Ishq Ka Rang Safed 27th August 2016 Fan Fiction

IKRS has been the favourite show for all of us. We have been together for one year But this is not the end. We have many more months and days and years to be together Here we go with the continuation of our beloved show IKRS
Viplav is seen sleeping on his bed peacefully (its his house and not ashram) He is smiling while sleeping as if he’s having sweet pleasant dreams. Dhaani comes out of the bathroom with wet hair.
Dhaani(says to herself)- Oh God! Vidhu and Atharva got up but their father is still sleeping. Sometimes I feel who is younger?- children or Viplav?
She goes near him and sees him smiling.
Dhaani(smiles at his childishness)- Aww!! He looks so cute while smiling. I m not feeling to wake him up. But I have to do it. Sorry Viplav!
She tries to wake him up but in vain. He covers himself with the blanket.
Dhaani(worried)- Oh God! When will he wake up?
Vidha and Atharva enter the room (they stay in another room)
Vidha-Atharva(together)- Good morning mama.
Dhaani(kisses both of them)- Good morning beta.
Vidha(puts her hand on her forehead)- Papa did not wake up again.
Dhaani nods.
Atharva smiles and says something to Dhaani and Vidha which is muted. All three smile and Dhaani signs them to go to Viplav. Vidha and Atharva slowly get on the bed and Atharva slowly takes the blanket from Viplav’s face. Vidha goes near Viplav’s left ear while Atharva goes near Viplav’s right ear.
Vidha-Atharva(together scream near Viplav’s ears)- Good morning Papa!!!
Viplav wakes up in a shock. Dhaani, Vidha and Atharva laugh at him.
Viplav(shouts)- Do any children do this with their father.
Vidha-Atharva(together)- Yes.
Viplav(shocked)- Who does that?
Vidha-Atharva(together)- We.
Dhaani laughs at their answer while Viplav looks at her angrily. Seeing this Dhaani stops laughing.
Vidha(sits on Viplav’s lap)- Papa, why do u wake up late? We wake up early and u wake up late, bad na.
Viplav- U know if we wake up late, we become more handsome😜
Atharva(smiles)- Then I will wake up late tomorrow.
Dhaani(angry)- Then who will go to school?
Atharva(smiles)- Vidha…
Vidha(pouts)- And u also…
Dhaani(looks at the wall-clock)- Hey bhagwan! It’s 7. Vidhu, Atharva get ready fast. U have to go to school.
Vidha-Atharva(together)- yes mama.
And they run to their room to get ready.
Dhaani is also about to leave when Viplav holds her wrist and pulls her close to him.
Viplav(smiles)- Where are u going?
Dhaani- Leave na Viplav, children have to go to school…
Viplav- they are going to school not u…
Dhaani- Offoo!! Viplav leave me na.
Viplav- Then u have to give me something.
Dhaani- What?
Viplav- A tight hug and a lovely kiss.
Dhaani tries to escape but in vain.
Dhaani(pleads)- Viplav leave na, pleaassee!
Viplav- First give me what I want.
Dhaani(smiles)- okay.
She goes near him but then sprinkles the water on her hair on Viplav which makes him close his eyes and Dhaani quickly escapes.
Dhaani(near the door)- Catch me if u can…
Viplav smiles as she runs out of the room.
Dhaani goes down smiling remembering the morning incident.
She is lost in thoughts when she collides with Sushma.
Dhaani(panics)- Sorry dadiji! Woh actually I was thinking about Vi…(she stops here)
Sushma(teases)- About Viplav right?
Dhaani feels shy.
Vidha and Atharva come down.
Vidha-Atharva(together)- Good morning dadi.
Sushma(smiles)- Good morning beta.
Sushma(looks around)- Where is Viplav?
Dhaani- He is….
She was about to say something but Viplav comes down. And everyone’s attention goes to him.
Dhaani(smiles)- Here he is…
Viplav(hugs Sushma)- Good morning Dadi.
Sushma(pats him)- Again got up late. Learn something from Dhaani, she got up at 6 and started making breakfast for us and also other household work, and u?(pulls his ears)
Viplav(shouts in pain)- Ahh Dadi! Leave me na…
Vidha, Atharva and Dhaani giggle while Viplav shouts in pain
Dadi(still pulling his ears)- Will u wake up early tomorrow?
Viplav(shouts in pain)- Ha dadi, at least now leave me….
Sushma leaves him while Viplav holds his ears.
:- Hello everyone! Forgot me ha?
All look there and get happy.
The episode ends.

Precap- Viplav wants Dhaani to be educated and so starts teaching her. He actually wants her also to be a lawyer like him.

78 comments

  1. RANdomfANCreationz

    |Registered Member

    Hey louella u r doing a great job love u dear cant wait for our update hasan ji πŸ˜› i will refer u as hasan ji πŸ˜›
    and love ur writings
    now i feel as if I am watching IKRS
    amazing cutie pie
    love u πŸ™‚

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thank u so much fatarajo😘 Oh nah nah, i m not like hasan mam. She is far better than meπŸ˜ƒ even if u call me choti writer also will chalega😜😜

  2. Aiswarya

    |Registered Member

    I think I became soooooo late for commenting 😟😟yesterday I told u I will try to comment first😟😟

  3. Aiswarya

    |Registered Member

    It really looks like the continuation of IKRS 😊😊viplav is like me πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚getting up lateπŸ˜‚

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Oh really? Does it really look like the continuation of ikrs?

      Well he’s like u but completely opposite than me. I usually get up at 8 when there are holidaysπŸ˜‚ Just imagine what time i would be getting up during schoolπŸ˜‚ Waise during school i wake up at 6😒 I feel very sleepy but then who will do masti in school?πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  4. Sujie

    |Registered Member

    Arey waah!!! Superb πŸ™‚ louellu ….good job ..
    ViTharva are cute…so are Viplav and Dhaani…

    waise I am curious to know…koun agaya ya agayi??

  5. Shruthy

    |Registered Member

    Woow that was fantastic one. Loving the first episode. Haan shorter than usual written updates but at the same time writing everyday is not easy too. So that’s ok. ANyways cant wait for next post. And thank you for bringing IKRS everyday

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thank u so much Shruthy. Sorry for short updates but due to my projects, assignments, studies etcetretr i m not able to post long updates. But i will try my best to give u long updates😊

      • Shruthy

        |Registered Member

        dont thank me pagli :p dont be sorry for that too girl, i know it. do what you can. that’s already a lot na πŸ™‚

  6. Aiswarya

    |Registered Member

    Vidha n Atharva was soooo cute 😊😊 loved the way they told “GOOD MORNING PAPA” reading that part a huge smile appeared in my face😊😊
    Viplav asking” Do any children do this with their father ” vidha n Atharva saying “yes” viplav asking “who does that ” n they saying “we” all were soooooooooooooooooo cute 😊😊😊😊

    Vidha was asking “papa why do u wake up late” viplav answering “u know if we wake up late we become more handsome ” n Atharva saying “then I will wake up late tomorrow ”
    I was not knowing what feelings I was having but I was happy
    Dadi pulling viplav’s ears πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
    Vidhani’s scene 😍😍😍😍
    All was mind blowing

    • Anya

      Hi Aish, yes, i was also smiling infact laughing while reading the kids waking up Viplav scene😍😍😁and before waking Vips wen Vidhu, Atharva & Dhaani were whispering among themselves, knew there was going to b some mischief 😍😍😍

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thank u so much Aiswarya di😘 Even l was smiling while typingπŸ˜… And seriously I also loved those scenes. Khaash I could also make a serial, in which Mishal and Eisha would be there and the children and these scenes😍😍😍Omg! Thinking about this only I m smilingπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thank u so much Maria Dii😘😘 Aww!! Did u call me cute? Seriously? UnbelievableπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I and cute? But Vidhu and Atharva are most cute😍😍

  7. Anya

    Ahh! Found it at lastπŸ˜“they have put it in fan fiction & i was trying in the original one &wasn’t getting connectedπŸ˜’. Anyways.

    Coming to the epi, Ellu, Superb jobπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œit was like as if i’m watching it just as we used to watch everyday, great. 😘😘😘 So cute the family is looking together πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜and Viplav’s waking up was too goodπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜, the children r in full mischievous form😍😍😘😘😘sweetie pies both😊😊. Vidhaani’s romance is always 😘😘😊😊
    Keep going Sweetu πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜Šwaiting for tmrw’s update 😊😘😘

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thanks Anya di😘😘 i just saw your comment on previous page, asking me to give the link of the episode. So sorry! I was not available now. I was doing my workπŸ˜„ So sorry againπŸ˜“

  8. Anya

    Ellu, i thank u from my heartπŸ‘πŸ‘if it hadn’t been for ur so persistent effort, so many of us wudn’t have been here perhaps, so THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH, love u😘😘😘😘😘😘
    God bless Uβœ‹βœ‹πŸ™ŒπŸ˜Š

    • Mariyam123

      |Author

      Thank u so much Anya di😘 I never want to be separated from u all so I removed this idea and its really working. I m just on cloud nine🌈☁☁

  9. Lakshmi

    Louella good attempt…will try to read it regular but i cant assure u abt commenting dear….exam time yaar…now unit tests finished…next tuesday first term exams will start..but i promise u dear…will catch u on the day exams end…

    And ya renu di..saw ur comment on previous page…u were calling out my name so many times….and ya i also readed urs and sujie di’s exam tips…it was awesome…actually i too follow somewhat same time table…

  10. Arshdeep

    |Registered Member

    Cutie the episode is as cute as you are😊😘😘

    Is it Pankaj and Shalu who came in?πŸ€”πŸ€”

  11. SARAS

    hi louella princess Thanks for cute update just like u…

    I appreciate your efforts. .
    Lots of love to u…

  12. Areeb

    |Registered Member

    Of course! Shalu-Pankaj!! 😘 Excited much! 😘 Episode was so cute Louella!!! 😘😘 Lol, but confusion.. I thought you would be re updating IKRS from start. I didn’t know that you would continuing the story with your cute essence of writing light stuff. Anyways, I love it! 😘 Bachay log jaldi uth gaey OK r daddy so rahy thy . πŸ˜‚ They way they woke up Viplav! πŸ˜‚ Much cute! ❀
    Good Work chottu! 😘

  13. Areeb

    |Registered Member

    Hello friends. Just a thought if we could continue commenting on Last Episode’s Update too.. till the comment box is open.

  14. Renuverma

    |Registered Member

    Great elle. Really nice.
    I still can’t believe my chotu elle can like this happening episode.
    πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  15. Maansee

    O mg masy tha dear …. Was feeling watching ….. Tv ….. Ikrs …. Khtam nsi hua …. Aaj se shru hua fans ke liye …. Cv to apne tareke se dekhatey hai … Or ab hum vo sab dekh saktey hai jo hum chatey hai

    Awesome …… Count me in here ….. Always …..

  16. Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Hey sweeetie!
    Finally I am free so here I am, this was amazing re.. I loved it! Starting was too cute it was very lovely to imagine viplav sleeping peacefully with a smile the way atharva and vidha wake him up was Aww! that was the best part actually and then the way he asked “do any children do this with their father” and kids naughty replies was super cute after that our naughty viplav gets romantic with dhani but she was also not less bhaag gae wahan sey ! This was too adorable yaar, Too happy to read dadi viplav dhani atharva and vidha as a cute family <3 When I was imagining viplav in this episode it was like I was watching previous episodes where we used to watch our naughty plus cute wala viplav.. In this story we will imagine him as a cute romantic husband plus a cute caring father.. Thanks louella for this now I am no more sad bhek de sari sadness as our ikrs is not finish yet it is still continuing and will continue until mishal's new show come.. Right ? Don't worry about long or short even if it is of 10-11 lines just post it as we know its too hard to take time for writing from busy schedule and whenever u get too busy with studies or something than pass this work to some other person till u get free .. Ok! At last scene those persons are shalu-pankaj haiiinaa ?
    Precap is too lovely finally humare viplav ka dream poora hoga.. dhani as a lawyer Wow!!
    The things which were not revealed by the CVs will be reveal by LOUELLA!! I am soooo excited yaar u can't even think..

    PS: Please whenever u find it appropriate just make vidhani to celebrate holi karwachoth vrat and all as I want to imagine them in those moments..
    Bohat dimagh kha liya
    Good luck and love u <3

  17. Saraswathi.j

    Louella dear write only positive do not go for negative creation in nature and in human community bad is very minute so donot glorify it we all wants love only love in between us thank you for your writing.

  18. Saraswathi.j

    Hamlet53 ,s 26 th episode analysis is very good in India Forum you young writers fans of IKRS can visit the site and enjoy it.

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