An incident which change’s my life-Swasan (Chap-1)


Hii guys i read all ur comments and i am vry hapy thank u so much for ur support. Now i am starting my fiction. An incident which change’s my life swasan…

A big mansion is shown and a man near about in fifty’s is sitting on the sofa at the centre of the hall and talking on phone about some meetings. He is dp(durgaprasad) Then he end’s up with the call and says Ramu
Ramu-ji malik
And dp says something to ramu.

In a beautiful room, a man is seen doing push up’s and he is full on sweating. He is doing his excercise with full concentration.
Then ramu comes in room and says-
Ramu-“Sanskar bhaiya bade malik apko bula rhe h”(yess. He is sanskar… sanskar maheswari)
Sanskar- Ramu tm jao main aa rha hoon

Then sanskar stands up and takes towel and goes to washroom for taking bath.
Sanskar comes down and says to his dad means to dp
Sanskar-hii dad and vry” Good morning”
Dp- same to u son and he asks where is laksh sanskar beta
Sanskar-aap phir bhool gye dad vo to subah hi apne squash game ke liye nikal jata h
Dp- oh!! I totally forgotten.. ye kam ke chakkar main main bhool jata hoon..
Ok sanskar but say to laksh that come fast becoz we have to go for an urgent meeting.
Sanskar-yess dad i am going to inform him

@Squash court
A boy is seen holding a squash racket and playing vry fastly. With whom he was playing is vry scared by seeing him playing so fastly. Then her phone beeps and he stops playing. He goes out to pick the phone. Then her frnds stop him and says lucky “kaha jaa rha h(“yupp.. he is laksh.)
Lucky-comng yarr..

Lucky-hii bhai”whatssupppp”!!
San-whatsupp ke bacche kahan hai tu
Lucky-u know na bhai squash court main hoon
San-wo toh main bhi janta hoon par mujhe tijhe kuch yad dilana hai
Lucky-kya bhai.. wait a sec main kuch bhool rha hoon kya.
San-ssss.. aap bhool rhe hain
Lucky-OMG!! Meeting oh god dad to full gusse main ho gay .. bhai please bjai aap dad ko sambhalo main abhi ata hoon plzz bhai.
San(bit laughing)-chal acha h kam se kam tujhe yadd to aya ab aja hm log ofc ke liye nikal rhe tu wahin aa jana..
Lucky-ok bhai and thanks.. bye bye
Then he hurriedly pack his stuff and goes towards the home..

Precap: meeting in the ofc.

Plzz guys comment… and sorry for the mistakes hope u enjoy…

Credit to: Eku

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  1. Make it a little longe..n intro was nice. Can’t say about character.

    1. Kiara i had given the character sketch of evryone in previous one

  2. awesome………

  3. Awesome

  4. interesting. waiting 4r nxt part

  5. Superb

  6. R they having a leap????

    1. I’m sorry ” the ” was a mistake

  7. Thanks evryone

  8. Guys…Pls wite the story in English so it will be easy for everyone to read and understand. though some can understand hindi but they cannot read it better pls avoid writing in Hindi and proceed with english.

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