THE INSEPERABLES – ISHQBAAZ SS -SHOT 6

Hello this VHM signing back with a new OS …….i thought I will end this OS may be in two to three shots but I guess this took more episodes …….in the next shot this SS will end …….this SS is on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….

Pinky wiped her tears and came towards Dadi and spoke

Pinky ‘’ Wah mummy ji……..such a great decision…..what was Shivaay’s and my mistake in this ? whatever happened was done by Shakthi ji …but you are punishing us ? why ? I need an answer mummy ji? Please tell me? ‘’

Mahi ‘’I will say? Why are you troubling dadi ? you need an answer infact everyone present here needs an answer so I will say ‘’

Mahi looked at everyone and finally spoke ‘’ I have ásked Dadi to take this decision….otherwise I will go infront of the media and will reveal what all Shakthi ji did with my mother and how he cheated her …..with this you all know what will happen ..i know, you all know what will happen but still I will say…if I come infront of media with my truth then the reputation and good will of this family, the oberoi family will be gangaram……ttcchhh………’’

Dadi ‘’ yes…and I cannot play with the family reputation………so Shakthi will divorce Pinky and till the divorce happens Pinky and Shivaay will leave this house and stay somewhere else……….not in Oberoi mansion definitely’’

Pinky ‘’mummy ji I never expected this from you…you are a mom and only thought of your son and your family reputation …what about me mummy ji …what did I not do for this family from the day I got married till date …….how can you forget all these so easily ? when you had to support me the most you are backing out and instead sending me ? you are so much pressurised by this farzi that you are taking such a decision? Above all why are you punishing my child …my shivaay…today this oberoi empire is doing well because of him…only because of him…if he leaves there will be nothing left……..i tell you there will be nothing left’’

Pinky cried vigourously………..

OmRu stares at Mahi angrily and try to hit him when Dadi stops and says ‘’No one will hurt Mahi from now on……..he is the eldest heir of Oberoi family’’
Rudra ‘’but Dadi what about Shivaay bhayya and Choti maa ?’’

Dadi ‘’they will not hold any property of Obeoris , they will not retain even the surname of Oberoi’s after the Divorce….Shivaay Singh Oberoi will just become Shivaay…………and Pinky Shakthi Singh Oberoi will become Pinky’’

Ground slipped under Pinky’s feet……….Shivaay was getting hurt very badly….

Mahi ‘’ and if they try to use the Oberoi surname then I will move them to court…….’’

Om ‘’I will never accept this……….you are punishing both of them without any fault dadi…this is wrong’’

Dadi ‘’ what I did earlier was wrong…what I am doing now is right……….’’

She turned towards Pinky and Shivaay and said ‘’Billu and Pinky it’s time you pack your bags and leave the Oberoi Mansion……..i will ask driver to drop you wherever you want this is the least I can do……..’’

Pinky and Shivaay turned to go when Dadi said ‘’wait a minute……I have taken one more decision ……Shakthi will be marrying Kamini after getting divorce from Pinky…now everyone can leave’’

Saying this Dadi turned towards Mahi and Mahi smirked victoriously once again……..

Pinky and Shivaay turned to go wiping their tears……….no one noticed who was standing at the door……Anika turned to look and she said ‘’ K …A…M…I..N…I’’ rather loudly at a slow pace

OmRu were pissed looking at her and went towards Shivaay and Pinky………

Pinky and Shivaay stood in shock looking at Kamini and Kamini showed attitude to both of them…..Pinky felt disgusted and left from there…….

Kamini smilingly entered and touched the foot of Dadi Dadi blessed her

Kamini ‘’Whatever I heard now is it true maaji? ‘’

Dadi ‘’yes…I am correcting a mistake…and all this is because of your son Mahi’’

Kamini happily went near Mahi and brushed his face and smilingly said ‘’ I Knew..i knew you would get me my rights…I am so happy today…finally…finally I will be marrying Shakthi and becoming an Oberoi Bahu’’

Saying this she hugged Mahi and put an irritated face…….

Kamini ‘’ go Mahi take maaji to her room…’’

Dadi left from there , Mahi accompanied Dadi ………. Kamini stared at Dadi and Mahi until they both left…she started looking around the entire house and her eyes were glittering with greed……
while Kamini was busy with Mahi and Dadi…Shakthi got a message…….he felt relaxed and messaged Anika something…….Anika came back to living room and looked at Shakthi…….he signalled her to act…Anika smiled and left……….

Only Shakthi and Kamini were left in the living room………..

Kamini ‘’I thought you would hand me over to the police…but you gave me surprise’’

Shakthi smiled and said ‘’ yeah a very big surprise….now I think you are happy ?’’

Kamini ‘’ yes off course I am so happy….finally……..finally we will be together’’

Shakthi ‘’yeah right…….if my mom has decided then I would have to do it’’

Kamini ‘’yeah…I wouldn’t have done any mistake if maaji had taken this decision long ago’’

Shakthi ‘’ what mistake?’’

Kamini ‘’no nothing…I was just blabbering something’’

Shakthi ‘’come on Kamini …I have already decided to divorce Pinky and…..about Shivaay…shivaay will also be leaving with his mom…now only you and Mahi will be with me’’

Kamini ‘’Mahi…what’s the need for him to stay with us…he is useless fellow’’

Shakthi ‘’kamini, he is our son why are you saying he is useless’’

Kamini ‘’you are so innocent Shakthi…when we never got physical then how will Mahi be our son?’’

Shakthi ‘’what? But how come he looks like Shivaay ?’’

Kamini ‘’that a secret’’

Shakthi ‘’no more secrets Kamini…now we are going to be one …so why hide things…if anything is related to Pinky you can openly say me..because she is a real headache for me and I don’t mind to listen anything against her….and still if you want to keep secret then I must think again of marrying you or not’’

Kamini ‘’ok fine..i will say…’’

Kamini looked around the entire hall when she assured herself she continued saying
‘’Mahi is twin brother of Shivaay….he is yours and Pinky’s son…….i just stole him soon after Pinky delivered n‘’

Shakthi ‘’what ? but how ?’’

Kamini ‘’yes… Pinky was very tired by then after Mahi was born she has to deliver her second baby too…a daima was doing her second delivery …I enetered in the tretext of cleaning the baby and left from there……I stole him to take revenge from Pinky and from then on I brought up…….’’

Shakthi ‘’but how were you not caught ?’’

Kamini ‘’the daima who did delivery saw me few days later and I gave her money to keep her mouth shut’’

Shakthi received a message…he opened and Kamini too saw along with Shakthi

Daima ‘’the first son of the oberoi’s is illegitmate’’ and the clip ended….

Shakthi ‘’kamini is she the same Daima..’’

Kamini ‘’yes Shakthi’’

Shakthi ‘’but she said first son is illegitimate that means Mahi..he is illegitimate…this is a puzzle’’

Kamini ‘’it’s not a puzzle shakthi…something is amiss …..play the clip again…..

They saw the clip again……….Kamini smiled and said ‘’someone did a very smart job….’’

Shakthi ‘’what are you trying to say‘’

Kamini ‘’where has your brain gone……….didn’t you notice the gap between the sentence…..listen again

The first son of the oberoi’s is ‘’beep beep beep ‘’illegitimate
(Oberoi’s ka pehla bacha nazayaz ‘’beep beep beep’’ hain)

She meant
the first son of the oberoi’s is ‘’ brought up as ’’ illegitimate…
(oberoi’s ka pehla bacha nazayaz ‘’ jaisa pal raha ‘’ hain

someone has edited this video message….and you have believed… ‘’
Shakthi ‘’ God ….you are very sharp…….and you did all this to gain me’’

Kamini ‘’offcourse Shakthi…’’

Shakthi ‘’ so nice of you…you definitely deserve a very good place Kamini’’

As soon as Kamini spoke the truth all the Oberoi family members arrived in the hall……….Kamini was startled ………she didn’t understand for a moment what was happening and before she could understand she had a tight slap on her cheeks……..she saw it was from Pinky…….

Shakthi turned towards Pinky and said ‘’do you trust me now Pinky……I asked you to listen the complete truth but you were adamant…’’

He went towards Shivaay and spoke ‘’I was going to bring out this truth but before that you confronted…I am not a cheater Shivaay…….’’

Shivaay hugged his father and crying said ‘’I am sorry dad…I am really sorry…when I got to know the truth of Mahi I was much angered ..i thought you cheated my mom……..but I was not aware of this truth’’

Shakthi said to Shivaay ‘’I know you love your mom and can go against anyone for her…….i can understand and I have no complaints for that…don’t apologise you are not at fault…if someone is at fault it is’’

He turned towards Kamini and said

Shakthi ‘’Kamini I never expected you to be so downfallen……..you know why I never spoke to you much in college because I saw your real face of greed……..you never loved me…you loved the money behind me……and today everything is proved………you might be thinking how did they all come on time………..i will tell you…….i messaged Anika to convince everyone to come to living room and stand at a safe distance without being seen……..she did that……………..’’

——————–FLASHBACK STARTS——————
Anika gets the message from Shakthi which read as

‘’Anika beta Mahi mera aur Pinky ka beta hain …. mera aur kamini ka nahi… mujhe abhi DNA reports mile jisse ye baat sabit hoti hain….iss waqt sirf tum meri madat kar sakti ho………sare gharwalon ko living room mein lekar aaoo jaha se woh sab kuch dekh sake aur sun sake par ham unko dekh na sake……….meri ye ek madat kardo…..mein aaj sab sabit kardoonga’’

Anika came back to living room and looked at Shakthi…….he signalled her to act…Anika smiled and left……

Anika went to Dadi where Mahi was present

Anika ‘’ Mahi your actual and real mom is Pinky aunty not Kamini’’

Mahi ‘’what nonsense’’

Anika ‘’this is truth and you know I never lie’’

Mahi ‘’I will never trust on this…’’

Anika ‘’fine …if Kamini says it by herself then will you agree’’

Mahi ‘’she will never say this’’

Anika ‘’ok then you come down to living room and hide in a safe place where you can see and listen to Kamini and Shakthi uncles conversation without being seen …remember truth never hides’’

Mahi agreed ………………

Anika then went to Shivaay’s room where ShivOmRu were present

Anika ‘’Shivaay what are you doing?’’

Shivaay ‘’it’s time to leave Anika……..so packing my stuff…..’’

Anika ‘’Shivaay you are not going anywhere there is another truth you need to learn’’

OmRu ‘’what do mean Anika bhabhi’’

Anika showed Shakthi’s message to them ….OmRu were excited that Shivaay and their choti maa will stay back……..Shivaay was shocked and he had many emotions running within him…he sat on the bed for sometime and came back to reality after hearing Anika’s voice

Anika ‘’Shivaay just one more thing needs to be done……..i cannot dare to go infront of Pinky aunty ji…so you need to bring her to living room…………please …please do this for me’’

Shivaay agreed …Anika asked Rudra to get Tej…Rudra bought Tej……….

————————–FLASHBACK ENDS——————————-

Mahi collapsed on the ground after listening to Kamini’s truth………..no one noticed him……….Anika finally saw him and signalled Shivaay…………

Shivaay turned towards Mahi and ran to him……….OmRu also went near him………….all the three brothers held their fourth and eldest brother and served him water first………..they showered so much of love only after minutes of knowing the truth……the same love he always longed to have…..

Mahi was teary eyed……..Rudra wiped his tears and said

Rudra ‘’Mahi bhayya….please don’t cry……..there was no fault of yours………we are sorry…we didn’t know the truth and did very much wrong with you……..’’

Om ‘’yes Mahi…we are really sorry……please forgive us’’

Mahi hugged both of them and cried ‘…OmRu reciprocated……….
Mahi wiped their tears ‘’ I always longed for a family …….and now I have a very big family……..i am …I am sorry for all the wrong deeds I have done earlier…I am bad not very bad….really …I swear…I had no intention to hurt any of you…not even Shivaay’’

Rudra ‘’we know that bhayya…….please don’t cry more……..’’

Mahi walked towards Shivaay and Shivaay with happy tears hugged him……………it was Kabhi khushi kabhi gham moment in Oberoi family……………

Shivaay ‘’you know what …now I have someone to call bhayya…….till now I was bade bhayya but now you will be bade bhayya of this family…….’’

Shivaay turned towards Sumo and said ‘’Sumo …from now on you have to call me Shivaay bhayya and Mahi as Bade bhayya…sorry our mahi bhayya as bade bhayya’’

Sumo smiled happily………

Mahi ‘’but Shivaay…we are twins ..of the same age…then why bhayya ?’’

Shivaay ‘’because you were born some minutes earlier than me and I …I don’t want to miss the opportunity to call someone as bhayya…’’

Mahi hugged Shivaay again and said ‘’Sorry Shivaay’’……….Shivaay nodded his head horizontally and said ‘’no more sorries’’

All the four brothers had the Oberoi moment……………

Mahi saw Kamini and Kamini saw Mahi with much anger……both their eyes met……..

Mahi went towards Kamini and raised his hand but stopped, dropped his heand and bent his head down…he was very emotional at that moment…….Kamini closed her eyes and after few seconds she saw Mahi’s head bent down …….

Mahi ‘’why did you do this…….. I was just born and you changed my fate…..You had your motives and you used a just born baby …….i never understood why you didn’t love me…..Why you always asked me to go away from you…..Why you felt me as a burden……but now your confession has answered all the questions……I am feeling like doing gangaram right here right now…..but I am stopping myself because you did not kill me and you kept with me , raised me………you can never be a good mother maa………you can never be a good mother……….you made me away from my family and made me act against my family…….even the truth of my birth you changed that too…….when people used to call me illegitimate I used to break down and die within myself……….but you never opposed the people and instead you yourself called me illegitimate……..you knew the truth but still called me so……..how can you ………how can anyone be so stonehearted……….i wish I could punish you for whatever you have done………but I don’t want to become very bad………never come back in my life again………never..because if I see you again in my life I will not think even for a while about you and do your gangaram then and there ‘’

Mahi’s tears were rolling out uncontrollably…………

Shakthi came near him and wiped his tears……..Mahi hugged his father……

Police finally arrived and handcuffed Kamini……..

Pinky went near her and said ‘’you are kameeni and you always will be….i will make sure you live but wake up to only die everyday……’’

Kamini was taken by police………..

Mahi went near Pinky and fell on her feet and touching her feet and crying ………..

Mahi ‘’maa…I am sorry…I can’t say how much wrong I did with you……I just did it on that woman’s saying……..i have hurt you the most and hated you the most……..punish me maa…punish me but accept me….even today I spoke bad about you…….i am bad but not very bad…but in your case I am very bad……I am sorry maa…please forgive me…… ‘’

Pinky’s feet were wet with Mahi’s tears…..her hands were shivering and finally she held his shoulders ……she made him stand up and said

Pinky ‘’Mahi……you…you are also my son……..’’ she hugged him………after a while broke the hug and continued ‘’How bad mother I am …all these days I couldn’t even recognise you as my own blood……instead I cursed you……..i failed as mother…..’’
Mahi hugged her back and said ‘’No you are the best mother …….the best mother any child would ask for…….i am sorry maa’’

Listening Mahi’s words Shivaay reminisced Anika wrote the same words in her letter to him yesterday…his eyes started searching for Anika…….

Finally Mahi had got what he longed for over the years …………..

In all this Anika left to her room…Shivaay felt something missing…….none of the Oberois noticed Anika not being present in between them………..Khanna came across her…………Anika looked at Khanna shockingly…………

Precap : How was Mahi’s truth related to Anika’s fate of staying back with Shivaay… ……….finally will Anika accept Pinky as her Mother-in-law? few more revelations and Conclusion in next part !!!

So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!

79 comments

  1. Shivika

    Awesome….Loved it….
    It was too emotional….Beautifully written….
    Mahi at last got what he deserved…..I hope something like this happens in d show as well….
    Excited fr d nxt 1….
    post d nxt ASAP….. 🙂

  2. Arpita

    Wow dear, it was outstanding. awesome. Yarr .good job . Can’t wait for next part.post it soon.

  3. Ayissha

    Superb…..lot of suprises…..Really great thinking…..Mahi and shivomru scenes are really senti….Eagerly waiting for next part

  4. LINCY ARNAV

    awesome update. I just loved it. pls post next part soon. I’m waiting eagerly for ur next part.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much Lincy Arnav…just uploaded the next part…..i am also eagerly waiting for your response

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      bahut bahut dhanyawaad…….upload abhi kiya hain…mein bhi wait kar rahi hoon TU page mein publish hone ka

  5. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

    |Registered Member

    Di, last shot I told u na I guessed something and my guesses are 1. Mahi & Shivaay are Pinky’s twin sons. 2. Shakti is waiting for someone that is Kamini. 3. Mahi did this all to make realise Pinky’s mistake.
    I know many are guessed this but I m happy for the first time my guess is matched with ur story.
    This is fantastic shot di…. Soo much emotions!! This time also sooo many questions but no guesses. How Shakti knows he has twin sons??…… Precap!! Very interesting….. Eagerly waiting for next part…..

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Awee…our thought process i same Gayathri…same pinch…………all the answers will be revealed in the last part…we just need to wait to get it published in the TU page

  6. AHSANA

    It’s was an awesome emotional super duper episode dear. so many twists and suspenses. you are an amazing writer dear. I read your other ff and os based on IB. but this was the best os .I really love with your ff. The entire episode is fantastic. so Mahi was the twin brother of shivay. While reading this ff I feel very emotional dear. The same time I was happy too. so shivay have elder brother who he can call bhai. you are an amazing writer. the daimas confession video is amazing twist. I can’t expect this video have an hidden truth.your imagination is super. I really want this happen in real IB too. but the CVS are always disappointed with their un expected twist and turn . Anika decided to leave the mansion after the truth comes. I expecting pinky accept anika as her DIL. I’m very excited to read your next shot update soon……….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Ahsana……thank you for the super duper analysis…….i am happy that you liked this SS……i have uploaded the next part…i am also waiting for it to get published

  7. Arthi

    Oh. My goddddddddd……….. Mahi shd hav done this to make pinky realise her mistake and the convo btwn pinky and dadi were somewhat related to Anika and dadi shd hav done this with an intention and wow didi superb writing and feeling bad for Anika will they be together didi pl do post next part soon

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Arthi for the comment…i have already uploaded next part…waiting for it to get published

  8. Aisha

    It was just superb n awesome. …..can’t express how I felt reading it…..waiting for next update…….plz post it ASAP. Today itself plz plz plz………

  9. Navz

    Navz

    |Registered Member

    Diiiii…. Its just superb…..woaaaaaahhh…..again its anika who helped d family…and never took her reward..
    Its awesome dii…and i have a question in d precap u havewritten “will anika accept pinky as mil??”did u really mean that or it should be in reverse!!!!
    Oberios last moment plans are always successful..👌👌.
    Loved this part dii….. And as usual loved ur writing wid emotions and suspenses……. lots of luv to u dii……waiting for d next.😍😍

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much Chotii…i really meant that sentence…why and how you have to read it in next shot…lots of luv to you too

  10. Adhya

    Fantastic..Mind Blowing yaar..Finally truth revealed to everyone…Want to see more scenes of Mahi with family and brothers…Precap is very Intresting…waiting for ur next ultimate episode…

  11. Nida

    Nida

    |Registered Member

    Awesomely greatest greatest part shakti ji became a great person wah wah … in love 😍 with this shot i have read it twice

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you thank you thank you Nida…seeing and reading your comment on my writings defintely makes my day and today is no different…….you read it twice…am i reading it correct…woaahhhh i can’t tell you how happy i am feeling

  12. Vivikhta

    OMG Harika di!!
    This was soo good!!!!
    U always nail it all!
    Update ASAP. I was s literally crying!
    I am so happy for my mahi……He got a family after all. One more thing…. I think u have already thought of this but still…mahi wud never ask shivaay or pinky to leave because he is bad not kameena!
    I think he did this so that they understand Anika’s feelings.Wid u show a scene like that? But I guess u have already Houghton of this isn’t it? Loads of love to u!

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Vivikhta…..i happy you are crying out of happiness…about my thought you will know or rather surprised after reading next shot……loads of love to you too dear…waiting for your comment on the conclusion too

  13. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

    |Registered Member

    Oh God, how you connected everything is just speechless. Daima’s recording, was also a treat to watch as you showed it wonderfully☺

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