THE INSEPERABLES – ISHQBAAZ OS -SHOT 2

Hello this VHM signing back with a new OS may be two to three shots on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….

Recap : Anika heart to heart talk is listened by two pairs of eyes………Pinky announces she cannot accept Anika as her bahu….Anika decides to leave OM …Shivaay doesn’t speak anything

Anika came to Shivaay and spoke ‘’ Thank you so much Shivaay …you have given me the best moments of my life…I knew one day this question will raise and we both will not have any answers…so I have consoled myself about the same….. ‘’
Shivaay looked at her after wiping his tears and held her hands
Shivaay ‘’ Anika why are you saying all this ? what’s going on in your mind ? ‘’
Anika ‘’ I think I should leave now…we cannot be together ever Shivaay and this is destiny ….neither you nor me are at fault’’
Pinky was happy……

Shivaay ‘’ ohh you took your decision …good…you did not think of consulting me before taking such a huge decision’’
Anika’’ decision …’’ she smiled sadly…’’I haven’t taken decision Shivaay..it was to happen one day or other and it happened today’’
Shivaay ‘’ I don’t understand anything……you are talking about leaving…my mom…my mom she is talking about something else…I …for the first time I am feeling like I have no control over my life’s decisions’’
Pinky ‘’ what happened to you shivaay ? why are you saying like that? Am I wrong to think good about you ?’’
Shivaay ‘’ No…no mom..you are not wrong…in all this you proved me wrong……..you proved my decision of marrying Anika wrong….’’
Anika ‘’ Shivaay…she is your mom…..and we need to respect her…..she can never think bad about you…why don’t you get this simple fact…’’

‘’Stop it you both……….enough ….stop it’’ screamed Shivaay
‘’you both didn’t think that a small kid is standing here and listening all this…….what impression are you printing in his little brain…..’’
Rudra took Sahil inside ………
Shivaay turned towards Pinky and said ‘’ You can’t accept Anika as your bahu …right…because she has no family name…….fine………what else do you want her to do ?’’
Pinky ‘’I just want her to not get related to you by any means………she has to stay away from you Shivaay and this is the only solution for the betterment of this family and you ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ I wanted this truth to come out from you…and see how easily you said this….glad to know you have these thoughts about her ……’’

Shivaay turned towards Anika and said ‘’ for the first time my mom’s wish and your’s wish matched….’’
Anika looked at him with a frowned look
Shivaay ‘’ don’t be surprised Anika …..you already prepared yourself to leave and my mom wants you to leave so both your thoughts matched……..but none of you thought about me …what I want and how would I feel…….’’
Anika ‘’ but Shivaay ‘’
Shivaay raised his hand and said ‘’ I don’t want to hear anything……I have already heard much…..’’ saying this he left from there……….

Dadi broke down …OmRu rushed towards her and took her to her room…..
Shakthi came towards Pinky and said ‘’ You know what …. my biggest mistake in life is to marry a woman like you….Anika doesn’t have any surname but you have ruined your actual name……you are disgusting Pinky …. I know my son will never go against you but I can …….what if I say that I condemn your decision of separating Shivaay and Anika …what will you do ?’’
Pinky moved towards him and said ‘’ I will end my life …..the same day I will end my life’’
Shakti was taken aback listening to her answer……..Anika was startled ……..
Shakti was about to say something when Anika spoke folding her hands ‘’ Uncle please… don’t say anything to aunty ji ….she is right in her place……..i had some very beautiful memories with all of you…let me not part ways on a bitter note’’

Shakti ‘’ but you are not at fault Anika….then why is Pinky hell bent on sending you away from my son ….i will never support her …..you are not going anywhere and this is final ‘’
Anika ‘’ uncle ji please…..please don’t make it tough for me…I still have to convince Shivaay …so please don’t stop me’’
Shakti gives up and leaves from there looking angrily at Pinky……Anika was about to go to Shivaay when Pinky holds Anika’s hands to stop…Anika stares at hands held by Pinky and then looks at Pinky

Pinky ‘’ You act so good infront of my family….you made me take such a drastic decision ….you made me almost a criminal before my family…but let me tell you….i have seen many people like you in my entire life…….you were taking my son away from me…….he isn’t interested to talk to me or care for me these days…it’s only because of you……….i already knew you that you were an orphan as I heard you while you were talking to Sahil and hence I took this step……..i am not feeling guilty about what I have done……..you donot fit in this house or in the life of my son……you are good but you broke a mother’s heart and you have to repent for that sin …….’’
Anika listened everything with patience and replied ‘’ I know I am an orphan….and I never worried about being so… when I know the pain of not having anyone how can I even think of separating you from your son …..i can take any blame …but not this blame of separating a mom and son …that’s the only reason of leaving Shivaay and going from here……for the first time I am feeling angry …angry on someone who gave birth to me and left me unattended……Shivaay has everything and I thought I have shivaay ……but aunty ji today you made me leave Shivaay too….a punishment for no crime ever committed …….i will leave now’’

She folded her hands and turned to pack her bags.
Pinky also left from there feel all the burden leaving her ………..

Anika entered her room where Shivaay was lying on bed, eyes closed in deep thoughts…….she went near her cupboard and started taking her clothes ………
Shivaay opened his eyes and saw her packing her stuff….he left from there angrily when Anika was about to say something…….Anika cried vigorously holding a dress of hers……..
Sahil came to Anika and said ‘’Come didi we will leave….we have to go back where we belong to ‘’
Anika nodded and took her luggage ……..
Everyone were in living room sitting sadly and Anika and Sahil entered there…………
Anika went to Dadi, Tej , Shakthi , Jhanvi and took their blessings…….she went to Pinky and bent to take her blessings………

Pinky ‘’ be happy….what did you think I will send you empty handed……..wait a minute……..’’ she handed bundles of notes filled briefcase …….. ‘’ I can never calculate the price of my son’s life that you saved but I can still offer you something by which you will not be on road after leaving from here ‘’
Anika never expected that Pinky would do something and was looking at Pinky with unbelievable expression…….so were the expressions of other family members………….Shivaay was very angry with what Pinky did and broke a glass …………
Anika sensed Shivaay was bleeding and rushed to him………..
Anika ‘’ Shivaay what’s this ? your hand is bleeding? Does anyone do like this? Come I will do first aid first’’

Shivaay ‘’ leave my hand Anika….’’
Anika ‘’ Shivaay first first aid’’
Shivaay shouted ‘’ leave my hand Anika ….enough……you wanted to leave me so leave now………’’
Pinky ‘’ yes Anika leave now…I know how to take care of my son………..’’

Anika left from there with Sahil and her luggage, leaving the suitcase with money that Pinky gave her in OM and walked out……..OmRu followed her……….Shivaay was just looking helplessly…….
Pinky turned towards Shivaay and said ‘’ Ohh my mata….what’s this Shivaay ? wait I will bring some ointment and do bandage…why don’t you take care of yourself Shivaay ‘’
Shivaay looked at Pinky ‘’there was someone who used to take care of me as I took care of myself but you made that person leave…….now I can never take care of me anymore as my life has left with her…..now you must be happy..right mom ?’’

Pinky looked at him and said ‘’ I just asked her to not keep any relation with you and stay away from you…but I never asked her to leave this house…it was her decision…and when she was leaving I offered help too…didn’t you notice all this Shivaay? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’mom you asked her to stay away from me and not keep any relation, when her relation with this house is through me………you said, it was her decision to leave this house and you allowed her to leave…..you know Anika mom…you know her very well…she never did anything for money …she did everything for us,…. genuinely for us because she cares for us………..so you were successful…successful in offering money and successful in holding back the same money with you…see the briefcase is still here……..’’

Pinky ‘’ when you are so much against my decision you must have said that you will not follow my decision… why did you keep quiet? ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ because I don’t want any more saas bahu drama mom……….you already did so much to hurt everyone here including me…… I never want you to hurt anyone anymore….you wanted this happiness so I obliged….dad said that you were feeling that I have changed……..yes mom…I have changed…I have changed for good…but you…you have changed bitterly……you have punished her without any reason ……..yes….you have punished her without any reason…..i will never forget this mom’’
Pinky slapped Shivaay…….

Pinky ‘’ you have grown up so big that you are speaking to me that I have changed bitterly……..everytime …everytime you did make me feel embarrassed…..first you choose your dadi over me……..then you choose your brothers over me…….then you choose your wife over me……….where am I Shivaay…what’s my value in your life? Until when should I wait that my son will give me the importance that I deserve? did you understand my pain? And this time…I didn’t do wrong……….Anika has no blood lineage and surname………and we all know how important are these for you………..now tell me where did I go wrong? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ forget it mom….it’s no use explaining you ……because you have developed so much negativity that whatever I say you would find fault …….’’

Shivaay wiped his tears and left from there …………..Pinky sat down crying…………but no one from the Oberoi family came to support her……..she was wrong which she did not realise……….

Precap : Anika getting ready to leave home…stopped by someone ……and supported by someone !!!

So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!

75 comments

  1. Shrusvri

    OH GOD!!!!! this is something i want to happen in the real serial. So much passion i just loved it. Sso ki har ek baat sach thi

  2. LINCY ARNAV

    Awesome update…. I just loved it…. pls post next part soon. I’m waiting impatiently for ur next part.

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you Radhika…..precap means someone will stop Anika and some other one will support Anika…….

    • VHM

      VHM

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      Thank you so much Sairan……i will post atleast an episode per day…but now i am waiting for your FF

  3. AHSANA

    It’s was an awesome lovely super duper episode. I’m waiting for your next shot update soon……….

  4. nikitajai

    It is awesome dear… Plz gussa mat hona.. I heartily wants to read your spy fiction… But there is some problem….
    I will soon registered on tu….

  5. Bhavana

    Ohh god!!! Its amazing yaara…👌👌👌👌 Loved it to the core❤💙…. Plz plz plz post asap!! cant wait..

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Awee so sweet of you sri……i am glad you started posting in your opinion…thanks again and i hope to see your opinion in the upcoming shots too

  6. Vivikhta

    Heyyo,VHM
    I am Vivikhta, a silentreader at tellyupdates but finally iIhave started commenting. Let me tell you, u r amazing !
    I have read your previous works, and I literally had a heart attack after reading unbelievable truth!
    How can someoneb so creative and awesome?
    Do u read a lot of detective novels?
    I do too, but Ican never craft such an amazing story like yours!
    I am in love with your fan fictions!
    u seriously r such an amazing writer.
    Ijust had one little suggestion, pls don’t let anika give in so easily, iImean ye Oberois samajhte kya hai?
    How much ever they hurt a person they will just say a sorry and everything willbe fine just because they have blue blood. Y know sometimes when iIsee them asking about khnoon from everyone right, i feel that they are vampires out to ssuckroyal blood😂😂😂😂 
    I hope u take my suggestion positively.
    Count me as your fan and Ihope iit’snot rude but r u a girl or a boy?
    Actually your name confuses me. Sorry if it hurt u
    And also your age, u know just so Iknow whether to call u di/bbhaiyaor not. Pls ddon’t b offended.
    Love, vivikhta💟
    P.s. will u b my friend?
    P.SActually iIdropped this comment in the shot 1 but guess u ddidn’t see it there so copied it because Ireally wanted u to know how wonderful u r!:):)

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Viviktha….i just read your comment on the first shot and responded there……..anytime when you are free please read my reply there….and i am so gald to read this comment again…it just brings a big smiling curve on my lips…..thank you so much once again and i wish to see your comment on my upcoming shots too….always friends dear….

  7. Shivika

    Awesome….
    SSO was completely broken….
    His words were so true….Pinky is ridiculous….
    Waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Shivika…yeah without Anika Shivaay is incomplete…..whether it’s in my story or in real IB this fact will not change……will post the next shot at the earliest

  8. Nida

    Nida

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    Uffffffff👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 very well done 👍.. i just loved it how you wrote that emotional but satisfying scenes i just loved it please do me a favor to update next part asap because I can’t wait 😊

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Awee …it’s always a treat to read your opinion……..i went out today so coudn’t make the next shot completely ready yet…but once i do it then i will post it…i promise i will post one shot everyday…sorry for disappointing you today..but will not repeat it

  9. Navz

    Navz

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    Vhm dii…u always know how to place the pieces well.u have portrayed every scene extremely well. And dailogues were soo emotional.i didnt feel that i was reading but i rather felt like i was seeing it..very well portrayed.
    Yeh pinky bhi na …..kabhi nahi sudharegi..hate her😡😡😡😠.even wen shivay himself said that he is nothing without anika…she is hell bent on not leaving her decision.
    Shivay was soo helpless…poor fellow.
    Actually dii..i didnt understand the precap..stopped by someone and supported by someone…??!!!!!!!??🤔🤔🤔what was that someone supporting?? Ididnt get into my duffer brain.

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Hey Navz , thank you so much Chotii (i hope you don’t mind if i call you chotii…let me know if you have any objection) ………..yep in this case Shivaay is stuck between wife and mother …….poor he…..okay coming to precap…one person will support Anika in her tough time and other person will stop Anika from leaving……..so this will get cleared in next part…………..

  10. Navz

    Navz

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    Dii..take it as request or prayer..plzz post next part as sooooooooon as possible.i cant wait longer.plzzzzz

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      OMG … choti ….request or prayer is not required…you have every right to order so the news is i just uploaded and once it gets published you can merrily read it……….

  11. Amayaa

    Amayaa

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    I too read ur 1st part di just now
    Nd I think I m too late 2 comment now
    That’s why
    Well from where m I starting ?????????????????????,
    From de beginning or de last
    From de recap or de precap
    di once I told u before also
    U r de best in handling de mess created by CVS
    What a episode di
    Amazing
    Share some ideas with cvs plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz they r in much need of that
    I m happy happy happy. ………………………………to infinity times that u can’t even count
    Di plzzzz post de next part soon otherwise I will die with much curiosity
    SSO turns to cute vale Billu JI
    He is shattered
    PINKY ponky TU to kisi Deen delhi ke busy roads pe mil ja
    Mai na Teri oohhhhhhhhh my mata kar dungi
    BUT don’t worry
    Hamari Anika bhabhi ke hote hue aapko kuch ni hoga
    Aur hamari VHM di aapke saath kuch bura ni karengi
    Believe me
    Bahut drama ho gaya
    AMAYAA chup ho ja
    Well di luv u loadsssssssssss 😍😍😍😍😍

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Awee my cutie pie Amayaa…i so missed your comment in my first shot …and now i am gald…….CV’s need people like Amayaa to give them a piece of advice ………your are such a sweetheart my chirpy little sis, so don’t talk of dying …….maine next part upload kar diya hain isliye ab khush ho jaoo….

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much to you for encouraging me , for reading my OS/FF s patiently and for posting your opinions………i must thank you all

  12. Aashi

    its a beautiful peice of work
    I really loved it
    u voiced the pain,of sepration of lonliness of heartbreak
    u made an effecint effort
    and wether u acknowledge it or not,u have a hidden artist,awriter,in yourself
    will be waiting for the next update

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      thank you so much for such beautiful lines ……….i am happy my effort is being visible…i hope i will keep up to your expectations

  13. Banita

    Superbbb…..!!!!!!!!! epi VHM…..luv it…. I really want something like this happen in real ib… U nailed it dear….. Waiting 4 nxt…

  14. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

    |Registered Member

    Hey Harika di !! Once again you left me dumb by you writing. You are a master at explaining emotions. Really feeling sad seeing shivaay’s condition like this. Hope you bring a new twist from your ever creative detective mind❤

    • VHM

      VHM

      |Author

      Thank you so much Jerry……..i am noting down all the compliments given by all the readers….i am planning for a surprise to you all too……….

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