Ishana, Gauri & Omkara : TS – Victims of destiny’s pranks [By Renima] Part 2

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Ishana, Gauri & Omkara : TWO SHOTS – Victims of destiny’s pranks
[By Renima]

Hai ishqies….I don’t know what to tell about this part….. Pls tell me ur views about it……..
Omkara : Ishana!!!! How u came to know that gauri is my wife ???
Ishana : Because u are omkara singh oberoi…….And….all the news channels are keen to peep in the life of oberoi’s only…….
Omkara : {interrupts}U are right…[email protected] this turn of life….am not omkara…..but am omkara singh oberoi……only…..
Ishana : U have changed a lot….omkara…….
Omkara : Its not a change…..ishana……it’s my race……only …..and I have to win it…….
Ishana : So ….u won’t look back….omkara……isn’t it ??
Omkara : I ……I……
Ishana : U can’t tell anything…..now…because now u are lying to urself ….only……
Omkara : Ishana!!!!!
Ishana : What happened omkara ??? Just because I am telling the truth……U said me that if u have to make a choice between truth and family….u will accept truth only……..
Omkara : I didn’t lied ishana……And I never betrayed any one just like u…..
Ishana : Really ? U lied 2 urself by killing ur heart …….U are just wearing a mask on ur face only……..And betrayal…..I agree that I hurt u……I betrayed u…..But just look @ urself…..omkara……U are cheating urself by killing ur own identity…..And u have hurt an innocent girl’s life……
Omkara : {interrupts} Pls …..Ishana….let me clear one thing……she is not my wife……. I married her because….situations……made me to do it……
Ishana : Situations !!!! When necessity knocks the door…..we don’t look back….omkara…… Now I think u have understood it……..

Omkara : {recollecting jhanvi’s attempt to commit suicide, swethlana’s challenge } I don’t know….but now I have to save my mother’s life…….I can’t make a compromise on it…..And am ready 2 take any risk…….{emotional}
Ishana : I stood for my family only…….For me it was necessary to have money because whenever some one knocks the door of my house…..I was scared…..whether it will be goons ……..whether they will make any harm to my family……they threatened me that they will kidnap my sister…….and ……..omkara……..whatever I did……because……I don’t have a choice…….and am not an ideal person like u……I went through the struggling days only…….And I conned because……all I need is to …… sort out debts……To save my family from every threats…….only….. I am sorry omkara…..I don’t have any intention to cheat u…..but I was helpless…..{emotional }
Omkara : U really conned well…..Ishana…….I must say……In ur conning…….u just conned everything……..When u asked me to believe in heart…..I felt that u are able 2 see my heart also…… But when I came to know about ur reality……..U just broken my ……..trust…..my…… heart…….and …….{emotional}
Ishana : Omkara!!!! [shocked] Omkara and ishana share an emotional eyelock…….”Dil mera churaya kyun…..jab yeh dil todna hi thaa…..”[film-akele hum akele tum] Plays…….
Ishana : My life has become dark now since am standing behind these bars of lock up…… Thanks for coming……As ur visit has certainly lightened my darkness……..Thanks a lot…..Omkara…….And if possible……then pls forgive me……..Am…..{she fold her hands……and burst into tears}
Omkara : Ishana !!!! {omkara gets shocked and he hold her hands…..He places her hands on his forehead and burst into tears}

[Mean while gauri watches ishkara and she also starts crying……She was not able to control her tears and she decides 2 leave ……But ishana takes her name and gauri turns behind….}
Ishana : Gauri…….
Gauri : {moves forward and comes closer to omkara and stares both om and ishu, omkara takes his hands from hold and stares gauri…..} I…….I don’t know that……u …..
Ishana : Thanks for coming…gauri…….I have to spend my whole life behind these bars only…..
Omkara : Ishana!!! U didn’t committed any murder……..And trust me….i will certainly make arrangement 4 ur bail as soon as possible……
Ishana : Thanks….but I don’t want it…….I deserves this punishment omkara……..for conning as well as breaking ur heart……I deserve this darkness……I don’t have any regrets….now……. omkara……{ishkara stare each other’s eyes emotionally}
Omkara : When I find ur video msg……I really…….never expected that one day…….I will be able 2 see u like these…..
Ishana : {smiles with teary eyes} U know what omkara…..today when police was arresting me…..I was watching my own hand……because those bangles…….reminded me ur ……… [meanwhile omakra watches ishana’s hands and feels sad and finds scars on her hands] Omkara : U feel pain……won’t u ???

Ishana : Those bangles have gone….omkara…..in its place these iron chains have came…… Its not giving me any pain……because am used with pain…….But the only pain which am suffering now is ur pain…..ur broken heart…..and its paining…….omkara……because u trusted me and u felt that am true…but I hurt u…..and now when I am in darkness….u came here 2 see me and u are telling that I stayed in ur heart…… because I find out that I am in ur heart…..but am not in ur life…..see the destiny’s pranks……now gauri is in ur life……and…..
{Omkara and and gauri stare each others eyes….ishana smiles with wet eyes} She deserves space in ur heart……omkara…….
Gauri : But ishana…….what about u ???
Ishana : Me……I will stay here …….and I will stay in his broken heart….only…..isn’t it omkara ??
Omkara : Am sorry ishana…..Knowingly or unknowingly I have hurt u ……..But……
Ishana : I can understand……omkara……U know what now u have rewarded me the pain because u said it…..omakra…….Its better u should have remained as the listener……only….. Why omkara….why ???
Omkara : There is no answer for all questions…..[Bgm…..”Joo naa keha sake tum….jo naa keh sake hum…..kehane lagi donon se who khamoshiyan …..oh saathiya” plays……}

Gauri : I came in between to complicate ur life…..
Ishana : No……gauri……u are here….because its also nothing…..jsut another prank of destiny only…….
Gauri : Now I really feel that my sindooor ……it has rewarded pain 2 u and omkara……..
Omkara : {emotional} Its not ur mistake gauri……Pain is the biggest reality of life…….and we have to suffer it…..{gauri and om share an emotional eyelock}
Ishana : But in life u definitely need a person who is able 2 see ur pain……who will also be a victim , but who will be able 2 understand ur pain and will be able 2 heal it also……And I think omkara……in this turn of life…..both u and gauri have 2 travel together only…….. For the relationship……which made u both as together…….
{Omkara and gauris stares ishana…..and feels sad ….}
Omkara : Ishana……
Ishana : Am telling it from my heart……omkara…….am not wearing any mask on my mask…….I really want to see both of u…….{burst into tears}
{Gauri and omkara together touch ishana’s hands……}
Gauri : I will pray to lord Shankar ji…..for u…..
Ishana : {smiles} Why ?

Gauri : Because….u are like sati maa…….I mean sati maa and shivji’s life was incomplete when sati maa sacrificed her life…..But fortunately maa parvati came to shivji’s life and And…..{mean while ishana literally cries} Am sorry….i didn’t have any intention 2 hurt u…… am a village girl…..and by seeing u and omkara….i just felt ……
Ishana :{interrupts] Its ok…..but u said the truth…..and fortunately u are that person and am…..[she burst into tears] Omkara : Pls….. ishana…..ur tears….I can’t bear these tears….{but ishana was unable to control her tears…..omkara wipe out her tears…….ishana stares omkara’s eyes for that moment……}its hard 2 see ur tears….pls…….{he takes his fingers from her eyes}
Ishana : Thanks…… now I will not cry……as my tears will give u more pain……only….. won’t u….[she smiles with wet eyes] Gauri : Am sorry ishana….{emotional}
Ishana : Omkara…gauri…..destiny has united u……And I hope u should value ur relationship…….
Omkara : Ishaana!!!
Ishana : Pls……don’t say anything now…..omkara…..it will give more pain…..only….pls…..
{She turns back and stares the wall…..}
Gauri : But….
Omkara : Gauri…..lets go……{emotional}
{gauri witnessed omakra’s eyes and finds tears and on it….without uttering a word she stares om and stares ishana and finds that omkara was leaving…..gauri tried 2 stop him by walking fast behind him ….but her leg slipped and she falls on the floor…..omakra turns behind and comes closer to her…he extends his hand to her….she hold his hands and managed to get up…..mean while ishu watch them and when omkara and gauri’s eyes went on her , she again turned behind and moves inside to the lock up….Gauri and omkara left the spot……

Ishana’s pov
Its better u should have remained as silent…..only…..omkara……ur confession really hurt me a lot……Why we met and why this destiny separated us …….{she burst into tears and leans on the wall}……but destiny brought gauri for omkara……..may be its destiny’s wish…….only….

So guys……I don’t know…..what to say….as am really crying only……while writing this one……

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38 Comments
  1. It is nice and emotional dii

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks nikita

  2. Dheemahee

    Beautiful ….

    just cannot express how beautiful u wrote it out awesome one..???

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot

  3. Awesome… just superb

  4. Amazingggggy

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot

  5. Nita D

    It was awesome……

  6. Kehkasha

    Amazing di…
    And I loved that sati and parvati’s explanation….
    Loved it…
    I didn’t cry but I understood the depth….
    Anyways I have posted the next part….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks chatter box….well….i was writing….i don’t know…..i was unable to type words……and seriously don’t know how i wrote it…..it just happened….

  7. Pari123

    Firstly thanks for the links dear… and secondly i don’t have any words to describe how is it. .. It was just awesome and a wonderful one. ..I almost cried while reading it dear. .don’t know but want to see ishkara together. ..keep writing. ..and will wait for your next update

    1. Renimarenju

      Don’t worry…..next month ….i will write ishkara…..certainly i will fullfil ur wish……sorry 4 making u cry…..

  8. Priya15

    Wow its so emotional dii.. Even I don’t know what to say about this part dii!! Just I could say is…. Luv u!!!

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks priya…..and i brought sati and parvati because i think both of their love was unique and unconditional……just like ishana and gauri….and sati maa sacrificed her life and in this one i made ishu to do it……and gauri is bold like parvati maa …so she will defenitely stood with omkara and felt to portray ishana’s pov @ end because every one deserves love….unfortunately destiny seperated ishkara……

  9. Yashu

    Awesome yaar…dis was simply so very nyc…it was a bit emotional…o god it was fab very nyc….loved every bit of it…

  10. Pinkyyy

    Wow dear it is amazing
    Well written
    Loved it

  11. Maybe two people are destined to fall in love but ..”Sometimes the Greatest Love has to end so the destiny can begin”.

    Di …I…am astonished with the description … I felt like u again represented ur soul love and affection into words which can make anyone cry

    Hats off di
    To the emotions u r capable to share with us ….
    I feel blessed that I know such a pure soul in my life…

    1. Renimarenju

      mmm…..bshama…….ups and downs in my ishq will go …..and don’t know what is its end…..thanks

  12. Shivika

    Amazing……loved it……..made me cry for some reasons but happy for some………

    1. Renimarenju

      thanks ….and sorry 4 making u cry

  13. Pratha

    Hey u just nailed it…??
    I really can’t describe my happiness on seeing a good end of our ishkara story..
    U really wrote a story which was heart touching and make any one cry.
    I was crying ?????when i started reading the part of ishkara convo. and then entrance of gauri……
    I just loved it….
    No words can describe ur writing for Ishkara love story, that is complete but it’s not complete…
    (Obviously for all d ishkara fans… )?????

    Please come again with an ff on Ishkara next month positively..?????

    1. Renimarenju

      thanku dear…….next month certainly i will come with an ishkara ff

  14. Riddhima

    Arumai …. Azhagu … Beautiful … Ishkara .. Great work ..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot ridhima…..

  15. so emotional… loved it…

    1. Renimarenju

      thanks a lot

  16. It’s one of the best thing I have ever read in my life I just don’t know what to say or how to describe myself

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lotttt

  17. Mrunal

    what to say I’m speechless…
    and crying also…
    too emotional….
    what an update dear…
    and u know u really justified it well by linking it up with shivji, sati & parvati ji…
    what a explanation marvelous…
    amazing update…

    destiny always plays it’s turn at the most unexpected turn and in the most unexpected way….

    and very sadly ishkara’s love story proves this… hope omri will be able to survive destiny’s unexpected twist & turns…..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u yaar

  18. Luna

    This is just beyond awesome Renima. No words to describe how amazing this ff is. Really it’s so emotional and apart from being emotional your writing has so much depth. It seems like you have penned down your emotions in this story. And I really liked how you made the analogy of Shiv-Sati-Parvati. You know what dear, I love sad endings,especially love stories which are left incomplete because it stays with me longer. Ishkara had an incomplete story but that makes me love this couple more. You have alot of creativity Renima, and if u wrote this ff without any planning then hats off to you.

    1. Renimarenju

      Hey critic……sad endings….i don’t know….how and why i wrote it,…..and just felt 2 write…and when i was writing….really it was very difficult 4 me 2 convey words…..really …..it just happened….only……thanks…..

  19. Kavya347

    You are really GREAT Renima di!!!!!
    The idea of this TS is really beyond all the levels of awesomeness…It’s just so beautiful, emotional and overwhelming…. I don’t know what to say…The pure love, destiny and sacrifice… Really beautifully expressed…I am really speechless. I don’t know how to thank youu for this wonderful piece of art..I love it di…i love it. I am an dieheart Ishkara fan just like you…and I really miss them A LOT…but this ts…it really is heart-tounching.The separation by destiny still accepting the fact and going on with the life with support,and love of the ones who are meant to be with u… Really this though is great…and a great salute to u for this…..And sorry i was busy lately, so commented late.

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks kavya…..see every one deserves love..if it is true….and i just felt 2 justify ishana”s view here……because…..some times there are emotions which are beyond words…..and the feel is really unique….which was the speciality of ishkara…..and 2 justify gauri also….i just connected these three people with each other…..

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