Ishq Ka Rang Safed 28th August 2016 Fan Fiction

All look towards the person and a wide smile comes on their face. Yes its Shalu and Pankaj. Dhaani goes and hugs Shalu while Viplav hugs Pankaj. Vitharva (Vidha+Atharva) look confused. They both go to Dhaani. Atharva slightly pulls Dhaani’s pallu to call her(bechare ki height nahi pahuchti na๐Ÿ˜‚)
Dhaani bends down to him.
Dhaani(caresses his face)- What happened beta?
Atharva(points towards Shalu and Pankaj)- Mama who are they?
Dhaani(smiles)- That aunty is your bua and that uncle is your fufa (sorry if its wrong)
Vidha(innocently)- They are my bua and fufa also?
Dhaani(smiles)- Yes mera baccha. Now u both go and greet them.
Vitharva go to Shalu and Pankaj. They both take their blessings. Shalu and Pankaj get very happy. Shalu lifts Atharva while Pankaj lifts Vidha๐Ÿ˜
Shalu(to Viplav)- Bhaiya are they both your children.
Viplav- Moti they are mine and (keeps his hand on Dhaani’s shoulder) Dhaani’s children.
Shalu(fake anger)- U still call me moti na.
Vitharva, Pankaj and Vidha laugh while Shalu pouts. But someone is missing, yes its Dadi.
Shalu(looking around)- Where’s Dadi?
ViDha look behind and find Sushma sitting angrily. Pankaj and Shalu keep Vitharva down and go to Sushma.
Shalu(hugs Sushma)- Dadii angry with me?
But Sushma turns the other side. Shalu feels bad but then smiles and bends down to Sushma.
Shalu- Dadi, I know u are angry with me because I did not come here for so many days infact so many years. But Dadi I really missed u sooo much. Now when I m come, plz at least to me once.
Sushma could not control and she finally hugged her tight. Shalu, ViDha and Pankaj smile.
Sushma(breaks the hug with tears on her eyes)- U know I was so alone here. Promise me, now u will never leave me and go!
Shalu(keeps her hand on Sushma’s hand)- Never! From now onwards I will stay here only.
Pankaj- Then where will I stay?
All laugh at him.
Sushma- U both must be tired na. Come on go to your room and get fresh.
They all leave for their respective rooms.
ViDha and Vitharva are in ViDha’s room.
Dhaani(in a hurry)- Vidhu, Atharva beta come fast, u have to go for school na.
But Vitharva are sitting with a pout on their face.
Dhaani(bends down to them)- What’s the matter? Don’t u want to go to school?
Atharva- Mama today bua and fufa have come na..
Vidha- So plz let us stay at home with them.
Viplav- Okay, so no school today.
Vitharva get very happy and hug Viplav.
Dhaani(stands up)- No no, u have to go to school today. After school u play with bua and fufa.
Vitharva(together)- No…
Viplav- Let it be Dhaani, its okay.
Dhaani- But Viplav…
Viplav- Dhaani …
Dhaani(pouts)- Okay…
Vitharva- Yaaayyyy!!!
Dhaani- But tomorrow u both have to go to school, okay?
Vitharva(together)- Okay mama.
Atharva- Mama can we go to Bua’s room now?
Dhaani(smiles)- Okay go, but don’t trouble them.
They both go running.
Viplav- Today our family is complete.
Dhaani- But without Maaji and Dadaji..
Viplav(interrupts)- Don’t talk about them Dhaani, they can never be a part of our family, never!
Dhaani- Sorry!
Viplav- No sorry vorry, if u give me something then only I will forgive u.
Dhaani- What u want?
Viplav points to his cheeks.
Dhaani- Do u want a slap?๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Viplav ignores it and sit on the bed with a pout on his face (he is acting to get a kiss from Dhaani๐Ÿ˜‚)
Dhaani feels bad for Viplav and so she sits near him. She takes a deep breath and gives a cute wala kiss on Viplav’s cheeks๐Ÿ˜ And she runs down while Viplav smiles watching her run.
Viplav(gives his killer smile๐Ÿ˜)- Sharma gayi๐Ÿ˜
The episode ends.

Precap- Viplav to teach Dhaani.(sorry for same precap๐Ÿ™)

75 comments

  1. Aiswarya

    |Registered Member

    Cutie atlast shalu n pankaj came I’m so happy sooooo happy ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Švitharva was sooooooo cute today โ˜บโ˜บwhen Atharva slightly pulling dhani’s pallu he was looking sooooo cute ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Švidhani’s scene was awesome loved so much ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Dadi made me remember my dadi๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Wished she could be with me now also ๐Ÿ˜Šprecap is very nice
    Viplav to teach dhani๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Don’t say sorry for same precap๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thank u so much Aiswarya di๐Ÿ˜˜ As everyone wanted Shalu and pankaj to be there in real ikrs, I brought it here๐Ÿ˜Š And now there will be many more entries which will remind u of old ikrs๐Ÿ˜‰ So be ready๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. Anya

    Thanks for the sweeeeeeeet family episode dear Ellu ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜. At last Shalu & Pankaj r there,after such a long time. Good to see them back, but what abt their kids๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜th
    Thought their kids wud also b there๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Best part was the last scene btwn ViDhani๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜i ooooo i am always eager for their romantic moments๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š. Good going Sweetie๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ

    • Renuverma

      |Registered Member

      Hi anya dear. Sorry cudnt catch up regular cments for last 2 days as elder one had come from college for 4 days he wud go back on Tuesday.
      Btw pl tell exact area in ludhiana. Is it model town

      • Anya

        Hi Renu๐Ÿ˜Š, me too missing u. But it’s ok, children shud b the first priority & specially wen they r away from home most of the time.
        I’m not staying at proper ludhiana Renu. The place where i stay is a 30 min run from ludhiana, it’s on the ludhiana chandigarh highway, Sri Bhaini Sahib.

      • Renuverma

        |Registered Member

        Ok . Need to discuss something regarding a location overthere.
        R u registered as i dont want to bother other tu freinds. If registered then i xan send a private message

  3. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Oh my.. Louella my princess you are writing so wonderful!! I’m just enjoying it!๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ bacho ki masti, Viplav ki masti!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ how cutely Atharva calls Dhaani by holding her pallu.. I can imagine each and everything๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Love you so much for this…โคโค

  4. Arshdeep

    |Registered Member

    Thank you Louella for the update๐Ÿ˜Š
    Yayy i guessed it right๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ It was Shalu and Pankaj
    Well described everything louella๐Ÿ‘Œ Very well done๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ #Proudsister๐Ÿ˜Ž

  5. Anita Roy

    Hi Louella. This is good
    I like where ……Vip points to his cheek and Dhani says …do you want a slap……very cheeky Louella. Looking forward to tomorrow’s episode.

  6. Areeb

    |Registered Member

    HAHA. Chotu, ittna cute episode!! Shalu came and will stay here, wow! ๐Ÿ˜ But sad buchon ka school miss ho gaya. ๐Ÿ˜‚

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thank u Areeb for commenting and also giving me a new name, Chotu๐Ÿ˜‚ Nah nah, sad nahi happy hona chahiye, ab mazaa aayega na๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Areeb

        |Registered Member

        Han. According to precap homeschooling hony wali hai not for the kids but for the mum! Sounds quite fun, actually! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚

  7. Saraswathi.j

    Dear Louella good writing happy to meet Shalu and pankaj with Childern at the end of the story you make Viplav also to forgive his mom and Dadaji ,to err is human to forgive is Devine ,even though Kanak is ” Brahmarakshsi mother in law ” it is common any mother looks fresh bahu not widowed as bahu ,so forgive her , and coming to Dt he already faced humiliation in the hands of kamini,Tp ,and Kanak and even from public so he is old forgive him also and advise Viplav to get them release on bail.

  8. Anya

    Waiting for Dhaani’s home schooling to start๐Ÿ˜time for more romantic moments๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. Sujie

    |Registered Member

    http://www.tellyupdates.com/soulmates-ikrs-episode-1/

    Do drop your comments …..

    Good morning everyone…

    Louellu soory for commenting late…… Anyways…loved the episode…..
    Good that ShaaJ are back…๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€
    And precap… Good job done by you…๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€ love you ….
    Love you all…have a good day โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

  10. Renuverma

    |Registered Member

    Hi Aish. Arshu ; anya; areeb; maria ; anita ; saraswathiji; puji ; elle n devga.
    Yesterday i had written hi msg to u all individually.
    Then i didn’t get the time to check back. Now when i have opened ip this oage found all messages deleted in moderation.

    A big hi to all of u.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  11. Anya

    Someone help me out please, not getting connected to today’s update, it’s showing 404 error, what’s the matter, hasn’t it been uploaded?

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