Ishq Wala Love………….

Guys, Mitali here with next os. Thanks to all the commenters and silent readers. Guys I love all of u very much. Thanks for being the support.
Here I go,
I was stepping down the stairs of temple, just then; saw a beautiful girl going to enter the temple. I just went flowing in her. She was looking awesome in that red churidaar and in those beautiful earnings which were hanging down her ears. Her beauty left me surprised, thinking how a girl can be so beautiful. She went up, I left the temple. She left me thinking only about her. Just then, my mom spoke “Kunj, we need to leave for the hospital.” I was confused. Mom said “Kunj, u need to remove your teeth. Did u forget it?” “Oh ya.” I said holding my head. “Mom I don’t want to go.” I said.
“U have to go.” My mom ordered. Just then, “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…………….” I shouted holding my left jaw. “See u need to go and u have to go, it’s my order.” My mom again ordered. I nodded in yes.
We reached the hospital. The receptionist made our way to the dentist cabin. On the door I read letters written in bold “DR TWINKLE TANEJA”
We entered and I said “Excuse me.” her back was facing us, I think she was reading something. Her one look surprised me. She was the girl same, I saw in the temple.
“Please sit.” Words came from her mouth. We sat and my mom told her “my son’s tooth is troubling him.” She nodded, noted the things my mom said. “Sir please come here and sit, I need to check your teeth.” She said.
I did as she said. I sat and was just looking at her. She asked me to open my mouth. She started looking in it as every dentist does. My eyes were following hers. Just then, she said “your left jaw tooth which is right at the corner is troubling u na, so I think we should remove it. And yes that tooth is moving slightly. I mean its root is not that strong to hold it, so we have to remove it by doing a small operation.”
“OPERATION.” I shouted. “No, I would never do it.” This scared me.
“Shut up Kunj. U have to do this operation. That tooth is troubling u from when, almost 6 months.” My mom shouted at me. “mom.” I said. but my mom was not in a mood to listen. I ended by giving up. “When shall we remove the tooth?” My mom asked. “Now days I’m busy with other patients, but I will be available on this Friday.” Twinkle said. “Okay, this Friday is done.” My mom said. “Fine.” Twinkle said. “Thank you Dr.” My mom thanked her.
“It’s my duty.” Twinkle replied. I was flowing in her. “Kunj, let’s go.” My mom said. But, my leg wasn’t ready to move, as if it was stuck on the ground. My mom shouted “Kunj, we have to go.” I was stuck in one place, only looking her doing her work. At last my mom dragged me out.
At home, sitting in my room, I was only thinking about her. Her face was so beautiful; her eyes made me feel as if I was in an ocean, her pink bubbly cheeks so cute, and her rosy lips they were just awesome. Just then, my best friend Ayaan, entered.
“So bro what did the doctor.” He said……. “I think he said to remove your teeth.” Ayaan continued.
“She.” I said smiling. “She, the dentist is girl.” He said. I nodded.
“U r right she said to remove my teeth.” I said. “Kunj, I think u like her. The smile on your face shows everything.” Ayaan said smiling. My back was facing, as he said this I turned to him.
“She was too good yaar. Just today, I saw her in temple and now in the hospital.” I said.
“What is her name?” Ayaan asked. “Dr. Twinkle Taneja.”
“U know she is famous dentist in Mumbai.” Ayaan said. “I like her. Yes I like her.” I said.
“Soch le bhai, nahi toh shaadi ke baad tere saare daath nikal legi.” Ayaan joked. “Let her do that, but for now she has taken my life. Yaar I never saw a girl so beautiful.”
“Bhai, u r gone mad.” Ayaan said poking me. I didn’t reply and started my music system, the very first song was this……………………..
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal paas rehta nahi
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal paas rehta nahi
Ye tujhse hi milne ko chaahe
Ye teri hi karta hai baatein
Kya tum ho… Kya tum ho wohi
Kya tum ho… Kya tum ho wohi
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Teri aankhon ke raste ye chale jaata hai
Jo bulaaun main kabhi, laut aata nahi
Bekhabar ye zamaane se takraata hai
Bedhadak mujhse kehta hai “Main hoon yunhi”
Ye tujhse hi milke huaa hai
Jo teri nazar ne chhuaa hai
Kya tum ho, Kya tum ho wohi
Kya tum ho, Kya tum ho wohi..
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal………. (Song From purani jeans)
This song was perfectly fitting my mood. Ayaan saw me like for the first time. I was really going mad for her. I was dancing like a mad. Ayaan tried to control me, but I wasn’t in control.
The day came when I had to remove my teeth. I reached hospital. Entered looking at Twinkle, she was ready to the operation. She asked my mom to go out, made me place myself, comfortably on the chair. She was about to give me injection (I think u all got to know which injection.), but stopped. I opened my eyes, I think she noticed the big frown on my forehead.
She said “Why r u frowning?”…..”There’s no need.”
“I’m scared, therefore response to stimulus. This frown appeared on my face.” I said. “I think u should not be scared.” These soft words from her mouth entered my ears. I saw ready the operation. After 3 hours, (I don’t know many hours r required for the teeth operation) I wasn’t able to speak at all, only Twinkle’s soft voice were entering in my ears.
She said “Kunj, u you will be perfectly able to speak after 3 – 4 weeks.”……. “And after that u have to eat a lot of ice-cream.” “I heard her, oh god 3 – 4 weeks, I have to pass, that to without speaking. No this is not possible, I want to tell her how much I love her.” I thought. But I couldn’t help it.
I stepped out of the room and saw Ayaan and He said “u look like a red monkey.” I was angry at him, unfortunately couldn’t say a word, he took advantage and started teasing me. I was embarrassed and looked at Twinkle, she was smiling. This made me happy, her one smile made me happy.
“Look I’ll show you in the mobile, u really look like a red monkey.” I had a look in the mobile and yes I accepted that I was looking like a red monkey. My left cheek was swollen.
After 3 – 4 weeks, I was able speak, this made me more happy and my tooth that was troubling me, it stopped. Whole thanks to Dr. Twinkle Taneja.
I rushed to the hospital, entered her cabin that to without knocking. She shouted at me, for not knocking her door. I sat down.
“Kunj, is everything alright.” She asked. I said slowly as I wasn’t able to speak so clearly “Dr Taneja…….plea….se c…an u come with me for an outing if u r free.” I think this surprised Twinkle.
“Just tell me.” she said. “What?” I asked. “R u flirting with me.” Twinkle said. I think she knew the main reason for asking her for an outing.
“No, no, but why do u think this.” I said. “Actually, ask my male patients ask a date with me, but I don’t accept them.” She said which shocked me. “Oh! But I’m not. I just want to meet u like a friend and not like a patient. I want to know more about u.” I said while shying. “If u don’t like me then I will definitely come with u as your friend, so friends.” She said forwarding her hand to me.
“Friends.” I said shaking my hand with hers. We went out for a walk type for her but date type for me. After that day I always had the fear to lose my friend, Twinkle.
In the way I asked her if I can ask her personal questions. She said okay.
“What’s your favourite colour?” I said.
“Orange” Twinkle said. I looked at my shirt it was orange colour.
“What’s your favourite food?” I said.
“Paneer” I thought for a minute, “It wasn’t my favourite, my favourite was chicken.”
“What’s your favourite flower?”
“Rose” mine was also rose.
“Who’s your favourite hero and heroine.”
“Hmmmmmmmmm……………….Ranveer Singh and Deepika Padukone. I love their Jodi. What’s your?” she said.
“Mine Salman khan and Priyanka Chopra.” Oh no! Only two things matched.
“What’s your favourite sport?” I asked.
“Cricket. Strange na.” Twinkle said.
“It’s not strange at all, I have many girl friends who love cricket.” I said.
‘What? How many girlfriends u have.” She said surprising me.
“No, no, no, no. I don’t have any girlfriend, I mean that my friends who r girls love cricket.”
“Oh! I thought……………” Twinkle said. She started laughing “No, nothing like that.” I said.
“Last question, who’s your love?” I asked her which made a silence in the atmosphere. After one minute, she said “No I don’t love anyone yet. Do u?”
“Yes I do.” I said. She cleared her throat and said “I think we should leave.” “okay.” I said. I loved the confusion. It brought a broad smile on Twinkle’s face.
I was madly in love with her. Ayaan asked me to propose her. I was too shy to do that.
“Kunj, see propose her or I will.” Ayaan said.
“Ouch” Ayaan shouted. Actually I throw a pillow on him.
“Don’t even think to do this. I will kill u if u propose my Twinkle.” I said to Ayaan.
“Okay, but propose her soon.” He said.
I decided to propose her. But, it wasn’t easy. I took classes from Ayaan as he already has a girlfriend. He made me stood in front of the mirror or in front of himself. He asked me to say I love u in front of the mirror. I said many times. But was very nervous to say this in front of her. I made myself ready. I called Twinkle and asked her to come to xyz place. She came as I instructed. Actually, it was my house’s back yard.
She saw nothing in that place inside of car. She shouted “Kunj, Kunj.” I entered in the scene and patted her on her back. She turned back and lost her balance, I held her in my arms. The moment was romantic, we shared an eye lock. I went deep in her eyes, they looked at ocean. (Guys her eyes weren’t blue colour.) I wanted to stay in that position forever, but this was messed by Twinkle. She said “Kunj”
We made a distance. I went a sat on my car’s back. “Kunj, why have u called me here?”
“Actually…………I will say later. But for now, sit.” I said.
“Where?” Twinkle said. “On the car’s back.” I said.
“Kunj, I can’t sit there.” “U can, I will help u.” I held her hand and helped her to sit. I got down the car and kneeled down. She was surprised.
“Twinkle, I saw u in the temple for the first time, your first look made me mad. Then, I saw u in the hospital. I was your patient. I lied to u that I don’t like u. I had a fear of losing u. I love u Twinkle and I really love u.” she didn’t utter a word. I said “if u don’t like me then u can say no to me, I will never force u.” There was silence in the atmosphere. I hated the silence; it was just horrible; it wasn’t the mood I wanted. Then, suddenly Twinkle wrapped her arms around me. I was totally surprised. She expressed her feelings; she said “I too like u Kunj. I never liked anyone in my life. But when I saw u for the first time, I liked u. I never liked one, u looked more decent. I like u Kunj. Please don’t ask me how I fell for u. I can’t explain. U made your place in my heart. I never felt for u before and therefore, said I don’t like anyone. But after that I knew that I can’t live even one day without seeing your face.” I was happy, she accepted me. “Twinkle, u just like me, u don’t love me.” I said looking in her eyes.
“Kunj, it will take time for me to love u as I have realized it just some days ago. But, Kunj I will never back stab u. It’s true that I can’t live without u.” she said giving a peak on my cheek. Her peak surprised me.
“Kunj, I like your way to propose. All lovers propose in a romantic way, I mean with red roses, red balloons, and with some music. But u, u proposed me on a car’s back top. (Guys, top of the place where we keep our luggage.) I like your way.”
“Actually, Ayaan suggested me to do this.” I said…………….. “But, I have everything u said.” Twinkle was confused, I knew that.
“Ayaan, that person who said u r red monkey.” Twinkle said and laughed. I looked at her cute laugh, but at the same time felt embarrassed.
Then, I entered my car and removed a bouquet of red roses, one red balloon and turned on the music on my car stereo. Twinkle was surprised by my arrangement. The song played was……………………….Ishq wala love
Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love
I started showering the roses on Twinkle, she was astonished. I placed that balloon in her hand. I asked her hand to dance with me. she gave her hand.
We started dancing; I twirled Twinkle and held her in my arms. It was romantic moment, the same moment which I wanted.
The song continued………………..
Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love
Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love
I kissed her cheeks and forehead. I moved her hair from her back and kissed her neck. She shivered. She turned to me and kissed me. it was intense one. She kept her hand on my neck; I kept mine on her waist. The song continued…….
Kyon na aise hota
Jo milte tum ho jaate gum saath mere
Hote hote hoga samjhaye hum
Tham jaa aye tham O dil mere
Toota jaata jaata taara jab gira
Zara zyada zyada maangu dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maane na dil ye sarphira
Ishq wala love
Bada ye dil nadaan tha, par aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Jo khone ka tha dar tujhe pata nahi kyu zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love (x2)…….
As the song ended, our kiss too ended to have some air. I enjoyed the kiss. It was first time I kissed someone. Today from Twinkle and Kunj, we became Twinj.
Guys wait picture toh abhi baaki hai mere dost.
After 6 years
“Dad, place that cake here.” My daughter Priyanka said.
“Mom, happy birthday to u.” my son Rohan said to my lady love. Yes, u guess it right, it’s my Twinkle’s birthday. Look she entered the scene.
“Hi Twinkle.”
“Hi Kunj.”
“Happy Birthday.” “Thanks” she replied.
“mom come cut the cake placed here.” Priyanka and Rohan said. she was cutting the cake but…………Ayaan entered with his wife Naina.
“hello, my red monkey.” Ayaan teased me.
“Shut up.” I scolded him. Twinkle celebrated her birthday.
Just then, Ayaan said to me “Bhai Kunj, how many teeth did Twinkle remove till now.”
“None, only one when I meet her for the first time.” I said showing him my teeth. “Thanks yaar Ayaan for teaching me how to propose.”
“Mention not yaar. Ye toh yaaro-da-tashan hai.” He said which made me smile. “but, Kunj I want u to propose Twinkle once again. Please, because I couldn’t see it.”
“Ayaan no.” I said. “yes.” he said.
“Alright.” I said giving up. I held Twinkle’s hand which surprised her. I kneeled down and said “I love u Twinkle. I really love u 3,4,5,6, unlimited.”
“I love u too Kunj.” Yes guys now Twinkle doesn’t likes but loves me. we shared a hug and everyone clapped, even my kids.
Guys how was it.
I hope u liked it.
Guys, this is my last os. Actually, my school is starting from next Wednesday. Therefore, I have a lot of press on me, as it is my 9th std. but yes, I will surely write os when I get free time and when my next holidays arrive. I will really miss u people and the tei family and the tashan e ishq show. U guys have showered your love on me and I’m very happy about it. Thank you once again to everyone on TU. All my inspirations Ritzi, Tara di, Shatakshi di, Krystal di, Sweetie di, Aakanksha di and many more. Soory for not taking many names as thee r many people. I love all my readers. Everyone on TU. I will really miss u people. U know first in the morning, I used to check TU for new updates. I will miss this and commenting on others ff and writing os.
Guys, before going from TU, I want u all to write your birth dates. I know it’s weird but please I want to note this down because u all r my friends.
And I want to know if anyone’s matches with me. Mine is 5th Feb.
Guys do put your valuable comments even silent readers. I will be waiting for them.

Till Then Bye!

Credit to: Mitali


  1. harna

    awesome.i wil seriously miss u…all the best and study hard..really?? ur birthday on 5/2..hihi.. mine on 2/5…

    • Mitali

      Thanks harna. I will miss u too. U r regular commenter on my os. Thanks for being a support

  2. Dheemahee

    hey I have read all your os and all I loved it a lot best of luck for your 9th do well hope see u soon . My b’day is on 29 of june one day after jasmine mams b’day by miss u

    • Mitali

      Thanks Dheemahee. I will miss u. And u r so lucky to have your birthday after has jas mam

  3. Krystal

    mine is 3 rd december n yeah mitali though u will nt write os bt read the ffs plsss n yeah h asked me whether i saw badmashiyaan or nt yeah i saw badmashiyaan first day first show coz i m very big fan of sidhant after watching tutiya dil n bang bang bankok these too r his films n they r awwsuum

    • Mitali

      Thanks to reply my question n I too have seen all movies of sidhant sir. Really its too good. Yes I will be reading all ffs. No need to take tension. I will miss u Krystal di.

  4. callmenazu

    Hey mitali d os was just mindblowing loved it and my birthdate and month is 25th december

  5. zikra

    Hii mitali yaar OS ws jus osmmmmmmmm loved it do write more n my bdy is on 24 August….

  6. jasmin

    Loved it mitali….will miss u…
    my birthday comes on 4th juve…
    it is arriving soooooooon…….

    • Mitali

      Thanks Jasmin. I will miss u. N HAPPY BIRTHDAY ? in advance. Enjoy your birthday. Have fun. Thanks

    • Mitali

      Thanks Lama. I will really miss you ? people. U all have being a great support for me. And encouraged me to write more

    • Mitali

      Thanks Romaisah. U commented on my os for the first time. I will miss u a lot. Thanks again

  7. fiona

    mitali i was feeling gloomy when u said that it is your last os
    but when i read further i feel happy that u give os in your holidays
    this os was awesome and new style of proposing
    it’s your second os in which twinkle is doctor
    loved the doctor patient romance it make me remember of show voh teri bhabi hai pagle
    u are a great writer and ya
    my b’day is on 14 of december

    • Mitali

      Thank you soooooooooooooo much Fiona. I really love u. I will miss u a lot. Yes I will write an os in my holidays. I will miss u. Thanks once again

  8. Anushka

    Hehehe urs and my birthday month r same. Earth received its gift on 19th Feb 2002.
    Nice one slot girl. Gonna miss u a lot? ??. Ah we both r ninethies. This one SLT was mind blowing. U nailed it girl?
    Best of luck for ur future…..
    Love u and ur ff? ❤ ? ? ? ? ? ? ??

    • Mitali

      Thanks Anushka. Yes we r in nineth. I really love u and all your os. They r really awesomeee. I’m much inspired by u. I’m gonna miss u very much. But I will read everyone’s os and ffs. N best of luck for your future also. Thanks again love ❤.?

  9. Shatakshi

    Hey Mitali
    The slot was rocking as always
    N plzzz do continue writing whenever u get time…becoz u write soo well
    N thanks for admiring us as it means a lot…
    And and and my first cry on 21st March 2001

    • Mitali

      Thanks Shatakshi. U r really very awesome. I love u. I will miss you ? a lot. N u inspired me a lot. Thanks a lot. I will never forget u and other people.

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  11. Sayeeda

    Yr Mitali ur r QUEEN OF OS OF TEI ..
    ur os always leaves a huge smile on my face….woow yrr enjoyed a lot.
    Hope u come back with another dhmakedar os whenever ur free..
    And yah mine is 17 October…. love u nd miss u

    • Mitali

      Thanks a lot Sayeeda di. I love u. Oh god your comment it literally made me shy. Really your comment made me ? a big smile on my face. I will miss u too di. Really u have been a great support to me.

  12. tara

    mitali..sorry couldnt comment.. i was very busy… u os was superb.. nd i will miss u too yaar..
    and m really glad that i could inspire u.. i was like “aww…sho sweet of u” 😛 😛
    i actually remembered my time.. though my inspirational character is missing.. avantika i miss her a lot..nyways coming to u i love u and all ur ffs… miss u a lot plzz come back soon..with another dhamaka!!
    btw my b’day is on 24th january..

    • Mitali

      Thanks Tara di. Really your comment made me happy. I will too miss u. Really u r my inspiration. Thanks once again and yes I love u a lot.

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