Ishqbaaz 8 years later-Shivika, Ishkara and Rumya-FF by Luna (Episode 1)

Hi friends, how r u all???? Thanks for all ur positive comments…There was no negative comment so I guess u all have no problem with what
I’m writing till now….If I do an mistakes plz do correct me. Those who have not read the previous post of my ff plz do read
it before reading this. Here’s the link:

promos

I was thinking of giving introduction of all the characters but now I think it will take away a lot of thrill so I’m directly starting with
the episodes. U will know what changes have happened through the episodes.. If u have any confusion then ask me and I will
clear it out.

So here’s the 1st episode:

Scene 1: Someone is driving a car in full speed. The person is’nt shown…Suddenly he sees a car standing in between the road,
blocking his way. He blows the horns but nothing happens. Shivaye comes out of the car which was standing in between the road…
Shivaye: Ur game is over…now u can’t go anywhere…just come out of the car.

The scene shifts to 8 years later…

Scene 2(Oberoi mansion): Jhanvi is drinking wine in her room…Tej enters.
Tej: Jhanvi, wHat have u done to urself? It really hurts me to see u like this.
Jhanvi: And it really hurts me to see ur face daily.
Tej: Jhanvi plz, not again…
Jhanvi: Why??? U got hurt??? when u give pain, u should also know to take it.
Tej: But Jhanvi, now I have changed.
Jhanvi angrily throws the glass of wine and stands in front of Tej.
Jhanvi(shouts): What will happen with ur so called change, huh??? Will Omkara come back from the dead???will he come back to us???
Tej: Jhanvi stop it, u r saying as if I have killed my own son.
Jhanvi: Yes, u have’nt killed ur son but somewhere u r also responsible for it.
Tej: But it was not my fault Jhanvi.
Jhanvi: Very true, it’s not ur fault…it’s mine that I loved u, I married u it’s also my fault that I did’nt left u when
u slept with Shwetlana!!!!
Tej shouts at Jhanvi and slaps her but then he realises his mistake.
Tej: Uh, I’m sorry…sorry…really sorry Jhanvi.. I should’nt have slapped u.
Jhanvi: No need to say sorry Tej…It’s not ur fault…U were always like this and will always remain like this…a bad husband and
a bad father.
Jhanvi leaves and Tej bursts into tears. Rudra was seeing all the convo between Tej and Jhanvi from outside and was sulking in the corner.

Scene 3: Rudra goes in his room and starts crying. Shivaye enters.
Shivaye: What happened Rudra? Why r u crying?
Rudra: Nothing new Bhaiya…crying has became a habit for everyone in this house…it’s like food and water for us..
we just can’t live without it.
Shivaye: Rudra, u have become so mature.
Rudra: Age and experience change everything Bhaiyaa, but in my case, only one incident was enough to change everything…but
….

Rudra wanted to say something but was’nt able to finish his sentence and bursts into tears. Shivaye hugs him tight.
Rudra(crying): Bhaiyaa, I’ve not matured…I’m still that dumb crybaby Oberoi
Shivaye: Yeah, I know…u will always remain a kid.
Shivaye wipes his tears.
Shivaye: Rudra, I know that nothing… literally nothing can fill the empty space of Om in our lives…but u know that’s what
life is…no one is going to be till the end….the only thing which eternal is our love for each other.
Rudra: Bhaiyaa, plz leave me alone for some time.
Shivaye: Okay, fine… take care.
Shivaye leaves.

Scene 4: Shivaye comes in the drawing room and sees Anika entering the Oberoi mansion. Oh Jaana plays in the background.
Shivaye: Where were u??? U know that today is Tara’s beauty pageant. How can u be so irresponsible???
Anika: U know that I’m also running a canteen business… U r not the only person in this world who is busy.
Shivaye: Okay stop it. I told u that Tara’s beauty pageant starts at 10 am, do u even know the meaning of being punctual?
Anika(confused): Uh, no.
Shivaye(irritated): Oh God, U r simply impossible.
Anika: And what’s this beauty pageant btw, this competition is simply ridiculous where small girls get the award for being fake???
Shivaye: U know nothing about these things so better u not say anything.
Shivaye’s daughter Tara enters.
Shivaye(to Tara): Oh God!!! my princess is looking so beautiful, beta, best of luck for ur beauty pageant, I know that u will only win.
Tara: Dad, will u not come to see me…
Shivaye: Uh, sweetie, I have an important meeting today. I’m really sorry… I can’t come.
Tara: But u promised that u will come.
Shivaye: I’m extremely sorry dear, I wanted to come but I can’t.
Tara: U always say this… I hate u dad.
Tara angrily runs towards her room.
Anika(to Shivaye): Don’t worry, I will talk to her.
Shivaye: Fine, I’ll leave for the meeting.

Anika goes to Tara. Tara was crying in her room.
Anika: Tara, plz don’t cry…ur dad wanted to come but u know he remains so busy.
Tara: I was taking part in this stupid competition bcoz of dad only, otherwise I’m not at all interested…I like to play
football, u know na. and now he’s also not coming to see me… He does’nt loves me at all.
Anika: U should’nt say like this, ur dad loves u a lot and u don’t worry, I’ll scold him when he will come back from the meeting.
Tara(excited): Really???
Anika: Yes, and I’ll also take u for a movie of Shah Rukh after ur competition.
Tara(excited): Oh God!!!! Really???, I love Srk.
Anika: But don’t tell this to ur dad otherwise he’ll kill me…promise me that u will keep it as a top secret.
Tara: Don’t worry, pinky promise.
Both Tara and Anika laugh and leave.

Scene 5: Soumya enters in Rudra’s room where he’s still sitting.
Soumya: Hey Rudra, what r u doing?
Rudra(looking at Soumya): Nothing Soumya.
Soumya sees tears in the eyes of Rudra. She wipes it off.
Soumya: U r crying like a kid and saying that u r doing nothing.
Rudra: Plz Soumya, leave me alone for some time.
Soumya: U should’nt hide anything from ur best friend… c’mon tell me what happened???
Rudra: U know very well, why I remain sad most of the time.
Soumya: Yeah, I know…Rudra, I know that neither I can share ur pain nor I can understand it but atleast I can give u little
bit of happiness. Come, I’ll take u somewhere.
Rudra: But where??
Soumya: Just come na, don’t ask questions!!!

Soumya takes Rudra to a church.
Rudra(surprised): Why u have brought me to this church???
Soumya: It’s said that praying to God gives u peace in mind….I know that it does’nt solves the problems of ur life but it
definitely eases ur pain and gives u a relief if u do it whole heartedly.
Rudra: Soumya plz, I’m not interested in this right now.
Soumya: Rudra, U should’nt say no in the house of God…I’m just asking u to pray…what’s wrong in that??? C’mon, Lets pray
to God for some happiness.
Rudra and Soumya bow down and join their hands. Rudra closes his eyes
Rudra(praying): God, u know that my happiness only lies in my family and brothers…If anything can bring happiness to my family
then it’s only Om…Can u bring Om back??? I think I’m asking too much from u but it’s the only thing that can make me live life again,
Plz God!!! bring Om back, that’s all I want.

Tears come out of Rudra’s eyes, and he starts crying. Soumya sees Rudra crying and hugs him tightly. Kal Ho naa ho bg music plays
in background.

Scene 6: Shivaye is on his way for the meeting and stops at a traffic signal…. Suddenly he sees Om crossing the road in front of
him and gets completely shocked, He was’nt able to believe his eyes… he was’nt able to say anything… He gets out of the
car but Om got lost in the whole crowd.
Shivaye(shocked and thinking): Was he really Om??? I can’t believe it…I’m damn sure he was Om but where is he now???
Shivaye goes in the way where he saw Omkara going, suddenly he sees Om from the back and was shocked.
Shivaye(screaming): Om!!!!!!
Om turns back hearing Shivaye’s voice and gives a surprised look to him. Shivaye was still in a shocked state… There was
so much hustle and bustle in the surrounding but the world completely stopped for Shivaye…He was’nt able to say anything..
He was just standing and staring at Om from a distance, his legs were’nt moving…tears come out of Shivaye’s eyes with a big smile on his face…
Om was still giving a surprised look to Shivaye….Suddenly a car comes and hits Om, he lands in a pool of blood…Shivaye
gets shocked seeing that, he runs towards Om, Om becomes unconscious and Shivaye takes his head in his lap.
Shivaye(screaming): Om, plz wake up…plz wake up Om….Someone call the ambulance!!!!!!!

To Be Continued…..

Precap: Om awakes in the hospital and becomes happy seeing the whole Oberoi family, Obros share a brotherly hug with each other.

Sorry Ishkara fans, no Ishana today, she will appear in next episode…plz wait a little…Appreciation and criticism, both are
welcome…Also tell me what u liked and what u did’nt liked so that I can improve it. And silent readers, plz comment bcoz I will only continue when I will get a good response.

59 comments

  1. Chandini

    I really hav to say u
    r one good writer. And abt ur ff it’s really full of suspenses. I lov the way u portray the emotions through ur writing.๐Ÿ˜Š

  2. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Luna what can I say after reading ur ff I can only say ur ff somewhere inspired me and the description was killing me I guess long way for me to travel for thriller episodes like u Dr but it really difficult to compliment u out of the world ………
    Can v be friends !!!!!!!

  3. namrata

    It was very nice and the whole of urs.is really a suspense thriller. It would be very emotional when obros brothers would have hug each other after 8 years.
    keep writing and post the.next very soon.
    Plz tell ne who is tara mother and what relation is bw anika and shivay and anika and tara

  4. Nithu

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god…ua ff really be one of the best…ffs…!! Along with shama di tulasi ayeshu pragya di ayath di …now i love ua ff toooo dear

    • Bshama1239

      |Registered Member

      Haaaa …๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ u love my ff I don’t u no I hate my ff ro the core like now I am writing the next part and this time mera dimaag anika ki champa (scooter) ki tarah without petrol chal raha hai and this time I am not even 1% satisfied with my khatiya writing not getting proper dialogues that’s why so late and till I get satisfied I will not post doesn’t matter how long it takes

  5. Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    Luna ishqie….suspense dhamaka…..really am impressed…..And i loved rumya emotional scene as i felt as the best…And the end shivaay gets shocked to see Om…actually am shocked with it….Oh yaar….really u nailed it and Taara-anika conversation….especially that pinky promise ……i loved it as it was so cute….The way you portrayed Tejvi i felt you have really done justice to the pair…… and rudra…..i really felt very much when he was saying sso that he is dump oberoi only…….And ishqie….i liked each and every one in this ff and precap ….brotherly moment ….am waiting……well dear luna have you added prinku in this one or not ? As brotherly moment was put as the precap….sisbromance came into my mond…That’s why I asked……Dear…..So my critic luna ishqie……i am much impressed with your creativity…..And
    loved it…..fabulous !!!!!

  6. Diya

    Great writing. It’s one thing to get great story ideas and another to have the patience and skill to organize, develop, and write it down in a compelling manner. You got all of that. Very interesting threads. I loved the whole episode but What I specially liked
    1. Jhanvi giving good to Tej. I felt so satisfied.

    2. The natural interaction between Anika and Shivaay

    3. Om, Om, Om. I love this character so much.he is like a raindrop that hasn’t touched the ground yet. Beautiful and pure.

    4. Is there an amnesia track. So curious!

    Besides the above, my ever favorite Rudra. And Tara prefers football rather than beauty contests. Awesome!!

    If it doesn’t interfere with your creative plan, I would like it if Anika did not ask Tara to hide anything from her dad. I thought it did not go with the Anika I know.

    • Luna

      |Author

      Thanks Diya, and about Anika asking Tara to hide something from his dad, well there’s a lot to be revealed and when it will be revealed, u will get ur answers

  7. Ishqkum

    |Registered Member

    Supper Luna .but I am having lots of questions .whether Tara is real daughter oof shiviya?.anika is wat to shiviya and y she is taking care of Tara? Etc .plz reveal all this soon my mind is making me thing wat all this .so interesting. Update next episode asap

    • Luna

      |Author

      Thanks Ishqkum, I’ll reveal about Shivika slowly, just wait a little…if I will everything now then there will be no fun.

  8. sara.

    hey all..
    i m silent reader of ishqbaaz(written updates)
    haven’t read any ff till now..
    bt when i saw the link “ff by luna” i couldn’t stop myself from reading nd found out it as awesome as i expected…
    (i m fan of ur comments also..๐Ÿ˜)
    keep up the good work luna ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  9. Tanavi

    This has to be one of my fav FF. you’ve portrayed everyone’s emotions so well and I can’t wait for the obros hug after 8 years๐Ÿ˜† When r u going to update the next episode??

  10. Tanavi

    This has to be one of the best FF I’ve read. You’ve portrayed rudra’s emotions so well! When r u going to update?

  11. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Luna dear, hope you remember me, I am a member of ishqbaaz family and the author of ishqbaaz ff by sat.
    Ok anyways my ff is bakwaas and can never attract many people,but your ff is just like a magnet attracting many people. I really loved it to the core.
    You are thinking with your suspense shots, I loved it really
    Wondering who would be the mother of tara
    Many questions in the Mind and the only answer would be waiting for your next episode.
    Please update the next Part ASAP
    And I am really sorry for the late comment, please forgive me of you can, and if you can please please read my ff also

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