The insatiable white queen and faithful dark knight – Episode 1

Hii everyone..good to feel back here..this story I completely dedicated to Gianna dear..m soooo sorry for not posting it on ur birthday..u know my problem..so happy belated birthday to sweetheart..n don’t kill me after reading this..I wanted it to be OS but later I thought I can’t show everything in one chapter..so it will take more chapters..

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Insatiable and white has a meaning far apart from each other. Still this is suitable for the girl who has never ending thoughts to get what she wants. Although it is forbidden to know what she wants right or wrong, but still she is too transparent regarding her secret wantings. She faced many unbelievable nonsensical physical and mental harassment n cruelty which made her today unstoppable and insatiable white queen with dark character….

Faithful dark knight not a dark prince..this answers a lot of queries. He was a person who always stood by the side of white queen just like her shadow. But never claimed anything in return,just remove the obstacle which came in queen’s way. He has a murderous past which torture him n torment him.

Life is not always simple, smooth, charming as a normal person thinks or believes. Its all about to embracing both difficulties n ease, sorrows n happiness, falls n rise. But in some cases people always face the extreme hardness,rigidity,harasses of society which turn a glowing character into dark persona.

Its not a love story,not a hate story either. Its all depends on ur pov how u will take the characters. How the queen n knight are not externally linked with each other; but intertwined inexplicably internally with each other.

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In an abandoned area a man found to be dead, murdered before 2-3 hours ago. Inspector samaira Khanna observing very keenly. Victim Anuj Mehera, a banker was stabbed and killed by a strange rare kind of knife. There was no sign of struggle,so killer must be an aquittance n victim caught off-guard. Interrogation started with people around the victim. When they were investigating Anuj’s trace on murder they found out,he visited Mishra family one of his bank customer with a proper gift. This is strange. Anuj granted Mishra family a bulk amount of lone which is unethical according to the bank rules. On the way back to home he was murdered mysteriously.

So it’s obvious that doubt will grow more on the Mishra’s as suspect. Inspector samaira with her co worker teji visited Mishra house. From outside it’s a very small house but neat n clean. A teenager girl most probably around 17-18 opened the door.

Girl ;” yes. Who is it?? What do u want??”.

Sam ;” we are police. Call ur parents,need to talk with them. What is your name”..

Girl replied ;” m radhika Mishra. Sorry but can i see ur id proof as u are not in uniform”..

Samaira astonished seeing the bravery of girl. She n teji showed their id as rads welcome them inside.

Radhika said;” my father doesn’t stay with us . Mother went for work.”

Teji replied ;” its ok,we will wait then”..

Samaira observed the room very carefully ; but found nothing as to suspect. Teji was talking radhika while samaira observing her. She thought rads has very beautiful face but the noticeable thing the deep darkened brown almond eyes hiding something behind it . She is strangely calm and composed which doesn’t suit to her teen age. Sam started pacing inside room n noticed flowers n chocolates, sweets thrown into the trash can.she looked back rads who apparently stared her but immediately shifted her gaze. Sam confirmed Anuj’s visit to house.

When her mother mala returned to home, she was shocked seeing police there. Samaira found mala a beauty, the cold beauty & rads exactly looked like her. She thought ;”the woman like mala must be the type that men would fall for first sight. This must be the reason for anuj’s extra favour towards them. Might be his love interest”..

Teji asked mala while Sam only observed others actions . Mala was a bit nervous but answered everything. She said after Anuj leave she went to near by coffee shop with her friends n she was with them all the day.Sam n teji returned and crosschecked mala’s word with her friends.they found she was with her friends at the time of murder. Radhika went for her part time work. Its getting worse when they knew Dilip Mishra was a physical handicap person. They have no suspects now; but samaira has a sixth sense which always said her there is something wrong in Mishras, she has no evidence to proof it.

So Sam n teji visited victim’s house to interrogate them ,to know if they doubt anyone.Mrs Mehera directly denied that she had no clue about any enemies .Anuj visited most of his clients house so, its usual for her. Sam asked her if she knew the special favour of Anuj to Mishra family ,she had no idea. Sam showed her the bank statements which Anuj draws from his own account to gave Mishras. She was shocked. After some further interrogation Sam went to her son’s room. She was apparently shocked to see the room,anybody can find the innovative creativity in room with wall hangings from waste garbage, oil paintings, antiques etc.

The boy Arjun mehera ,around 20 stood up seeing samaira and stared her with questioning . Sam was intrigued by boy whom she met before; but observing first time. No doubt he was handsome; but his dark eyes ,expressionless face,emotionless activities intrigued Sam. She remembered she saw such coldness in rads also but there is no connection after all.Sam asked him some questions. He answered he was with his friend com elderly brother neil Malhotra when he heard about murder.it’s very hard for them to loss his father as he was the only earning person of the family. Sam could feel his emptiness but told him to be strong.other hand teji crosschecked with neil n his statement was exact of what Arjun said.

Till now every suspect got cleared with a witness. There is a less possibility to find actual culprit. If it’ll not solved the case will be closed without any strong evidence. And it’s hurting samaira Khanna ‘s pride that it was her first case,which will be unsolved.she was thinking each left right ; don’t why but her sense always said her there are something wrong in Mishra.When everything seem to be a dead-end, they found out a new fact. Teji came running and gave the unexpected bombing news ” Anuj Mehera had unusual s*xual interests. He had many girls n ladies life, whom he destroyed by bribing them or forcefully.”

Its like a rays of hope arise in samaira’s brain. She got a clear view as she told teji to prepare vehicle to go to Mishra’s. But the seen they witness at sight, they were shocked. Mala was died and radhika cried vigorously near by her. She was not like the previous radhika who was calm n composed,whom Sam saw before……..

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I can only say that its not a murder mystery or crime thriller as it looked like.

55 comments

  1. Meen

    Meen

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    oh my god……how did mala died…suddenly….& i think its got to do something with arjun…..here im scratching my head like any thing……by d way…….intriguing….awesome…..it would be lovely to see love story of teenaged radhika & arjun….& not forget……today sam had it all…..waiting for a love story to unfold……..loads of love….stay blessed rossy

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Thanks dear meen..as I told its not a love story,not a hate story. Either…m telling u its a ill fated dark story revolving around cruelty of society…I told u everything…lol

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    OMG OMG OMG This is so intriguing, read it in one breath. Wow wow wow Rosie thank u so much for this wonderful gift, I want my bday to come every week so I can keep on getting these kinds of amazing gifts. I loved it and eager to read the next one. Love u loads n loads 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Awwww….my giu baby if u loved it my hard thinking pays…birthday comes every week..lol…it would be nice if i get to read ur stories whole days

  3. suga

    God God God my unique one awwwwwwww it’s incredible one πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ awesome πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ lovely dear πŸ˜€ specially the characters are mind blowing πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ u r such a uniquely unique one πŸ˜€ loved it πŸ˜€ love u πŸ˜€

  4. Sathya

    Sathya

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    Wowwwww… What a come back…. My dear sissy Rosie… Muaaahhhh 😘😘😘😘 just have a tight hug from me. What have u written yar…. I just forget the surroundings n traveled with them in this whole episode. M just lack of words now….. U r mind blowing dear.. Very very well written n brilliant narration. Superbbbb suspense… It’s implausible one….. Love u loads 😍😘😍😘😍😘

  5. Jessie

    Jessie

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    Mujhe pata hai.. this is Rosie..even b4 I saw ur name..when u explained abt insatiable queen.. I guessed 2 b u… Fantastic opening.. am thinking abt it.. both Ardhika hiding1 some thing…I blindly trust u to turn dem as murderers..πŸ˜œπŸ˜πŸ˜‹πŸ˜œ. I wish Sam not 2 find s culprits..lol.. Bring it on!! Am so eager Rosie… Jaldi se next chappy post karo..TC n love u loads..
    Gianna.. I too wish d same.. u should have birthdays every week..we 2 get d chance 2 enjoy ur gifts… tats d best part!! Loads of love …

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Thanks Jessie dear…lol u guessed me…hamari bondage…ur trust n findings are awesome..ohk only I can say its a ill fated dark story regarding cruelty of society…u cant be a saint every time…that is the theme

  6. Lakshmi

    It’s brilliant.looking forward 4 long updates.i like the story line.luv u dr.😚😊.i am from Kerala

  7. Roma

    Awesome, Rosieeeee my sunshine. …it’s really superbbbb n intriguing. …yes looks like mystery now…but we will find out more in future. …it’s loved the female power of your stories. …women r alwaysssss so strong inside out…n u providing real meaning to it…Sam’s first case…rads a mature teenager with dark side …arjun young man with dark also in his eyes. ..mala, also murdered…it was really very interesting n unique start…..making me all curious for it. ..keep it up honeyyy love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sunshine ….β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Thanks my appi di…u loved it…i m pakka sure now it’s ok…its more than a mystery…ill fated dark story of cruel surrounding…lol…i told everything …koi baat nahin…also I forgot what I thought…lol…crazy na…loveeeee u infinity

  8. Tara

    Tara

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    omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i cant wait any more…
    what a story.. awesome…
    actually beyond that..
    m loving it..
    plzzz rossy dear post fast… cant really wait..
    plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  9. Myra

    Myra

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    uffff….rossy di……loved it……it was wonderful…..please please update soon….am so desperate πŸ™‚

  10. Sweetie

    Sweetie

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    Rosieee Di,I knew it can be only you.. πŸ™‚ Haayee!!Gianna should celebrate her b’day every month yaar so that we can get treats like this on behalf of her.. πŸ˜€ Lovely concept Di,waiting for the next.. πŸ™‚ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

  11. manha

    Rose darling kyun bachon ki jaan le rahi ho. Ufff. Where do you get all these thrilling ideas. Like when you start reading you have to be make sure you dont have weak heart. Poor me. But the story intro awesome. Something deep which is left unnoticed is happening in the shadows behind the light. Loved it. you are just amazing.

    • Rossy

      Rossy

      |Author

      Thanks manha dear..u r correct…for reading this u v to make sure u don’t have a weak heart..many things happened n many will happen in this ill fated dark story

  12. Chandana

    Hi Rossy… this is awesome start… looking forward to know what you kept in store for your readers as you said it is not a thriller/mystery…tc

  13. Dipika

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    Ohhhhh myyyy godddd what deadkyw explainatiow n description of the situation.. U said its not mystery but m now scratvhiw my head..whts the connection of aradhika having same coldness..first anuj n nw mala died.. U take my breath away n now saying its not mystery.. This is my rossy..only u can come with extra ordinary ideas..m tremendously excited for next.. Pls don’t go on mars..n post ot soon..haha..love u..muhha

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Heroine u will know adhika’s coldness…again I told everyone that its a ill fated dark story…cruelty of surrounding…m on mars now…can’t go back..after back I’ll write it…lol

  14. S.v

    S.v

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    twin what is this god it was like excuse me am i reading or seeing lovely update dear seriously a lovely update you guys always rock in suspense thriller and everything i was reading and was thinking who would it be all are seems to be perfect but that is the problem being normal and perfect is the problem thzt is what sam should find lol speaking as if i am expert in these thinkg im a big 0 in this plot my only job is to read and enjoy im on my duty and next part soo dear so lovely and when is our trip to mars captain we all are aboard waiting for your order captain love you my twin

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Twin dear u made me smile by ur comments…did u mark everyone here are not normal…but perfect..don’t worry u r a expert…n trying is good…u will get permission to go to mars today…lol…πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ lots of love

  15. Starz

    Starz

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    Rossy really yaar….I am involved in ur story so much….got a shock when mala died…it’s like u gave treat for all…. loads of love and take care…… update soon.😘😘

  16. Gauri

    Gauri

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    Rossy I am deep down in it….and now I want more….don’t make me wait and post soon loads of love stay blessed πŸ™‚

  17. _Ritu

    _Ritu

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    OMG.. Rosie dear…it was breath taking yaar… πŸ™‚ gave me Goosebumps πŸ™‚ now m seriously getting jealous from Gianna πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ she is getting such amazing gifts πŸ˜‰ ArDhika are mysterious here.. πŸ™‚ now m all in d story… πŸ™‚ plz post soon nd its really different dear….I wonder why u haven’t tried as a story writer in movies…hats off to u ..loads of love πŸ™‚

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Story writer u said…hayila….then who will go to watch movie which will made on my script…lolπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ …btw ritu dear m angry warrior angel now…come soon to the first page n plzzzzzzzz update ur ldr

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