THE INSEPERABLES – ISHQBAAZ OS -SHOT 5

Hello this VHM signing back with a new OS …….i thought I will end this OS may be in two to three shots but I guess this will take much more episodes …….i will try to wind up as soon as possible …….this os is on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….

Shivaay quickly got up and said ‘’I know what needs to be done….before this truth gets out of our house we must bring in Mahi in Oberoi Mansion….’’

He turned towards Anika and asked her to call Mahi to Oberoi Mansion the next day morning………

Anika ‘’but what will we say to our elders?’’

Shivaay ‘’truth…we will say the truth to them….i need answer from my dad, he is the one who created this mess and he should give reply…’’

Om ‘’ but what will we get if this truth comes out ?’’

Shivaay ‘’Mahi is not at fault Om…he has suffered much….he has to get everything he deserves being an Oberoi though illegitimate……’’

Om ‘’but what about you Shivaay…..you never accept anything of this sort…this is not so you shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’everything changes Om…and today my perception has to and will change because it’s about my family….our reputation…..’’

Anika ‘’ but in all this Pinky aunty will suffer much……..we , I mean I have hurt her much and this truth will break her completely’’

Shivaay looked at Anika in disbelief……..

Anika ‘’why are you looking at me like this Shivaay ? did I say something wrong?’’

Shivaay ‘’ I don’t know whether to appreciate you or to be sad in this state………my mom has treated you so bad but still you are thinking about her good? I haven’t supported you sometime before and you are still thinking of doing good to me, us and our family? How can you be so selfless? ‘’

Anika ‘’ we can think about all these later’’

Rudra ‘’but still Shivaay bhayya …..how will we handle choti maa’’

Shivaay ‘’our duty is to bring out the truth and after the truth comes out we will ask Dadi to take decision…….because right now she is the only one who is in a position to decide Mahi’s , my mom’s and my fate’’

Om ‘’ your’s and Choti maa’s fate? What do you mean ?’’

Shivaay ‘’it’s simple Om…..after this truth comes out whatever dadi decides about my mom ……I will stand by my mom without any second thought… ’’

Shivaay had tears in his eyes and he called the day off………..

Shakthi was trying to reach Kamini and he had got the much needed clue of her whereabouts…he thought to meet her next morning…….

Pinky had also made up her mind to kick Anika out permanently and called someone to meet her next morning……….

Anika called Mahi and asked him to come to Oberoi mansion the next morning………..

Dadi decided to speak to Pinky to stop her making any further mistake the next morning……….

Shivaay decided to confront Shakthi the next morning……..

OmRu were waiting what will happen the next morning………

Almost everyone in Oberoi family had something or other running in their minds for the next day morning…….

And the much awaited next morning came …………..

Shivaay, Om, Rudra , Shakthi were nervous………Pinky was determined , Anika was scared ………
Except for Anika and Sahil everyone gathered at dining area………Shakthi while coming near dining area called up someone and spoke something………

Pinky came and tried to serve food to everyone but everyone resisted her from serving food and served the food themselves………Pinky was taken aback………..

Pinky was about to say something when Dadi spoke ‘’OmRu where is Anika and Sahil ? why didn’t they come for breakfast? ‘’

Pinky ‘’ how can she come here mummy ji? She is no more a member of this family ..’’

Dadi turned towards Pinky and said ‘’when I am speaking to Rudra what was the need to speak in between ? did you forget your own sayings that when elder is speaking Younger should keep their mouth shut’’

Rudra giggled and Soumya stared at him signalling to close his mouth and cover his teeth…….

Pinky ‘’sorry mummy ji ….i was’’

Dadi asked her to stop and asked OmRu to reply…….Om stared at Pinky and turned towards Dadi and said

Om ‘’ Dadi , we called her but she denied saying she doesn’t want Choti maa to feel bad…..she said she will drop Sahil and have breakfast somewhere outside…. We tried but couldn’t stop her from doing so and were unsuccessful in changing her decision’’

Dadi sighed……….Pinky relaxed thinking atleast Anika has thought sensibly……….

Pinky spoke while all others were having breakfast ‘’Mummy ji, Shivaay I have decided something…….after Shivaay gives divorce to that Anika, I will get my son remarried to a girl of my choice…I have asked a family to come here for the marriage talks’’

Everyone was shocked at Pinky’s words……..

Shivaay ‘’Mom, does this make any sense…how can you decide everything on your own about me…..’’

Pinky ‘’but Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’mom please nothing else more……..i am already in a big mess…I beg you not to create any more mess’’

Pinky put up an irritated face later everyone relaxed and

Shivaay very quietly finished breakfast and was angrily looking at shakthi…………..After Shakthi completed his breakfast and was about to leave Shivaay finally spoke

‘’Dad …I have something to ask you………….and I expect you would say the truth’’

Shakthi was stunned and nervously spoke ‘’Yes Shivaay, please ask…what you wanted to and I assure I will speak truth ‘’

Fine dad then let everyone complete their breakfast and join us in living room………..

Shakthi nodded and OmRu’s heartbeat was pouncing…………

Finally everyone gathered once again in living room……….OmRu made Dadi sit comfortably and stayed beside her because they knew what was going to happen would effect dadi the most…….

When Shivaay was going to speak Mahi and Anika entered the Oberoi Mansion….. everyone turned towards Mahi and except ShivOmRu looked at him shockingly…….

Shivaay looked at Anika and Anika was equally nervous…….Shivaay took a long deep breath and continued

Shivaay ‘’Dad what is your relation with Kamini ?’’

Shakthi was startled and asked ‘’My..my relation with Kamini…what … I mean why are you asking?’’

Pinky was staring confusingly

Shivaay ‘’ I got to know everything dad but I want to listen truth from you…so let me know the truth…only truth’’

Shakthi ‘’Kamini …Kamini is my classmate…we studied together….that’s it…it was only friendship and after what all she has done in recent times that friendship also ended….now she is no more a friend to me’’

Shivaay ‘’ lie…you are lying dad…….i never expected that you can do something ….’’

Pinky shouted ‘’Shivaay…you are talking to your dad , remember that’’

Shivaay ‘’I know I am talking to my dad , mom ..but he cheated someone else before marriage and he is the one who did not have guts to accept truth’’

Shakthi ‘’what the hell do you want to say’’

Shivaay ‘’ didn’t you have relation with Kamini before marriage…..a relation which was much more than friendship……..and even then you married mom……’’

Shakthi ‘’no Shivaay I didn’t have any such relation with Kamini…trust me’’

Shivaay ‘’please dad…. Enough of your lies’’

Pinky moved towards Shakthi and crying asked ‘’Tell me Shakti ji whatever Shivaay is saying is truth or lie…….’’ ‘’Iam asking you to speak the truth, say it Shakthi ji’’ she shouted….

Shakthi ‘’Pinky why don’t you understand I don’t have any such relation’’

Shivaay ‘’fine then ..tell me how can this Mahi look like me?’’
Shakthi ‘’how can I say ?’’

Shivaay ‘’you can dad …you can only say’’

Shakthi ‘’I don’t know’’

Shivaay ‘’you know but you don’t want to say the truth’’

Shakthi ‘’enough Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’not today dad…you have made fun of our relation’’

Shakthi ‘’I said enough Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’why dad…tell me how can Mahi look like me…and please Don’t say the stupid lines that there are 7 look alike’s in this entire world‘’

Shakthi ‘’I don’t need to answer you’’

Shivaay ‘’you should dad…because today the truth has to come out …….i will not allow you to escape from revealing the truth’’

‘’ok fine …….the truth is Mahi is my son…your brother…the eldest son of Oberoi family’’ Shakthi screamed…….

The Oberoi family came to still……………

Everyone was shocked but Mahi had tears in his eyes ……………he was feeling as if he has won a war of lifetime….

Shakthi realized what he just said and he was about to speak something when Pinky collapsed at the same place she was standing……….
Anika rushed to her and made her stand up……..Pinky gathered some strength and went near Shakthi and said

Pinky ‘’what did you just say Shakthi ji? Did you say this farzi…this duplicate is your son…the eldest son of Oberoi family….how…….howwwwwwwwwww ?’’ she screamed holding Shakthi’s collar…….

Shivaay too sat down on the sofa completely loosing control on himself……….

Dadi was shocked and said ‘’ what is happening in this house ? I being the eldest have no idea of what is happening ? ‘’

OmRu comforted Dadi ……….

Shakthi ‘’Pinky listen to me once.’’

Pinky ‘’what more should I listen ? what is left to listen ?’’

Shakthi ‘’this is only half the truth you heard’’

Pinky ‘’enough Shakthi ji…enough……I don’t want to hear anything else……..you have spoiled my life….why did you do this with me?’’

Amidst all this drama Mahi was in deep thoughts and decided something and spoke finally

Mahi ‘’ I am so happy today……..finally…finally….you accepted me as your son’’ he spoke looking at Shakthi…….

Pinky was angered now……..

Pinky went to him and slapped him ‘’you can never be the son of this family…….never ..atleast until I am in this house’’

Mahi smiled ‘’you have to accept as you have no other option and very soon I will do gangaram of you’’

Anika ‘’Mahi…you cannot speak to Pinky aunty like this’’

Mahi ‘’I know how to talk and what to talk Anika ji’’

Mahi turned towards Pinky and said ‘’because of you…only because of you …I have been stamped illegitimate……..had you not married my father I would have had an other life…..i hate you…I hate you for making my mom suffer..i hate you because, because of you my mom never accepted me with love………..i hate you for what you did with me………I hate you for taking away my family from me…I hate you for everything I have gone through over all these years’’

Mahi looked at Shakthi and said ‘’you are equally at fault but I have to forgive you because my mom has nothing against you…now I will stay here and take back my place….take back everything that I deserved’’

He went towards Dadi and said ‘’you are eldest of this house and has every right to take decision and I am sure your decision will be accepted , agreed and followed by everyone …so I need to speak to you ‘’

Dadi looked at Mahi ……

Dadi ‘’Since it’s a mistake from my side ….i will have to agree to your demand…..tell me what you want to say’’

Mahi ‘’not here Dadi……I think I can call you dadi with every right now….so not here dadi …I will talk to you personally in the room’’

Om ‘’no we can’t trust you…I will also come along with you and Dadi’’

Mahi ‘’relax Om …I am also son of this family now…so I wouldn’t harm your I mean our dadi……..i promise she will be fine’’

Shivaay looked at Mahi ………he did not know what to do further………Anika was stressed thinking as to what is Mahi upto……..
Dadi agreed to Mahi and went with him……….Everyone was tensed in the living room…….

Shakthi was still waiting for someone ….Pinky was angry and shattered, shivaay was almost at the same situation….OmRu were scared as what will happen next and Anika was thinking

Anika POV ‘’Oh noo…did I take a right step by revealing Mahi’s truth to Shivaay…I just wanted Mahi to get his right…but I never wanted Pinky auntyji and Shivaay to suffer….what might be Mahi speaking to Dadi now…why am I not getting positive vibes….i can never forgive myself if something wrong happens to Shivaay and Pinky aunty……’’

After about half an hour Dadi and Mahi came back to the living room ………….Mahi had a victorious smile………..Dadi was expression less……

Rudra ran towards Dadi and said ‘’Dadi..are you alright…did he behave properly with you ?’’

Dadi brushed Rudra’s hair and smiled and said ‘’I am fine Ru……’’

Om ‘’ Dadi what happened? What did he speak?’’

Dadi ‘’Om …he spoke something sensible and now I have taken a decision being the eldest of this house’’

Tej entered just then………..

Tej ‘’decision ? what decision and about whom? ‘’

Soumya ‘’Uncle please come I will say everything to you’’

Tej listened to Soumya and was shocked about the revelation……..He went near Dadi and said ‘’What decision have you taken maa ?’’

Dadi ‘Shakthi will divorce Pinky?’’

Everyone in Union screamed ‘’WHAT?’’

Shakthi ‘’But maa…..’’

Dadi ‘’ this decision is final……..i cannot put my family’s reputation at stake………the world doesn’t know Mahi exists and before that Shivaay and Pinky has to leave this mansion’’

Mahi smiled viciously and OmRU and Anika glared at him angrily…………while everyone was still in shock with Dadi’s decision

Anika dragged Mahi aside and spoke ‘’why did you do this? I thought you were good…very honest and I just wanted to give you your right…but you…you broke our trust…you are making the same person suffer who has helped you in getting your rights…….OmRu were right …I shouldn’t have come in your honey coated words……..you are a cheater ….for the first time I have failed to save Shivaay …and all this is because of my wrong belief on you…..’’

Mahi ‘’ did I ask you to trust me…it was your fault…and when this opportunity has ringed my door why will I take a back foot…….now see what I will make you to do…’’

Anika ‘’I warn you not to do anything else …else I will show you what can Anika do to save shivaay ‘’

Mahi ‘’Just wait and watch Anika ji……..remember I am bad not very bad’’

He left smirking and Anika was speechless

Precap : Will Shakthi divorce Pinky ? Will Pinky and Shivaay leave OM ? will Shivika stay together wherever they are? More revelations and someone to enter Oberoi Mansion and change the entire scenario …………Stay tuned and Keep reading !!!

So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!

81 comments

  1. Surbhi Sharma

    Omg !! Vhm di , how many more suspenses. Ek saath it ne saare suspense . This is amazing. Plzz post soon . I really can’t wait for next part .post soon.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Surbhi….suspense has build till now…suspense will get revealed from now…….hope you will like the revelations too

  2. Navz

    Navz

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    ________________________________________________________________________________________dii..today i dont have anything to say?!!!!suprised shocked confused or ?????dont know…..after reading next shot i will comment.
    U r giving more suspense than cvs..
    Today i really want u to join ib writers team…i am sure they cant think more than u!!!
    Eagerly waiting for next shot.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Chotii….you made me confused now…did you like it or not? lol CV’s are way too intelligent and creative than me…why till CV’s there are so many writers who write fabulously in the TU page …so let’s see what is in store for us in real IB………thank you for such long comment…

      • Navz

        Navz

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        Dii..u dont get confused!!!i liked it very much and i also liked the way u r taking d story.😃😃
        Mein bhi na kuch bhi bolkar tumhe confuse kar diya..hahaha😂😂

  3. Arpita

    VHM dear, you are a fantastic writer and I love it.but plz plz don’t make my dimag ki gangaram. Suspense itna he ki mera sar ghumne laga he.
    So post next part soon.

  4. LINCY ARNAV

    awesome update. I expect something is there in the store…..I’m waiting for next update. pls post next part soon. I know mahi is bad but not very bad😉😉😉…

  5. Madhu.r

    Madhu.r

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    pinky you tried to seprate anika and shivya for that you desrve it cry cry cry a lot whrn stone heart people like you i feel the prences of god to say the truth i am happy seeing you cry

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      oo so much anger on Pinky…she was just insecure …well let’s see how does Pinky’s character turn in real IB

  6. Madhu.r

    Madhu.r

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    pinky you tried to seprate anika and shivya for that you desrve it cry cry cry a lot when stone heart people like you cry i feel the prences of god to say the truth i am happy seeing you cry

      • Anujohnson

        Anujohnson

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        Nahhii…..I am shocked..you are a great writer dear..itna suspense…Uffff….I am not happy..I am crying out of happiness……so good…loved this epi so much….!!!

      • VHM

        VHM

        |Author

        Thank you so much Anu ..glad you liked this shot……i already said this is more a predictable ff /SS/OS ………..so most of the readers will guess it…i think what you are thinking might be right

  7. Nila

    Nila

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    oh my matha suspense! Mahi and dadi ‘s speech is also be suspense?I think u going to give a more fb for us I am right VHM di? i can’t wait plz update next one soon di

  8. Amore

    Amore

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    its a plan… mahi is planning to make pinky taste her own medicine. it is all tv o make pinky realize that she is wrong in separating Shivika… dadi repeated the dialogue pinky said to Anika…
    well done VHM.. by the way what is your name??

  9. Amayaa

    Amayaa

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    Di shubbu is right
    Suspense suspense nd suspense
    Itne saare suspense
    My God
    But di seriously despite of all suspects nd thriller i m getting positive vibes that everything should be alright. ……………………….
    CVS plzzzzzz pizzzzzzz plzzzzzzz have a look on this ff
    I m saying truth this 1 is more better than whatever u planned 2 do
    Trust me nd follow it Gul Mam
    Viewers nd fans want story exactly like this
    Post de next part soon di otherwise ur fans nd readers including me die with much curiosity
    ……………….llllll……………….lllll……………………
    ……………….llllll……………….lllll…………………..
    Nd a big sorry 2 u di for not commenting on previous part
    Actually I read that nd even tried 2 comment
    Nd not one , two or three times but again nd again
    But it can’t posted aur mere dimag ki Dahi ban gai
    May be because of special mercy which TU PAGE have on me as there was no any network issues
    Di de previous part is also amazing like this 1
    Ekdum khirkitor
    Nd this 1 is darwajator nd next part will be ghartor
    😊😊😊

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      awee my chirpy Amayaa………itna pyara comment dekh ke dil khush ho gaya……….aree mein tho aise hi likthi hoon..CV’s ki apni bhi tho dimaag hainjo bhi real IB mein dikhayenge accha hi dikhayenge……..i will post next one very soon dear………don’t worry

  10. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    Seriously I don’t know what to say. Sooooo many suspenses and sooooo many questions di……!
    Why Shakti is waiting for SOMEONE?? Who is he/she??? Why he says that is HALF TRUTH ONLY ??
    What is MAHI’S PLAN?? Why Dadi accepts MAHI’S PLAN?
    DIVORCE…..but why?? I remember di MAHI IS BAD BUT NOT VERY BAD!!
    Di I just GUESSED SOMETHING….. Can I say???

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Gayathri…….thank you for the super long comment…yes lots of suspense …..off course dear …do you need to ask me to say something ? please i am waiting for your question……..

  11. zaveesha

    Woww…I’m badly confused about mahi’s plan….eagerly waiting for the next parts…u r awesome in suspense Creation…

  12. Arthi

    Didi am crying now really this made me jus feel the scenario oh my goddddddddd what an writing and what a story…….And I have a feel that this is dadis and mahis plan to make pinky realise abt her mistake and whatever Mahi spoke to pinky I somewhere felt right bt didi……….U r fabulous jus fabulous…..

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much Arthi…….please don’t cry…….i want my readers to enjoy the suspense and drama, emotion and romance all equally…..

  13. Shivika

    Awesome…
    Lots of Suspense….Interesting…
    Seems like revelations on d way….
    Pinky deserves this for her behaviour towards Anika….
    post d nxt asap… 🙂

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much Shivika………you have been a continous support through all my ff’s and OS….i have never said earlier but i feel extremely happy to read your comment whenever i post my writings in this portal

      • Shivika

        Welcome dear….
        I love to read ur work…
        Each & every time u come up wid so many new stories…..It’s amazing….
        Keep Writing…. 🙂

  14. nikitajai

    It is awesome dii…. Eagerly waiting for the next update to see Mahi master stroke….jaldi se update krna…
    At this time I am thinking about the the person who is coming to om…

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much Nikita……i will upload the next part very soon……..was just waiting to see the readers response……the next part is ready just need to upload

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much Nida……i am now relaxed ……..you have responded ….now i can sleep peacefully…well only after uploading next part

  15. Vivikhta

    Harika di am so sorry that couldn’t comment on the previous updates!
    its so good!
    I have a feeling that Mahi is doing all this to make pinky understand Anika’s situation, am I right?
    Am so excited for the new entry and lots of love from my side .
    U stole my words so I cannot write anything!

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      heya Vivikhta……thank you so much dear and no problem …..regarding suspense ……may be you are right…may be you are wrong…i cannot reveal it now.. but yopu will definitely read it in upcoming shots….please keep up your excitement as that gives me the much needed energy………lots of love to you too dear….

  16. Ahaana

    Ahaana

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    sorry was not able to comment at ur last epi.. but as usual yrr it do bot need my views as it has its own dignity. .
    u Write something really awesome

  17. Bhavana

    I am asking you again, from where do you get these ideas?.
    I mean itna suspence…this is my fav..ff from which you have written till date…
    Its amazing!! Mindboggling epi!!
    Nd I hope woh new entry anika se hi related ho…Nd surprisingly,I dont hate mahi…’WEIRD’ Anyways, eagerly waiting for the nxt…update asap! plzzzzz

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      heya Bhavana…….thank you so much for appreciating my work…….
      ideas i donno where they come from i just sit around to type a story and my hands go with the flow…….
      i don’t preplan any plot……
      may be that’s something i have to work on….
      well next part i just uploaded

  18. xyz

    Hey I read ol d episodes in a go..dey ver awesome…n abt mahi I think he s just doing it to make pinky realise wt she ws doing 2 anika ws wrong..update soon..

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      hey Shanaya….thank you for posting comment……Mahi’s actual character will be revealed in next episode…i have just uploaded it……..

  19. Banita

    OMG!!!!!!! VHM soo much suspence…….. I think Mahi is not bad…… Eagerly waiting 4 nxt….

  20. AHSANA

    Hai…, VHM it’s was an nice episode dear. so many twist and turns in one shot. In the previous shot of this os you said wait to see if Mahi is positive or negative. But I didn’t expect Mahi turn negative. I didn’t expect he wants shakti and pinki divorce and shivay and pinki leave the mansion. He bad but not bad .I still believe that he is doing this to make pinki and shivay feel the same suffering like he suffers in these years .Its was an amazing episode. sorry for the late comment. I saw that you posted your 6th shot. so I going to read that part. so I will meet you at your 6th shot.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much for the lovely comment Ahsana……..yeah we will meet in the sixth shot…and no worries for the late comment…you posted your comment that is the best part

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