Hi friends ur friend DIVYA is back and my dears thanks a lot for ur valuable comments but next time I won’t say thanks and all bec dosti aur pyar Mey no sorry and no thank you..we r friends rite dr really ur my true friends…??? Love u darlings and once again to all my friends and cuties I wish u a happy Eid mubarak friends may god Allah give u all happiness in dis world..ur dream should fullfilled. .love u friends..

Let’s begin in previous episode we read ragsan introduction and sanskar position in his family…

Scene 1

As run rise falling on d beautiful angel face it’s shining bright as a crystal…
She slowly open her twinkling eyes and yawning like a small kid ahaaaaaa…
She slowly press d button..a GP of people rush inside within fraction..good morning ma’am

Ji ma’am hot bath is ready cloths r on d table for breakfast we made different varieties then as per ur time table no plan for outing full day ur spending in home..
Ma’am today Friday u r so ur wearing pink color anarkalli suit then here ur cold coffee..?
Maid give to swara.
Swara sip it then maid clean her mouth with hand karchief..
then ma’am big saheb told u hv to eat breakfast within 7 then u hv call him at exact 10 he has to talk with u…..

Swara:k now where is dad..
Bg (bodyguards ): ma’am he is US he has meeting with foreign clients..he will return within dis week..
Swara u may go now..
Guards : k ma’am hv a nice day
Swara: dad always go with meetings y can’t he spend day with me..he doesn’t know i.m alone in dis house…so bad of u dad..from childhood onwards ur doing same…

So friends dis is swara age 20 d only daughter of shekar gododia swara has no mother her entire childhood life spend with guards,maids,parks,TV, then with so called palace like home..her father always busy with meetings company work etc..swara doesn’t know what is sad,what is difficulties she doesn’t face any difficulties in life..bec she is billionaire. She saw only happiness in her life..no saddenes given entry …. .but don’t worry time will show what is saddddddd..????

Scene 2

Ragini is ready for 24th customer has she looks ultimate beauty..she standing near d mirror and combing her hair..

Ragini ragini where r u beti..
Ragini : mom I’m here
Meera:ragini beti r u busy..
Ragini : no mom wat tell me anything serious..
Meera: no beti not like tat I want to say something buttt
Ragini :mom wat but tel me mom.ur my mom more than mother ur everything to me u don’t ask permission to speak with me. U order me mom u command don’t request me it’s hurts me mom..
Meera: nothing like tat ragini as I know our business is going in slow process it’s very difficult to maintain..now a days we hv to pay more money for police as we should pay for police ride..then now a days pupil demand for new ladies..as we doesn’t hv much money to buy a new girls as dey demand more when we buy from other state or country..
More than its difficult to maintain daily needs in dis expensive world.. I. M so much fear for it ragini how to lead further process..??,
Then all customers pay less money they axpecting new flesh…in dis old girls little more money is paid only to u ragini..now i.m so much worried ragini. .

Ragini :mom u don’t worry mom ever thing will be k mom.everthing has a solution we hv to think tats it.
Mom we hv 20 girls at present dis area is so far from village side..many can’t come as it is a less population city..many flesh like rs doesn’t know about us we hv to make them attractive by new gesture..at present we can’t go new place bec as u told due less money we can’t purchase new girls..mom u don’t worry as u told we all 20 girls will work hard..u send to me many customer as u can,as time going our if business get improve we can shift new area and we can buy new girls..
Meera:thank ragini I know ur my maharani ur everything to me without u my business is incomplete but ragini.
Ragini:wat mom tell me.
Meera:today police will come but I don’t hv money to pay to him.if I say tomorrow i wil pay also he won’t excuse me So I. M so much worried..more than he is asking new girl.
Ragini:how much his age
Meera:may 55 or something above it
Ragini:then i hv seen or used him
Meera:no beta he is old do I didn’t send to u more than he won’t give money..so
Ragini :k mom today evening u send to me I will tc for him..
Meera:but ragini he is old dr..
Ragini :mom once if v entire in to dis field v should not c age or otherthing. .if v hold bat we should just hit it tats it. No prb for me send to me mom..I will give so much treat..??
Meera:thank u so much my ragini ur my true daughter really ur d backbone of me..I. m glad I give life to dis loving beti.
Mom:y ur asking me thanks mom..if i compare with tat difficult life nothing dis life mom.mom do u remember when I. M 3 years old I. M sitting and crying on d road u c me and told one thing..


” mumma mumma mumma I want u mummma pls come back mumma mumma I .m hungry mummma so much hungry mumma..mumma where r u come mumma I want u mummma pls mumma pls pls sssss ahaaaaaah ahaaaaaahhhh

While retuning from dance programme while going meera hears baby crying somewhere she came in search of baby..
Later she c a baby very small she is crying like he’ll by seeing her she can understand baby doesn’t eat anything she is in some dilemma her eyes r swallon her chubby cheeks become red by rubbing her tears.her hairs flying which is not all combed form so many days..most important thing she is a girl of age 3 years very cute intelligent..
Ragini:don’t beat me don’t beat me leave me leave me pls pls ..
Meera:no beti I won’t beat u y should I beat u..
Ragini :u won’t beat me promise u won’t beat me..
Meera: promise beti I won’t beat u..k now come with me..
Ragini :y should I come u..who r u..
Meera :I. M like ur untiee..
Ragini :ur my untiee na..untiee I. M so much hungry pls give me food unty. Unty pls take me far untiee. .untie u know mumma (it’s mute)
Meera:ragini u don’t worry if u come with me I will give u everything .u hv many friends to play..more than food I will give ur mother love…???
Ragini :untiee
Meera :today onwards u call me mom k
Ragini :k mom
Meera:by d way Wats ur name
Ragini :my name is RANI
meera:ur name is rani ur cute like rani only beti today onwards ur name is not RANI ur name is RAGINI if anyone ask u u shd say RAGINI NOT RANI k beti
RAGINI :K MOM my name is ragini..
Meera:k now we should leave she take rani with and grow up as ragini..

Flashback ends

Ragini :really mom from dat day onwards ur giving a heart full of motherly love.even my real mother is their also she can’t able to give dis much..ur not only mother but my “life saviour” u give not only to me for many girls..with ur big heart ur women with very big heart..love u mom..I really thankful to u mom to dis entire life..
Mom:beti don’t say like tat even u give me everything I lost..by dis words ur making me unknown person..but really i thank u beti bec of u we r leading casual life..thank u ragini for all..
Ragini :mom u don’t know some hero told in serial mom shd not say thanks ur my mom my lovely bubbly cute mom love u mom..
Mom : k beti love u too..now tc I will make arrangements to evening customer so bye
Ragini :bye mom..so cute mom..??

So friends dis is meera age 48 she is very loving caring mother specially she likes ragini so much her wish is after death ragini should look after dis business but one thing I should say when she it’s comes to businesses she doesn’t care any relation even if ragini try to elope…?? But good thing is she understands girl feeling she excuse once but more than tat she won’t excuse..

Friends it’s for today don’t worry when heroine gives entry to hero life it gives more intrest..

Precap:sujata slaps sanskar..swara and her father phone conversation ragini’s dealing with customer. ..

Friends many asks where u get dis story and many ask dis story is in kannada no friends dis story u cannot find anywhere even if u search in Web also u can’t bec it’s purely my imagination it’s my dream project . .from past 2 months back i decide to write one shot regarding my title I hv already written also in my book as swasan pair but again I think in different way if i add ragini character y can’t I write as a fiction then again I change story line and write as a fiction dr really i didn’t stole anywhere it’s my imagination story..really i don’t know any watt pad or any Web also I don’t hv time to read or copy also..bec of u all I. M giving torcher to my mobile..daily I. M updating in my mobile..u don’t know i love my mobile so much it’s my heart beat it’s my best friend..I. m giving so much pain to her really it’s hurts me for ur sake I. M giving torcher..I. m ready to do murder also…???

Friends 24th customer is ready..??for 25 the Def sanskar will give entry..pls keep waiting. .?then when I reveal ragini ‘s past tats d end of dis story. ..?? As I given little past a big heart breaking past to be revealed…
One more thing tomorrow if my so called father(really bec of dis person d word father will get bad meaning other than tat i can say worldest bad dirty fellow is Thier means I can’t update …if he not their means I will write and update for u all my dears…))friends July 4th has changed my behaviour more than its give dead twist in my life..if i think more my hormones becomes weak..so y to worry bec of him y shd I waste my energy..he is not such a great person to keep in mind …anyways until next episode pls miss me every moment of ur life..I may come in ur dreams Urs rock star divya signing off..pls telly updates pls update my all updates without missing anything really don’t give so much twists for updating..for every successful update I will give successful story….he he he

Credit to: Divya shankar


    • Divya shankar

      Hey I wrote she left me one shot related to mangal mukki concept in fb I got 125 likes so lovely comments due to dis many send me frnd request by appreciating my work but in telly only 12 members like it tats it bec no one accepts reality then i wrote for one comedy os next I think to write os it’s name called teenage crush but for my first os only people didn’t respect my work so I stop to write it..bec if u didn’t respect my work also no prb but pupil not give respect to mangal mukki..I feel very bad so stop to write..

      • Nikki

        Hey I think you took me wrong…I liked your work that is why I was asking about other ffs and I would like to suggest you to write for your self and the people who read it and not for people who are not even interested to read your work….. And I am not studying at my home town I study out of my home town and I am not having Internet there so when ever I come here I find and read my fav ffs and I will return to my studies after one day so I just wanted to read all the ffs so I don’t miss a nice stories. Sorry if you felt bad or something but I am really sorry if I hurted u I actually didn’t mean to… Sorry once again

    • Divya shankar


      • Divya shankar

        Hey dr I. M not saying to u dr I. M saying in reality people like romance love etc not mangal mukki or any other emotional concepts bec dey don’t won’t to join or mingle with other pain so only India is called under developing country.. pls don’t say sorry and all i know ur appreciating my work so only i reply u dr thanks for commenting dr..Dr i.m saying tat pupil not u I know u hv very good heart pls try to read my story. S..HE LEFT ME swasan os if possible dr..then tc love u miss u..u too miss me k….

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