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THE INSEPERABLES – ISHQBAAZ OS -SHOT 1

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Hello this VHM signing back with a neww OS may be two to three shots on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….

It was a time everything was getting set …Shivaay and Anika were enjoying each other’s company …though did not directly say that they love each other… but…. every gesture of each other made them understand that it was certainly love.

Anika spoke to Sahil as to why she would never express her feelings to Shivaay…..Sahil hoped for the best….
Little did they know that their heart to heart talk was being listened by two pairs of eyes……….
Pinky listened to them and knew when to use this……..
Over this Shivaay announced that it was because of Anika he is alive and successful…….Pinky was now burning in jealousy and anger ….she decided what to do…….
Pinky ‘’ Mahesh call everyone in the living room…I have something to speak’’
Mahesh the obedient staff of Oberoi Mansion (OM) did what he was asked for ……..Everyone gathered…

Dadi ‘’ Pinky what’s the matter? What’s so important that you asked us to gather at this hour? ‘’
Pinky “Mummy ji , let Shivaay also come I will say’’
Shivaay ‘’ yes mom …I am here …say whatever you want to’’
Pinky ‘’ I don’t to do any more drama….i cannot accept Anika as my bahu anymore’’
Shivaay ‘’ what?’’
Everyone stood up from their seats and Anika took a step backward………Sahil held Anika with his other hand…..
Dadi ‘’ are you out of your mind Pinky? Do you understand what you just said?’’
Pinky ‘’ yes mummy ji…I said I cannot accept Anika as my bahu’’
Shakthi ‘’ I knew you would do something of this sort’’
Pinky ‘’ you just don’t say anything….i have thought so much and after so much of thinking I am saying this’’

Om’’ but Choti maa …it was few days before you thanked Anika and accepted her as this family member..and now suddenly you are saying all this’’
Pinky ‘’ Om …when elders are speaking don’t you have common sense that children should keep their mouth shut’’
‘’ okay mom enough now, this is my matter my life’s matter so even if I am younger than you can I speak now’’ shivaay said angrily

Pinky stared at Shivaay surprisingly
Shivaay ‘’ why are you so surprised now mom, infact you have surprised all of us with your decision’’
Pinky ‘’ Shivaay , you are my only son and elder son of the Oberoi family …. I cannot let you loose your reputation anf this families reputation in any cost’’
Shivaay ‘’ what do you mean mom?’’
Pinky ‘’ what do I mean? You don’t know or are you expecting me to answer this?’’
Shivaay ‘’ both ‘’
Pinky ‘’ fine then …let me ask your beloved wife what truth did she hide from you ‘’
Shivaay turned towards Anika who was by then feeling weak and shattered
Shivaay ‘’ I don’t think she will hide anything from me…something major misunderstanding has occurred mom ‘’

Pinky ‘’ I knew you would support your wife, not believing your mom ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ mom please, don’t be over dramatic….whatever you want to say say it straight’’
Shakthi ‘’ yes Pinky, I knew from past few days you were talking about Shivaay being carried away towards Anika but little did I expect that you would stoop so low’’
Shivaay ‘’ what? Dad …what did you just say…mom feels that?’’
Pinky ‘’ that’s not the point of discussion here ….discussion is reputation of my son and my family’’

Shivaay shouted ‘’ok fine….say it now’’
Pinky ‘’ What’s Anika’s background ? who is she? Who are her parents? Where does she come from? What’s her surname? I need to know all these answers………..’’
Shivaay was stunned and so were others…………Something was breaking in Shivaay ……..he forgot about all these over the months…only thing he remembered was Anika’s support and her company……and now suddenly this came up………..
Pinky goes towards Shivaay and says ‘’ do you have any answer to my questions? If yes , answer me and this very moment I will accept her as my bahut…and if you have no answer then you are going to leave her this moment ‘’

Dadi ‘’ pinky, I never expected this from you …..you are saying this……..i thought you changed after the recent happenings…but you disappointed me ‘’
Pinky ‘’ wow mummyji, I have disappointed you now, no one understands me….you all think I am wrong…but are my questions wrong ? don’t I have the right to ask all these for my son? ‘’
Rudra ‘’ but choti maa…Bhayya and Anika Bhabhi ‘’
Pinky ‘’ stop calling her Bhabhi…this marriage is no more valid…….and don’t try to teach me anything’’
Om and Rudra were giving a disheartened look nodding their heads horizontally……..Shivaay still was in thoughts and was mum……

Anika was staring at Shivaay crying……………infact no one had answers to Pinky’s questions…..not even Anika and Shivaay………..
Pinky came to Anika and said
Pinky ‘’ I know you have helped me, our family and above all my only son Shivaay a lot, you never took a step backwards when it came to save us, not even when you took bullet for Shivaay…we are very thankful to you and I know we cannot give something in return to this …but you cannot become my daughter-in-law …….this family reputation and my son’s reputation is more important……tomorrow if someone questions me about you…I cannot put up a confusing face or rather a blank face…….i know you are very smart and inteeligent so I think you understand what I am trying to say……..’’

Anika looked at her with teary eyes………..she had no answer and just nodded her head in agreement………
Shivaay looked at her and she too looked at him…their eyes spoke volumes but lips were sealed….hearts were broken but souls were joined……….
Anika ‘’ I knew Aunty ji one day this will come up….but I never knew it will arrive so soon…..i din’t expect that you will raise this question as I thought you are a mother ….a mother to a perfect son…..

You are right aunty ji……….i am raised in a orphanage…I don’t know my surname…I don’t know who are my parents…I don’t know where I come from…but I know who iam’’
Shivaay looked at her with hope and so were others
Pinky ‘’ then let me know who are you?’’

Anika ‘’ I am Anika…Anika sister of Sahil…..yes I am Anika who know how to battle against odds and who knows everything about survival…who knows how to spread smiles and love…who knows how to support someone when they are really close to me…….this is my only identity’’
Pinky ‘’ what can I do with this identity of others…I cannot explain everyone about you by saying she is fighter, survivor etc,. I am sorry Anika but you can never become my Bahu…….’’
Everyone was silent……..Anika expected Shivaay to say something but he too bent his head down ………..
Anika knew this was her last day…………she remembered saying to Sahil that when Shivaay knows about this that will be the last day of their relation………..and the last day came atlast !!!


Precap : Anika getting ready to leave home…someone supports her !!!

So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!

81 Comments
  1. Fabulous start

    1. VHM

      Thank you Fffan1234……..hope you like it further too

  2. Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aisha…..glad you liked it

  3. fantastic

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Naina……wish to see your support in the upcoming episodes too

  4. loved it

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Tara …….happy to read your comment

  5. Superb…..eagerly waiting for next…

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Lilly……..just uploaded next shot

  6. Anujohnson

    This is awesome yaar..dont forget to send me links of this story..I dont come to IB page often…

    1. VHM

      thanks Anu….sure will ping you in TU page

  7. Awesome part waiting 4 next

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha….just uploaded next part

  8. Ahaana

    It just made me speechless… i really thought that do orphans have no life of their own do surnames are more important than a person… by ur writing i just felt one thing that ..
    Agr Anika hi nahi rahegi toh uske surname ka kya Achaar daloge..

    hope u understood hindi if not then u can ask me for translation. .

    coming to episode u really nailed it by writing u made me think of such life… and my heart beat is rising by this thought that if i was at her place..😢

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Ahaana…….orphans do have their life and this myth of surnames is to be broken in reel and real life too…….

      Achar daalne keliye tho Pinky Anika ke khilaaf khadi huin………

      Never even for a second think of being in her place…..touchwood be happy and always happy………..

  9. Awesome…….

    1. VHM

      Thank you San

  10. It’s was an awesome long lovely OS. And nice starting. It’s very interesting. I’m very excited. I’m waiting for next shot of your os. update soon………. 💕💕💕💕💕💕

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Ahsana……..just uploaded next part

  11. nice!!!!

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Rahanuma……glad you felt it nice

  12. Sairan

    Wowwwwwww vhm what a pleasant surprise.. Wonderful episode..Loved it

    1. VHM

      hey Sairan……..thank you for the comment………was planning to write this long back but thought it will match the current flow of IB

  13. Hey VHM, finally you are back!
    Its fantastically superbbbbbbb…Loved it a lot!! nd the concept too…
    Well, eagerly waiting for the nxt….update asap!

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Bhavana…..next part just uploaded …..fingers crossed to read comments

  14. Nithu

    superb dr…………as usual u rocked……..

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Nithu….hope i rock in next episodes instead of giving shocks

  15. Archisha

    Awesome

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Archisha……..thanks a lot

  16. Awesome
    Reading your ff’s is always a treat to me
    Eagerly waiting for the next shot

    1. VHM

      thanks a lot Sasha……..reading your comments is also no less than a treat…keep posting your comments as these are my real energy boosters

  17. Superb didi……It is really awesome and yeah it made me feel the pain of Anika and I was very much touched almost cried and wow didi…… Pl do post next part……

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Arthi….i never expected Anika pov would be liked so much by you all…thank you dear…this OS or FF is bound to be more of an emotional one

  18. Awesome

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Ankita……

  19. Gayathri.visu

    Speechless di…. After reading this my first thought is I must thanked to God for giving such a wonderful parents & bro! Eagerly waiting for next part di….

    1. VHM

      awee so nice Gayathri…touchwood always be happy with such a khidkitodh family…….next part just uploaded..thank you for the beautiful comment

  20. Awesome…Loved it…..
    The way Anika had put forward her POV…..Beautifully expressed…
    Post d nxt ASAP…. 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika……thanks a lot

  21. VHM dear, you made me emotional with last annika didi diolgue 😢😢😢😢😢 plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz post next part ASAP i can’t wait.

    1. VHM

      awee thank you so much Arpita…i just uploaded the next part….waiting to read your comment eagerly………….

  22. Awesome…waiting for next part…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Zaveesha……..justsome more time and it will be in TU page

  23. Navz

    Vhm dii..u r back.wow..i have read ur previous os and became fan of ur writings.
    This part is very emotional and u completely made me speechless. Anika describing about her identity was too good.like always it is superb part.like always eagerly waiting for ur next part..😃😃

    1. VHM

      thank you..thank you…thank you Navz…….as usual your comment made me speechless and i willbe waiting for your comment in the next part

  24. Fabulous..im totally speech less yaar….want to read further….Very Intresting

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Adhya…..want to know your opinion in further episodes too

  25. Just do not have words to describe what I am feeling after reading this……………………… Totally loved this. Awesome, mind blowing, amazing, superb……………………………………….
    Waiting for next please please update soon. if you can then today itself………pretty please……….

    1. VHM

      thank you Moonlight……i am also finding myself short of words……thanks a lot ….i just uploaded the next part .and fingers crossed

  26. Wow!!!! VHM starting was SUPERB dear….. U nailed it…. Luv this concept…… Waiting 4 nxt……

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Banita……i am so glad reading your comment….wish to see your comment in the upcoming episodes too

  27. Nida

    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 these emojis can only describe my words this time

    1. VHM

      saying thank you to you is just a formality because it is not enough for your enormous support and no words can describe how i feel after just seeing your comment…….thanks a lot Nida…..so happy for you

  28. Ruksy

    Post asap loved it totally

    1. VHM

      Thank you Ruksy….just uploaded ……waiting for your reaction on next part

  29. update next episode soon
    loved the track

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi, thank you so much…i hope you have read the next part too

  30. Aryaraju

    Awesome update.. Plz update the next one asap ☺

    1. VHM

      Thank you Aryaraju…..i did and i hope you have already read it

  31. Wish it would happen in ishqbaaz

    1. VHM

      Thank you for posting your comment Kripa….pinky kicking out Anika i think might happen atleast spoilers say so

  32. It is awesome dear…. Superbbbbbb update…
    Plz gussa mat hona…. I am very excited about the spy fiction….
    Because of my late-latifi…abhi tk I am not registered on TU…
    I will soon registered…. Pakka… Plz daat lene pr gussa mat hona…

    1. VHM

      Hey Nikita…thank you so much……and i am not at all angry…infact i have written portion of the spy story and kept it on a pauze…i wasn’t feeling much comfortable to post it on TU because it has nothing to do with the real IB….except for the names and characters…so thought i would post it to you through to your mail….but then i didn’t want you to give your mail id in the comments section………mein kuch jyada hi cool hoon kisi ko bhi nahi daanthi…..aur bahut kam gussa hoti hoon…tho tum pe gussa hone ka sawaal paida hi nahi hota………..

  33. Heyyo,VHM
    I am Vivikhta, a silentreader at tellyupdates but finally iIhave started commenting. Let me tell you, u r amazing !
    I have read your previous works, and I literally had a heart attack after reading unbelievable truth!
    How can someoneb so creative and awesome?
    Do u read a lot of detective novels?
    I do too, but Ican never craft such an amazing story like yours!
    I am in love with your fan fictions!
    u seriously r such an amazing writer.
    Ijust had one little suggestion, pls don’t let anika give in so easily, iImean ye Oberois samajhte kya hai?
    How much ever they hurt a person they will just say a sorry and everything willbe fine just because they have blue blood. Y know sometimes when iIsee them asking about khnoon from everyone right, i feel that they are vampires out to ssuckroyal blood 😂😂😂😂
    I hope u take my suggestion positively.
    Count me as your fan and Ihope iit’snot rude but r u a girl or a boy?
    Actually your name confuses me. Sorry if it hurt u
    And also your age, u know just so Iknow whether to call u di/bbhaiyaor not. Pls ddon’t b offended.
    Love, vivikhta💟
    P.s. will u b my friend?

    1. VHM

      Hey Vivikhtha………thank you for such a long and lovely comment…….thank you for all the compliments….i am really happy to know you liked my ff ”THE UNBELIEVABLE TRUTH” …..it was one of my favorite works in TU till now……..coming to this FF expect the unexpected …i promise you i wouldn’t disappoint you……..i am a gal rather a woman and you can call me Harika or dii as you are comfortable…well age you can guess yourself as i am married and have a 4 year baby girl…..nothing to get offended or getting hurt in this dear….i am glad you started posting your comments and i would love to see your comments again and again

  34. Vanika

    nice os and next part

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Vanika…i have already Uploaded next part and hope by now you might have read and posted your opinion

  35. Shivikaanshi

    Awsm start…..i just hope that shivaay stops anika from leaving OM….post soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivikaanshi……you would know soon everything ……..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Rashi…..

  36. Pooja26

    superb…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pooja

  37. Jerry_36

    Harika di its superb. Mindblowingly fantastic. Loved it. I know you have posted the next so I will surely read it. Its so intriguing. No words. Really appreciate your creative mind☺

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Jerry…….i must compliment your creative mind instead as you are yourself an awesome writer with almost always 80+ comments on all the shots you have posted till now…..one of the most read FF on Tu page till date…….kudos cutiepie

      1. Jerry_36

        Harika di not in all shots. You are more amazing than me, so never compare. And thank you so much. We all love you for your writing (*especially me*)❤

    2. VHM

      Jerry dear…i wasn’t comparing …i was just reminding you how perfect you write ………….and i donno but i always feel proud to be a vivid follower among many others of your FF………i too love you so much Jerry…keep giving us such amazing ff’s

      1. Jerry_36

        Thank you once again. Will be giving you good works for sure. Love you more😘

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika20

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