IKRS – An Imaginary Fan Fiction (Episode 8 – Part 1)

Episode 8 – Part 1

Dhaani : (looks at Daadi) By the way Daadi! At what time will Pankaj bhaiyaa & Shalu come here?
Shalini : We are here bhabhi!

Everyone gets to turn to look towards the voices’ direction and falls on Pankaj & Shalini, standing there with a broad smile, Pankaj pulling a luggage on each of his hand while Shalini was holding a little girl’s hand. With the tummy much bigger, the once again soon-to-be-mother was shining in joy. Dhaani stands up from her chair and goes to receive her sister-in-law. Both women carefully hug each other, trying not to hurt the child. Leaving each other’s grip, Viplav joins them. He hugs his sweet sister circling round her back and caressing it.

Viplav : How are you my moti behen?
Shalini : (breaks the hug) Stop it bhaiyaa, at least not during pregnancy. And what about you? Mumbai changed your entire look huuh?
Viplav : Isn’t it ? Looking more handsome and all.

Dhaani giggles while Shalini laughs loudly.

Shalini : But the sarcasm is still here.

He softly pats on her head and she rubs her hair. His eyes then fall on the little girl accompanying his sister and smiling at her, bends down closer to the doll.

Viplav : Arey re! Look who is here! Come and hug your maama.

The little girl who was smiling big, adorably circles his neck with her tiny arms and hugs him while, with a broad smile, he covers her little back with his strong palms. He then kisses on her hair showering his love.

Viplav : I missed my Pooja baby so much.
Pooja : I also missed you so much.

She gets off his hug and looks at him.

Pooja : Maama! Where is Dhanush bhaiyaa ?
Dhaani : Acha? Then (crosses her arms) where is my hug?

The little girl turns to look at Dhaani who was showing fake anger on her face. She runs to Dhaani and catches her pair of legs raising her head up.

Pooja : Maami, I missed you the most.

Some words that just touched her deeply and made her heart wipe. She controls her emotions and looking at the small child, lifts her in her motherly arms.

Dhaani : And I also missed you the most.

She holds her face and kisses on her baby cheeks, while Viplav was looking at them with admiration. She then gets her lips off her face and smiles at the kid.

Dhaani : Have you had breakfast?
Pooja : Haan.
Dhaani : Not hungry na?
Pooja : No. Maami, where is Dhanush bhaiyaa?
Dhaani : Oh yeah! He is in his room. Do you want to go now ?

Pooja cutely nods her head in yes and Dhaani, smiling broadly, lets her niece down. Once on her feet, she runs upstairs while Dhaani looks at the others. Viplav was busy with his best friend aka jeejaji, with a big smile.

Viplav : How are you yaar Pankaj?
Pankaj : We are good. (breaks the hug) What about you all? Where is my little champ ?
Viplav : (pointing the stairs) He is upstairs in his room. Shall I call…
Pankaj : Arey nahin yaar! I just wanted to see him but he will be here na for some days.
Shalini : By the way, when are you going back ?
Viplav : Day after tomorrow.
Shalini : (sad) What bhaiyaa? Functions are tomorrow, and you are saying that you will go the following day. Can’t you remain here longer ?
Viplav : Actually Shalu… Dhanush’s school is soon to start next week. We have to complete the missing formalities before. Dhaani told me that she will manage them all alone but …
Shalini : But you cannot remain without your wife, right ?

Viplav nods in yes like a baby making Dhaani blush, and then looks at her smiling.

Viplav : (looks again at his sister) And even I have lots of work in Mumbai. Some new cases came yesterday and I couldn’t have a look at them.
Kanak : Haan toh stay here 1 or 2 days more and then go na betha. You will still work after the functions. So first take some proper rest spending time with your family. If she says she can manage alone, then what is the problem in it ?

Viplav knew she was telling that mostly to make Dhaani go from here. The latter also understanding, tries to cover up.

Dhaani : (smiling at Shalini) Shalu, Pankaj bhaiyaa, why don’t you join for breakfast ?
Pankaj : Yeah sure.
Dhaani : (looks at Viplav) Viplav, go and assist your sister and brother-in-law. I will check what the children are doing.

And she goes from there before Viplav could open up his word. Hiding his inside pain regarding his wife, he smiles at the others and regains his seat for breakfast. He was not feeling hungry at all, especially when his eyes kept looking at her uneaten plate of food. Mixed feelings of happiness for his Shalu and concern for his life companion kept crashing his mind. Adding a smile here and there whenever his family was looking at him, he let all their conversation enter in an ear and evade frm the other.

The children were playing and talking to each other, while Dhaani, smiling at them, was busy tidying up their things.

Pooja : Dhanush bhaiyaa, look! I have drawn this for mothers’ day. And my teacher said “it was very good!”. Then baba offered me an ice-cream.
Dhanush : And I have won a medal at school for a poetry competition. My papa was so happy and we all went for a picnic with Naani, Maya maasi, Prem maama and Radha maami.
Pooja : (sad face) But why didn’t you call me ? I also want to go on a picnic ?
Dhanush : But you were not in Mumbai.
Pooja : (sad face) I want to go to Mumbai.

Dhaani, listening to the conversation, goes close to them and hugs her doll.

Dhaani : Why is my baby sad? (breaks the hug and looks at her) Of course she will come one day to Mumbai, and (brushes her small hair with her hand) we all will go on a trip. What say?

The little sweetheart nods at her maami with a happy smile.

Dhaani : But before that, you will have to study very well at school and prove how clever my baby girl is. And you also have to take care of your mummy. Baby brother or sister will soon come na ? So mummy will need his or her big sister to help her, being a very good girl.
Dhanush : (stands up on the bed and hugs his mumma taking hostage of her neck) Mumma, when will baby come ?
Dhaani : (turns her head quite on the side, smiling and holding his arms into her hands) Soon betha. (softly pats his head with hers)
Pooja : And then we all will go on a picnic together.
Dhanush : Yaaay! And will baby come with us ?
Dhaani : That’s why you will have to wait quite more. He or she has to grow a bit and then we all can go out.
Dhanush : It means that Pooja will soon come to Mumbai to stay with us, right ?
Dhaani : Betha! We can’t say this. Shalu bua, Pankaj phupa and Pooja live in Banaras na. Pooja baby’s school is here. How can she leave her school ?
Dhanush : UFFO mumma! She can transfer to Mumbai’s school you know? Meri buddhu mumma.
Dhaani : (laughs) Acha! You are calling your mumma buddhu? Let me show how your buddhu mumma is going to punish her lovely son.

Holding his two wrists, she makes him lay on her laps and starts tickling on his bare waist. Pooja joining her, the baby boy was quite unable to manage both of them. He was rolling on the bed while the ladies were busy on their work.

Dhaani : (laughs) Tell now! Tell now!

The door getting open, it stopped Dhaani who looks towards it and waits to see the person behind it. Falling on Viplav, she grins discretely and makes Dhanush stand up.

Dhaani : Dhanush, get up betha!
Viplav : (sits on the bed and takes Pooja on her laps with a smile) What is happening here ?
Dhanush : Mumma was telling that soon, we all will be going on a picnic with Pooja.
Viplav : (eyes widely open and a cute smile on his lips) Really? Yeaaah!

He sweetly holds the little girl’s hands covering her arms from back, and hugs her with a cute smile, quite similar to his doll’s.

Dhanush : But before, we have to do well at school.
Viplav : Oh! But I know, that my two superstars will make it easily. My champions!
Pooja : And we will take chotu with us.
Viplav : (confused) Chotu?
Dhaani : Hmm she means to say…

Viplav looks at her.

Dhaani : … the baby.
Viplav : Arey haan! Of course we will go with the baby. But for now, let me show what maamu and maami brought for you from Mumbai.
Pooja : (excited tone) Gifts ?

Precap – Dhaani’s nightmare

Thanks for reading. Keep commenting and telling your views.
Hey guys! How are you all? Here I am back with a new part of IKRS-AIFF. Hopefully you like it.
Btw who has seen Sanjeeda’s insta story? Seeing those IKRS banner and sets were so painful. It made me miss it even more…
Anyhow! Thank once again for reading.
With lots of love!

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  1. Sujie

    Arrey…… It’s soooo good to imagine little bundles of joy……and happiness is there are more to come???
    ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Superb it was…….good going shruthy…….
    Rock it ?????

    1. Shruthy

      Awwww thank you so much <3 Glad you liked those kids' scenes. Will try to make more satisfying ones for you all.

  2. Areeb

    Aww. Such a cute talk(ed) episode! ???
    The part where Kanak stepped in to put her words yet to sideline the Bahu, was way too brilliantly written again! ?
    Oh, I didn’t know they were here to spend some quality days with family and are going back. ? Khair, now my only curiosity it the nightmare! ? Desperate!

    1. Shruthy

      Thank you Areebji. <3
      Oh woow! I am glad you liked it. Though it was just one small dialogue of hers.
      Haan they actually came for Shalu's Godh bharaai. And then they will go back to Mumbai.
      I know none was expecting that detail in the story. Hopefully it didnt hurt anyone :/
      I will soon post the next parts so just, thoda sa intezaar thoda sa suspense ke liye… 😀

      1. Areeb

        G Shruthy-ji. ? Kar rahy hein intezaar. ?

      2. Areeb

        Okay so forgot to clear something, came back. ?
        Up there I said the part where Kanak joins the convo halting the happy moment there. ? I didn’t mean I liked her dialogue. ? I meant I like the whole scene after that.. ?
        Did I just confuse you? Chalo koi nahi, Khair hoti hai. ?

    2. Shruthy

      Acha betha jo intezaar kar rahi hai 😀

    3. Shruthy

      Oops I am sorry to have misunderstood you actually.
      Oh well you didnt but I misunderstood the situation O_o Waise bhi, I should have thought why you would like such a dialogue, woh bhi Kanak ki. Pagala gaye hain hum ji. xD

  3. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Shruthy! Now this is called a really very cute episode?? yaar u always define emotions too well?? when viplav was feeling sad for her wife was very well described?
    Yaar I didn’t know that they are here for few days and when I read shalini’s line I was like what, am I missing something but Phew!! I understood the whole situation else I would have eaten ur brain by asking numerous questions? chalo first time I got something without explanation.. Yaay!!
    The whole scene of Pooja Dhanush and dhani was brilliant, overload cuteness was reflecting.. Maza agaya!!
    Hopefully we will get the next part soon wese tw now it’s turn for Baarish *so waiting for it*
    And I haven’t watched sanjeeda’s story, is it on her insta ?

    1. Shruthy

      Awww thank you Mahaji <3 I am glad you liked the way I do explain the emotions. It means you can imagine them too. He loves his wife so much na…
      Oh wooow you are smarter and smarter by days. Not bad. SO yeah Viplav Tripathis stay in Mumbai and they came for a small holiday trip. Function jo honewala hai (wait honewala ya honewali ? :/)
      Happy you liked that Dhaani-kids scenes. I will bring loads of parents-children moments a lot, because I wished we had seen loads in the show too…
      Woh toh in process mein hai but yeah as you said, now it's time for another story to be uploaded so…

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Mahaji ? Itne izzat! Lol >__< Yeah I'm master in imagining things ;-D hmm! That's true, I have become smart, u know the effect of association 😛 *collars up* Yes yes! I get it, but what's the function ? Is it Shalu's baby shower ceremony ? (honewala is correct)
        Oh u increased my excitement girl, curious to read Vidha-kids scenes! Acha then hopefully will get the next story soon..
        Arey I forgot to mention about precap, u know bad memory case -__- so it's filled with suspense, I think dhani will see her missing daughter in her dream and that missing daughter will make it a nightmare 😀 *and here my guesses start precisely I'm giving them a break and sitting back to wait for the revelation desperately*

    2. Shruthy

      Haan ji. :p Haan woh toh hai. Too much dreamy <3
      Yeah and I am really impressed. :p
      Haan it's her baby shower 🙂 (oh glad :D)
      Hahaha happy to know you are excited. I am also excited to wrie them. Hopefully they will be made 😀
      HAHA I know it very well –' Woh tho pata chalega agle part mein. So keep reading IKRS-AIFF

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Ok so my guess was correct!! Jee bilkol we will keep reading?

  4. Areeb

    Or I’m back again! Kyunki I again missed actually forgot the most Important thing. ?
    I did see her insta story. ? She said memories and I was like then come back na pliss!!!!!!! I really wishe Mishal-Sanjee to be back together!!! ??
    With that I remember, after IKRS climax Sanjee went to Bangkok with Aamir and when she came back to India from the holiday.. She posted a video ft; Her, Aamir and so unexpectedly MISHAL!! ? Mishal was at her home!! ? They became friends and I was indefinable happy to see em’ together. ?

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Areeb where have u seen it, on her official insta page ? But I’m not finding any video on it?

      1. Shruthy

        It’s on her insta story sweetie. You have to follow her to see it.

      2. Areeb

        Maha, on her insta story. But now you can not see. That’s because like Snapchat Story, Instagram Story also stays for 24hrs only ( one day). Insta story is the temporary posts space. There, the user can post a picture or video for only 24.
        As I already told you that I’m a person with poor memory. ( Also, I know it’s a mythological term. But still I feel. ? ) I think, if I’m not miscalculating, She posted that video three days back. So obviously, it’s not anymore in her story.
        One more thing, for the stories, you need to follow her, must.

    2. Shruthy

      Oh did you? Yaaar, same here. Especially when she showed that banner with MishSan pic and I was like “so they used to go crossing this pic everyday, then what about before leap?”
      I so miss the entire crew. Like the kids, the widows… It was fun and sweet seeing Mishal’s bond with Vidhu & Atharva. <3 And then the ivs…
      Wait what? A video with Mishal at her home? O_o On her story or her page?
      Even I was feeling so glad to see they have befriended so fast. But yeah both are indeed very social and masti type so no wonder…

      1. Areeb

        YES! ? Before leap.. Hmm, there must be the banner of Mishal-Eisha – you know, how would I know this. ?
        Me too me too! Badly missing ’em all. Especially, the behind the shoot fun, their interviews! Oh. ?
        Don’t tell me! You didn’t see that video. Yeah, was in story. ? Mishal at her home, Aamir too was in the video! ? BAES! ? Three altogether! ?
        Yes Yes! In little span of time, they bonded well together. Their poking, descriptions about each other, having kinda similar humour on couple of things. I just loved their a bunch of interviews! ?
        And yes! did you see Vatsal Seth’s ( Shorya from Ek Haseena Thi ) birth day video, in which he was in the vanity van on shoot of IKRS. Mishal was too in that video! ? And his laugh! ?
        In case..

    3. Maha_Aijaz

      Thanks for telling Areeb! So I’ve missed it chalo koi nahe, I’m cooling down myself?
      Actually I’m not on insta so..
      Arey yaah I’ve already watched this video, vatsal and sanjeeda was doing fun and all while Mishal was sitting and laughing?? his voice my goodness❤❤

    4. Shruthy

      Haan or may be the all team as they have been loads of picture with widows, Viplav etc… Yeah neither I would but you know, we can still guess on our dreamland. That’s what dreams are for :p Ok basically crazy because of tireness…
      Haan yaar! Unfortunately we hadnt got numerous segments of theirs but jo bhi tha, it is UNFORGETTABLE! <3
      Nahin dekha :'( I was not enough on Insta at that time. Grrr if only it was on her page seriously! Hmm… I guess it would have looked so cute with the three of them. I don't know Aamir really but I guess it might have been fun to see them three. <3
      So true! On their very first IV too, like at the after leap first scenes segments, we got a small interview. And it predicted already what they had in store.
      I actually havent seen it too so.. THANKS FOR SHARING xD Mishal's laugh, you can recognize it at any moment. xD That unique voice. *sleepy girl blabbering*

      1. Areeb

        HAHA. Keep guessing. ? Agreed. I find Mishal-Sanjeeda more befriended to eachother. ? They were mature, humour-sarcasm glooms all over again when they shared the screen for the interviews! ?
        Yes! ? His laugh already had already confirmed his presence till the camera catches a bit of him smiling in the last. ?
        Oh, you missed. ? Just the thing you should know about that video is; Sanjeeda when reveals Mishal sitting on the sofa , Mishal unaware to this, Sanjee catches his attention to the camera .. Asking him to – ‘ Say Hi Mish ‘ And the point I was like *inserts the mouth hanging open emotion* .. MashaAllah!! ? I liked Mishal hanging up with the co-star. Which I don’t find he do so with every co actor? He seems kind of a choosy and reserved person..

    5. Shruthy

      HAHA thank you. xD True, they got closer very quickly. They looked really good together. Hopefully we get to see them again together longer and from the beginning. Because there was that issue some fans didnt accept Sanjeeda with Eisha quitting. 🙁
      Exactly. Loud laughter and hands clapping. xD Some of Mishal reactions
      Oh feeling so unlucky. It would have looked so good actually. Like Mishal visiting the jodi after they trip and all. Kya bhaat hoga!! xD “Mish”? xD SO ADORABS!!! <3 I don't know him a lot, saw him for the first time in IKRS. SO I don't know his bonding with others though mostly all his co stars appreciate him, like Maahi, Eisha etc. Maybe you are right.

  5. Aiswarya

    Di it’s simply superb ??enjoyed so much. …… …..so happy reading the episode ? I was really so happy that they are not leaving with that kanak .pooja is sooo sweet .dhanush is sooo cute as always ??
    Missing ikrs too badly ??even missing Mishal . In Twitter he has tweeted “Waowwww so much love… Vohhoo
    So happy to see so many tweets yayyyy love u guys too. I’ll be back v soon with God’s grace 🙂 love u guysss” waiting for his come back
    Post the next part whenever u are free

    1. Shruthy

      Thank you sweetie. <3 Glad you enjoyed.
      Haha happy that you are happy ? haan both kids are so cute.
      Me too re. I was so missing to watch anything. Haan I saw his tweet too. He is not really active on Twitter but was happy to see him on the timeline. And it seems he will be back soon. Cant wait! Hopefully I could get interested to the show to watch.
      Yeah sure. Next parts soon…

  6. Shruthy

    Thank you sweetie. <3 Glad you enjoyed.
    Haha happy that you are happy 😀 haan both kids are so cute.
    Me too re. I was so missing to watch anything. Haan I saw his tweet too. He is not really active on Twitter but was happy to see him on the timeline. And it seems he will be back soon. Cant wait! Hopefully I could get interested to the show to watch.
    Yeah sure. Next parts soon…

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