THE INSEPERABLES – ISHQBAAZ OS -SHOT 4

Hello this VHM signing back with a new OS …….i thought I will end this OS may be in two to three shots but I guess this will take much more episodes …….i will try to wind up as soon as possible …….this os is on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….

Rudra ‘’Bhabhi do you mind if I ask something ?’’

Anika ‘’when have you started becoming so formal?’’

Rudra ‘’ nothing like that Bhabhi…I wanted to know whether you are in a comfortable position or not to answer my question ‘’

ShivOm stepped in then

AniRuHil stared at them………

Rudra ‘’ Shall I ask ?’’

Anika ‘’ ha ..ha ask …did I ever deny anything you asked for?’’

Rudra ‘’why were you supporting that farzi and saying he is good….i mean…I know he saved Shivaay bhayya but still whatever he has done earlier cannot be forgiven so easily…..i really wanted to know why you supported him so much’’

Anika looked at Shivaay and then at Rudra……

Anika’’ woh …woh…’’

Om ‘’ Anika Bhabhi if you are not comfortable then you need not answer….as whatever has happened today with you …you are not answerable to anyone….’’

Anika’’ nothing like that Om……before what all happened today I met Mahi and got to know everything about him….i was about to tell Shivaay the truth but before I could you know what happened ‘’

Shivaay looked at her…….

Shivaay ‘’ what did you know about Mahi……what’s that you learnt about Mahi? ‘’

Sahil ‘’ Shivaay bhayya I thought you were angry on both of us and will not talk to me and Anika Bhabhi…’’

Shivaay ‘’ Sahil I can never be angry on you…I said earlier and I am saying it now…..you are and will always be my family …if someone accepts or not this fact I don’t care ………but now you go to soumya’s room as we need to talk something important with your Anika didi’’

OmRuAni looked at Shivaay smiling and lovingly……….

Sahil ‘’ Soumya’s room………yuppieeee….thank you Shivaay bhayya…you are so sweet and the best………’’

Rudra took him to Soumya’s room and came back…….

Shivaay ‘’ I am waiting for your response ………Anika will you speak now?’’

Anika nodded her head and they all sat and Anika started

‘’ I had already raised my doubt with you all that there must be some reason why he took Shivaay’s place and I wanted to find it out…….so today morning I went to meet him……… when I went there I enquired his whereabouts in the chawl and finally manged to reach his house to find none….while I was returning he put knife on my neck and threatened me………’’

Shivaay ‘’what? How dare he and you are saying it now….i would have killed him had I known earlier’’

Anika ‘’relax Shivaay…now let me complete’’ she continued

——————————–FLASHBACK STARTS—————————–

Anika spoke to Mahi after he put knife on her neck

Anika ‘’ I know you saved my Shivaay……….so I realised that you are not that kameena type…also you never touched me improperly while you were in Oberoi Mansion….i came here to know about you ….that’s why I came here alone and not with Police……..so you can trust me………I will never harm you’’

Mahi took the knife away from her neck and said ‘’ you just leave ….i have nothing to speak to you……’’

Anika ‘’ what’s your real name? why did you take Shivaay’s place? What was your intention? Say it and if you are not at fault I promise no one from Oberoi family will act against you’’

Mahi ‘’why are you so much interested in knowing? Who sent you ?’’

Anika ‘’ no one has sent me here….i came by myself and I wanted to know the truth……I already said you are not kameena and I have a feeling that you are doing it on someone’s saying…so please I request you to tell me the truth….please ….’’

Mahi ‘’my name is Mahi……..and I have no intentions to hurt anyone in your family except Pinky ji’’

Anika ‘’what? Pinky aunty ? but why? What did she do with you that you are saying so?’’

Mahi ‘’no I cannot say anything…I will be at risk’’

Anika ‘’ I promise I will not make you fall at any risk …trust me …please tell me the truth…….who knows with the truth you say your pain and intention may get proved wrong’’

Mahi ‘’ I don’t know why but I am feeling like I can trust you…the way you take risk to save your family against any evil makes me to believe your words …..’’

Anika ‘’ thank you…but I am desperate to know the truth? Why are you against Pinky aunty ji and what’s your relation with Kamini and Ranveer? ‘’

Mahi ‘’ ok fine I will say …but promise me you will not harm both of them’’

Anika ‘’ I cannot make a promise but I can assure that if they are not at fault no one will harm them but if they are wrong then no one can save them’’

Mahi ‘’ok fine then I agree…I will tell you the truth…. ‘’

Anika looked at him curiously

Mahi ‘’ Shakthi is my father…..’’

Anika stood up in shock and screamed ‘’What ?’’

Mahi ‘’ Sit down Anika ji…you heard it right Shakthi ji is my father but I hate Pinky ji ‘’

Anika ‘’ it doesn’t make any sense to me’’

Mahi ‘’ Shakthi ji and Kamini were friends during their college days and they got bonded very much and gradually came very close to each other and soon love blossomed between them……..when their love reached peaks ,Kamini ji became pregnant…….but till Kamini ji could inform Shakthi ji that she was pregnant he married Pinky…….i…I was born to kamini…yes I am Kamini’s son……..illegitimate son of Kamini…..and I became illegitimate only because of that lady Pinky………so I hate her………I hate her very much……..today the place Shivaay is enjoying is my place…….i should have been in Shivaay’s place but i….i am staying in this chawl with a stamp of being illegitimate……’’

Anika couldn’t believe what she heard………she stood still as a statue……….she remembered how Mahi always insulted Pinky and went against her saying while he stayed as duplicate Shivaay in Oberoi Mansion……..

Mahi screamed Anika’s name and she again came back to normal………

Mahi continued ‘’ I know this truth is shocking to you…but what you don’t know is my mom Kamini ji never liked me , never loved me ….she always felt I was a burden and she had developed anger……. Ranveer he is my brother…my cousin…me and my mom we had no good financial status…we were literally on road ….and Ranveer helped us financially…….Ranveer came to Oberoi mansion for some case investigation and saw Shivaay …….he informed my mom about your families and Oberois and showed Shivaay’s pic to us…….we both were shocked to see Shivaay looking exactly like me ………Ranveer and my mom from then on planned all this …and their plan started with Ranveer scaring Priyanka , followed by kidnapping of Shivaay and making me enter in his place and after that you knew what all happened….initially we just wanted to run away with Oberois money but later my mom developed other intentions… but my intentions and motive was different when I got to know about my birth truth from my mom….. during my stay in Oberoi mansion I understood what a family looks like…..how much love you all share with each other …..i envied Shivaay as everyone in that house loves Shivaay immensely …..i just wanted the same love and effection which I deserved …… I never wanted Ranveer to fraud Priyanka………I never wanted Priyanka to get into the same situation as my mom went through……I never wanted to harm Shivaay as there was no mistake of his…….I had no other intention……. I am bad but not very bad…….so I went against Ranveer and my mom at the last moment and saved Shivaay………’’

Mahi concluded and stared at Anika……….

Anika ‘’ I can’t believe what you just said…….but I can see the honesty in your eyes…….i can understand what you went through …..because I too know the importance of family……..even I ….’’

Mahi ‘’ I know you are an orphan……I heard you while you were talking to Sahil ‘’

(NOTE : Readers please note I have written in my first shot the line ‘’ Little did they know that their heart to heart talk was being listened by TWO pairs of eyes……….’’. one was Pinky and other was Mahi)

Anika ‘’ you listened my conversation with Sahil ?’’

Mahi ‘’yes , I came to Oberoi mansion to confront you all…… when my Mom tried to kill Shivaay and it failed because you took the bullet, Shivaay has ordered his men and Police to catch Ranveer at any cost…….everyone was searching for them and my mom planned to kill him in pretext of making Shivaay meet Ranveer………I got to know my mom’s plan and rushed to save Shivaay………I called Rudra from Shivaay’s phone and spoke to him as Shivaay and called him to pick from old mill……….when this plan of Ranveer and my mom failed they left me and went somewhere………they never told me where they went and I have no idea where they are now………I just got a call from Ranveer asking me to hide somewhere but I did not want to hide…….i wanted my right…I wanted to ask you all what wrong did I do…so I came to oberoi mansion……..and that was when I listened to your words …….i felt bad listening to your words and donno why I came back without confronting ‘’

Anika ‘’thank you so much Mahi….you didn’t confront …all I can do is to request you to give me a chance to set everything right…….please don’t confront now…I will…I will talk to
Shivaay and we will figure out something…I promise I will make everything right…please give me one chance’’

Mahi ‘’ okay …fine…I agree..but I have one condition’’

Anika ‘’what?’’

Mahi ‘’your family I mean the Oberois should not harm my mom and Kamini………whether my mom loves me or not…she has raised me ….however she is …either good or bad but she is my mom and I can’t see her suffering…..if you can promise me this I will agree to what you say’’

Anika ‘’Mahi..i can make any promise only after talking to Shivaay…….as of now we are still searching for both Ranveer and Kamini ji…….. so we still have time to get them arrested and meanwhile I will be talking to Shivaay about you…but again I request you…don’t take any haste decisions that raita kuch jyada hi fail jaaye’’

Mahi thought and agreed………Anika left from chawl

——————————–FLASHBACK ENDS——————————————-

Present situation in the guest room ShivOmRu were shocked to the core after listening the truth about Mahi…….while Anika continued

Anika ‘’ After I left the chawl and came back to Oberoi Mansion and wanted to talk to you Shivaay…… about Mahi…but When I came here ……..i saw everyone in living room and Pinky aunty ji’s confrontation..’’

All this happened Shivaay and I am 100% sure Mahi is not lying………we need to do something Shivaay……….we need to do something at the earliest……….

Shivaay was speechless but then remembered something ‘’ so that means …she meant that’’

Om ‘’ who means what Shivaay ?’’

Shivaay ‘’nothing’’

Om ‘’enough Shivaay…I know you just don’t speak anything without a reason…I want to know what you are hiding?’’

Shivaay ‘’Om …I am not hiding anything…it’s just’’

Om ‘’it’s just what…tell it Shivaay…say it’’

Shivaay looked at him and so were Anika and Rudra……….

Shivaay ‘’ ok fine you guys stay back here …I will be back in a minute’’

Shivaay left and came back with a chip…………..he played it on the TV…………

‘’ This house’s eldest son is illegitimate’’ an old lady was seen speaking……….

Rudra ‘’ Bhayya who is this lady and what’s all this?’’

Shivaay ‘’ let me explain you all’’

Shivaay ‘’ Mrs. Kapoor …yes Tia’s mom Mrs Kapoor had sent this video to me and blackmailed me saying that Om was illegitimate son ………I couldn’t believe but then I was under pressure …..on the day when we revealed truth …you remember Om I showed this Video and you asked what was this…I just said nothing important……..now I get what the old lady the daima meant ‘’

Rudra ‘’ but I am not getting anything’’

Shivaay ‘’ Rudra …the eldest son of this house is Mahi…..by what Mahi and Anika said Kamini was pregnant before my mom married my dad…so if everything was at place Mahi would have been the eldest son of this house legally…….but that didn’t happen and he was born and stamped being illegitimate……..we got to know this truth just now……we never expected anything of this sort then and Mrs Kapoor used this statement of Daima to blackmail me stating Om is illegitimate…’’

Anika ‘’ yes you are correct Shivaay……..now before anything else we need to set everything proper’’

Om ‘’ I can’t believe you hid such truth from me Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’ truth…this is not truth Om and I never believed it……I knew if this clip reached you ..you would have destroyed yourself without even thinking about it……..and I can never let anything of this sort to happen with you…..’’

Anika ‘’Om …Shivaay can never hide anything from you if he believes …you know more about him than me and at this time this is not important…we must be united and do something to make everything proper…please’’

Om ‘’ fine then……but Shivaay I expect you to let me know everything further…….because we believe in One for all and all for one’’
Shivaay ‘’yes…it’s a promise..and i.. I am ‘’

Om ‘’no need for apology Shivaay…I know you love us a lot’’

They all except Anika share a hug……….

Rudra ‘’ what will we do now? ‘’

Shivaay is in thoughts………

Precap : what will Shivaay do now……….will Anika be given her place or will Anika leave Oberoi mansion forever……..a sad ending or a happy ending ? keep reading………..

So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!

56 comments

  1. nikitajai

    Dii. Aapne pakkaa mujhe heart attack dila k raho ge.. Itna suspense.. Jaldi se update kro please….
    And this update is awesome… Shivaay sahil little convo is nice….
    Lots of love dii…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      hey Nikita….koi heart attack nahi dila rahi hoon …mujhe laga ki ye sab expected hoga……haan baba jaldi hi update karoongi

  2. Bhavana

    Wow! Its amazing…from where do you get these ideas…I mean the whole daima thing with mahi, u connected all those things so perfectly…Nd it actually makes so much sense…like…..’GENIOUS’…loved this epi to the core…Nailed it!!

    • VHM

      VHM

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      awee thank you so much Bhavana…..it went on with the flow dear…nothing preplanned …..just a normal thought put into words…..so Genius is too big a compliment for me

  3. Surbhi Sharma

    Oh Bete ki !! The two eyes were pinky and mahi . U know , no I won’t say u will laugh . Achaa bata hi dete hu . U know , 2 pairs se mujhe laga it’s only pinky . In the sense , that 1 human bwing have 2 eyes . But I didn’t mind the word PAIR . So , …… . OKay , now don’t laugh . Sometimes , My brain goes for a vacation na ….
    By the way , epi was as usual jhakkas . I totally loved it . Plzz post soon .

    • VHM

      VHM

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      I did not laugh Surbhi….guess what …when i was writing this episode i checked nearly 5 times whether in the first shot did i really right PAIR word or not….i confused myself …..thank you for the compliment

  4. sri

    Super awesome amazing episode and I want a happy ending plz plz ☺☺ and sorry for late comment as I was busy

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Sri….no worry i understand it’s a weekend so sooner or later doesn’t matter…what is important is you have posted your opinion …and i am so happy

  5. Arpita

    VHM dear, senti kardiya tumne mujhe.
    But plz haapy ending karna.accha lagega.
    And I will not say.post next part soon bcoz you are very regular. i like it .

    • VHM

      VHM

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      kya ho gaya Arpita ? bas abhi itna keh sakti hoon ki ending bilkul unexpected hoga …thank you so much dear…will post very soon

  6. LINCY ARNAV

    Awesome update. I just loved it. should teach a good lesson to pinky…. a happy ending pls…..post next part soooooonnn.

  7. Navz

    Navz

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    Diiii…its like a suspense thriller..omggggggg…we know most of d things u wrote…..but ur way of writing…god ..its just excellent or any higher word u know u can place it here…really dii u killed it. By now i am like this and for tom i dont know how i would be……hoping for positive turn..(anika staying back)……
    By ur previous os i thought ur writings would be in romantic type……but today ill change my decision….u can write anything….be it emotional or romantic or suspense….luv ur writings and luv u too dii😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😊😊.
    Now i know ull upload next part very soon…take care and good night dii….by ur chotii.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      awee thank you so much Navz…..IB CV’s have left so many threads unattended that we have lot of scope to fill the gaps……..that’s what i am trying to do…nothing superlative Chotiii…this is just a normal one…but thank you for writing such awesome lines …yes i will upload next part tomorrow without fail….good night chotii and a very sweet super dreams to you……..

  8. Adhya

    Its Fabulous….Wonderful episode..Waiting to read further
    ..want to see shivikha together….hattsoff to u dear..u have solved Om’s matter easily…

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Adhya……ohh ya i din’t notice amidst all these very unexpetedly Om’s matter was resolved…i seriously never noticed this….thank you so much

  9. Aashi

    amazing as always VHM
    bt ur flow is missing
    I hope Shivaay-Mahi reunite
    Mahi’s neither bad nor gud he’s just a lost sole who needs love & care
    update soon

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you and sorry Aashi…thank you because you said you liked this shot…sorry because you felt my flow missed….i promise i will not disappoint you in next shot…

  10. Aashi

    amazing as always VHM
    bt ur flow is missing
    I hope Shivaay-Mahi reunite
    Mahi’s neither bad nor gud he’s just a lost soul who needs love & care
    update soon

    • VHM

      VHM

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      my view of Mahi was he is right now a confused man…i wanted to portray him as confused and bring out his actual character in further episodes…..may be i should have portrayed him strong in the sense either positive or negative…i will keep this point in mind and try to correct it in upcoming episode….thank you for bringing this into my notice…

  11. AHSANA

    It’s was an awesome and emotional episode. The truth of Mahi make me cry. I’m feel bad for him. He is bad not bad. After the all humiliation from his mother he still love his mother. He was an pure hearted man. You know what I was thinking the same as the daima talking about Mahi as he was the eldest son of the oberoi after read your ff I’m very happy that you think the same. I’m for your next shot, update soon…….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      thank you so much Ahsana………yes he is bad not very bad and whether he will become good or he will turn bad is yet to be seen……….yes our thoughts did match dear …same pinch…will update next shot tomorrow……..

  12. Aashi

    you needn’t be sorry or thank me
    its your work,ur art,ur style
    hurring with any creation is always wrong
    take ur time,think,imagine broad and write
    and yes change OS to SS-short story

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Point noted Aashi…will come up with my next shots hopefully meeting your expectation…..and will change the OS to SS too……thank you again for the improvisations specified

  13. Nida

    Nida

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    Thiller amazing superb great 👍 great 👍 fabulous i just have lost words… u can’t even imagine how much i ❤️ the mahi character in this fiction absolutely mind blowing

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Nida………awee so glad to know you loved the character of Mahi in this FF……..will eagerly wait for your comment on next shot

  14. Banita

    Awesome & Emotional epi VHM….. Again u nailed it dear…. D way u write everything was SUPERB….. Feeling bad for Mahi….. As u say expect d unexpected so i’m eagerly waiting 4 unexpected ending….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Banita………yeah i always believe in expecting the unexpected….please do keep posting your comments for the upcoming shots too

  15. Banita

    Really very sorry 4 not commenting on ur last epi dear…. Actually i was commented there but don’t know why it wasn’t show there…..

  16. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    Perfect connection di….daima’s statement with Mahi’s truth!! So the second pair of eyes is Mahi…..! Earlier don’t know why but I feel that person is Shivaay!! Mahi is pure by heart bcz now also he loves that kamini…. Don’t make him negative di… I wish CVs read ur ff n get some idea for future scenes. Please di….give HAPPY UNEXPECTED ENDING…..please!!

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Awee so sweet of you Gayathri….thank you so much……Ending will be satisfactory to all sort of readers i am hoping for that…..let’s see ..i still have to type the ending

  17. Shivika

    Awesome….
    Shivomru & Ani again on mission….
    Mahi is bad not very bad…..
    Precap was shocking…
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

  18. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

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    Hey Di !! Really a very big we bhi big vala sorry for the late comment. But you know what this is amazing. Suspense !! ☺

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