Dedicated to Arpita darling as she asked me to write it…from her Astha baby…
“Ek ajeeb sa chubhan hota hai.. yahan”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi flirt with his lovely and innocent wife in the kitchen…

“Ek dard hota hai.. jab tum mujhe dekhti ho tumhari inn ankhon se”- Shivaay kept his hand on his chest right above his heart.
Annika looked at him with her eyes… dark orbs that can kill any one by just a look.
“Yeh meri ankhen hai Shivaay”- Annika told,”not any sword”.
“Haan tumhari ankhen hai… jo mujhe ek dard deta hai”- He blamed,”every time you look at me,” a special pain appears at my heart”.

Annika got worried at his revelation. She is the sole reason of his pain… his already weak heart is paining just because of her look.
“Shivaay”- Annika dropped the white plate from her hand and began to rub his paining heart with her soft and delicate fingers.
“I will not look at you from now onwards Shivaay”- Annika could not accept the fact that she gives pain to her pati parmeswar…
“Annika”- Shivaay was shocked as his teasing back fired on him like a boomerang,”look at me”.
Annika turned the other side.

He kept his hand on her half bare shoulder..
“Annika meri taraf dekho”- He requested.
“I don’t want you to feel any pain any where because of me”-Annika felt sorry for her deed.
“Look at me with your katilana eyes Annika”- He opened his locked heart,”let me enjoy this sweet pain”.
“Hain!!!sweet pain”-Annika threw a question at him with her dark eyes.
“Because if you look at me… and the pain it gives me”- Shivaay came very close to her and hold her waist,”I felt that I am alive”.

“I will not look at you ever”- She threatened,”it will not pain you”.
“Always look at me with your eyes Annika”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi invited,”It gives me a feeling of being alive…being watched and loved. The feeling is priceless…special”.
Annika had no idea about a lovely pain. She never experienced it.
She shouted for Rudra and Omkara. They both ran towards kitchen to see a worried Annika bhabhi ..her hand on the chest of their super hero … running her long and delicate fingers over his heart.

“Bhabhi…I will call the cardiologist”- Omkara used his brain that was hided for long time under his long hair.
“Om call the psychiatric too”- Annika was not ready to take a chance with the health of her kanji eyed husband,”he was talking non sense from last 15 minutes”.
Omkara ran to call the doctor.

“Rudra this sound is coming from some where from last two days”- Annika got a doubt,”I checked every where for a billi but found nothing”.
“There can never be mice in Oberoi mansion”- Rudra had never seen any mouse in his house.
Hurayah…….(Rudra’s funny tone of logic)
I am coming Bhabhi.. and he disappeared suddenly.

“Annika”- Shivaay who was smiling till now started again,”did you felt any pain when I look at you …in your heart”.
Annika was confirmed now… her husband had gone really mad. She wanted to send him to mental asylum as soon as possible.
“I have no problem in my heart like you”- She hold his hand tightly..,”Or any other part of the body”.

Shivaay looked sad at her denial. He thought she also feel the same for him… like he do…
“Now”-He gazed at her face while coming
very close that their breath mixed with each other,”dard hua dil main”.
“No… “- she told truth only,”my heart is keeping a very high speed like it will burst out from the thoracic cavity”.
“And now…”- Shivaay encouraged by letting her shudder by his hot and warm breath on her neck,”What are you feeling?”.

“Like there is no oxygen left in kitchen… like its very hot I am sweating “- Her innocent talk amazed him.”
“The AC is on Annika”-He teased,”windows are open and adjust fans are also switched on”.
Annika now got relieved as he talk normally leaving the topic of pain any more.
“So you never felt any pain in your heart”- He is not going to step back without knowing her feeling.
“When did it pain there… in your heart??”- He asked,”during which specific time period??”.

“At the time when my husband was lying senseless on my lap in a deserted forest”- Annika revealed,”I was looking for the medicine like a mad women”.
“and”- He want to know more.
“At a time when I felt like I lost my Shivaay in the plane crash in my early morning dream”.
“And”- He was more curious now.
Did she felt any pain when he was busy insulting her.
“Not any time before or after that”- He looked at her with his blue eyes.
“No… coz before that I never felt any happiness to realize the real feeling of pain”.
She was alone then with her brother and was used to fight with pains daily to protect her brother.

“I will not let you feel that type of pain again”- SSO promised.
“I felt that type of pain … a hurting pain only two time”-Shivaay confessed.
“When I saw you in the water filled glass box in the clutch of Daksh and”-He wait for a second,” and the second time when I found you hanging on the tree like a dead body”.
“What did you exactly feel when you hided under the couch that day”-Shivaay asked,”and ran away from under the table right from my behind”.
“You saw me that time!!”- Annika was afraid.

“I felt your presence that day in kitchen”- He answered back.
“When you came towards me… my heart was beating very fast.. a ghanti was ringing on my ear”- Shivaay now understood the meaning of her talk that day and her action of closing her ear dramatically shouting Nahi…..

The doctor you ask Om to call is not going to cure this disease.. you are suffering from … like I am suffering from this special and lovely disease..
“Shivaay “- Annika checked her self by touching her hand then face,”I am sick.. you are sick.. we both are sick and suffering with different diseases”.
“Er… no the symptoms are different “-He was doing magic in her ear by his husky voice,”I am sure we both are suffering from a same disease”.
“This doctor is not helping us”- Annika felt sad as the doctor will be arriving by now,”what shall we do now?”.

“Hug me Annika like the way I am doing with you”- Shivaay invited her ,”the pain in my heart and the mich michi in your heart will be cured for now”.
She hesitate for few seconds and then hold him tightly and her hand garlanded his neck.
” I am feeling very nice… like holding a treasure near to me”- He whispered near her ear,”a priceless one”.
“What did you told me that day in the forest while I was unconscious?”- He is not a businessman to let go of the chance .

“That I love you very much”- She bit her tongue but it was too late.
“I would love to reply the same words to you”- Shivaay finally told.
“What the wuck!!!”- She copied his words,” You are emotionally challenged”.
“I love you Mrs. Shivaay Singh Oberoi”- He is not ready to let her win the challenge…
“You love me”- Annika was happy at his confession,”but we are going to die soon coz of our disease”.

“Who is going to die from disease…??”- Shivaay tried to remember all his relatives.
“We both “-Annika said,” you only told now that we both are suffering from a very dangerous disease that doctor is unable to cure”.
“Ha ha ha….. “-He laughed freely,” we have each other as medicine as we are suffering from love disease”.

“Oh!!!”- She realised the very next second,”we are suffering from love disease… all the symptoms we both felt”.
“Now tell me Annika how do you feel when I looked at you “-He asked the last question.
” Your kanji blue eyes…”- Annika finally told,” like i am drowning in a sea of love and care. their depth reminds
me of large ocean… “.

“Ahem ahem!!!!”- Rumya cleared their throat.
“Bhaiyya… khoda kitchen ke neeche ,nikla Sumo”.- Rudra managed to release Soumya.
“I got it why Bade Bhaiyya called Annika bhabhi as Jhansi ki Raani??”- Soumya chirped forgetting her pain.
“Bhaiyya aap to bade chhupa rustom nikle”- Rudra teased.
“I want to discuss a serious matter with you”- Shivaay whispered .
“About what??”- Annika wondered.
“About Ansh and Shivika”- He managed to say.

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    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Starlight… I will write some more of OS in near future…Thank you dear…

  2. Surbhi Sharma

    Astha di , u left me speechless. I have no words . Its such a cute ff . Loved it . ??????.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Surbhi ….

  3. Awww….that was the cutest ff i eer read….the last line just stole my heart…?❤?❤?❤…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Sabhya…. last line stole your heart.. I felt happy at that…

  4. Shivika

    Hey it was awesome…….sweet one…….spellbound…….plz can u write part-2 for this as want to read further about the reactions of anika on shivaay’s last words…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Shivika… It was just an OS….part 2 will make it lost its charm. Just imagine the reaction of Annika by your self….lolz…
      But I will try another OS for that.
      Thank you dear…

      1. Shivika

        Dear even i thought of that but was really curious about ur thoughts so just commented to tell u how curious i was

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        I got it Shivika ha ha… you are very eager to meet Jr. Oberoi… lolz…

  5. Astha di such a wonderful os
    both of them are like love sick puppies
    please write a part 2 of this
    last line was amazing
    eagerly waiting for that line in the actual serial

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Laasya… I will try to pen that down soon….

  6. Cute and awesome!!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kanthi… Thnx. for reading it.

  7. Nita D

    Wow….this is so lovely….really really loved it….sweet pain n sweet love confession with a touch of humor….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Nita D.

  8. Awesome

  9. Pooja26

    last line is beyond word 😉 😉
    he wanna disscuss about….. 😉 😉
    loved it !!!!!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ha ha… pooja.. discuss about it…lolz.
      thank you ….

  10. Heeee astha baby.tum mujhe itna pyaar karti ho ki mere naam pe is os ki dedicate kiya Awwwwwwwww Thank you soooooooooooooo much.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????


    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita.. calm baby…it was neither khidki nor darwaja tod… it was just a plate tod….
      You only gave the !dea to write on the kitchen romance…so you deserve the dedication just the way ..Anu deserve to read the guilty and apologising Shivaay in my previous OS…
      Thank you dear for throwing me a challenge….

  11. Kiki

    Cute one. Loved it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Kiki… for reading about our cute Shivika….

  12. Sweet and cute os

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx . Fffan…
      I am happy at last every one called it cute and sweet rather than the usual superb… and awesome…

  13. Sumayyah

    love the way you portrayed the story

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Sumayyah

  14. Very cute

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Charitha…

  15. wow..loved it…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Arya….
      wow …. world of women….

  16. It was so awww asthu!! ???

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu… tumhe bhi thank you…

  17. Alekhika20


    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you…

  18. Awesome….Loved it…
    The Innocent Annika… 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      And the Delicious Singh Oberoi…
      Thank you…

  19. awww Astha di it’s jst so cutee I loved it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. and keep loving…

  20. Ahaana

    So cuteeeeeee dear….. ????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Ahaana dear….

  21. Awesome….loved the ending…superbbbbb…
    Nd when are u planning of updating ur ff undeniable desire..haan?…i have been waiting soooooooo long for it…uske saath aise hee thoda thoda chhota os bhi post karthe rahenna…we will be more than happy to read… 😉

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana…. sorry to disappoint you but It will be posted after I win my own satisfaction of writing OS…
      I promise I will be updating that too but after some days…
      Thank you with a consolation hug…lolz.. keep loving…

  22. just i want to say i’m proud of u r a telugu one. God bless u. Mana kanna chinna vallani ekkuvuga pogada kudadu anta andukae bless chestuna. LUV U.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Liba….I… Nenu…

  23. Vaishalijha

    I didn’t wanted to stop reading it, It was so amazing that I don’t have words to express the beauty of this FF. can I get a Part 2 of it..Say YES ❣️

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Vaishali Jha… Thank you..
      No part -2… sorry dear..
      I will post other stories…
      keep loving…..

  24. Superb….. just awesome… loved it….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Lilly… thnx dear…

  25. Gayathri.visu

    Marvellous di….! Its soooo sweet and beautiful!!! And the last line….Aww..!!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Gayathri….

  26. It is awesome dii… Sorry I am commenting a little late….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nikku…. koi baat nahi… thank you…

  27. Archisha

    Wow! Awesome

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Archisha…. thank you.

  28. Priyali

    About Ansh and Shivika”- He managed to say.

    OMG… Anika might have blushed like hell.
    Hi di. U may probably not know me coz I haven’t posted on TU for a long time. But I was a writer here and I haven’t been able to update since a long time. Leave my rant.

    This os was so cute simple and sweet. Kudos to you !??❤❤

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Priyali

  29. Aap itna CUTE kaise likh leti ho? I mean this is beyond the expectations…. Left me speechless! Hates off to an Amazing Writer!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Mere saath itna pyaar karnewale reader jo hai… thnx. dear…

  30. Astha darling…..awwwwwwwwsome OS dear…. ???? Much better than the actual scene….
    My favorite part was where Shivaye asks Anika to hug him back the way he does and the last Ansh and Shivika part……fabulous dear….keep it up!! ????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Liji… thnx and I hope you are blushing…

  31. Wooww..!!such a lovely ff…just loved it…!!n the last thing which Shivay said..that was really very much interesting..!!Umm I think u must write a new OS based on this last line plzzz plzzz plzzz…U write really interesting ff’s…plzzz…!!!!

  32. Aastha_Reddy

    Thnx. Deeksha I will try as so many friends are interested in it…

  33. Kanfi

    Awwwwwwewwreeeeeeee astha,,it was ammmmmazing,,,,,n last line was just fab,,,,ur writing skills amazed me everytime,,

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Kanfi…

  34. so cute dear loved it .last line was really nyz…

  35. Navz

    I hope dis disease will never leave our shivika..awwww????? cute dailogues yaar aastha..luved them

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