Hi friends ur friend DIVYA is back dr actually I hv so many problems in my home more than in my village no tower only from 2 weeks..its difficult to update and I hv no mood write only so pls excuse me

So let’s begin as ur suggestions I decide to write 1st one here small introduction friends simultaneously I will give character sketch bec I don’t want to trouble u more..by introduction and all.

“Friends it is a simple story very a boy name sanskar very charming very polite every one like him but not his family..his family accept him has neglected child bec due to lucky..Lucky is d only son his father ap dp died in accident so his property goes to laksh maheshweri..so sujata and rp r behind his property so they neglected their child..??
Ragini rathod:she is 20 years young lady so charming so cute anyone can flat with her smile she is so carry so humble but she is involved pr*stitute so d next question y how she involved in prostitution u know later
Friends I. M die hearted fan of swasan but I give major role to ragini bec dis role is suitable for ragini bec she has something attractions if u want I can change based on suggest..
As u know I. M swasan fan so I can’t leave my swara as so here swara play as billionaire girl only daughter age 20 years..
Regarding story once sanskar friend suggest to go one place called prostitution to forget his sorrow with or without know he use ragini then he decide to marry ragini well destiny permits to do it..later sanskar parents marry swara as DIL by her huge property after dis well sanskar fail to go ragini then he able to love Swara…? If swara comes to know about ragsan relationship..? Lastly did ragini really a pr*stitute……????­­­? WHAT HER PAST SO TUNED….???

Let’s begin..
” as u know the oldest proffesional have been portrayed in many ways through fictional literature over d centuries including the temptress the fallen women,the hooked with d heart of gold and tragic victim many writers used prostitution has main central character of their story to provide an insight to s*x and life on d game but in dis story is quite different where a girl thought as her virginity is something spl which is given by God grace ” if once we loss it” ” we cannot get it” even god cannot change it..but her destiny is written something. ..” Friends as we all know from ancient decades girls given spl place in Indian history..

One who give knowledge is a girl(saraswati) one who give money is a girl (lakshmi ) one who give food also is a girl (annapoorneshwari) one who give birth leads to dis dirty world is also girl my mother is also a girl..ur mother is also a girl. ??? Here ragini is also a girl who sacrifice her life to d field called prostitution…?

Scene 1

Ragini friends::Wow wow ragini u looking so so beautiful yar.
Ragini : ya ya I know I always look beautiful. .?so only all men fall for crave for me ask for me demand for Me bec I. M evergreen everlasting ever fair all time ever pr*stitute lady ha ha ha ha..

Rag friends :k ragini stop stop we know ur made in heaven*****k ragini ma told to u to ready bec today evening u hv one customer..
Ragini: k k i will ready ur telling like I. M new to dis field don’t worry to complete 23 customer shortly I will celebrate my silver jubli k k(friends for ragini dis is 24th customer so dis ia usuall invitation for her)
Rag friends :k ragini now v hv customers so v hv to go and ma told she has to speak something so go and talk to her now bye ragini…
Ragini :bye tc
Ragini friends : bye..

Scene 2

A big house house not big house a palace where people crave for money not for any human relation actually they didn’t knew it doesn’t need it they r money ambitious they r ambitious only to money others r zer…

Sujata:sanskar Sanskar beta where r u where r u
Here sanskar sleeping in store room sleeping on d floor ( sanskar age 24 very kind hearted humble boy everyone likes sanskar for his lovable friendly character but Thier family treat him has neglected child he doesnt get any love or affectation from their parents they treated him as a slave they r not allowing to do earn money but instead they r blackmailed with emotional drama.as parents doesnt give any love but his human heart gives respect to so called parents.even tat dirty dog is so lucky atleast they care for beloved puppies.

Sujata: beta humara chora y ur late get up.
Sanskar :mom what mom tell me
Suji:sanskar laksh is going to office u also go with him and learn some business work now get ready soon.
San : mom
Suji:sanskar I. M saying get ready(sujata sending sending sanskar with laksh to follow him wheather laksh will hand over his property to others without knowing )


Suji ram having dinner laksh is coming downstairs Suji ran to him laksh aram se slowly beta (don’t worry laksh is not pregnant )
Suji:laksh mera beta y u came downstairs
Laksh:chachi I came to drink water
Suji:laksh how many times I told u not call me I. M not ur chachi I. M ur mom so called me mom..
Laksh: k chachi no no sorry mom
Suji:sanskar Sanskar where is sanskar
Sanskar :ji mom
Suji:go and bring water.
Sanskar :mom
Suji: go and bring water sanskar with big eyes ..

sanskar go and bring water and gives to laksh and Suji says sanskar to makes laksh to drinks water with ur hand..
Laksh: mom I will drink mom..
Suji:no laksh

Later he makes laksh to drink water with his hands he feel very bad but also he hide his feelings.
Laksh: k mom bye I hv to go office hv urgent meeting bye mom.
Suji:k beta tc don’t drive d car u give sanskar he will drive don’t forget to wear seat belt then skip ur lunch and snacks after reaching you call me.even if ur in meeting pls call me time to time.
Laksh:mom u always care for me I love u mom u too tc bye mom.

(DIS our laksh maheshweri her parents died in accident he is a millionaire only son of ap dp according to will his parents property goes to laksh maheshweri so sanskar parents behind dis property sanskar doesn’t like it he doesnt need it..as laksh has no parents so he think Suji and ram has his own parents he belive them madly he doesnt know what happening in his back..hv concern about sanskar.but he want 100 percent parents love he can’t sacrifice has he doesnt won’t to loose so called parents love..so he also behave rudely…not every time but sometimes)…
Sanskar:heart is paining their parents didn’t ask one day wheather he eat or not or not even talk with him care..not even speak good words.. i dont know y god has taking my parents love till how much days i has to suffer..?,,,

Precap:billionaire introduction,ragini and meera mom emotional talks…??,

Friends I really don’t know wat I m writing due to problems my mind become blank..then i.m poor in introduction skill I thought something but write something other thing..tomorrow onwards I will be regular
Then one more thing for silver jubilee do u know who is d customer…after 2 to 3 episodes story will become intrest…
Then friends I decide first not to write my friend varu by mistake she update my suggestions part in telly updates so only i.m trying to write…u don’t want means I will stop here only..I dont want to trouble anyone next thing i write only for ur friendship not for any satisfaction…bec i know when we r translating kannada to english tat doesnt give more effect its is very difficult to image in kannada and write in English most kannada words doesn’t hv meaning in English more information think in kannada my vocabulary will go. I aldready forget English but one thing I will say if u all know kannada means I would hv chamkaisi chindi huudaisi …..??? K now tel wat to do ..???

Credit to: Divya

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  1. Nyc…..ya ragini has somethng in hr ,shez very attractive…jst love hr from d core of ma heart… 🙂

    1. Divya shankar

      Actually in serial they show swara has mahan here I will show ragini has mahan..Dr i.m updating 20 times due to network prb only i.m not able write or post tomorrow I will write and update..

  2. Deeksha

    Nice…. Continue soon….

    1. Divya shankar

      I will continue dr even i hv so many prb I. M writing only bec of u all

  3. Kritika

    Awsm diya di!!??

    1. Kritika

      I mean divya! ??

      1. Divya shankar

        My name is not divya or diya it’s something different u ask joytii she will tel about my name…thanks chotu

  4. In end will be it be swasan or ragsan?

    1. Divya shankar

      Really i don’t know actually sanskar has two her ion. .so enjoy

  5. N am die heart fan of swasan so plz make swasan as pair..

    1. Divya shankar

      Swasan is also a pair pls read dr

  6. Jwala

    actually swara have that attraction.. she is really beautiful and attractive. . if you wrote it as swasan then I could able to read it.. I can’t read any rag… san ff.. actually swara has the attraction and spark in her

    1. Divya shankar

      Both r heroine of my story

  7. nice but plzz make it raglak

    1. Divya shankar

      Sorry u read my another story my BESTIE SWARA +RAGINI LOVE STORY…

  8. ragsan is best,

    1. Divya shankar

      K k

  9. Amazing. But why did u told ur story . It should b a secret

    1. Divya shankar

      Hey I didn’t told to anyone I. M top secret girl..

  10. AnuAnn

    Hey dear… I don’t know I’ll read it or not becoz I hate rags an from the core of my heart but I love sanskar and somewhat like ragini.. But during the progress of story after swaras entry hope I’ll read it.. Plzz try to write other stories too of swasan in your suggestions when u get time or after this story.. Anyway keep going dear

    1. Divya shankar

      Actually many points didn’t updated only k ihv updated 4th one tat to 20 times

      1. AnuAnn

        I’m happy to hear that swasan r also one of thepair .. Its enough for me.. I’ll surely read.. If you make ragini mahaan I have no prlm.. And that is my hope that final pair w’ll be swasan… Just a guess and don’t try to change it dear… I’ll read whole story with dt hope… And r u a south Indian?

  11. nice!!

    1. Divya shankar

      Thx pa

  12. Nice intro pls cntnue n update soon

  13. Superb ff

  14. can u tell me about pair ??..

  15. Akshaya

    i don’t know kannada. but anyways loved it . lazy laksh

  16. Good one yaar all the best…. actually very interesting…. and yeah please don’t change the plot….

  17. Nice and me too swasan fan but the way u write the story it’s awesome

  18. I am a kannadian…..sakkatagide kathe mundvarsu…aadre rangini ge olle image erange madu….whatever the l dont care…..bt dnt ragu negative….l am dying fan of her.

  19. dear, what have you thought about pairs.
    the storyline is awesome and its perfect.
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
    one more thing, it would be really interesting if you write in dialogue form rather than paragraphic narrations.
    loved it

  20. Awesome hope it’s Ragsan

  21. Hii…l am kannadian…kathe sakkatagide mundvarsu…translation andalla edu yavadadru article or film story na….whatever the pairs its yr wish bt make ragu charactor nyc positive nd hr equal importance.

  22. Divya shankar

    Thx Nidhi,Lisa cute girl akshaya. .my net pack is slow many points telly updates didn’t updated I don’t know reason any ways thx for commenting both swasan ragsan r pair but here ragini is mahan at end Def u will respect them…

  23. Friends pls tell me dis explaination is wrong or something bad or wat.telly didnt updated only..but one thing i.m very thankful to telly updates bec of u i got many friends so thank u so much……………..”PROSTITUTION” is a place where people crave for inner pleasure inner exhaust feeling involves in s*x hormone and outer external body..? Here the girls or women’s r used or abused not only once or ,twice, but more than millions times..they tempt or force women’s physically mentally emotionally for their inner s*xual hungryness,….? For d sake of so called money( money makes man happy)u want money I too want money our pr*stitute girls also need money for Thier craving stomach hungryness and to lead Thier life not in high range but in low range tat can full fill their basic needs..in a dramatic way…ragini is a such type girl she is so simple s*xy modern com traditional lady her beauty cannot express in words she is beauty with *****attraction*****­ she is ever smiling ever dashing ever charm ever hot ever gorgeous,ever attractive ever loved and lovable girl so sweet and smart so naughty so intelligent so humble so carry all popular women goddess quality can c in one frame i.e ragini …so she is beauty with “perfection” and she is pure and perfect but had big past but i don’t know wheather she has dream boy or she will get her dream boy let c…Wats Thier story…

  24. Nice plz continue dr.ya we can understand how difficult it feels to translate a language .sometimes some words loose their essence. Is this from any extract.but story is good

  25. concept is superb..bt i cant imagine ragsan…too much difficult yaar.. 🙁 🙁 ..

  26. Nice continue as it is don’t change it

  27. Nice nd ragsan fair enough … Dont change the couples

  28. Oh dear r u kannadiga 1st time in telly am reading the word of Kannada.. r u planning to write in Kannada coz asking for translate but Wat i prefer better u do in english dear.. once in Kannada with translation of English will b difficult to u… About the story I really respect this ff coz of ragini character coz this type of some persons r involved forcibly r situation demand.. only 10% for thr pressure but 90% dreamed for beautiful family life.. They r also human beings but no any respect from anyone if it’s men they see with lust it’s women see with disgust killing eye.. but never ever anyone try to know thr heart feelings.. most importantly want to say means keeping secret affair better than pr*stitute..
    I love both sanlak but this is sanskar story about rag am her die hard fan, ur right in serial they show swara as great mahan that wat I like.. I like swara but when it time of showing mahan I hate her totally … I want mainly sanrag but if say it’s ragsanswa then after chapter I will speak about pair coz u just give rough diagram but this is complete story so looking forward dear.. Am from Bangalore..

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