Ishqbaaz ff by ananya – Part 4

hey guy ananya here..
sorry could not update as i was not in town yesterday

guys i already told u all that i didnt like the part 3 i updated earlier..so please for my satisfaction please delete that one from ur minds…this is the new part 3 and the story will be continued according to this please guysss please for my satisfaction..its a request and my sincere apologies for this inconvienience

guys shivaay still didnt realise dat he luvs anika so some actions r done by someone else rather than shivaay for example yesterday om pulls anika’s sleeve up not shivaay i think many of u didnt like it i felt so…in the real serial shivaay is not such a person so suddenly this much caring and luving attitude will be wierd for the readers so such actions r done by someone else rather than shivaay..ill mention such scenes wherever they come… i hope u could understand what i meant

this is gonna be dhamakedaar

previously v saw
1.anika and oberoi bros joining hands in revealing tia’s true face
2.shivaay thanking as well as apologising anika
3. they sense something wrong when they see anika’s hurt

scene 1
anika and saahil start leaving
anika: now its too late ill leave guys and ya cu tommorow at your house..u guys watch out that tia bahut chaalak hai she may do something overnight
shivaay: u need not tell us what to do and all
anika: jus shut up if i didnt tell u about tia then u would have married her u duffer billu
shivaay: hey..u .. dont call me billu only my dadi can call me like dat
om and rudra tap their forheads seeing their fight
om and rudra: not again man
their fight continues
om: guys
shivaay: u dont poke ur nose in the middle
rudra pokes his nose and says
rudra: bhaiyya i poked my nose what will u do
om: shut up rudra
anika: om u tell ur bhai also to shut his mouth to stop his bakbak..u dumbo
shivaay: dumbo??u called me dumbo
anika: yes mr.SSO
shivaay: SSO?? matlab??
om and rudra chuckle
rudra: s*xy singh oberoi
sivaay: what tthe vaak
anika: na no SSO means stupid singh oberoi
shivaay: how dare u paagal
anika: what im paagal?? no no ur paagal
their cat fight continues
anika: shut up u duffer
shivaay: duffer?
rudra: bhaiyya its better v go home ill search for new bad words in internet and tellu so that u can fight
saahil: didi chalo
and grabs her
anika: remember mr.SSO i saved u from entering hell
saahil grabs her

rudra messages her
rudra: didi after saahil sleeps please come and meet us v will b waiting here only if u want om will pick u up
anika: ok but y
rudra: please didi u come
anika: ok but can anyone of u pick me up
rudra: definitely me or om will come
anika: ok done
(this is their convo in whatsapp)

scene 2
anika and saahil come home
anika: saahil late hogaya go and sleep
saahil: ok didi
anika: did u eat anything
saahil: yep
anika: ok good now go and sleep good night
saahil: but u won come
anika: u go i have some imp work to b done ill come afterwards
saahil leaves and he sleeps
anika peeps him and finds him asleep
she messages rudra to come and pick her up
after 5 mins rudra comes
she gets into the car and they go to the same place

scene 3
anika ad rudra come to shivaay nd om
anika: what happended y did u guys temme to meet
om: tell us the truth what happened to ur hands
she hesitates
anika: ntg much om im fine
rudra: didi u dont lie if u dont know how to
anika: really im fine
shivaay: oh please stop ur dramas..om leave it na she doesnt want to tell us or else she jus wants everyone to ask her…jus to gain sympathy
tears roll down her eyes
anika: did i tell u to ask me?? mind ur tongue
om: stop it shivaay, anika tell us what happened
anika breaks down
shivaay gets shocked seeing that..he finds her pain genuine
anika: actually…
she sees someone behind hiding in the trees and aiming at om
that person shoots
anika: om jus move
she pushes him and she gets shot
all r dumbstruck
anika, shivaay, rudra and om- all these faces r shown in shock (they will get blackened right like that)
3 bullets r shot leg hand and chest
shivaay: oh my ghossssshhhh
om is on shock
rudra: bhaiyya v should rush her to the hospital
shivaay: om ru fine
he doesnt respond
rudra: om om
he shakes him
then he says
om: omg yeh kya hogaya what happened she saved my life putting hers at risk
shivaay: nothing will happen she will b fine but v need to rush her to the hospital
they rush her to the hospital
while going om sees ishana sitting alone on a bench and just then her papa comes and calls her ishana
om gets shocked
this is the end

NO PRECAP

double shock for om right?
cu soon
i hope its lengthy enough

35 comments

  1. mukul

    ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜žsad for poor omkara yaa he is in double shock๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿฅanika is enough brave to save oberio brothers I hope anika n omkara will be fine soon ananya u r doing a gr8 job ur way of imagination is like reality is playing in front of my eyes u r really a good writer becoz ur words seems to be reality u connect with us easily n keep on writing u no I was waiting for dis update from morning itself but plz don’t separate ishkara create such circumstances that ishana breakdown n share her real story with omkara n later they will become closer n Om falls in love with bela

  2. Jara

    |Registered Member

    Thank God u changed the name yaar ananya was confused well I am fanfic writer but new to this page… U r just awesome dear waiting for next eagerly… Stay blessed

  3. Mukta

    This is amazing….. please post regularly and post d next part soon….please, can’t wait for it………

  4. Trisha

    u should shoot 1gun anyway nice episode i always luv to read ur FF but today i am little bit dispointed ….

      • Trisha

        I dont want to hurt u ,i really luv to read ur FF , i known it is very diffcult to think nd write FF if i really hurt u i really very very sory anaaya u known

      • Trisha

        I dont want to hurt u ,i really luv to read ur FF , i known it is very diffcult to think nd write FF if i really hurt u i really very very sory anaaya

    • ananya

      Hey its ok don’t feel bad…there is no rule that everyone would have the same taste u didn’t like this so next time I hope u like it don’t feel guilty at all

  5. Shaza

    Awesome ff dear ..as soon as i read ff by ananya i got so damn exited.. make it more lengthy..maybe im getting greedy but i juz love ur ff..i hope you dont create misunderstanding and differences between iskara ..but i was thinking uf shivaye was gonna get the bullet and anika saved then it would be mire better maybe ..anyway awesome,fabulous and mindblowing ff post ur nxt ff asap ..fast as u can and make it very very very very long;)

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