Ishana, Gauri & Omkara : TS – Victims of destiny’s pranks [By Renima] Part 1

39

Ishana, Gauri & Omkara : TWO SHOTS – Victims of destiny’s pranks
[By Renima] Hai ishqies….Happy mahashivrathri 2 all……Just today I got some quality leisure time and I felt to write two shots for omkara, ishana and gauri……I don’t know how it will be…..as far as what am feeling am just expressing it only…….. ……And this is not an os 4 ishkara and not an os for gaurikara also,….I just want to point out three characters meeting as per the current track……..That’s all…………
Pls tell me ur views about it……..
The scene starts from gauri and omkara’s marriage….track…..Om and gauri are in oberoi mansion……Omkara brought her because kaali thakur’s men and villagers were still making trouble for gauri only…..Gauri’s mother requests omkara to take gauri with him…..Before her mother’s wish omkara was not able to oppose as he felt her tears as true and he experienced his own mother @ her place….So he decides to go oberoi mansion with gauri……This is an os for gauri , om and ishu only…..there will not be any other characters….

@ Omkara’s room
He breaks the statue …..and one piece hits on gauri’s leg…..She screams….
Gauri : What’s wrong with u…..why u are breaking it ?
Omkara : Its my statue …..my wish…..I can break it or I can throw it……U don’t have any rights to ask it….Got it ?
Gauri : Am ur wife……omkara….And I think…..
Omkara : {interrupts] Don’t try to be gud……I know….that u are a cheap, characterless girl……only……All I did is to save u only…..I brought u here because since ur mother asked me to take u and I find that it was really difficult for her 2 live with u because ……
Gauri : U married me….omkara…..villagers are asking to leave me from my house since now am ur wife and I have to live in sasural only ….I have to spent my life with my husband……its u……omkara……Trust me ….omkara…..kaali thakur was trying to …..

Omkara : Enough…..a person gives explanation when he commits mistake…..And u are……..
{Meanwhile omkara gets a video message……he felt shocked after seeing that message….. He leans himself on the wall ….and stands as motionless …..only….{.Gauri feels confused] Gauri : Omkara……{he was not reacting] Omkara…..{gauri touches his shoulder} Omkara…..
{Omkara turns his eyes to gauri and gauri finds tht his eyes are filled with tears ……She feels tensed 4 him…..}What happened ?
Omkara : I……{he was unable to utter a word….he stared her eyes and turned his eyes to his phone only……He throws his phone on bed and leaves the room as he was unable to control his tears…..}
Gauri : What happened to him ? [she takes his phone….she checks his phone and finds the video msg…….] [Gauri came closer to omkara and extends his phone to him…….Mean while omkara was crying only…….He stared the phone and stared her eyes……He took the phone from her and turns behind……Gauri came closer to him and hold his hand] Gauri : Omkara…….do u know that girl ???
Omkara : {stares gauri’s eyes with teary eyes} I can’t see Ishana like this……..
Gauri : I think …..u should go and meet her…….
Omkara : {feels strange….he stares her for a while} Its over….{he removes her hand from his hand].And……its nothing a memory of past…….{he rubs his tears}
Gauri : Memories will again arise…..omkara…….really am feeling that u should meet her…
Omkara : {interrupts} Excuse me….who are u to tell me all these ?? Don’t try to …..
Gauri : {interrupts} Don’t feel scared omkara……Am not here to fight for my right…..And I don’t want to prove anything also…….All I have seen is ur anger, ur hatrence only…….. When u filled sindur on my maang, first time I felt that u have a heart……But u don’t want to listen what ur heart says…….Won’t u ??
Omkara : {recalls ishana’s words…..”dil par yakeen karo” and gets emotional} I still don’t understand why she ??? {his eyes are filled with tears}
Gauri : Omkara…….
Omkara : I think u are right…..I should go and meet her……..Because I don’t know whether I will be able to meet her again or not ??? {omkara is about to leave}
Gauri : Omkara……If u don’t mind…..can I ……I mean……I will stay behind only…….But….
Omkara : Lets go…….{he waves his hand and gauri smiles with wet eyes}

[Mean while gauri tries 2 wear her foot wear ……But the wound was so deep that she was not able to wear it…..She screams….Omkara observes it and turns to gauri and seated her in a chair….He applies medicine on her wound…….Gauri was feeling heavenly…..She bows her head and she was literally crying…….The drops of tears falls on omkara’s palms……Omkara rise his head and stares gauri’s eyes……Both of them share an eyelock…….Omakra stood up and takes his eyes form her…..}
Gauri : Thanks…….it will heal soon……..{she pretends a fake smile] Omkara : Its not so easy to heal pains …….U have rewarded me the biggest pain…….
Gauri : Omkara……..
Omkara : I will wait in the car……Come fast…..{he leaves without uttering a word] {Gauri close her eyes and burst into tears…….Meanwhile omkara enters the car and presses the car’s horn ….Gauri suddenly wears her foot wear and rushes outside…..}

Scene shifts to central prison….
[Ishana has been under the custody of police for conning…….She was standing behind the bars of the lockup …….Omkara moves forward…….while gauri wished to go with him…..but she stopped herself by standing little far from him…..she stands

@ the corner and watches ishana…..and omkara…..] Ishana : How are u omkara ?{Omkara didn’t reacted…..he just stayed her only} I feel wonder……why am asking u this stupid question……U will be fine….because u are omkara singh oberoi……only……isn’t it ?
Omkara : Ishana…….{he was trying to say something…..but he stopped himself and remains silent}
Ishana : Today u will not blame about my upbringing, my family……and……{she gets emotional}
Omkara : Some how u was right…..Ishana……its not ur mistake alone……situations made u to a con girl only……
Ishana : To realize this thing…….I think u have taken so much time…….omkara…….
Omkara : May be…….but now am not that omkara which u know……I have killed my heart…….
Ishana : {interrupts] Its not possible……Omkara……As far as I know u are a man who thinks from heart ….not from brain……And…..
Omkara : {interrupts} By believing in heart……I didn’t get anything except betrayal …… My belief towards every thing has dead…….My heart is nothing just a stone only……And now all I need is to …….well…..why I should tell these things 2 u……ishana…..
Ishana : I know…..omkara…..u are fighting with this whole world….But omkara…..I am scared in this fight….whether u will lose yourselves ?
Omkara :I don’t bother about my life……
Ishana : .But u have to bother…..about it……not for u ,….but for ur wife……gauri…….
{Omkara gets shocked}

PRECAP ; CONFUSED……..

We recommend
39 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Awsomeeee

    1. Renimarenju

      Hey glad 2 see ur comment after a long time on my work…..thanks

  2. It is nice one dear totally justified……to situation of om guari and ishana.. Waiting for the next update please post ASAP and happy mahashivratri dear….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u nikita…….really glad 2 see ur comment

    2. Thank you renima dii I am so happy that you reply me.

  3. Saasha123

    Hi this is ur first ff which I am reading and its awesome…. Please update soon…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot for taking time and reading it…..dear its just two shots….only….next one will be updated later

  4. Kehkasha

    Wow di…..amazing….
    I was literally feeling something like this to happen in the show….
    Situations may be different but still at this point there should be one ishkara face off……at least….
    And I really loved this….
    This is really fantastic……
    And next part will be a bang…..
    Waiting for the next….
    And ya not to forget…..i loved the title…..
    Happy mahashivratri to u too…..
    Bye di see u….

    1. Renimarenju

      thanks chatter box……felt 2 write so……next one……will be updated by tomrrow….as i have to go temple after 1 hr……and i will be busy with shivrathri puja and celebrations ……tlil night

  5. Hi friends… I am Chandni and I am a silent leader… ff was very good I like it… post soon…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot chandni

  6. Pratha

    greattttt
    No one could thought 2 bring all the three characters. You did a great job renimarenju juat the love the os
    please post next asap….

    1. Renimarenju

      Very happy 2 see u pratha……and really gud 2 see all ishkara fans here…..I mean i was doubted because i brought gauri also and seriously didn’t expected comments from ishkara fans…. thanks a lot

  7. Awesome…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks lilly

  8. Shanaya1526

    I want to cry……….its just……. Wow
    …nonwords

    1. Renimarenju

      Am so so so so glad and feeling much blessed to have ur comment…..because when i took the decision 2 stop writing u people tried 2 stop me…..But i felt myself to do so……and seriously my silent reader again pained me only to write ff 4 ishkara….through her msgs i realized that how much i miss u guys…..and for her only i thought 2 write again….but after the love and care from all u ……i just felt that i missed so many things….but seriously now i will not do anything ….. like that……thanks a lot shanaya…..and sorry 4 making u cry…..but next part….probably i don;t planned but it will be emotional…..so……pls…….be ready for it

  9. Luna

    Wow Renima, I loved it. and I especially liked that dialogue of Gauri to Om, when u filled sindoor in my maang, first time I felt that u have a heart. And what a great idea of bringing these 3 characters in one story. One thing common between Om, Gauri and Ishana is that all have pain and sufferings in their life, and u have reflected that very well. I am wondering, what u will show in the next part. Waiting for the next part and I hope it’s emotional and surprising. Your ff has encouraged me to write an ff on Om, Gauri and Ishana, but I’m wondering what story can I really show??? Probably going to steal some ideas from your ff, lol. Sorry dear!!!!

    1. Renimarenju

      Hey critic……thanks a lot yaar……and yeah next one will be emotional…..what to do…i don’t know how it would be….as not planned …well i don’t plan it…just sit and felt 2 write….then certainly i will write…..thats all……and steal ideas…..yaar…its not stealing…..dear…..my story made u to write an ff means it has motivated u…..thats all…..feels gud also…..actually i have planned 2 write an ff also…..but not now…..next month 4 ishkara…..well i will get leave…..next month …..and it will be based on omkara’s life i mean his arrogance….but there will not be gauri….ishu will be there…and she is not a congirl…..and even om doesn’t know her….also….but how ishkara meeting will happen…..and how om will be regain his lost heart ….that will be the theme…..perhaps most things will be based on mahi and me also….. i will add stuff…..certainly……to it….

      1. Shanaya1526

        Dear….. Ur just gonna make me cry my heart out….. Ishkara was the precious gem we have lost but…. Fans like u never lemme feel that much pain of losing them
        I m soo happy that ur back
        Lots of love
        Shanz

  10. Pinkyyy

    Awesome please update soon

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks dear……i will update it tmrw only

  11. Yashu

    Yeahhhh renima di u r back…..that too wid ishkara n gauri…. I absolutely loved it….waiting 4 nxt….

  12. Wow.. this is so amazing… update soon dear..

  13. Riddhima

    What will be next …??? Ishkara is not possible LA feeling sad …

    1. Renimarenju

      Well…wait 4 it….thanks

  14. Di its just awesome…i was really crying ..while reading…trust me its superb..keep it up….
    Nd thanks for sharing link di….just loved ur article….each nd every word was bringing emotion….
    Anyways update nxt part soon..eagerly waiting..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u saku

  15. Amazing update… Waiting for the next part…

  16. Mrunal

    this is just superb yaar…
    really amazing & very very unique…
    very eager to read next one…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks and happy 2 see ur comment

  17. Priya15

    It’s amazing dii.. Emotional.. U r creative creator.. Haha . bringing ishu here. Awww!!

    Luvd it..next part.. Tqs for sharing link!!

    1. Renimarenju

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishana-gauri-omkara-ts-victims-destinys-pranks-renima-part-2/

      links for next part…priya……i don’t know ……just read it….thanks

  18. JanviSingh

    Hey Reni….
    Really sorry for the late comment sis….
    Bt I’m really glad that u posted this story…
    It’s really beautiful……
    Luvd it sooooo much…..
    See u in the next part….????

      1. JanviSingh

        Ok dear….
        I’LL surely read it…???

Comments are closed.

Yes No