Ishq Ka Rang Safed 4th September 2016 Fan Fiction

Dadi(angry)- How can u bring me here? U all go, I m not going to go in.
Viplav(enters)- Dadi, please!
Dadi- Viplav??
Viplav- Aapko meri kasam.
And so she agrees to go in.
Shalu and Pankaj get happy.
Shalu- Bhaiya where’s bhabhi?
Viplav(angry)- Let her go anywhere, I don’t care.
Shalu- Bhaiya what’s wrong with u? Why are u saying this?
Dhaani(enters)- Let him say Shalu! Some people don’t understand thr value of relationships!
Shalu tries to speak but then Pankaj keeps his hand on her shoulder and signs her not to say anything. Vitharva are watching all this silently. Pankaj(to Vitharva)- Chalo.
They both smile. And they all go inside the police station.
Dhaani(to police)- Can we meet Kanak and Dashrath, remember I had told u in the morning?
Police- Oh yes, but this is for the last time u r meeting them, after that u cannot even bail them!
Dhaani, Pankaj and Shalu are shocked.
Viplav- Its okay sir, who wants them to be out of jail.
Dhaani looks at Viplav teary eyed. But Viplav ignores and looks at the other side.
Shalu- Sir, where are they?
Police calls another policeman and asks him to take them to kt and dt.
He takes them, and then they are in front of the jail where Kanak is sitting.(Dashrath is in another jail?)
Dhaani(teary eyed)- Maaji!
Kanak hears the voice and stands up. Tears fall from her eyes as she sees them.
Kanak(in tears)- Dhaani, Viplav? U came to meet me?
Dhaani nods in tears.
Kanak(smiles along with tears)- Viplav, beta how are u?
But Viplav looks at the other side.
Dhaani(whispers to Viplav)- At least smile Viplav!
Viplav(whispers back)- I m come here only because of your kasam, or I would have not even come here, is that not enough for u?
Kanak feels bad but she doesn’t show it.
Kanak(to Sushma)- Maaji…
But Sushma also does the same as Viplav, in fact she leaves from there and Viplav follows her..
Kanak is now in tears.
Dhaani(assures her)- Don’t worry maaji everything will be fine! I will let u out of here!
She was about to go but Kanak interrupts her.
Kanak- Wait beta! I want to tell u something.
Dhaani turns to her.
Kanak- I m very sorry beta, I didn’t understand u, but now I m feeling as if I have committed a great sin,(joins her hands)Please forgive me!
Dhaani- No maaji! Don’t say sorry! I have already forgiven u…
Shalu(smiles along with tears)- Maa..
Kanak(smiles)- Shalu..
Shalu(smiles)- U know I m going to be a mother! (Shies)
Kanak gets super happy..
Kanak- May u always be happy, my dear!
Pankaj- Maa!
Kanak- Pankaj beta, now I m feeling that u are the best match for my daughter!
Pankaj and Shalu smiles, but Dhaani is having tears in her eyes..
She slowly leaves from there and goes to a place away from everyone and cries…
Dhaani(in tears)- Why? Why always my family has to suffer? Viplav and Dadi are not ready to forgive Maa and Dadaji, Shalu is going to be a mother but she has to solve these problems instead of taking care of her baby and herself, Viplav is angry with me and what not is happening with us!
Suddenly she feels a hand on her shoulder. She turns back and it is none other than Viplav. Dhaani suddenly hugs Viplav tightly and cries. Viplav hugs her back.
Viplav(still hugging)- Dhaani, I m sorry! I know u were hurt but I m really sorry for hurting u, plz forgive me!
But Dhaani only cries. She breaks the hug but then finds no one there. She then realises it was all a dream!
The episode ends.

Precap- Viplav tries to talk to Vitharva but they ignore him and run away. Viplav feels hurt while Dhaani is seeing all this secretly.

Sorry for not replying to all of u, actually I m busy so couldn’t reply?

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  1. Aiswarya

    Thank u sooooo much cutie for the update

  2. Shruthy

    OMG this was soo good Lou! Hats off to you for bringing IKRS everyday for us.
    We It has been 8 days that a beautiful journey was to end, but you actually brought its back to life and you made a family stay gather forever. Thank you so much.
    I feel really sad for Dhaani. She has done nothing but still she suffers the most in everything. I am in fact angry with Viplav’s anger. She had always been telling him the truth about his family but that day, he felt his family more true and faithful then Dhaani, he left her alone thinking she is insulting and mistreating his family. Then who was Dhaani ? Wasnt she family?
    And now that he comes to know the truth, he is showing anger towards them. If only he believed at least one of her words 6 years ago, then everything would have been fine on this date. Dhaani was insulted, cheated and evicted from the house by those, who today she forgave because she knows to respect the elders and to love. I can understand he feels being duped by his own grandfather and mother, but it’s not like he wasnt to be alerted earlier. Because Dhaani has always been trying to. And now, when she asks him to forgive them, he gets angry. I mean… that’s unfair.
    Precap shows children showing anger on Viplav and the latter feeling hurt. I don’t know if it’s because he is harsh with Dhaani, but poor children, they might have been hurt of something that they react like this. Oh, wait! They have been watching the drama at the police station na? Shayad iss liye hi dono gusse mein hain.
    I wish everything gets better soon and that the V.Tripathis are shown happy shappy! <3
    I am actually sorry, I feel I have been bursting out some emotions. xD I actually love the way you are taking the storyline, and I am thankful to you for that. But I just felt angry seeing Dhaani crying. Like if they would have shown as an episode, I think I would have said that na? So thought to do the same, as you are bringing inter alia the show.
    If my words hurt you, please forgive me.

  3. Aiswarya

    guys where are u all????

    1. Meghs

      Aish and annu i am here dear was feeling unwell from 2 days so couldn’t come

      1. AanyaSingh

        Hi Meghs, hw r u now? Sorry wasn’t knowing that u aren’t well. What happened? R u ok now? Pl take care of urself.

  4. Sujie

    Episode was emotional….. And I yoo became so thinking if it would have been on screen as the continued story of IKRS instead of a fan fiction.
    Good job dear….keep it up 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. AanyaSingh

      Thanks for the links Sweetie?.

    Thats the link for my FF. I’m improving writing it. Do please drop ur valuable comments and tell me what to improve. I completed 13 episodes and they are veryyy. Short u can read it in one go…hope to see ur comments

    1. Aiswarya

      I read 5 episodes
      It is very nice one but I’m not familiar with those characters so was not able to imagine them

      1. Shrinjal

        Aishwarya from ep 14 leap vll be there so u can start frm ep 14 onwards

  6. AanyaSingh

    Hi Sweetu, thank u so much for today’s update, eagerly wait for it everyday?. An episode of different emotions it was, sadness, anger, repentance, a bit of helplessness, all were there. Vips’ & Dadis’ reactions tell that when ur own people r the cause for ur pain, smtimes it just goes out of ur toleration power to bear it. It is really too difficult at times to overcome it and to think of forgiving that person seems quite impossible. And this is what Dadi & Viplav r going through. Good to see that Kanak is repentive of her deeds. Very well described Sweetu, keep it up.????.

  7. I fell in love with “My girl is a liar” and read all of them. Thank you! I always come by to read IKRS and I really it readimg it.

  8. I fell in love with “My girl is a liar” and read all of them. Thank you! I always come by to read IKRS fiction and I really enjoy it reading it.

  9. AanyaSingh

    Hello everyone?. All the remaining family members, where r u all? Requesting u to please come and comment, where r all of u hidiing yaar???

    1. Shrinjal

      Aanya pls read my new FF
      Hope 2 see ur cmnts

      1. Meghs

        Hi sri u here … welcome dear… sry i think i greeted u lately

      2. AanyaSingh

        Sure, just give me smtime.?

    2. Aiswarya

      Hiii diiii .guys I’m missing all of u plz come n comment na it seems all of u are busy

  10. Meghs

    Thnks for update cutie… its quite interesting it seem continuation to real ikrs well done dear

    1. Shrinjal

      Arre didi…gussa mat karao….atleast u welcomed….luv u…thnx…luv u…tyy

      1. Meghs

        Shri when i become angry on u? bolo

    2. Arre nahi…I meant don’t make ME angry on u

      1. Meghs

        Awwe ye kya baat hui ur angry on ur di? I won’t do anything that make u anger shri..

    3. Shrinjal

      That’s like my Meghu di:-)

  11. Aiswarya

    Areeb di u also seems to be missing ??

    1. Areeb

      Ary mujhy yeh sad face k sath nahi karo larki! You called me… or me tapak gaey! ?

  12. Areeb

    Chottu, Behtreen! ? You are writing so good! ? Though you are not showing up yourself in comment section, but it’s okay! Must be busy!

  13. Areeb

    Hello Family. ? Kahan hein saab?

    Renu ma’am – Hope you are well with your family. Maybe, you are busy with preparations of your cultural eve. 🙂
    Arshi – Larki tum kuch zayada hi busy ho gaen studies mein. ?
    Zee – All good? ?
    Maria, Porkodi ma’am, Latha ma’am, Nimisha ma’am, Ola ma’am, Kavitha ma’am, Maha – Hope all are well with what they are doing. Try to come up to say a simple Hi.. so that we could know all are good in their places! x

    1. Areeb ma’am… Even I am a part of ur family but u didn’t address me… So sad

      1. Areeb

        You aren’t missing no? ? And please stop using ma’am. ? It’s Areeb only.

      2. Aiswarya

        Yar u was commenting na
        Di are calling out the names of those who are missing since few days??

    2. Shrinjal

      I forgot it sorry…areeb?

  14. Hello Areeb weekend was busy – but here I am. Kya haal? U r right on all counts. Arshi is missing in action and so is our little writer saheba. Where are all? Koi sabko bulaye. Renu is also not here to take the roll call :(.

    1. Areeb

      I’m good, thank you. ? My weekend was good! ? Oh, your logo changed. That yellow one was eye catching though.

      Yeah right, Renu ma’am & Arshi are expert in shout out. I tried but forget some names; Swetha, Saraswathi ma’am, saras ma’am * I’m still working on my memory * . ?

  15. Hi everyone. Sorry I haven’t been commenting because I am away from home attending a seminar at the moment.
    Hello Louella The story is shaping up really well. I like it that Vip and Dadi are not going to forgive and forget so easily….after all they lost a much loved father / son …..Dhani is such a complicated person…..on the one hand she is so kind and understanding and on the other she is not open to VIP’s line of thought. …..I guess lack of education plays an important role in the development of a person.
    LOUELLA. You are doing a dood job. Am enjoying this.

    1. Sorry meant good job Louella.

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