An Intangible Feeling (RAGSAN FF) Part 12

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“Kajal, Are you Okay..?? ” arjun cup her face when he see her all dull and sad. “Yaa..!! I am fine ” replied she with a weak smile. “No..!! you are not..!! Something happened..!! Right..!! ” asked he concerned. “She is at home arjun..!! She is at home.. ” chocked she holding his shirt in her fist. He shut his eyes to see her this much vulnerable. “I have to talk Adi..!! I can’t let you suffer like this ” he embrace her in his arms. “ arjun.. He will not believe you..!!  Like he didn’t believe me years ago..!! “sobbed she. He felt helpless to see her like this and determine to tell aditya about it.

“You are looking beautiful ” whispered laksh in swara’s ear. “Thank you ” replied she blushing tugging her strands behind her ear. “Hey swara..did you see kaju..?? Party is going to start soon” chriped ragini coming towards them. “Arjun went to pick her” informed laksh. “Where is your brother btw” ragini ask placing her hands on her waist. “He is in parking lot..!! Just coming ” replied he. She nodded and left from there.

“Why are you late..??  You know you shouldn’t make your girlfriend wait for you ” ragini glare at sanskaar. “Girlfriend ” he mumbled shocked and then realized and laugh. “So, Is my girlfriend angry with me..??” asked he cutely. Ragini smile and nodded in no. Sanskaar forward his arm to hold him. She placed her arm around him and both headed into the party. 


“So, as I promised you on our date… May I..?? ” asked sanskaar forwarding his hand. Ragini look at him confused and he directed towards dance floor. Ragini grinned widely and immediately hold his hand and dragged him on dance floor. “Are slowly ” called sanskaar but she didn’t listen anything and dragged him to DJ. “Please put some slow romantic song” ragini said to DJ and sanskaar look at her amazed. “Why are you looking at me like this?? ” asked ragini. He shakes his head and music played.

Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave..
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere…
(Kol- with)

(Ragini smile excitedly and place her arms around his neck. He look at her amused. She narrow her eyes and shook her head and make him hold her from waist.)

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansaanda ravaan
Tainu takda rawaan…
(takda – see)

(Sanskaar look at her intensely. He was feeling something different to see her this close. Ragini wink at him and he chuckle n then laugh.)

Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di
Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di

Ae to nazraan nazraan di gal ve
Tu vi sun le zaraa
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa rehna kol tere…

(“You are really happy, don’t you..?? “whisper sanskaar and she nodded vigorously. Sanskaar chuckled. “You know I always dreamed about perfect date food,music, slow dance. Today I feel it’s completed “said she cheerily. “But it’s not date, It’s college party” said he smirking. “Don’t spoil my mood..!! You are my boyfriend and it’s date for me..!! Our second date ” chirped ragini with twinkling eyes. For a moment sanskaar thought it all could be possible but he shook his head knowing that for her these words have different meaning. Really she is that innocent or she has some feelings for him. He look at her who was still lost slowly swaying her body with the music.)

Tainu takdi rawaan
Naina ‘ch tere main vasdi ravaan
Paagal main khud nu banaunda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tainu takda ravaan

Ishq duaavan jaane kab aave
Ishq duaavan aave jab aave
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main taa baitha kol tere…

(Ragini look at him with a bright smile. She was never like this with anyone other than her family. But now its feel like there is something different about him. She feels so comfortable so protective in his presence. She want to tell him that after her family he is the first person whom she trust immensely. She smile and place her head on his chest.)

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tenu takda ravan (x2)

(He stood numb with her sudden action. Don’t know what he was feeling at that moment. He tighten his grip around her waist putting his chin on her head.Slowly he wrapped his arms around her back.They were totally lost in the moment that they didn’t realize that song is completed.)

“Song is completed..!! Now you can leave her Sanky” wink laksh teasingly and they jerked immediately. Ragini gave him a nervous smile and left from there. He look in her direction lost until laksh nudge his shoulder to his. He look at him startled and scratches the back of his head embrassed . “Should I tell dad..that now you are officially her boyfriend ” tease laksh wiggling his brows. Sanskaar glare at him and left from there. “They look cute together ” said swara from behind. “And we..??” murmured he turning back. “Did you said something..?? ” asked she. He shook his head in no and smile at her.

“Jeej Jannu ” exclaimed ragini and mishadi parted immediately embarrassed. They look in her direction with wide eyes and she was looking back with the same expression. “Ragu…bac…bachha.. ” panted mishu with unsteady breath and then blushed. “I h..have some wor..kk.. I will be b..back ” fumbled adi and rushed from there.Mishu tug her strand behind her ear. “How was it..??” asked ragini excited and mishu wide her eyes. “How was your kiss Jannu..?? ” asked she again wrapping her arm around her shoulder when she didn’t get her reply. “Rag..Ragu…” mishu engulfed her in a hug shyly not able to face her little sister totally embarrassed looking like a ripe tomato.

Arjun entered in the party with kajal beside him who look all drained out and lost. After his lots of pleading she came here. He thought this will change her mood. Adi came from sideways and bumped into arjun. “Sorry ” said both at the same time where as adi look totally flushed and arjun look torn. Adi’s expression change immediately seeing kajun together and concern covered his face to see kajal’s state. Her eyes were red, little puffy… tears strained on her cheek to see her closely. “Kaj….” he about to ask her what happened but retreat back looking at their joined hand. “I need to talk to you ” said he with clenched jaw to arjun. Arjun look in her direction debating himself to whether is it good idea to leave kajal alone and talk to adi or not. Both things are necessary to stay with kajal and to talk to adi. But this time he can’t leave her alone. He squeezed her hand little, who was looking at ground, and then look at adi ” I too want to talk adi…but this is not the right time…we will talk later” Adityaa gritted his teeth and left from there running his hand in his hair frustrated.

Sanskaar look here n there to see ragini but she was nowhere in the sight. Then his eyes darted on the entrance when he saw her coming little stressed. He run towards her. “Is something wrong..?? ” asked he. ” Don’t know, Jeejs seem really disturb so jaanu left to see him” said ragini. “Don’t worry, everything will be okay..!! She is with him naa” sanskaar gave her a reassuring smile and she smile back. “Can we go out from here..?? I am in no mood to party now” said ragini and he nodded and both left from there.


“I don’t feel good when someone is upset around me” said ragini sitting on a bench in college backyard. Sanskaar sit beside her and place his hand on her’s. ” So what should I do to make you feel good.. ” asked he tapping his chin from his index finger. Ragini smile looking at him. ” Think think” chriped she. Sanskaar narrow his eyes and she again made a serious face. ” I think this can make your mood little good ” he forward a large dairy milk silk and her eyes lit immediately. She grabbed the chocolate from his hand but he is not leaving it from his hand. “Give naa..!!” pouted ragini. “On one condition ” said he and she raise her eyebrow. ” You said to teach me how to eat it. So teach me first and then we cam share it” said he and she show him thumbs up. He let it go and she unwrapped it instantly.

” Hey this is wrong..!! It had my share too” sanskaar glare at her when she finished the chocolate within in a minute. She smile sheepishly and said “Next time bring two…One is yours and one is mine..!!Then I will teach you ” His mouth shaped a ‘O’ and ragini giggled. Sanskaar look at her face. She was looking so beautiful in the moonlight, giggling and her face is smeared with the chocolate. He lift his hand and took it near her face. Her giggle dried in her throat. He place his warm hand on her cheek and she tilt her face instantly feeling his touch. He rub his thumb near her lips making the chocolate smear on her face more. Ragini was too lost in his touch that she herself doesn’t know when she shifted closer to him. He bend little and whisper in her ear huskily “I can take my share now too” She shivered feeling his hot breath touching her skin and shut her eyes. He lift his other hand too cupping her face and tilt his face near to her. Both were breathing heavily. It feels like both are out of their sense not knowing what is going to happen within a moment. She shrudder when she feel his breathing on her lips. They were inches apart. She open her choco smeared lips in anticipation. He too close his eyes and move closer to her.

Sorry guys, holding my ears for updating it this late.

Hope you like it.

No proof read, So please excuse me for the mistakes.

Till then
Be happy n keep smiling

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  1. awesome

  2. Amazing <3

  3. Lahari


  4. Amazing

  5. Akankshanna

    What happened to kajun…… Amazing…….. Awesome………. Curious to know about Passport t

  6. Akankshanna

    Past*… Writing mistake

  7. Awesome dear, loved Ragsan sweet scene’s

  8. Asw

    Amazing keep going ?

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