Ishq Ka Rang Safed 28th August 2016 Fan Fiction


All look towards the person and a wide smile comes on their face. Yes its Shalu and Pankaj. Dhaani goes and hugs Shalu while Viplav hugs Pankaj. Vitharva (Vidha+Atharva) look confused. They both go to Dhaani. Atharva slightly pulls Dhaani’s pallu to call her(bechare ki height nahi pahuchti na๐Ÿ˜‚)
Dhaani bends down to him.
Dhaani(caresses his face)- What happened beta?
Atharva(points towards Shalu and Pankaj)- Mama who are they?
Dhaani(smiles)- That aunty is your bua and that uncle is your fufa (sorry if its wrong)
Vidha(innocently)- They are my bua and fufa also?
Dhaani(smiles)- Yes mera baccha. Now u both go and greet them.
Vitharva go to Shalu and Pankaj. They both take their blessings. Shalu and Pankaj get very happy. Shalu lifts Atharva while Pankaj lifts Vidha๐Ÿ˜
Shalu(to Viplav)- Bhaiya are they both your children.
Viplav- Moti they are mine and (keeps his hand on Dhaani’s shoulder) Dhaani’s children.
Shalu(fake anger)- U still call me moti na.
Vitharva, Pankaj and Vidha laugh while Shalu pouts. But someone is missing, yes its Dadi.
Shalu(looking around)- Where’s Dadi?
ViDha look behind and find Sushma sitting angrily. Pankaj and Shalu keep Vitharva down and go to Sushma.
Shalu(hugs Sushma)- Dadii angry with me?
But Sushma turns the other side. Shalu feels bad but then smiles and bends down to Sushma.
Shalu- Dadi, I know u are angry with me because I did not come here for so many days infact so many years. But Dadi I really missed u sooo much. Now when I m come, plz at least to me once.
Sushma could not control and she finally hugged her tight. Shalu, ViDha and Pankaj smile.
Sushma(breaks the hug with tears on her eyes)- U know I was so alone here. Promise me, now u will never leave me and go!
Shalu(keeps her hand on Sushma’s hand)- Never! From now onwards I will stay here only.
Pankaj- Then where will I stay?
All laugh at him.
Sushma- U both must be tired na. Come on go to your room and get fresh.
They all leave for their respective rooms.
ViDha and Vitharva are in ViDha’s room.
Dhaani(in a hurry)- Vidhu, Atharva beta come fast, u have to go for school na.
But Vitharva are sitting with a pout on their face.
Dhaani(bends down to them)- What’s the matter? Don’t u want to go to school?
Atharva- Mama today bua and fufa have come na..
Vidha- So plz let us stay at home with them.
Viplav- Okay, so no school today.
Vitharva get very happy and hug Viplav.
Dhaani(stands up)- No no, u have to go to school today. After school u play with bua and fufa.
Vitharva(together)- No…
Viplav- Let it be Dhaani, its okay.
Dhaani- But Viplav…
Viplav- Dhaani …
Dhaani(pouts)- Okay…
Vitharva- Yaaayyyy!!!
Dhaani- But tomorrow u both have to go to school, okay?
Vitharva(together)- Okay mama.
Atharva- Mama can we go to Bua’s room now?
Dhaani(smiles)- Okay go, but don’t trouble them.
They both go running.
Viplav- Today our family is complete.
Dhaani- But without Maaji and Dadaji..
Viplav(interrupts)- Don’t talk about them Dhaani, they can never be a part of our family, never!
Dhaani- Sorry!
Viplav- No sorry vorry, if u give me something then only I will forgive u.
Dhaani- What u want?
Viplav points to his cheeks.
Dhaani- Do u want a slap?๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Viplav ignores it and sit on the bed with a pout on his face (he is acting to get a kiss from Dhaani๐Ÿ˜‚)
Dhaani feels bad for Viplav and so she sits near him. She takes a deep breath and gives a cute wala kiss on Viplav’s cheeks๐Ÿ˜ And she runs down while Viplav smiles watching her run.
Viplav(gives his killer smile๐Ÿ˜)- Sharma gayi๐Ÿ˜
The episode ends.

Precap- Viplav to teach Dhaani.(sorry for same precap๐Ÿ™)

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  1. Aiswarya

    Thank u soooooo much louella ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Aiswarya

      I don’t know how the link got copied

      1. Aiswarya

        Link is not copied by me I taught it was copied by me unknowingly ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

      2. Areeb

        Oh no Aish. It’s not by you. ๐Ÿ˜‰ It’s TU’s thingy.. it appears sometime to look back to the previous update of same slot.

    2. Mariyam123

      Again congratulations๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ U commented first today als๐Ÿ˜„

      1. Aiswarya


    3. Hi Ashi,๐Ÿ˜Š pl tell me one thing, hw come ur comment uploaded at 6:36pm, i also checked around the same time but didn’t get connected, it showed an error๐Ÿ˜ž

      1. Aiswarya

        TI when I checked during 6:30 the site was showing 404 error I was sooo angry ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ nut when I checked during 6:35 it got connected ๐Ÿ˜Šn I commented after reading ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  2. Areeb

    All right second update! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜

    1. Mariyam123

      I only don’t know how it got posted two times๐Ÿ˜“

      1. Aiswarya

        Yesterday also it was like this after sometime one dissapered

      2. Areeb

        Yesterday too it was posted two times, and on which I commented that post was deleted. So that, today I commented on both updates. ๐Ÿ˜‚ this is ghaltiyon sy seekhna. ๐Ÿ˜‚

        And just noticed in excitement I wrote all right instead of alright. ๐Ÿ˜‚

      3. Mariyam123

        Areeb, kehte hai na, Dudh ka jala chaach bhi phukk phukk ke peeta hai๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚Today I realised its true๐Ÿ˜‚

      4. Areeb

        Oh yes. ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ˜‚

  3. Nice episode Louella

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot Pooja๐Ÿ˜˜It means a lot to me๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    2. Renuverma

      Puji iam waiting for u to register

      1. I couldn’t register didi – it’s saying error..
        I m trying.. bad luck

      2. Didi I registered.. wat to do now

      3. Renuverma

        Great puji. Congrats by what name did u register

  4. Aiswarya

    Cutie atlast shalu n pankaj came I’m so happy sooooo happy ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Švitharva was sooooooo cute today โ˜บโ˜บwhen Atharva slightly pulling dhani’s pallu he was looking sooooo cute ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Švidhani’s scene was awesome loved so much ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Dadi made me remember my dadi๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Wished she could be with me now also ๐Ÿ˜Šprecap is very nice
    Viplav to teach dhani๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Don’t say sorry for same precap๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much Aiswarya di๐Ÿ˜˜ As everyone wanted Shalu and pankaj to be there in real ikrs, I brought it here๐Ÿ˜Š And now there will be many more entries which will remind u of old ikrs๐Ÿ˜‰ So be ready๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  5. Devga

    Gud work… I just believed it is the real seeing the title… Is this ur stry dear??

    1. Mariyam123

      Yes, actually we didn’t want to get separated so I thought of continuing the story as we didn’t got a perfect ending๐Ÿ˜ช So I m continuing the story๐Ÿ˜Š

      1. Devga


  6. Aiswarya

    Viplav calling shalu Moti n shalu showing fake anger was sooo cute ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Mariyam123

      Yes it was soo cute๐Ÿ˜ I was imagining while typing๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  7. Thanks for the sweeeeeeeet family episode dear Ellu ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜. At last Shalu & Pankaj r there,after such a long time. Good to see them back, but what abt their kids๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜th
    Thought their kids wud also b there๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Best part was the last scene btwn ViDhani๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜i ooooo i am always eager for their romantic moments๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š. Good going Sweetie๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot Anya di๐Ÿ˜˜ Ohhh u are waiting for their kids๐Ÿ˜‚ U will soon have a surprise๐Ÿ˜ So keep reading๐Ÿ˜‰

    2. Renuverma

      Hi anya dear. Sorry cudnt catch up regular cments for last 2 days as elder one had come from college for 4 days he wud go back on Tuesday.
      Btw pl tell exact area in ludhiana. Is it model town

      1. Hi Renu๐Ÿ˜Š, me too missing u. But it’s ok, children shud b the first priority & specially wen they r away from home most of the time.
        I’m not staying at proper ludhiana Renu. The place where i stay is a 30 min run from ludhiana, it’s on the ludhiana chandigarh highway, Sri Bhaini Sahib.

      2. Renuverma

        Ok . Need to discuss something regarding a location overthere.
        R u registered as i dont want to bother other tu freinds. If registered then i xan send a private message

  8. Angel20

    Oh my.. Louella my princess you are writing so wonderful!! I’m just enjoying it!๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ bacho ki masti, Viplav ki masti!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ how cutely Atharva calls Dhaani by holding her pallu.. I can imagine each and everything๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Love you so much for this…โคโค

    1. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much Maria di๐Ÿ˜˜ Love u too๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. Arshdeep

    Thank you Louella for the update๐Ÿ˜Š
    Yayy i guessed it right๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ It was Shalu and Pankaj
    Well described everything louella๐Ÿ‘Œ Very well done๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ #Proudsister๐Ÿ˜Ž

    1. Areeb

      Mene bhi, right guess kiya! ๐Ÿ˜‚

      1. Arshdeep

        Wah wah๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    2. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much Arshi di๐Ÿ˜˜ Yes u guessed it right๐Ÿ‘ Ohh! Proud sister๐Ÿ˜‚ Woh toh hai๐Ÿ˜œ Proud toh hona hi chahiye, Louella jaisi behen iss duniya mein kahi nahi milegi๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

      1. Arshdeep

        Haha aur kya croron me ek h meri behn๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      2. Mariyam123

        Aap bhi croron mein ek ho๐Ÿ˜˜ Meri pyaari behen๐Ÿ˜˜

      3. Arshdeep


  10. Haripriyacivil

    Is this real episode or ff

    1. Angel20

      This is ff

    2. Aiswarya

      It is an ff

      1. Aiswarya

        We don’t want to get separated so louella planned this idea to stay together in this page๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  11. Hi Louella. This is good
    I like where ……Vip points to his cheek and Dhani says …do you want a slap……very cheeky Louella. Looking forward to tomorrow’s episode.

    1. Areeb

      Yes Yes! Me too like that slap wala dialogue. ๐Ÿ˜‚

    2. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much Anita Roy๐Ÿ˜˜If u don’t mind can I call u Anita or Anita di? If u don’t like it u can ignore this comment๐Ÿ˜Š

      1. Louella you can call me Anita …I’m not a formal person at all.

  12. Areeb

    HAHA. Chotu, ittna cute episode!! Shalu came and will stay here, wow! ๐Ÿ˜ But sad buchon ka school miss ho gaya. ๐Ÿ˜‚

    1. Mariyam123

      Thank u Areeb for commenting and also giving me a new name, Chotu๐Ÿ˜‚ Nah nah, sad nahi happy hona chahiye, ab mazaa aayega na๐Ÿ˜‰

      1. Areeb

        Han. According to precap homeschooling hony wali hai not for the kids but for the mum! Sounds quite fun, actually! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚

  13. Renuverma

    Hi elle. It is far better than iriginal episodes.๐Ÿ–’๐Ÿ–’๐Ÿ–’

    1. Areeb

      Hi Renu ma’am.

  14. Renuverma

    As saraswathiji said pl be optimistic while writing .

  15. Renuverma

    Till date whatever we wanted to see means r dreams are being realisedby yr wonderful story.
    Thks a lotfir it

  16. Renuverma

    Wish roopali guha reads yr story.
    Iam sure she would like to make IKRS SEASON 2.

  17. Aiswarya

    Good morning

  18. Dear Louella good writing happy to meet Shalu and pankaj with Childern at the end of the story you make Viplav also to forgive his mom and Dadaji ,to err is human to forgive is Devine ,even though Kanak is ” Brahmarakshsi mother in law ” it is common any mother looks fresh bahu not widowed as bahu ,so forgive her , and coming to Dt he already faced humiliation in the hands of kamini,Tp ,and Kanak and even from public so he is old forgive him also and advise Viplav to get them release on bail.

  19. Good Morning Everyone๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  20. Waiting for Dhaani’s home schooling to start๐Ÿ˜time for more romantic moments๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Aiswarya

      Me to di

  21. Sujie

    Do drop your comments …..

    Good morning everyone…

    Louellu soory for commenting late…… Anyways…loved the episode…..
    Good that ShaaJ are back…๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€
    And precap… Good job done by you…๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€ love you ….
    Love you all…have a good day โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

  22. Pujisaran

    renu didi…

  23. Renuverma

    Hi Aish. Arshu ; anya; areeb; maria ; anita ; saraswathiji; puji ; elle n devga.
    Yesterday i had written hi msg to u all individually.
    Then i didn’t get the time to check back. Now when i have opened ip this oage found all messages deleted in moderation.

    A big hi to all of u.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  24. Hey Loulella – hello all.
    Just to confirm – So is this our meeting place since IKRS was over?

  25. Angel20

    Hey Anya, here is the link

    Do drop your comments…

  26. Someone help me out please, not getting connected to today’s update, it’s showing 404 error, what’s the matter, hasn’t it been uploaded?

    1. Areeb

      Hi ma’am. I guess Louella hasn’t updated yet. I’m too checking it.

    2. Mariyam123

      Di I did not post it till now. I was very very busy. Now i m posting. Just check๐Ÿ˜‰

      1. Aiswarya

        Di is it showing error now also? ?

  27. Areeb

    Chottu, no update??

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