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Intimidating Eyes (SwaSan fs) Shot 1 by Marsuu

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Yeh le depuuu tumhari vampire story πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
Hey guys!! I know I have many stories but this one I had written for my dearest friend depuuuu(Ndsg). She has asked from long time so I don’t want to delay.
I will complete my all stories before I stop writing don’t worry about that.
So here I’m with vampire passionate love story. It will have 3-4 shots hardly. Its different may be little more romantic type. So kindly forgive me if you didn’t like.
Let’s begin

Intimidating Eyes(SwaSan fs)
Shot 1:

On the dark streets of New York, a man is running, stumbling and falling but still he didn’t give up and continue running. He is injured as blood was oozing from the corner of his lips. His shirt was also torn. He signed in little relief as he came in deserted area feeling safe. His fair complexion is glowing in the dark and his intimidating eyes OMG enough to kill anyone. He started walking normally looking around for a place where he can spend this dark cold night. He is wearing only thin black shirt with black pants.
Finally he found two simple houses in that area. Inhaling the air he went towards them. To his disappointment one house is locked, seeking for help he moved towards other one.
Fortunately there was someone inside as he heard some noise.
He bagged at the door loudly as if want to get in fast.
He got irritated as no one was opening the door. But why???

Inside the house, a girl in early twenties is standing thinking something deeply.
“What should I do?” Whispering to herself she bite her nails.
” yes or no”
“What if someone came to kill me”
” I’m alone now”
” my mother will lose her dear daughter”
“Think think swara use your not so fast mind”
These were few thoughts which are going in her mind. She is standing close to the door but not getting courage to open it while the person on the other side is waiting desperately.
“Is someone there??” person standing out in cold roared.
Swara flinched at her place getting little scared.
” I have an idea” she said slowly to herself and ran to drawer opening it and taking out one coin.
” if head comes then I will open the door if tail then no” she smile at her brilliance.
She pounced the coin and it came out
‘HEAD’
Left with no other option she moved back to the door with a cute pout on her lips.
She unlocked it and finally opened only to find a dangerously handsome man standing in front of her. She looked at him from toe to head and here her beautiful hazel doe eyes met his eyes NO NO “INTIMIDATING EYES”
She skipped her heartbeat while looking him shamelessly without blinking her eyes.
” what the f**k were you doing for this much time??” He blurted with venom.

Swara got scared and she immediately closed the door.
“hell” man cursed under breathe.

” hey open the door” he bagged at the door again.
” you came to kill me??” She is almost shivering.
” no I need help” he explained.
She once again open the door and asked
“What help??”
” Let me come in first” he stepped in not even waiting for her consent.

Man went to sofa and lie on it feeling soothing. Swara closed the door and went near him
” you fought with someone?” she gazed blood at the end of his lips.
He looked at her for few seconds then closed his eyes again resting his back with the sofa leaning on it.

” its okay if you don’t want to tell” disappointment was clear in her voice.
He sit straight intensely staring her. Shivers ran through swara’s spine as he found her gazing at her visible cleavage and bare legs. She is wearing shorts and loose shirt.

Swara cursed herself for wearing such exposy dress but it was not her mistake she was not knowing that some stranger will drop in her house and will stare her intensly.

She shifts at her place under his constant gaze. Trying to avoid the awkwardness she said
” checking me out???” Her brows lifted little
” Same you were doing” his dark red lips parted to say these words which made swara hell embarrassed as he is right. She was also checking him few minutes back. But again she is not at fault if a man will be handsome to extreme how can her eyes stop staring him.

” may i get a room” he got up from sofa looking around.
” let’s introduce each other first” she held his wrist in order to make him sit again but her hand sprinked back as he was tooo cold.

He glare her for touching him. He is not the man whom any girl an touch.
” don’t touch me again” he warned
Swara nodded gulping her saliva.

Yeah she is really tempting for him but she can’t initiate its him who will start if he really want to touch her.

” that is the room” she showed him guest room.
He started walking but stopped listening her voice
” what’s your name??”
He didn’t answered and again started moving
” plzz tell ” she almost pleaded closing her eyes.

This little girl is playing with fire. She don’t know who he is???
” Sanskar” he mumbled unknowingly looking at her cute face.
” thank you” she showed him her all teeths.
Sanskar signed and closed the door entering inside.

” Sanskar nice name” she thought.
” but he didn’t asked my name” her mind alerted her.
” I should also introduce myself” she started bagging at the door of guest room.
Sanskar who just sit on the bed wiping his blood with the tissue paper which was kept on table got irritated.
” plzz open the door” she said not stopping to knock it.
” what you want??” He snapped getting raged. This girl is getting on his nerves.
” first open the door then I will tell” she behaved childishly.

Sanskar ignored her and went near cupboard and after opening took one white shirt. He was little surprised from where such clothes came but that’s none of his business he need a shirt and he got it.
He was about to wear it but got annoyed bcoz of the noise standing on the other side of door. Indeed she is unwanted noise who is raising his temper.
He frustratedly open the door and she immediately came inside.
” why you were not opening the door I was….” Her words stuck somewhere as she saw sanskar opening his torn black shirt revealing his well build manly chest. “Ohh god he is breathe taking” the only thought came in her mind.
Sanskar smirk and even felt relief that finally her mouth got shut but unfortunately he was wrong.
” this is my brother’s shirt” she pointed towards the white shirt which Sanskar just wore but still was unbuttoned.
He give her ” then what can I do” look.
” you know now he is in London studying law okay let me tell about myself for what I came here. I’m swara bose studying in xyz college I’m living here with my mother but now you must be thinking where is my mother ??you didn’t saw!! Right but don’t worry she is not invisible (laughs) in the morning she went out of town for business meeting. She will come after one month. So that’s why I’m alone here. I’m very happy type of person talkative that you must have known…”
She was blabbering non stop laughing giggling at her own words. Sanskar has buttoned his shirt but few upper buttons were open. His head started paining listening to her radio. When it became impossible for him to bear he pushed her against the wall smashing his lips against her. Swara was shocked with his sudden action but the thing is she is shivering as her petite figure is pressed by his ice cold body.
” ahh” she mourned as he bite her lower lips hardly. His cold tongue entangled with her warm as he completely enter in her mouth. Swara felt dizzy firstly bcoz of his coldness and secondly pleasure yes she was enjoying it. His taste was so different which was making him lose her senses. Sanskar parted their lips little to inhale oxygen. He kissed her to seal her mouth but after tasting her he want more. Swara’s eyes are tightly closed
” open your eyes” he licked her lips
Swara slowly open her eyes. She stare blankly in his dark brown shades.
” kiss me back staring in my eyes” he rubbed her swollen lips.
She absent mindedly nodded in anticipation.
And here he again capture her lips taking them into a soft and gentle kiss.
Swara look in his eyes as he ordered.
She got astonished when she saw his eyes colour changing from brown to red but still she was kissing trying to meet his pace. Colour again changed from red to blue as they deepened the kiss.
Who is he???
How he is changing his eyes colour??
Is he ghost?? But he is handsome and i don’t think ghosts are hot and handsome.
Such questions has clouded swara’s mind but Sanskar didn’t care and keep on kissing her.
To be continued….

I’m extremely sorry if you all didn’t liked.
Depuuuu dear I had tried something different for you. I hope you will like it.
And its a vampire story so it will be fantasy.
Kindly share your views you can criticise but don’t bash.
Thank you
Bye
Take care

86 Comments
    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  1. Gost…..awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  2. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thanks😘

  3. Superb dearrr

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  4. Wowwww….awsm..superbb…. Ye story tumari baki ff se alag hey…..Too gd… I also like vampire story ….Continue…post soon … Tc..

    1. Mars

      Yeah first time I tried vampire story I’m glad you liked it 😍 thank you so much dear will post soon tc😘😘😘😊😊

  5. NDSG

    OMG Mars it’s soooooooooooo amazing, I didn’t thought you will wrote something like this… 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😍
    I was fully lost in the story… I just loved it so so so much. 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚.
    Like Swara I was also shamelessly staring Sanskaar πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ . what to do he is so hotπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯.

    It’s much much better that I thought. Seriously. Still in hangover of the story.
    ❀❀☁❀❀
    ❀❀❀❀❀
    ☁❀❀❀☁
    ☁☁❀☁☁
    And that Kiss was totally unexpected… πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ I found my self too little to read that 😝😝😝😝😝😝 joking but truly it was beyond my expectationsπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜š
    Thanks for this beautiful gift

    1. Mars

      I’m soooo happy to know that you loved itπŸ˜…πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
      See I become shameless writing over romanceπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ŠπŸ™ŠπŸ™Š
      And that kiss I had written by closing my eyesπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      I agree to swara abbb jab sanskar itna handsome hai tho uski eyes b kya KareπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
      More romance will come ahead don’t feel shy okay😜😜😎😎😎😎
      Thank you so much depuuuu dear I will post next part soon tcπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

      1. NDSG

        I again read thisπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜‚ shameless me😚😚😚😚😚😚 . can’t stop myself reading it againπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    2. Mars

      You won’t believe I don’t know how many times I had read that kiss sceneπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ though its written by me onlyπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ so I’m also shameless only same pinch😘😘😘😘

  6. Bush1122

    Oh oh.. so nice epi…
    Something different…
    Loved it…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  7. Marsu what do u mean u will end all ff before u stop writing don’t do it yaar.daily I came to tu for reading ur ff n ur telling u will stop writing worst nightmare of mine I only read ur n zaimal story now a days she is also not updating I don’t know what happen .pls marsu don’t stop writing yaar ur all ffs r just awesome including all which u had started now .

    1. Mars

      Awww don’t be sad yrr I’m still here only I have tons of stories to complete so will disturb you all a lotπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      That’s so sweet of you that you come on tu to read my storiesπŸ’œπŸ’œ
      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😘😘😊😊😊😊😊

  8. Soujanya

    Awesome….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😊

  9. Kaur Daljeet

    Amazing

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  10. Samaira_khan

    Marsuu!! This is amazingggg fantastic outstanding and just perfect!!! I’m really proud and happy tht u wrote such thing in our Swasan.. Depuu thanks a lotttt for ur idea.. And marsuu thanks for giving such an awsm story.. I guess she will also love it same like me!! I’m love with this the way u described their charactersπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜·πŸ‘ loveddddd it so awsm.. Every scene was sooooooooo perfect starting from the start.. Swara hihi πŸ˜¨πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ she is sameee like me.. I also do antic things just like her tossing the coins.. And everything.. She is so antic piece who goes and talks to strangers like thisπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜.. Sanskar uff he raised the temperature.. Non stop radio again same like me☺️.. Coming to the kiss😍🀐 no words to describe!! Uff u know it’s sooooooooo intense hot and romantic.. Who kisses whole opening their eyes 😈.. Omg tht was fantastic.. And abt changing color of eye.. I’m scaredπŸ˜‘πŸ˜£ just hoping tht he dosent harm swara
    Plzz yaar post soon I will die with eagerness… And post the beast story too I’m waiting from longgg time.. Love u loads tc..

    1. Mars

      Awww your comment always make me happy😍😍😍😍😍
      Even I’m thankful to depuu dear bcoz she asked me to give this type of story that’s why I thought otherwise I would have never written vampire storyπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

      As always swara is cute and crack pieceπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ and Sanskar hot and handsomeπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ
      Like this they make perfect coupleπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ
      I’m glad to know you loved it thank you so much for your worthy words😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      Beast’s soulmate will give soon sorry for the delay😒😒
      Take care😊😊😊
      Lots of love😘😘😘😘

    2. NDSG

      Heheh it’s me Deepu😝😝😝😝😝 thanks u dear u liked it… Ideas is incomplete with words and thoughts, but Mars not only complete it but also made it perfect πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    3. Mars

      Awwww so sweet of you depuu😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    4. Mars

      Aww samaira dear😘😘😘😘😘

  11. nice
    and marsu sorry for not commenting on your previoues ffs from last two weeks… sorry dear not able to comment but i read all all are awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and no need of sorry yrr its okay you read my stories im happy tc😊😊😘😘

  12. Independent

    Awesome dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much di tc😊😊😘

  13. Superb

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😘

  14. Damn good yaar

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😘

  15. OMG I loved it ❀❀
    It was very interesting..the way u described Sanskaar’s hot and the kiss wasπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ
    Thank you for this vampire story πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
    Plz don’t stop writing plz😒😒😒😒😭😭😭😭
    Tc😘😘

    1. Mars

      Swasan kiss is always sizzlingπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ I’m glad you loved it thank you so much dear and don’t worry still I’m here only and I can’t stop as you know the number of stories I haveπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Take care😘😘😘😊😊

  16. Tamil

    Wow…..it’s amazing dear loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  17. Wowww!!! It was really amazing….Loved it.

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  18. Rachna

    Awsm Dr

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😘😘😊

  19. It’s mind blowing 😍😍😍vampire love story 😍 SwaSan ki so amazing Swara all time naughty & Cute 😘handsome sanskar 😍😍post next part soon….

    1. Mars

      Yuppp cutie swara and hottie sanskarπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc😘😘😘😊😊😊

  20. Wow loved it and the end was a little bit scary and dunny also how swara thought he could be a ghost but they’re not handsome πŸ™ˆβ€οΈπŸ˜‚

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc😘😘😘😊😊

  21. Wow marsuu i feel shy for sanskar comment to swara for the kiss.so sanskar is the vampire u know i alway love romantic scene of swasan and laughed like a madd. Swara i will tell u handsome and hot boys are dangerous but swara will learn it so soon. I love this fantancy story.

    1. Mars

      I’m feeling shy to talk about that kissπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ŠπŸ™ŠπŸ™ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜œ yuppp swara will realize soon that these handsome man are not tooo goodπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ thank you so much dear tc😘😘😘😘😊😊

  22. AnuAnn

    Marssu y did u said that u will complete your all ffs before you stop writing.. don’t dare to do so.. atleast not now.. everyday I’m madly waiting for your ffs. Nd coming to story ..it is really amazing .. ur stories r always a bliss to read

    1. Mars

      Ohhhh for now leave that as I’m here only so enjoy my stories😜😜😜😜 thank you so much anuu dear tc😘😘😘😊😊😊

  23. Rita

    the room is on fire yaar… amazingly written

    1. Mars

      Indeed it was on fireπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ™ŠπŸ™Š thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  24. Arpita arohi

    Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  25. Mumpi

    Wow wow wow wow!!!! Now wat else should I say it’s amazing.

    1. Mars

      Aww thank you so much dear tc😘😘😘😊😊

  26. Awesome 😊😊😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊

  27. Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😘😊

  28. superb shot… u rock it

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😘😘😘😊

  29. Awesome dear I loved it I love all ur stories plz don’t stop writing dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will surely try not to stop writing tc😊😊😘😘

  30. Awesome and excellent dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  31. Adishu

    woweew this one is going to be different… loved it… post soon…

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc😊😊😘😘

  32. Wow man what a story I am loving it… I loved it 😍😍😍😍I want to say that you’re one of my fav writers and I read all your stories so far but couldn’t comment as I am busy studying but I must say you make fabulous stories and I love them…. Swasan indeed are the best couple and I love them and I love helly as well… So I am also a big swasanholic and hellyholic

    1. Mars

      Wow same pinch I’m also hellyholic and swasanholicπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ so sweet of you for your words😍😍 don’t be sorry yrr I can understand thank you so much dear tcπŸ’œπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜Š

  33. Its awesome nd interesting too…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊

  34. So interesting😍😍😍, love story of a handsome vampire πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘½ and a crazy girlπŸ‘―πŸ‘― reading it will have a great funπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  35. Nice……

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😘

  36. Prashasti7

    I love vampires 😍😍😍 super excited

    1. Mars

      Ohh then wait for it😊😊 thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  37. Harneet

    omg .. di what’s this .. jo bhi hai (hott hai )next part plzz plzzzzzzzzz soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon

  38. Gayathri.visu

    Blushing….blushing…..blushing! Marsuuuuuuuuuu……what did u done? OMG!!!!!

    1. Mars

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ even I was blushing. Thank you dear😊😊

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