IKRS – An Imaginary Fan Fiction (Episode 5 – Part 2)

Episode 5 – Part 2

Dhaani keeps crying in pain and screaming. Doing so, she slowly loses her energy and slowly her eyes get closed. Suddenly, feeling a hand caressing her head, they try to get open again, just like that touch made some magic and brought her energy back.

… : Dhaani !

She didn’t need more than a second to recognize that voice and turns her head to look at that direction and looks at that person shocked.

Dhaani : (low voice) Vi… Viplav!

That person bends his legs and gets his head closer to her (the camera located near Dhaani, the face is shown when it gets close to Dhaani’s). Dhaani then thinks that it might be her imagination as always and quite upset, turns her head to look at the other side. Viplav, who understood it, slowly gets his lips on her head and proves his presence next to her. Feeling that kiss, she gets shocked and turns her head again back to Viplav with two widely opened eyes that ask him “Viplav, did you really come?”. Viplav stares at her and reading her eyes, holds her hand which makes her look at his.

Dhaani and the others finally reach the hospital and they all follow the stretcher on which Dhaani was laid towards the emergency ward. Once in front of it, they get stopped by the nurse. Suddenly Maya looks at her phone and realizes it was still on the call. She immediately holds it near her ear.

Maya : Hello. Viplavji?
Viplav : (with a panicked tone and seen driving) He… Hello? Where is Dhaani? Why did she scream suddenly ? What happened ?
Maya : I will explain you all. But right now…
Viplav : I am on the way to Mumbai.

He cuts the call and keeps driving to the airport, while Maya was surprised to know he was coming there. Viplav quickly buys a flight seat and thankfully there was one for Mumbai at that moment.
One hour later, Viplav reaches Mumbai airport and takes a taxi to the hospital. He enters in the building and runs to the emergency ward. Dulaari, who was not aware of the fact he was coming, gets shocked seeing Viplav.

Dulaari : Bachwaji?

Viplav sees her and gets elated to meet her again, and so was Dulaari. He goes to her.

Viplav : Khakhi!
Dulaari : Bachwaji, you…
Viplav : I had to come for Dhaani and my child.
Dulaari : (smiling at him) Children bachwaji. They are twins.

Viplav was happy when she announced the birth of two. He suddenly remembers Dhaani suffering in pain.

Viplav : Kh… Khakhi, where is Dhaani ?
Maya : Emergency ward room.

He turns to that voice and falls on a young woman.

Viplav : What happened to Dhaani?
Maya : Labor pain.
Viplav : What ? But … it has been only 7 months.
Maya : Actually… she met a small accident during her pregnancy which caused the children’s prematurity.
Viplav : (shocked) Accident?
Dulaari : (she looks somewhere else) We kept telling her (Viplav turns his head to look at Dulaari) not to work in this stage. But I guess you know her, how stubborn she is. And so, few days after coming to Mumbai, she was getting down on the stairs and she slipped. (walks slowlyon her left) She already fell down once before and her situation was already dangerous. Doctor said that it will be a difficult pregnancy case and that either the mother or one of the children would be safe. (crying)

Viplav was shell shocked hearing all this.

Dulaari : (stops walking and looks at the emergency ward room’s door) And they also warned us, that… that it could be a premature birth.

She turns back to look at Viplav.

Dulaari : I really fear for them bachwaji. Dhaani and the kids will be ok, right?
Viplav : Don’t worry, khakhi! (walks to Dulaari) I won’t let anything happen to them. (holds her hands to reassure her) Even death should face me before facing my Dhaani. (looks towards the door) I will never let her down anymore.

End of flashback

Viplav : (talks to her softly) I am really here Dhaani!

Dhaani looks at Viplav and some tears come out from her eyes.

Dhaani : (talks to him softly and slowly) Viplav!

Viplav smiles, his eyes showing happiness through tears that cover them.

Dhaani : You …

She smiles in excitement opening her mouth and holds his hand in hers staring at him. She then realizes where she was and gets scared. Seeing her tensed, Viplav puts his hand on her head and caressing her, takes all her tension away.

Viplav : (looking at her) Don’t get tensed. I am here with you!
Dhaani : (looks at him) But, you… (talks taking breaks tired) here?
Viplav : What did you think ? That I will let my wife suffer alone ?

Dhaani looks at him.

Viplav : I already suffered a lot being far away from you for so long. I can’t anymore.

Dhaani looks somewhere else.

Viplav : How could you even think that I will be happy without you and our children ? (puts his hand on her face) You are my everything Dhaani. My reason to live, my happiness, sadness, smile… Everything lays in you!

Dhaani looks at him.

Viplav : Without you, there is no life for me. Because … you are my life.

Dhaani looking at him, some tears, falling out from her eyes, slide down her nose.

Viplav : And now, (cute and innocent smile) we are going to add two new members in our small world.

Dhaani smiles of happiness. Suddenly she feels having pain once again and screams while Viplav holds her hands tightly not letting her feel the pain.

Dhaani : Viplav I am … really scared.
Viplav : Nothing will happen to you, don’t worry.
Dhaani : I dont fear .. for me. But I … I want our children … to be safe. Even if I die, I won’t m…

She gets interrupted with Viplav putting his finger on her lips.

Viplav : Don’t you dare say this again.
Dhaani : (takes off the finger) Viplav, thank you … for having given me that happiness … I have lost once. Thanks to you… I got … my colours once again.. and… I have got the chance … to be … a mother.

Viplav looks at her upset and teary-eyed.

Dhaani : Now … I can … happily reach … the skies with … some happy memories.
Viplav : Dhaani, I told you not to say such things. If you keep talking so, then I will be forced to slap you again.

Dhaani laughs.

Dhaani : I will happily accept it … as it will be full of love.

She again gets pain and holds tightly his hand and he pats on her hand to console her. She screams loud which makes Viplav get tensed. Suddenly, she gets interrupted because of some crying noises, which attracted Viplav’s attention. He turns his head towards that sound and sees happiness in the doctor’s hands. He couldn’t express his feelings but a big smile and a speechless emotion. The doctor shows them the child while Viplav stands up on his feet. The doctor then looks at Dhaani who was feeling quite better than before, and was happy nothing wrong happened.

Doctor : (smiles at them relieved) Congratulations Mr & Mrs Viplav, the first one is a boy.

Precap – Dhaani gets pain again and Viplav holds her hand.

Hey guys! Thanks for reading. Keep commenting and telling your views.
Ok finally Viplav and Dhaani met each other and Viplav could witness his children’s birth. But well.. as I am saying, be ready for anything with me! :p
Thanks a lot again!
With lots of love!


  1. Sujie

    |Registered Member

    Shruthy…… A ride full of emotions 🙂 🙂 🙂
    Love you for this….. 🙂 🙂
    I read the whole episode with tears rolling down my eyes…and a wide smile on my lips ….. 🙂 🙂
    keep going dear

      • Sujie

        |Registered Member

        Thank you Thank you Thank you for such a wonderful story…….. loved it to the core….. and let me tell you I am reading it again and again…… TRUST ME!!

    • Shruthy


      Thank you guys so much for making it look more special than what it is. ?❤️ I am really happy that you guys like it so much. It touches me so much…
      Oh really? Hahah how sweet of you! ?

  2. Arshdeep

    |Registered Member

    Shruthy such a beautiful epsiode dear..?? I was continuously scrolling down and wishing it never ends❤
    The flashback was lovely..viplav meeting dulaari..must have been a very sweet moment?? + all worrying about dhani and her children..?
    I was feeling as if i am the doctor and witnessing everything..Dhani’s tears..her face turning..viplav caressing her face..the crying baby and finally a baby boy first?
    Yaar Thank youuu sooo much for such an episode..???

    I know you are an emotional fool?? Your last line scares me a lot??
    But please..let the second child be born and be well.. Please..!!
    God bless you dear.. Love you loads??

    • Shruthy


      Aww thank you! ? Glad you liked it. ? Haha that’s whati feel when I read other’s stories like i never wish it to end. ?? thanks!
      Haan! When Viplav finally finds Dulaari means that Dhaani was there also. ? They will worry for sure na?
      Awww! Kash we could have witnessed such a momét in ILRS too ? Like we didnt really have that excitement in Vidha’s birth till Viplav finally meets her and a connection linked them. ?
      But I agree, I feel like there are lots of sad details in that scene, sorry if it bored you. ? Yaaay finally baby boy! ❤️?? Awww thanks for what? Thanks to you for liking it really. ?
      Yes I am ! ?? i dont also have a heart, always making them cry. ?? Hahah I dont want to reveal anything… ?
      God bless you too my child! ✋? Love you mre. Thanks for always reading and supporting. ? You guys are really fantastic ?

    • Shruthy


      Awww! No need to say thanks dear. I just imagined it and it’s a pleasure to write it 🙂 And I am glad I can make you smile and happy, but also cry ?? as long as you guys like it, I am happy also!!

  3. Mariyam123

    |Registered Member

    Shruthy it was superb. A broad smile came on my face when they met. I actually forgot that Dhaani is in the hospital.lol. I thought they r in their room again romancing with the door open! Waiting eagerly for the next one

    • Shruthy


      Hahaha really? My emotional scene was a day romance for you? ? And that with door open… Well sounds to be an interesting imagination. ??? But true romance not for now! ? A bit of ppatience ..

  4. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Awwww Shruthy di when I first saw your ff I decided not to comment because I couldn’t read it in the morning as it was not posted?? I was angry but….

    When I read this I couldn’t control myself from commenting. Really finally they met I mean finally!! ?? it was so lovely. I mean amazing I mean I have no words yaar.. Everything was perfect!!!! I am not getting words yaar! I really need a dictionary can you give me one??!? but jokes apart

    I felt all the emotions????? Dhaani’s happiness on seeing Viplav was beyond words. You really make my day by this yaar!!

    This was awesome awesome awesome!!!! ?????? Thank you Thank you Thank youThank you so muchkmuch??? Love you yaar really love you????????

    • Shruthy


      Oh really? I am sorry I dony know when it was posted. As usual I have submitted it yesterday night but as I told you when I submit on nights, Telly Updates might already be sleeping ? As there are 3h30min of difference between both countries na? ? So i always think that if I submit it before I sleep, then when I will wake up, I will be reading the comments. ?? But sorry it wasnt posted when you were getting ready for school ? And I wouldnt have been angry if you didnt comment but sad ? Just kidding.
      Phewww! Finally I made your anger disappear from your face ! ? Bhaap re you want to say a lot ?? Unfortunately I dont have any other special dictionnary. Many kept asking the same but seriously, just if you guys say “it was good” then I would be really happy ☺️ Itna saara drama karne ki koi zaroorat nahin (please bear my bad Hindi)
      Haan finally they met each other, but as I said, be ready for anything with me.
      Awww welcome welcome welcome! ?❤️ Love you too thangachi (choti behen)

      • Maria

        |Registered Member

        Ok I am not angry now but I don’t do any buttering I really appreciate your ff!?
        Haha you should create your own dictionary for that matter!? with adjectives you would like me to praise with..???
        Love you

    • Shruthy


      Aww thank you so much! ? Feeling blessed for having such readers like you really 🙂 that’s already a lot that you are reading my story. Iss se zyaada mujhe kuch nahin jaana. Because reading my story, you already prove that you like it, that you can read it affording.

    • Shruthy


      Hahaha I knew you would ask me that. I was goung to shape and submit it right now. Now I dont know when TU will post it but if they are online, by God’s grace may be now!

  5. Latha

    |Registered Member

    That was awesome.??????? You are playing with emotions.?????? The plot that you have taken is giving a boost for the readers.✌✌✌✌✌ I am thoroughly enjoying it.???????? Waiting for the next part…love you…?????????????????

    • Shruthy


      Aww hank you Latha! ☺️ Hahaha yeah I know ?? It cant be always happy or always sad na. Need to mix both… ? Oh glad to know tht sweetheart! ? Lots of love to you

  6. Meena

    |Registered Member

    Loveeelllllyyyyyy…. Such a good epi…. What does that precap mean??? Will she die.. No Na??? Please say no……….

  7. Lakshmi

    |Registered Member

    shruthy….i was jumping here while reading this one…..i was totally mad after reading ur ff…..a baby boy….oh that was so cute……wished it on the real show…but never fulfilled….but u made it dear…..aww my happiness is overloaded today….cant control it…..thanks to u dear….and the precap is horrible dear……but i know something smells fishy….hmm waiting for it….

    • Shruthy


      Awww you are so cute! ? Haan baby boy, little Viplav! ? Jaise mumma chahti thi ☺️ What? That they had a baby boy? Or that he witnessed his child’s birth? Awww glad you liked it ?
      Hahaha lol well I guess you will understand what pain it is reading the next episode ?

  8. maha

    Arey shruthy rulae ge kia pagle .. episode was very beautiful and full of emotions loved every part of it?.. finally viplav and dhani meet yahoooooo.. their conversation was full of love and in fb when viplav said death has to face him before his dhani was epic ?when dhani said that she will accept his slap happily as it would be full of love was wow .. yar ur ff has live feelings .. love u dear keep going?
    And really sorry for super late comment but as u know i am busy these days so even if I don’t comment dil par mat lena ziada? as I am ur ff’s regular reader

    • Shruthy


      Hihi! I am an emotional fool and crying on my own, i love making others cry too? Glad you liked the episode my darling. ?
      Yes finally they met each other and talked to each other. Especially when he was actualy trying to make her calm down and keep her awake …

      Haan even death should face him before her. ? Haan that would be a pyaar ki thapki na ? Haha glad you like my fan fiction and the feelings it delivers. ❤️
      Dont be sorry for that, I totally understand 🙂 of course, you don’t even need to say that right you are one of favourite.

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