ISHKARA OS : FILL THAT SPACE IN MY HEART [by Renima]

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ISHKARA OS : FILL THAT SPACE IN MY HEART…….

Scene – 1{ Oberoi mansion, Omkara’s room…..}@Omkara’s view
My canvas has no grace as you uplifted me 2 the real world beyond of colors…..I never felt 2 move my leg for a beat but my eyes started moving when I find you was dancing before me…..My poetries and drawings depicted my own emotions and when u find the grace in them I felt I have met my own soul in you…..When I was sad I find ur eyes also in tears which made me 2 feel that u are mine only…. Your smile made me 2 look @ your eyes again and your words made me 2 think about you in my memories. Your tears made me 2 cry alone and it wounded my inner soul only…….. I relate myself to your pain as world doesn’t witness my pain, but your heart knows it better than any one….The calmness of my room , emptiness of my canvas and the lonliness of my life are waiting for you only….. My heart tortures me when I am not able 2 find you, it is breaking per minute as you are not with me. Whenever I picks my brush 2 pour colors , my hands will be shivering because you are not here 2 hold my hands. I have much trust on you and am still alive because I know you will come back……You will be back….Ishana…You will be back…….
Shivaay : Om…….
Omkara : Haa…shivaay…….[rubs his tears] Shivaay : Are u fine ??
Omkara : Yeah…[emotional]

Shivaay : Om…..u pls don’t lie…..It doesn’t suits you……U are missing Ishana, won’t u ??
Omkara : Shivaay……U know I searched her every where…..I wandered in streets by screaming ishana….ishana….only……But I was not able 2 find her…….She might be literally hurt because what I did 2 her can’t be justified….That dark day when Mr.Oberoi deceived my maa by marrying swethlana, I was totally broken……Maa felt her self-esteem has lost and without uttering a single word, she left this home and I was incapable of doing any thing 2 stop her.…… And ishana……she saw me when I was taking drugs only……. She rushed near me and with much force she took that syringe from me and throw it on the floor……I slapped her because I was out of my consciousness and control. When she was trying 2 console me I was simply bursting out my anger on her only……I asked her not 2 give any kind of advice 2 me and I just pushed her from my room by shutting the door towards her face only…… Around 6 months I was a drug addict only and I kept myself alone in darkness and didn’t allowed any one 2 fill that space……But shivaay, trust me now I felt guilty of myself and I went 2 meet her for apologizing……But went 2 her house there was no one in her house…..Seems her paapa and she has gone some where as they don’t want 2 see my face…….[emotional] Shivaay : It’s not like that…..om……I….I….want 2 tell u something…..But…..I am
Tej : Omkara….
Omkara : Why u came here, Mr.oberoi ? Shivaay, ask him 2 go out….I hate him….
Tej : Omkara……I deserves your hatrence…..In fact what I did with your mother was not right….. When I came 2 know abt swethlana’s real intentions, I understood that she was simply making me as a puppet in her hands only, I send her out from this house……I tried 2 meet jhanvi, but she refused 2 come back…….I am sorry…..beta…..
Omkara : Beta!!! Pls don’t call me like that …… I don’t consider u as my father……Get lost….
Shivaay : Om…
Tej : Shivaay…..take care of your brother…..[tej walks away] Shivaay : Om……

Omkara : Pls shivaay its over…..By the way…. u was telling me some thing …..right ?? What was that ?
Shivaay : Om….Tmrw we have 2 go ….Your waiting will be over because I got an information that Ishana is there……
Omkara : What ??[ om smiles with wet eyes] Shivaay…….ishana…..u…u ….met her….how is she ? She might be thinking I am so rude ……Because I asked her 2 leave me from my life, which was not right…….I want 2 meet her…..Shivaay….I really want 2 meet her…..
Shivaay : I know…..om….U pls sleep well …..my bhai…..Tmrw we will meet her…..
Omkara : Sure ?? Why tmrw ?
Shivaay : Have a look on the wall clock….Its 11.30 pm…..She might be sleeping….
Omkara : Yeah u are right…….I will not disturb her sleep….Let her sleep well…. But…. Shivaay…… And now when u are telling that I am going 2 meet her , I don’t know how 2 tell….what am feeling……Am…..[emotional] Shivaay : Om….My best man……[shivkara hugs each other and gets emotional] I think now u also have 2 sleep ….Gud n8 [shivkara release themselves from hug] Omkara : Gud n8…..[shivaay smiles and leaves] Scene shifts 2 shivaay’s room…..Shivaay’s view
I am sorry my bhai……I don’t know how 2 tell the truth before you…..But I can’t hide it from you because I can’t see you in trouble….The truth will give u huge pain but if u will not came 2 know it then I am scared whether I will lose u forever…..I don’t know what will happen when he will face the bitter truth ?

Scene again shifts 2 omkara’s room
Omkara recollects the moments which he spend with ishana……”I really miss u ishana….I really miss u….”[omkara takes ishu’s photo and sits on the arm chair….He stares the pic for a while and slowly closed his eyes. He has lost himself in her dreams only] “Is it ? Then why u send me from your life ??” Omkara turned back and gets surprised 2 see ishana’s smiling face….
Omkara : Ishana……[omkara moved towards ishana] Ishana : U didn’t answered me, omkara….why u asked me 2 go ?
Omkara : I don’t know……But…..i was…..confused….[he holds ishu’s hands] Ishana : U know how much it was paining for me 2 keep distance from you…..My heart was almost broken when u pushed me and told me that “Don’t come 2 me, I don’t need u “
Omkara ; I am sorry……Ishana……I am really sorry…..In my own life’s issues I preferred 2 be alone and I was totally out of my control…..I should not have slapped u…..But….[omkara placed his face on her hands and weeps into tears] Ishana : Omkara…….Our hearts are bounded with each other……Nothing can separate us…… I mean it….[emotional] Omkara : Ishana!!!! [omkara stared her with teary eyes and hugs her]

Ishana : Omkara…..Though u slapped me , I was able 2 see your wounded soul in ur eyes but u was not able 2 understand what was happening with u…..U fought with urself and tried ur level best 2 get ur maa the rights which she deserves in this house…..But when things went out of hand, she felt her presence doesn’t matters 2 her husband which made her 2 left this home…..Think in her place, if the same happens with you then what u would have done ?
Omkara : I don’t know abt that….But when maa left I felt I am nothing……U know well that how much I respect my maa and I can’t see tears in her eyes……[ishkara release themselves from hug] Ishana : Omkara…..u tried your level best 2 stop her, perhaps she got much hurt from her marital life and when the limits got crossed she felt herself 2 leave this house……We should stand with her in this decision…..
Omkara : U are right……But whenever I find swethlana and Mr. Oberoi together before my eyes I was ……
Ishana : I can understand ur feelings …..Omakara……But I can’t left u alone like these…it gives me pain …..[emotional] Omkara : I am sorry …Ishana….I am really sorry……For …..what all happened ……[cries] Ishana : I missed u Omkara…..I really missed u …..
Omkara : Ishana……now I will not let u 2 go from me…..[he holds her face in his hands] Ishana : I don’t want 2 leave u…Omkara….Because u are my heart beat……[emotional] Omkara : Ishana!!! [om kisses on her forehead and hugs her] BGM…..”Jo naa keha sake tum, jo naa keha sake hum…..kehane lagi donon se who
Khamoshiyaan…..Oh Saathiya……Saathiya…..Saathiya….Saathiya….” [plays]

Scene – 2 { Next day, omkara’s room}
Shivaay arrives @ omkara’s room and finds that omkara was sleeping calmly on the arm chair only…..He finds ishana’s pic on hands which was lying on his chest…..Shivaay smiles with wet eyes and comes closer 2 him……He waves his hand through om’s forhead….. Om slowly opened his eyes and stares shivaay….
Omkara : Ishana…..shivaay….where is ishana ? She again went some where ?
Shivaay : Om….i think it’s ur dream ….We have not met her yet…..[smiles] Omkara : Yeah….[om takes ishu’s pic from his chest and places it on the table] Seems I am dreaming 2 much…..
Shivaay : [mind voice] I know bhai….But when u will face truth, I hope u will not shatter urself….
Omkara : Shivaay…..I think u lost some where….
Shivaay : No…om…..actually she is waiting for u…..
Omkara : Really ?
Shivaay : Yeah….[shivaay shook his head with a smile] Omkara : Ok…..let’s go….
Shivaay : What u mean by let’s go…. Just look @ ur face man…Go and take a bath…..
Omkara : Oops!! I forgot it….
Shivaay : Ok…get ready fast….I will wait be in the car…
Omkara : Yeah…..[shivaay leaves, om smiles] Scene – 3 {@ Mental Asylum}
Shivkara arrives in a mental asylum…..Omkara feels strange…..
Omkara : Shivaay…why we came here ??
Shivaay : Om…..I…..am sorry……[shivaay literally cries] Ur ishana…..ishana….
Omkara : Ishana….what…..shivaay…..I am getting scared…..Pls tell me…..[om holds shivay’s hands] Shivaay : She is here……She is suffering from mental disorder…..
Omkara : What? How dare u say like that abt my ishana ?[omkara press shivay’s shirt’s collar and stares him with wet eyes]

Shivaay : I am telling the truth only…….Om…..She has lost her mental imbalance……
Omkara : No….shivaay…..It;s not possible……It’s not possible……Shivaay….[om bend @ his own knees and burst into tears] Shivaay : Om…..pls control urself……[shivkara hug each other] Ishana is alone….She needs ur care, protection, affection and much more…..[shivaay sits near omkara] Omkara : How it happened ?[emotional] Shivaay : U know the day when she find u taking drugs she was totally upset with u…..U was not allowing her 2 get inside ur room and she was not ready 2 leave you….Finally some how her dad convinced her and told that let u will take some time 2 get rid of issues and with a broken heart she went with him……They were travelling and…..
Omkara ; And!!!
Shivaay : That was an accident…… she was severely injured and she find her dad dying in front of her eyes which affected her deeply and she….[emotional] Omkara : Pls….[omkara literally cries] Shivaay….I….I…want 2 see her….
Shivaay : Yeah…lets go inside…..
Scene shifts 2 the ward…..
Shivaay : I will wait for u outside…..[shivaay touches his shoulder and leaves] Omkara moved inside and finds that ishana was screaming and crying as doctor and few nurses were trying 2 feed her soup….

Doctor : Have it fast , ishana ….ur prince will be coming soon 2 meet you
Ishana : Ok…But if today if he will not come, then I will not talk 2 u….
Doctor : U just shut ur eyes and drink it fast….When u will open ur eyes, he will be infront of ur eyes only…..
Ishana : OK….[ishu follows dr.’s instruction] Omkara : Excuse me….
Doctor : Yes…[he turned back] Omkara : I am omkara…
Doctor : Oh…..So u are Mr.Omkara Singh Oberoi…..Nice 2 meet you….
Ishana : Omkara!!! [ishu slowly opened her eyes and stares omkara] Omkara……where were u ?? I will not talk 2 u….. [ishu started crying] Omkara : Ishana…..Ishana….[omkara came closer 2 her and placed his hand on her face] Ishana : U know how long I waited for u ? Now I will not let u 2 go from me….[ishu holds his hand tightly] Omkara : I will not leave u…ishana….
Ishana : Promise !!! [ishu extended her hand towards omie] Omkara : Promise ….[omkara gets emotional] Ishana : By the way where is ur crown ?
Omkara : Crown ??
Ishana : Haa..u are my price charming….Right ?? Then how can u come without crown ??

Doctor : Ishana…..he forgot 2 take the crown…..
Ishana : Is it ? [ishu stared omkara’s eye] [Omkara was unable 2 tell anything……Tears were continuously started flowing from her eyes only……] Don’t cry….[ishu wipe out om’s tears] I will make crown for u…..Ok…..Smile….Smile…
Omkara manages 2 give a smile……Ishana : Gud boy!!! [ishu pats on his cheek and starts taking the pieces of papers and some sketch pencils which was kept beside her bed…. Omkara stood from the bed and stared her with wet eyes] Omkara : Doctor…..My ishana…..I want her back….Pls….
Doctor : We are trying our level best….Mr.Omkara…..It will take some time …And if any body can bring her back 2 normal then it will be you only…..She doesn’t remember anything….. All she knows is some drawings which she use 2 make in papers…..It has no meaning @ all….They are some lines, circles and some thing which no one can identify…. And she use 2 describe that as hills, moon and one day she show me a pic and told me that it is her prince… Then she asked me where is my prince ? Why he is not coming ?? Mr. Shivaay Oberoi told me abt u and ishana in detail and I named ishana’s prince as Omkara……..

Ishana : See…..prince ….I have made the crown….. [ishu shows the drawing 2 omkara ] Omkara finds some colors which were poured in the paper which doesn’t shows a proper drawing , but certainly conveying ishana’s innocence of heart only…..
Ishana : How is it ?
Omkara : It looks cute…Just like u…..[omkara smiles] Ishana : Is it ?? I look cute ?? Am I ??
Omkara shook his head with a smile….
Ishana : U also look cute…..My cutiepie……[ishu pats on omkara’s cheeks] Omkara : Doctor….can I take ishana with me ??
Doctor : But….Omkara…..Some times she behaves too weird and u will not be able 2 control her……
Omkara : I can’t see her suffering alone ….It is giving me pain……I will give her world’s best treatment….I will take care of her and I will give much more happiness because knowingly or unknowingly I am responsible for what she is facing now…….I missed her a lot….But now…..I can’t leave a minute without her……I really can’t leave without her…..
Doctor : Ok…..Take her with u…Mr.Omkara….After all u are her prince charming ….
Omkara : Thank u doctor……

Doctor smiles and leaves….
Omkara : Ishana…..Do u want 2 see the palace ?
Ishana : Palace !!!
Omkara : Haa palace…..where prince lives……From now onwards u are going 2 stay there….
Ishana : Is it ?? But…..there only u can stay….What abt me ??
Omkara : U can also stay there….
Ishana : How ??
Omkara : Because…u are …my….my princess……[omkara smiles with wet eyes] Ishana : Am princess ?? [excited] Omkara : And now ur prince omkara is going 2 take u with him…..Are u ready ?
Ishana : Yeah….

Omkara : Then….come with me…..Princess Ishana….[omkara extends his hand towards her] Ishana : Yes…..[ishu places her hand on omkara’s hand and smiles] But…my leg……[ishana shows her leg by raising her skirt….Omkara finds that her leg was injured….He waves his hand through her leg] Omkara : Ishana…..The wound is….
Ishana : It has become dry now…..Wooh…I was playing hide and seek and my leg got hit on the …the….[omkara understood that ishu has forgotten the incident] Omkara : It’s ok…..[omkara places her skirt properly and smiles
Ishana : It’s paining……When I will try 2 walk….it will be more paining….only…..So I can’t come with u ….prince….
Omkara : Don’t worry….U are coming….
Ishana : How?? [ishu stared omkara’s eyes with surprise] Omkara moves closer 2 her and lifts her in his arms……He stares her face and smiles…..
Ishana : U are going 2 take me ……with u…..prince….
Omkara : Yes…..
Ishana : Cutiepiee…[ishu kisses on omkara;s cheek and smiles, om smiles @ her and leaves the ward by taking his princess in his own arms only]

Omkara’s view….
Ishana ….. I will fill ur life with colors because u are my soul…..I will give u all those happiness which u denied because of me ….I will make your legs 2move on the beat as I know the rhythm is still in you…..Now I will not make u 2 go from me because my heart needs you…..I will assure you that in my arms u will be lying as princess only and I will stay as ur prince forever….[omkara stares ishu’s face and finds that her hands were placed on his neck and in his arms she was sleeping like a kid only]

So guys…..here its ends….I don’t know what 2 say abt this…..The one whom we loves truly, deeply and passionately makes us 2 feel special….Perhaps that space is for the particular feel of love and that person only ….When we miss that love it will give pain……

What u feel abt ishkara ?? Drop ur views……With lot of love and regards…..renima……

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41 Comments
  1. Aarti32

    Renima..U hv no idea wat a great writer u r..It was a masterpiece

    1. Renimarenju

      Oh God…..that was a big compliment….Thanks a lotttt from the depth of my heartt… Really ishkara fans never fails 2 comment and that makes me 2 write on ishkara more……Thanks a lottt

      1. Aarti32

        Dis is one of d few ways of showing our love for Ishkara

      2. Renimarenju

        Yeah,…the way for ishkara fans 2 get connect with them is writing ffs and watching vms and old episodes only….

  2. Ruby_MarNy

    Renima, you are marvelous writer..loved the way you brought Om’s point of view.. even though I felt bad that ishu lost her mental balance but I’m happy her prince is with her.. it’s very heart touching and this is called true love.. you are rocking, renima..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot ….ishana….Feel of true love is really special ….Am glad that u got that feel through this os…thank u so much

  3. Yashu

    Lovely……really awesome….its amazing…..loved om’s pov….too good……i have no words for dis yaar…..it was excellent di……

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much yashu dear…Ur comment means a lott

  4. BEAUTIFULL MIND BLOWING HEART TOUCHING GREAT SUPERB???????

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot uf…for giving such a wonderful compliment

  5. Niriha

    Awesome…no words to say I loved it to the core fabulous

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot for taking time and reading this one …..

  6. Awesome n keep writing about ishkara plzz?

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u mrunal….Are u the same mrunal [registered member] Who use 2 comment on my ishkara ff ?? Abt ishkara…right now am writing an ff 4 rumya and ishkara and another one for ishkara only….I am not getting time for updating them as work load sucks me…..But i will try 2 update any of them by sat or sunday…..keep loving ishkara…

  7. Riddhima

    Renima …. You nailed it …seriously …
    You conveyed om’s view fantastically….
    Ishana part was awesome …. Soo innocent cute. .. With teary wet eyes …
    You made it again ….
    Love you renima ????

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot riddhima……dear……And i really miss ishana badly and ishkara has left the space in heart which can’t be replaced with any other pair……Thank u so much for reading and commenting…love u 2

  8. Wonderful…. Amazing… Superb and what not… u just nailed it dear…. Waiting for another masterpiece… update soon..?☺

    1. Renimarenju

      OMG!!! Another huge compliment…..Ankita….thanks for reading this os…..Thank u so much dear….for reading my ff’s without faill Am sorry i can’t update articles in regular basis as my work load sucks and lack of time also is a big prblm…I will update my rumya,ishkara ff by saturday or sunday……

  9. Nikita_jai29

    Dii it is full of love and care… You make me cry…
    Lots of love dii

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot…..And sorry for making u as cryyy babyyyy…..What 2 say ….yaar….when i was typing it was really difficult 4 me 2 put all in words as i was also like cry baby only……Love u 2…..dear

  10. Haridhra

    Hello Renu di … This was just awsm…

    1. Renimarenju

      hey haridhra…..how r u ishqie ?? Feel so gud 2 see u and ur comment on my os….Thanks a lot for taking time and reading this one dear….

      1. Haridhra

        I’m fine di , wht abt u ??.. N sry for not commenting on ur ffs ..

      2. Renimarenju

        Hey am gud yaar…and no need of sorry and all…….Am also not commenting @ a regular basis on the wonderful authors of tu’s ff’s… And am not a regular updater also…Read when u get time dear….

  11. Beautiful………it was very emotional……….it was so involving that I was literally feeling om’s pain , state of mind , helplessness everything….I was on the verge of crying……it’s a very touching story…..will u like to accept me as ur little sister ?

    1. Renimarenju

      Hai aashi……Thanks a lot for reading dear and agree with u….yeah it was really hard for me 2 write and the out come came as emotional and i feel sorry people were almost abt 2 cry, sorry for it……But it came from my heart only…..Am glad that u liked it….And of course i am ready 2 call u as my sister……already I have so many sisters in this tu family, now u are also my sweet sister……Ok….and pls keep reading my articles when u get time…..And thank u so much for reading and commenting,….love u my sister….

  12. Alekhika20

    Beautiful updt

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much alekhika

  13. Chandini

    I am dead???this way too much for me di I am crying??????????????????????????????you portrayed the emotions wonderfully precisely is the word actually….it was not much nor subtle….I loved everything everything ishkara the saudade chapter of ishqbaaz but left untouched unexplored….but through this not only this all your ffs on ishkara touched each and every chapter of them….PAIN is what that connects ishkara…if I am not wrong you should this special intense connection in all your ffs but this stands out as the best…I don’t know whether all will agree with me you make me tear up each and everytime when you come with an emotional ishkara scene this one is full of it….but intense love their speciality stands out…ISHAANA doesn’t remember the terrible accident which pushed her to this condition but she remember Her PRINCE OMKARA who has immersed in her ….her better half why better equal and perfect half.
    Hats off to you di for giving us such lovely ffs on ishkara

    1. Renimarenju

      Chandini people will put complaints on me for making every time them as crybaby whenever i comes with ishkara….I don’t know why it happens….but i felt a heart 2 heart connection with ishkara…. First of all when i was typing this actually i was unable 2 control myself from shattering in tears….The feel is like…i don’t know how should i say that…As words are lacking for expressing them…..Thanks for reading and sorry for making u 2 cry…….And thanks for all those lovely words which means a lot……dear….thank u so much

  14. I am not logged in renima di but i hope u remember me firstly i am really sorry not to comment on ur rumaya and ishkara ff plzz forgive me di and about this os i have no words to say di u are a best writer i just loved loved it sooo much di u made my eyes filled with tears and keep writing on ishkara and i will keep reading promise di lots of love di

    1. Renimarenju

      Oh God!!! Actually ur comment was quite unexpected here as in ur ff u told that u will be able 2 update it after a month only ….So i thought u are too busy and u are student , so priorities for ur studies really matters a lot….But am surprised 2 see ur comment…..And soha……do well in ur studies and no prblm if u read my ff , late also as i can understand ur condition…… And thanks for reading this os and i will wait for ur ff also…..Sorry for making u as cry baby…… And how sweet u wil be there 2 read my ishkara works….which means a lot…dear…..thanks a lott

      1. Actually di from that day i am not logging in tu but i always open this to see if you have uploaded ur ff or not and i was not commenting sorry again may be i will not comment on ur ff but dont forget that i am not reading because i will read it what ever happens di and about my studies my last paper is on 25 so may be then i will upload my ff on ishkara dont worry about my studies di am am doing well in studies

      2. And yeah may be on 26 or 27 i will upload my ff then i will upload next in july

  15. Kavya347

    I’m​ back to TU after a long time again, and what i see is your OS for Ishkara…it was the most beautiful surprise renima di. And i can’ tell you How loving , heart warming, emotional, and sweet this story is!!!!!!!! I fully agree with Aarti, it’s really a MASTERPIECE…i loved it just soooooooooooo much that i’ll never be able to tell. I have already read it like 20-30 times again. Believe me, this is my most fav os ever!!!!??? It’s superb, great, fantastic, amazing….wohhh words are surely gonna end!!!!
    Om and Ishana are really the most beautiful couple and you always express it really beautifully by your stories. But this… It’s just the most special one for me.. Om’s pov, shivkara convo it was all so emotional and beautifully conveyed….Om regreting for asking Ishana to leave, Him missing her….And then the Revelation about Ishu’s health…and that turn the story took iy was really shocking…..
    But later Om’ unconditional love for her, Ishu still recognizing Om as her prince that really won heart… really, the most harsh realities can be faced easily of just your loved one os beside you all the time…. I loved this concept too much.
    This pure, innocent and loving tale of the Prince and his princess is , in my opinion the best love story i’ve ever known,?.
    ( And that end pov of Om ‘ i assure you, you will be lying in my arms as a princess only, and i’ll stay your prince forever’….oh gosh….i am just in love with these lines. I think i have never loved Omkara this much before!!!!!)
    You are really THE BEST….i love you di…just keep writing always….lots of higs and kisses and love….. And thanks a ton for this beauty amd emotion filled sweet os….

    1. Renimarenju

      Even I am damn surprised 2 see your longg comment on my article after a gap……Kavya….i can’t say how much i am happy 2 see ur comment here…..And shivkara convo…actually am missing that perfection vs idealism talks from the show….It’s really unbelievable for me that both shivay and omie have no convos @ all in ib and dbo and that made me 2 show them …though shivay is like mr.perfect he has a special concern for omie and om also is caring for shivay who stood as the best man for shivaay always and am really missing it 2 the core……
      Om’s view..it is just my thought 2 show like that as his life’s unexpected shocking incidents has give him so much pain and like every one it affected om naturally and i felt 2 portray it as realistic and am glad that it reached 2 readers in proper manner……Feel of love is really beyond of words and our knowledge and if love is true then we can’t see whom we love in suffering alone in pain ,whatever be his / her condition as it will give pain 2 us also…..And that’s what connects ishkara …the two people who suffered immense pain, but not able 2 see pain on each other…..And prince was just like a lamp or 2 enlighten their hearts, as when we loves some one so deeply we describe that love and the person 2 the most as more and more we love that person and if we are missing , it will give pain…. Thanks a lot for reading os and giving ur thoughts, views and ur feelings on ishkara as the space which ishkara has left in our hearts it can;t be replaced ……

  16. Liya

    True love? that’s what this OS is depicting, being there for each other and accepting each other even in worst phase of life? .loved it dii only few people get such soulmates?? .I must say dii among all you works this one stands out ,this story is soulful.Good job dii, I like the ending very much ?. The poem in the intro part were so emotional it was really giving that vibe and shows a glimpse of how story will lead ?? I have fallen in love with this os actually

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much liya dear…….am missing the soul omie, the shayar whom i admired a lot and ishana also who taught omie 2 listen his heart…..Am glad that u liked it…..

  17. B_isha

    So ,finally your angry young bird is here in the same position I am in lack of words what should I say on this one !! It’s not masterpiece it’s not marvellous nor fabulous …..actually these words are not currently capable to reflect my emotions or any body’s emotions who red this …… It was soulful and heavenly pure emotions ….. It was something which was so perfect which I wanted to read more but alas it ended….

    Di ek baat bolu di u reminded me an episode of love wala twist were ishu was suffering with cancer….that 10 episodes made my weep and weep and your piece of art made me smile with moist eyes…..

    Thanks for sharing links of such a piece.
    Love you till the heights

    Your one n only
    Angry young bird

    1. Renimarenju

      All whoever commented telling that it made them 2 cry, it was emotional and…I don’t know what 2 say abt that…..And while writing i was finding hard how should i portray it, but some how it captured every one’s heart and that makes ishkara special as the space ishkara fill in our heart , it can’t be replaced by any one…… Thanks bshama , my angry young bird……for taking time and reading this OS….

      1. B_isha

        Thank you: same to u back to u n no returns u also take ur precious time out for my articles or mergers so in that way ur thanks goes back to you. ..and I can understand that you faced difficulties in expressing and elucidating …..but somehow it touched …. yes di I agree to ur words I don’t know what magic ishkara has …I mean they have only done few episodes but still ..It is unforgettable experience to watch them …. I know u don’t like to make ppl weep but jab jasabat bardaash ki Hadd paar kar dete hai toh kabhi bhini muskan , bezubaan aansu , ya lafzon se bari shadar udd lete hai ….

        Ur angry young bird

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