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An Intangible Feeling (RAGSAN FF) Part 6

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It was complete silence in between them. He was disturbed remembering her tears n she was looking at his tensed demeanor. “Did I ask something wrong..??” ragini broke the ice..asking innocently. He came into present n nodded in a no. ” You were crying because of me..so to console you.. I kissed you ” said he genuinely and she nodded her head bit shy.

” Why do you study all the time… Did your parents scold you for low marks..??” asked she curious. He chuckled listening her and a curve appear on his lips. “Do you always like this… Kiddo all the time..!!” asked he. “Don’t call me that…I am not a kid” said she twisting her lips. He laugh and pull her cheeks. ” You are cute” said he. “My jaanu said the same ” said ragini smiling widely. The smile on his face dissappear at once…ragini look at him confused.

“Who is your jaanu ” asked he with difficulty. “You want to meet her” asked ragini excited. “Her” murmured he and felt happy in her heart to know that her jaanu is a girl and smile widely. ” No some other time.. I need to go now ” said he n ragini made a pout face. He smiled at her and forward his hand. ” Friends ” She smile and place her hand in his hand shaking it. “Friends… But you need to follow some rules ” said she with attitude. ” Rules ” asked he confused n she nodded grinning.

” Noooooo..I can’t do that ” said he horrified. Ragini laugh looking at his expressions. “Why… they both are so good..!!” said she proudly. “Ragini… look I agreed to ur 2 rules.. I’ll never scold you…n I’ll not remain as you said ‘in this sadu mood ‘….but not 3rd one…I am not going to do friendship with ur two stupid friends ” said he making faces. ” Don’t call my friends stupid.. ” said she with a angry pout. He chuckled n nodded.

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” Why are you asking this ” asked adi coming towards her unknowingly. Mishu look into his eyes and lost herself. “Coz…I…” said she lost. “You..” asked he taking a step closer. “I…lo..lovve..” said she breathing heavily due to his closeness. “You.. love.. ” asked he placing a hand around her waist and dragging her towards his chest. She hold his shoulders still looking into his eyes. Her breath got uneven..distance between them becoming small… both were lost in themselves… their lips were about to touch. Laksh wide his eyes looking at them and screamed “Adityaaaaa”. Both jerked and parted immediately. Adi look at her shocked whereas mishu turned n blushed thinking about their closeness and ran from there. Adi look at her running figure and shut his eyes frustrated to think what he had done.

“What were you doing aditya ” asked laksh angrily. ” Wo.. I…I..don’t.. kno..w…. I.. am.. really sorry.. laksh ” said adi at loss of words . He was on the verge of cry to think that one side he hurted his love and other side his best friend. He was scared to loose any of them. Laksh look at him and pressed his cheek to control his laugh. “Do you love her ” asked he sternly. Adi gulped his saliva and bend his head not able to say anything to him. ” Answer me Aditya Singhaniya ” said laksh loudly jerking him. He nodded in positive and a tear skipped from his eyes.

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“Why can’t you accept my love arjun… Am I that bad ” asked kajal emotionally holding his collar tightly. He look into her eyes which shows deep pain. He felt something pricked in his heart to see her like that. “We are not meant for eachother kajal…You should move on in your life.. I have no interest in you ” said he emotionless removing her hand from his collar. “We are meant for eachother… and you will realize it one day…but I will pray to God..to make you realize it before it’s too late ” said she wiping the corner of her eyes and left from there. “I am sorry kajal.. I am really sorry ” said arjun painfully.

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“What happened kaju” asked swara worried looking at her crying. “Why can’t he love me swara.. why..!!!!…No one love me swara .. no one..!! ” said she and burst into cry hugging her. Ragini who came with sanskaar see this and rushed towards them. “Why are you crying kaju” asked she and tears roll down from her cheeks. Kajal look at her and composes herself and wipe ragini’s tears. ” Me and swaru want to see.. who can cry better…but you won the game” said kajal pouting to lighten the atmosphere. Swara laugh with teary eyes and ragini giggled. Sanskaar first time smile at kajal’s word. He look at trio and came there.

“Ahem…ahem…we came here for something right ” said sanskaar to ragini clearing his throat. She look at him with twinkling eyes and smile widely. Swakaj look at them confused.

“Mmmm….friends ” said he looking here n there forwarding his hand. Swakaj wide their eyes and ragini grinned. “Thudddddddd” A large sound came and trio look at kajal who laying on ground unconscious.

“Who are you ” asked kaju with wide open eyes looking at sanskaar like he is some alien. He chuckled n make her stand giving water bottle to swara. “He is Sanskaar only kaju..he is my friend now ” said ragini smiling widely. Swara who was drinking water spit it on sanskaar’s face. He glared at her wiping his face. She murmured a quick sorry n ragkaj giggled. Ragini explain how they did friendship n her rules. Kajal patted her back proudly and both swakaj forward their hand. He shook their hand with his both hands making faces.

“May I drop you home ” asked sanskaar to ragini. “Don’t give me this much shock in one day.. I will die coz of heart attack” said kajal placing a hand on her heart . Swarag laugh and sanskaar gave her a sarcastic smile. “No… I will go with jaanu…she must be coming ” said ragini smiling. “Ok ragu bachha.. We are leaving ” said swakaj bidding her bye n giving sanskaar a weird look. “Huh..so irritating ” murmured he when swakaj left.

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“Why is jaanu not coming..??” said ragini pouting looking at her watch again n again. Sanskaar who started reading his book leaning to the wall…look at her n smile. “To keep on checking time again n again.. she will not come early ” said he. “But why she didn’t come.. We have to go to home naa ” said she leaning beside him on wall. Sanskaar stir a bit when her shoulder brushed with his shoulder. He look at her who closed her eyes feeling relax for a moment. Her face was looking so peaceful… so serene…her kohl -black hair flowing in the air touching his face sometimes…her rosy lips were lilac soft…he gulped looking at her lips…he want to captu…….he shook himself immediately. “What the hell you are thinking sanskaar.??? ..What’s wrong with you ” murmured he annoyed. “What’s wrong with you??? ” questioned ragini as she listened him. “n..no..nothing ” said he smiling nervously.

“Ragu bachha.. I have some work in college as we are seniors and we have to organize a fresher’s party for you guys.. So can you wait until I get free” said mishu coming towards ragini little worried. Ragini pouted and mishu give her a puppy face. “Jaanu…I want to go home naa…” said ragini sad. “how…” started mishu but interrupted by sanskaar “May I drop her home ” “And who are you ” asked mishu placing her hands on her waist. “Jaanu he is the one who ki……” ” Ragini…I’ll give my intro myself ” interrupted sanskaar immediately.

“Hi…I am Sanskaar Maheshwari.. her new friend.. And you are?? ” asked he. ” Sanskaar Maheshwari ” murmured mishu remembering where he listened this name and wide her eyes realising it. “You are laksh’s brother ” asked she surprised. He nodded n she hugged him instantly. He boggled at her sudden act and look at ragini with shock. She too wide her eyes but giggled seeing sanskaar’s shocked face. Mishu parted n he took a deep breath. ” You are my ragu’s friend.. Omg..he told me lie that you don’t make friends and always busy with your books..I will not spare him” exclaimed mishu excited plus angry on laksh. ” Jannu..he is keetabi keeda only ” said ragini giggling and he gave her a glare. She pouted and he smile. “You very well know about me…but I still don’t know you ” said he to mishu. “Hii…I am Mishka.. Ragini’s elder sister or you can say her Jaanu ” said mishu side hugging ragini. Sanskaar smile at them.

” You are fine naa…you are asking me to take ur bike and you want to drive my car ” said laksh worried placing a hand on his forehead. “Bhai.. Stop yaar..and give me keys” said sanskaar irritated. “Why do need my car btw” asked laksh suspicious. “You are giving keys or not” asked he. “If I say… NO” laksh tease. ” Aagghh..keep it with you only ..I don’t need now” said he annoyed. “Are…listen… ” started laksh but he left till then.

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So how’s it..??
Please do comment and let me know with ur views if you like it.

Till then
Be happy n keep smiling.

47 Comments
  1. Awesome and interesting

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear.. 🙂

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear.. 🙂

  2. Amazing….. Marvelous…. Jealousy with Janu……. Awesome.

    U are alright???? …… I think ur wounds are now start to healing……… Take care dear even if u feel ok…… Health is wealth dear …….. Loved it dear

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear.. 🙂
      Yaa.. I am alright now… Thank you so much for ur concern.. :-*
      And happy to get ur comment first time.. Keep reading.. 🙂

  3. Sindhura

    Awesome I love ragsan and even Kajall arjun

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much sindhu.. I am really happy to know that you like arkaj too..:-*

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much ammy..:-*

  4. Dharani

    awesome

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dhara..:-*

  5. Shrilatha

    Awesome

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much shri..:-*

  6. Sreevijayan

    Nice update dear…

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much sri..:-*

  7. Super cute episode.RagSan,MishAdi,SanLak scenes r awesome :-*
    Omg i cant wait pls post the next episode tomorrow plsss

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much ani…And really sorry dear…it will take a little time to update.. As I stated one more story on wattpad.. I haven’t posted it here..
      But I will try to post An Intangible Feeling… As soon as possible.. 🙂

  8. awesome dear ragsan are so cute takecare

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much saro..:-*

  9. awesome

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much aditi..:-*

  10. amazing post soon

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear… :-* I’ll try

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear.. :-*

  11. awesomeeee

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much vani..:-*

  12. Inu

    Superb epi.

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much inu..:-*

  13. Keerthu

    Super dr.. Nice pair.. Waiting for next ff dr..

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much keerthu..but may be I will not be able to update my next ff here..but you can read it in wattys.. 🙂

      1. Keerthu

        Plz tell ur watys id..

      2. Mmp

        My wattys id-Ragika1

      3. Mmp

        Sorry its ragika1… It’s a small r.

  14. Asra

    fabulous dear… ragsan scenes r sooo cute….omg adilak scenes haha poor adi got fear of laksh….kajal scenes superbbb….adimish scenes also supper dear….loved it alot…..eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much asra…I am really happy that you like it.. 🙂 will try to post soon.. 🙂 tc

  15. Asw

    Amazing keep going

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear.. 🙂

  16. AMkideewani

    Mindblowing dear I love it

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear.. :-*

  17. Awesome

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much ale..:-*

  18. Love this Sanky and Ragu a lot dear. I already read it in watty

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear… I am happy that you like it.. 🙂

  19. A.xx

    Amazing as usual and loved ragsan even adilak and sanlak xx

    1. Mmp

      Thank you so much dear… Happy that you like it.. 🙂

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