IMMORTAL LOVE … Swasan… Swaragini (last part)

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Hello Friends
Firstof all thanku so much for giving ur valuable opinions and
Secondly I was not having any intention to make fun of marriages neither i m going to make fun of it in my remaining story, i m very sorry guyss .. I didn’t had this intention to hurt ur sentiments towards marriage concept …
Once again i m sorry . I hope today’s part will be better than before and may reach ur somewhat expectation
Happy reading
A lady turned around and……….
Swara: Ragini tum !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tears occupied her eyes she was actually trying to understand and believe that is she actually her

5 years ago
Medical( final year)
Ragini: Swara wait …………………………u know what , two handsome hunks have entered into our class and one of them is just mesmerizing
Swara: Ragini tum pagal ho gayi hai kya, tumhe kab se “Handsome hunks ” mein interest aane laga !!!!!
Ragini: Aree yaar actually woh itna handsome hai that i could not control
Swara: Chal phir dono se baat karkar aate hai
Ragini: aree swaru no don’t……………………(swara dragged her to both of them)
Swara : Hi myself Swara Singhania and she is traditional bestieee Ragini Malpani
Boy: Hi Miss swara and hi miss traditional Ragini
I am Sanskar Maheswari and he is my Bestieee cum Bhai Laksh Maheshwari
Laksh: Hi preety ladies
Swara: but y u guyss have joined our college in mid session
Sanskar: woh actually hum dono ne decide kiya tha ki eksaal toh hum Mumbai ki top college mein hi karenge
Laksh:aur isiliye iss se achi college ho hi nahi sakti thi hai na bhai
Swara , Sanskar,Laksh and Ragini both started doing gupshup

Few days passed and all four were becoming a gang……………group studies , night outs, and all masti had become part of their life
Friendship is a bond of hearts ………………..
All four have become so great friends, they themselves could not evaluate how a short span of time can create so deep friendship
Swara and Sanskar became best of friends and Laksh and Ragini became best of friends but pyaar aur dosti ek se ho toh samajh aata hai lekin Ragini fell for sanskar, Laksh fell for ragini, sanskar fell for swara, but no one could utter a single word becoz they felt their friendship could get destroyed so ………..(u know)they didn’t spoke but harkate toh aise hi thi ki sab samajh aajaye (lekin guyss yeh daily soap ka ff hai so inhe samajh nahi aaya) aur Swara ke liye this three become integral part of her life
In the canteen
Ragini was running behind Swara coz she came to know about her felling for Sanskar and was going to tell him
Laksh and Sanskar were going back to class but saw the girls running like kids and tried to stop them and Laksh went to stop Ragini and Sanskar tried to stop swara
but
Ragini’s leg got bend and she was about to fall but Laksh hold her and Sanskar stopped Swara by holding her by her waist
Both the couples shared a small but cute eyelock
Sanskar had a habit to write Dairy and he wrote every moment of Swasan in it
Time flew but no one told their feelings towards each other
Their college was completed and all had to go to different places for internship
Laksh went to Kokata
Sanskar went to Ahmedabad
Ragini to Dadar(Mumbai)
Swara to Mahalaxmi(Mumbai)
But they were in touch with each other …………. and of course in love with each other…………..their love was immortal

Present
Laksh: Swara what happen???? kaha kho gayi thi
Ragini: Swara i want to talk to u
Swara: Sanskar kesa hai?? sab theek toh hai na
Ragini: Swara , i know u never expected that i will ever come here hain naa , but u know from that day onwards when i came to know about u and sanskar from then onwards i was dying to meet u

Flashback
Ragini: Sanskar now we r husband wife u can’t simply ignore me like this if u didn’t want to get married y u said yes to ur parents , u could have told no to them
Sanskar: Ragini , look i don’t want fights in this house so let it be becoz the truth is not as sweet as u want it is much more bitter than u can even imagine
Ragini: Sanskar no matter what today i want to know what actually the things are it is very tough to handle ur everyday’s ignorance, coming late at nights from office, going so early to office and not giving any sort of importance why Sanskar why?(sobbing)
Sanskar: (got irritated and)Ragini i think u r trying to instigate me so lets make u happy for once and for all then listen to me Ragini , I never loved u becoz i always loved SWARA and wll always love u
Ragini: (almost broken and continuously crying)Sanskar i know this i read ur Dairy which was enough for me to understand ur feelings which were always for Swara and was never for me
Ragini went near the dressing table and took out some papers
Ragini: Sanskar this are the divorce papers and i have signed them and u also sign them and go be free out from this unwanted relation
Sanskar: But…………
Ragini: Leave it …u also know what r the concepts of true marriage , where there is trust, where there is love ,where they live with each other and be there for each other always no matter what circumstances r there forever ………………..but we…………………..were never meant to be together…………………sorry for destroying ur life…………
Sanskar: Ragini things would not have got so complicated if we didn’t got married but i m very very sorry ragini i never wanted to destroy ur life like this but …………….i m sorry ……………………but u also know love is immortal …………….i m sorry and i also wanted u get a new start for ur life becoz i don’t think swara will ever come back to me

Present
Ragini:(continue) Swara this two years have taught me lot many things which made me understand that love has be from both husband wife (sobbing and could not continue further)
Swara: (all broken from inside) and silently crying I m sorry Ragini mere wagah se…………..
Ragini: it was never ur fault neither there was anyone’s fault leave it
Laksh: Ragini , Swara we should goto him and tell him ur feelings Swara
Ragini was hell shocked bcoz Sanskar told that it was one sided love but now
Swara: Lekin…………..
Laksh: Swara agar aaj lekin par aa kar ruk gayi naa toh lifetime yeh regret reh gayega ki tum kabhi apne pyaar ko bata nahi paiye ki tum usse kitna pyaar karti ho
All three flew to Mumbai
A big mansion is shown
Dark hall is seen
Sanskar: Ramnath kaka Lights kyun nahi hai ghar par?
Swara: Ramnath kaka bhi nahi hai…
Sanskar: who’s this ? (restless)and y lights r off tell me who r u , u r not Swara right (in almost pleading manner) tell me gotdamnit
Lights focused on swara’s face
Swara: 2 years , 2 years was not short span of time and for me it was not less than 20 decades , Love is the most essential part of life and no one can be more idiot than me who herself let her love go away of her life ……………. i know at times i don’t behave rational rather i behaved very childish two years back ………..i m sorry ………i know srry is such a small word for this sin but trust me i suffered a lot without u my love ……………Can i have the honors to become mrs. Sanskar maheshwari
Sanskar: NO………………………………………….if u want to become than u can become Mrs. Swara Sanskar maheshwari
Laksh and Ragini standing on the first floor listening to them showered them with rose petals and lights got switched on
Swasan hugged each other and cried a lot hugging each other
Laksh: Ragini i know this is not a right time neither a right place to ask but
He stood on his knees……………. I know u never knew about my love towards u but i have been in ur love since we met i.e, from last 7 years ………..i m not at all forcing u neither i have any kind of sympathy becoz this proposal is purely based on love
Ragini: Sorry laksh but i want some time becoz moving on is not so easy and who else could have better understood than u

2 years later
Swara: anji don’t cry baby today ur masi is getting engaged it is so big day for her
Sanskar: Swara she is one year baby and u r telling her as if she is going to hear and understand ur emotional talks
Swara: sahi hai bilkul apne papa pe gayi hai
Laksh opened the door
Laksh: Bhai today is my engagement and u r doing romance with ur wife comm’n bro , help me man!!!
Engagement ceremony started
Ragini and Laksh exchanged the rings everybody made a huge applause
And they had Happily ever after

Guyss i hope this episode have not hurt anyone’s sentiments
Guyss plzz give me ur comments
Bye guys hope u enjoyed reading it

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31 Comments
  1. Sus

    dear we were just saying
    we are not hurting and here u have shown how sanskar never felt or attracted to ragini and if he will continue this marriage then may be both live like this their life. its good both find their solace.

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku so much sus , i knew there was nothing to hurt i was all about different perspectives
      Ok now i won’t say sorry or else it will continue till eternity ……Take care ……….

  2. Phoniex

    nice story the true marriage is based on love ad love can never be forced

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku very much dear ……………..Truly said Love can never be forced ……………………Take care

  3. nice one..tc..

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku so much dear…………..Take care.

  4. Kojagorimalik

    Nice part lovely

    1. Shrutu

      Thankyou very much dear ………………..Take care

  5. Anu

    awesome shrutu!! sanskar love 4 swara was so true! swasan means for each other! if possible can uh give the epilogue with only swasan scenes nd swasan with their child!without leap

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku dear …… Epilogue hmmm….. I will try dear ………….
      i will try for epilogue dear but may be short one………….I hope its fine………Take care

  6. nice one epilogue dedo

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku sweety …………… Epilogue i wll try but may be short one……………..Take care

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku dearie …………….Take care……….

  7. Kakali

    I duno why I cried reading this.!!
    Loved it dear..! Would love to read more stories by you..!! Continue soon..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. Shrutu

      Awwww dear ……………….u made me feel overwhelmed …………………Thanku so much sweety ……………ya i would try to write some other tragic stories (my personal favorite) but if u like u can read a shivika ff also it is more tragic one written by me http://www.tellyupdates.com/misunderstanding-leads-destruction-shivika-ishqbaaz-part-1/
      it consist of 5 parts i think u may like it

  8. nice dear…loved it

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku dear ……………….. Take care

  9. Simi

    Loved it.. Didn’t read the first part.. But will read it?

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku dear ………….. Ya surely read it …………i hope u like it……………….. Take care

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku neha……………….Take care

  10. Arshaanya

    Nyc..
    Bt it was stupid of swara to take dat dcsn 2yrs bck which spoiled evry1z lyf…
    N if it hpns in real lyf na dan life dun gbe u chnaces lyk dis..
    So think wisely n take decisions.. it can chnge many lifezzzzz

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku dear………….. yaaa it was stupid of her but no one can understand the circumstances which other person is going through……………this is simply my P.O.V………..nothing else dear……..I completely agree Decisions should be taken wisely always………….
      Take care

  11. Seebu_s

    nice dear…

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku dear………….Take care

  12. Neptune

    oyye shrutu ki bacchi tu kab se itna achcha likhne lagi ha mujhe batayaa bhi nahi ab sun epilogue de or haa aur swasan stories likh samjhi

    1. Shrutu

      Dear Neptune bolu yaa ruieeeeeeee
      jo hukum mere aaka
      Pagal aaj jake padh rahi hai hmm
      Ab epiloguge likna toh mushkil hai but………………………………..i will see agar time mila toh………..
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      Bytheway Thanku ruieeeeeeeeeeeee ohhh sorry NEPTUNE

  13. Manasvi

    Shrutu dii.. Do you live in Ahmedabad??
    Sorry for this silly question?? (even I live in Ahmedabad)
    Btw it was awesome..
    I read both the parts now.. And I loved it..

    1. Shrutu

      Thanku so much manu(can i call u manu)if u don’t mind
      i live in Baroda………………it wasn’t silly que. dear
      Thanku soooooooooooooooooo much
      take care keep commenting

      1. Manasvi

        You can call me Manu..
        Ohh!! You also live in Baroda.. What about Neptune dii??

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