then…..

@ o’bros
Shiv- O tell us……do u love her….

@ ishi and Mamu…
Mamu- Ishi tell me……do u love him….

Both ishkara were shocked hearing this question………their heart started beating at an unusual rate……..both started recalling all their moments together…….. There was complete silence…….as if the whole world has stopped for these two……..and they r just thinking about each other……..no other person……no other feeling…….infact nothing else exist for them…….they were teary eyed…….although ishi was trying hard to control herself………still those tears were twinkling in her eyes………
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Jo na keh sake hum…
Jo na keh sake tum…
Kehne lagi dono se woh khamoshiyan…..
O SAATHIYA….
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Both came out of their dream world……….after recalling all the past in a fast forward mode…..and at the same time at two different places….. They answered…..

Ishkara- YES…

@o’bros
Om- yes I love her……..and I respect her…….. U know what…..she is like that only…….even I didn’t realised when it happened……..but it just happened……… I love her………and more than her I love her eyes……..those always convey thousands of feelings at a same time……… I love her nature…….her innocence…….her cuteness…….her sweetness……..her tenderness………her feel…….her magic…….her maturity……her genuinity………her interaction…….and what not……..u know what……she is the best girl I have ever met in my life……

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Badalon mein…..ghul na jayein…
Hain jo lamhe tahre tahre…..
Do dilon mein…
Jazb kar le…
Saare jazbe…
Gehre gehre…..
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@ishi and Mamu…
Ishi- Yes Mamu….. I love him…… And more than all this I respect him……. I can’t see him sad……. I can’t see those tears playing in his eyes……… I can’t see him getting a feel of loosing something……. I want him to achieve everything he wants……..he deserves……and he desire…… U know what…… I just love his killing smile………..he is so cute…….and adorable……. I can’t take off my eyes from him……… I love the way he smile with his brothers……… I love the way he care for everyone……… I loblve the way he live for everyone……… U know what……he is himself wearing a mask of hatred for his father……….and is unaware of that……… I have seen that love……and care for his father what he has for his mother and bro and sis……… He is just a perfect guy with a pinch of imperfection…….coz he don’t know how to lie…….

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Kal kya pata…
Mile na mile…
Nazdeekiyan…
O SAATHIYA……
Kal kya pata…
Mile na mile…
Nazdeekiyan…
O SAATHIYA……

Saathiya…….saathiya……Saathiya…….saathiya……
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Both r again seen reminiscing their all beautiful and funny moments…….lost in each other’s world……

@RV…
Rv- R u sure the last loc is of Oberoi house…..
POC- yes sir……and after that her phone is going unreachable……
He cuts the call…….and rushes to Oberoi mansion…..

SCENE AT OBEROI MANSION…..
RV enters in a rush and hits prinku…… He immediately made her stand…….and without wasting a second…….he questions….

RV- (in tension) Prinku……where is ishi……????

Prinku didn’t get what did he mean…..so he repeats the question………to which shiv answered……

Shiv- She has gone…..

RV- Meaning…..??

And they explain him the whole story……..
Om- But what happened…….why r u so tensed…..

RV- U said that Mamu…….i mean sir is with her……. Do u have any idea……where they would be……??

All nod in negative……

Rv calls someone……and gave him mamu’s no and ask him to trace……..to which the person replied that he is having problem in tracing……. It would be easy for him if there could be any call connected to the no……… And RV asked everyone the same…….

All started trying mamu’s no…….in order to get some detail……..but in vain……
Om was tensed…..and was constantly asking RV to tell him why is he…….so worried……..but RV was busy with calls…… This is when shivaay gets a call……

He attended it as the call was from private no……..
The caller told him something…….and the call disconnects……

Shiv- RV…… I got to know where is Mamu and ishi…..am not sure……but we can check…….

Om- But first u tell what is the matter…….

RV- Shivaay lets go…..and om we don’t have time for discussion……..let’s check them first……

And four of them left…….leaving Anika and prinku completely worried……

Rudra was constantly trying to call Mamu……in order to warn them about the upcoming danger…….as RV’s statement cleared this……..and the call connects……the bell rang…….

@ ishi and Mamu…
The phone litup showing RUDRA CALLING…….but noone bothered which shows that the phone was on silent mode…….. Mamu felt a bit uncomfortable………..so he kept the phone aside…….and in this process the call got connected…….as his fingers unknowingly swiped the answer button……….

Mamu- ishi…..say something…… I want to listen all ur worries……. Tell me……what’s next…..where do u wanna go……. Shall we move to Lavasa…..

@Car(o’bros and RV)
Rudra heard the conversation……….and didn’t get why is mamu talking like this…..to him….. Is he ishi he thought…….. So he keptthe phone on speaker………

@ishi and Mamu…..
Ishi- No Mamu……not Lavasa……we should go somewhere else…….where noone could find us………..

Mamu- So u only decide some place…….but still I will suggest u to give a second thought to ur chain of thoughts……..

Ishi- (she smiled and said)
EK SUKOON KI NEED CHAHIYE….
DARD MITANE KO…
EK HALKA SA EHSAAS CHAHIYE….
KHUD KO JEENA PHIR SE SIKHANE KO……
Mamu…. I want a sleep full of tenderness…….. I want a sound sleep to forget all this and start afresh…….. I want to live again…….but this time on my conditions and not on life’s……….

@Car…
All this was heard by four of them……… Om was the most affected one……….when he heard ishi being so helpless………..that she just wanna run away from the situation…….. RV focused on the drive……while shivaay to cleared his eyes…….which could be seen by Rudra who was on the back seat throught the rear mirror…….. Even he was teary eyed……

@ ishi and Mamu….

Mamu- Ishi won’t u feel bad for going apart from them……..aren’t u doing injustice to u…….by separating urself from ur family…….

Ishi- Mamu no matter in how many ways u say me the same thing……..my answers will never change……and separating me from my family…….from where did this angle came in ur mind…….. Which family Mamu…….was I with them since starting…….. No right……then…… I was with u…..and u and only u r my family……… So drop all ur confusions…….and lets leave……its high time now…… I GUESS……ITS TIME FOR OUR DEPARTURE……..(this line echoed)

Mamu- Feeling good now…..

Ishi- Yeah better than before….

Mamu passes a fading smile……and think in his mind…….YES ISHI ITS TIME FOR DEPARTURE…….BUT NOT OURS…….JUST MINES…… I came here to gift u ur family…….but u were adamant……..and now I won’t see u in problem……..no matter what…..but now I am going to drop u back to Oberoi mansion…….. I AM NOT GONNA TO TAKE U WITH ME……. U HAVE TO LIVE ALONE……HERE WITH UR DESTINY…….AND I KNOW OM IS THE MOST APT PERSON…….FOR A GIRL LIKE U……..I WILL LEAVE NOW……AS MY DUTY AS UR MAMU IS OVER…….NOW I WONT TELL U WHERE AM I GOING…….ITS JUST I PRAY…….THAT OUR PATHS NEVER CROSSES AGAIN……..U HAVE TO FORGET…….THAT I EVER EXIST IN UR LIFE………AND I AM SURE…….THIS FAMILY WILL DO SO ONE DAY………

And he again smiled at her………

@car..
This silence of few minutes seemed odd to all of them…….as if this silence was a silence before a devastating storm came……… All were worried……while RV speed up the car……..

@ishi and Mamu….
Ishi- Mamu…..where have u lost…..

Mamu- Let’s go……and he smiles…..

Ishi turned to move but her locket (that ANKI one) falls down…….so she bend to pick it up…….and *THAD* A voice of gun shot echoed the whole area……..while RV applied the brakes with a jerk……..for a sec everything was freezed………but soon RV composed himself………and accelerated the car as fast as he can………..

Ishi stood up hearing the sound and looked at her right arm which was drenched with blood………then her gaze moved to Mamu……..who was drenched in blood……as the shot was near his heart………and he got shot as ishi bend down…………and the blood stream fall on her right arm……….

She stood shocked…….and her gaze was fixed on Mamu…….while Mamu immediately held her with her shoulders…….and turned her towards his place………covering her from the direction of shot………. His back was now facing the direction of shot……..while ishi was now standing at his place………with her face at the direction……..and *THAD*……another shot piercing his backbone……..and the stream getting out…….in flow……….

He saved ishi again……while ishi was just in shocked state…….as soo bas she recovered herself……….
She souted at the highest pitch of her voice……..

Ishi- (shouted) MAMU….

There on the other side……the speed of car grew more……with this shout of her……and this was enough for everyone to get……..that Mamu got shot………..

Here from another side……a hand with a knife approached ishi……..when she recovered herself from the shock……a.and her face grew…..wild……with anger……… She held that hand and twisted it with utmost force……..producing a *CRACK* sound……breaking the wrist….. The hand belongs to none other than Svetlana…….

She then kicked……the other goon who actually surrounded her……..while Mamu tried to made himself stand……. He too helped ishi by punching few of them…….but as he got two shots…….and that too on two delicate place………he was weak……

Ishi then make the finest move……doing a leg chaggie………and directly kicking the one on his face……..knocking him down to death……breaking the collar bone……… She just punched……and kicked them out of her anger………..

From other direction Mrs. Kapoor approached her…….with a metal rod or a golf stick indeed……..which ishi easily doged………and then she flung that up…….giving a hard stroke on Mrs. K’s back…….and her head…….which bleed like anything……..

Adding the fuel to ishi’s anger…….Dhruv made an entry……….(mark this point……that his face is still not shown……ishi recognise him by his husky voice) He was covering his face with a mask………having a skull drawn on it……….. He hold ishi by her neck…….and put the knife……trying to make a cut out there……. There Mamu almost fell on the ground……

This was the state……when the car reached finally at the spot……..and all four got down……only to see the ground full of wounded and dead goons…….along with screaming Svetlana and Mrs. K…….

Ishi was still in his clutches…….seeing which the blood boiled……of all four of them…….
RV tried to approach dhruv…….but in vain as he tightens the grip on ishi’s neck……..and applied the pressure to the hold of knife……..which resulted in a scream from ishi……..

Dhruv actually warned them not to come forward………as this can lead to her death……… This is when ishi shouts…..

Ishi-(shouts) MAMU….

Diverting everyone’s attention………and she immediately twisted his arm……with knife almost in her’s…….and making a big round……she freed herself…….locking his hands…..with her arm………then giving a kick on the lower part of his leg…..simultaneously…………followed by another kick on his back………within a fraction of second…….

She freed herself and ran towards Mamu…….holding him by his head on her lap…….
While dhruv stood up……..and with a lot of anger and psychoness……..tried to stab ishi……..but was stopped by the three ie……shiv om ru……..while rv called for the ambulance………….he was with ishi……

After a lot of beating…..and knocking down…….and fight and all that……finally dhruv fall on a side……while the brothers…….go towards ishi…….
But were stopped by……….another voice………

The owner of voice was none other than……..ROOP……
Ishi got up resting mamu’s head on RV’lap……..while shivomru turned to the direction of roop…… All three were standing at three different places………… Dhruv was on one side……

He stood up holding his head………and removed her mask……..
————-SOMETHING HAPPENED —————
And *THAD* another shot….

TO BE CONTINUED……

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Precap- DOC- I am sorry but……
SHIV- I don’t wanna hear a word like that…….nothing will happen…….did u get that……

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So friends done with today’s update……….hope that u all didn’t get bored reading a long part……. Hope this was not that heavy……. Hope that it was upto ur all’s expectations……. Hope u got what u want……

Well after this……approximately 3 more parts left……untill and unless I get another idea for its end…….. So basically……hopefully this is a fourth last part……..completely depending upon my mood…….

Do shower ur comments……and shower sincerely means……that I want them…….as this is gonna to end soon……if not in three then in four parts definitely…….
Till then enjoy the ending note…..
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EK ARSA LAG GAYA…
KHUD KO SAMAJHNE MEIN….
JAB JANA….TOH SAMJHA KI….
JISKI TALASH MUJHE BARSON SE THI….
WOH TOH MUJH MEIN HI CHUPA BAITHA HAI…….

With this…
Signing off…
KEHKASHA…

33 comments

  1. Dheemahee

    Dheemahee

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    Love u dear as always u rocked…..It was too emotional one Yar ….It literally make me shiver when mamu got shot 😫😭😭….I really felt pain of ishi there….And ya O SATHIYA made me go into flashback of ishkara of ishqbazz 😊….

    Really amazing one ….Felt sad for om and ishi and ya for Anika tooo….

    And precap 😱😱😱😱….See u soon dear
    Cya…TC..SD..

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      Thanks a lot dear………and yeah…..i think i can post the next part by tomorrow……..so u can check once u return………
      till then tc….

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      thanks Sammie…..and sorry as i am getting late in posting the next part……..but i’ll try to post the next one by tomorrow….

  2. Sravanthi

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    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      Awwww………that’s so sweet of u……….and yeah now toh u can definately call me di……I AM FULL ONE YEAR ELDER TO U………….anyways….after u have suggested me to write a novel……..many of my friends r favouring u……..and yeah……i can also think something like that………..and yeah thanks a lot for such a sweet compliment……..
      U know what i can understand……coz even when i read then also this happen……my mumma and papa just keep on calling me……..and i keep on travelling some other worlds……..created by different awesome authors in their different ff(s)………

      and its completely alright if u comment or compliment or not……….as i know that u will read it…….but do turn up on the last part whenever it gets updated………..but for now i can definately ask u to wait till tomorrow morning……….for next chappy…….
      take care dear….
      luv u loads….

  3. Chandini

    Chandini

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    I have many things to say aftr reading this one….ya you are right this is one lengthy part but I didn’t get bored even for a nano second. Moreover each line is this part touched my heart you made me imagine all ib characters and you know what from the starting I had a face imagined for mamu today I couldn’t imagine that man to be covered with blood……”YES” that one word ishkara uttered is out of the world and “He is just a perfect guy with a pinch of imperfection…….coz he don’t know how to lie…….” This line is my favourite..no one can understand om to this level and I must say your writings made me to say this bcoz of the depth of emotions you coveyed through these two lovely characters ishi and om….and other bit of scene that touched my heart is anika-om cute littele hug….om anika the two characters with immense similarities yet poles apart…the characters which the real ishqbaaaz failed to explore was touched by you sensibluy…and what to say not anika or ishi is a mature person…it’s you the writer who is mature dear….and that magic part that Shivaay always wondered about ishi is awesome and the whole loving family wanted their both children to be with them that is sosweet😒😒😒I think this is the longest comment I have ever typed…but I think it’s needed for this longest part😜I know you are going to end it soon but do come back with an awesome ff again . Lov you loads dear Thank you giving us such an amazing story😘😘😘

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      thankyou sooooooooooooo much chandini………ur compliment really made my day…………and yeah….now i am lacking words to reply u…….as u said……l literally tried to portray these two characters as the strongest……..also covering all other characters……..l just tried to do justice with all these characters……..and ur compliment is indicating my acomplishment……….
      i just wanted the whole family to be together without any negativity…..not even in a single faily member……….and about dialogues……then now when i read this again even i am thinking how i wrote them………Maybe the souls of characters entered my body…….. Anyways jokes apart……..i am trying to post the next chappy by tomorrow…….. Hope this maturity of mine continue till the end…….with a pinch of humour….and masti…….. AS ENOUGH OF BEING SENTI>…….

  4. Nita D

    Nita D

    |Registered Member

    Wow kuhu…..I agree that it was the longest chapter u have ever written but I swear that I didn’t get bored even for a second…I wanted it to never end….
    What an amazing chapter yaar….I have no words to express myself….So much happened in one episode….obro n anika scene….ishi n mamu, prinku, rv, ishkara confession, ishu’s final decision, n before I could understand mamu’s last speech, he was shot….N last lock???… I know that it’ll lead towards the end, but still eager to read the next part….

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Nita….. U know what….ur compliments give a kind of unexpressable relief……
      And about ur querry about the next chappy…..then it will be updated by tomorrow morning……..as l am tying the loose ends……l am almost done with the typing part……just have to wind up and this will be completed by tonight so tomorrow pakka……
      and yes l got time….and i am just focusing on replying…….after this i’ll finish the typing and post the next……
      Thanks again Miss. Keen Observer….
      Take Care…
      seeu….tomorrow….

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      Thankyu shivika1233…….and yes i’ll post the next part by tomorrow…… i mean it would be updated tomorrow morning…….

  5. Nithu

    Nithu

    |Registered Member

    ash ur the best……loved it soo much its beyond everyones imagination………..im just short of words………….what can i say………tum tho hum sab ki oh my mata kardi yaaaarrrr………….loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muuuuuuuucccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………..evn love you soo much ash……..

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      Thank you so much Nithu…..for ur lovely words……..and i am sooooooooooo happy that u liked it………and yeah next part will be uploaded by tomorrow……….

  6. JanviSingh

    JanviSingh

    |Registered Member

    Hmmmmmmmmmm… Ab m kya bolu….
    Words won’t do justice wid my feelings so I just wanna say that this part touched my heart and completely got into my head….
    U should have added a disclaimer di.m that this part should be read by the ones who have control on themselves….
    Hatts of di….😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      tu kuch mat bol…..bina bole itna kuch kaha hai…..toh bolne ke baad kya hota……
      Waise…..maine warning mein likha tha……ki read while having full control on ur emotions…..
      Thank you so much meri cutiepie………
      next part hopefully by tomorrow……
      luv u a lot…..

  7. Yashu

    Yashu

    |Registered Member

    Wowww!!!! It was awesome yaar….lovely…loved each n every bit of it…eagerly waiting for nxt episode….post it asap…..

  8. Vanshree

    Vanshree

    |Registered Member

    amazing wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I mean what a great episode I can’t tell its just beyond words you are truely amzing pleae please post the next part asp pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee thje suspense is killing me sorry for not commentong on earlier episodes

    • Kehkasha

      Kehkasha

      |Author

      thanks a lot Vanshree……. and no need to be sorry dear…….as i already mentioned that i know many of u read but can’t express………so its completely alright…….infact i am happy that u complimented me so beautifully……….
      Then u have to wait till tomorrow…….as next part will be updated by tomorrow……….
      thanks again…..

  9. Mrunal

    Mrunal

    |Registered Member

    I don’t know yaar how to praise u…
    and for how many reasons to praise u…
    U r true gem my sweet heart…
    this was tooo…. emotional episode.. and I’m preparing myself to handle the next phase becoz after reading next part I’ll need to control myself…
    I’m literally sobbing while reading this one…
    and I’m sure I’ll loose my all control when I’ll read next part…
    love u to the infinity…
    u r beyond my words dear…
    I’m unable to express them…

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