ik tere baajo dooja mera koi mol na (part 3)

Soooooo sorry for being late…
Now I don’t want to waste a single minute..so let’s start the story…

The story starts in the city of Mumbai..it was evening time, nearly 6:00pm
sanky…was happily going somewhere (wawooo dukhi aatma is happy 😜)
After sometime he entered in a building named angel tower..

He entered in room 24 on 2nd floor..
It was his new room…he was arranging things there..
Just then his phone rang
Sanky picked the call..
San:- hello..
Opp:- hello can I talk with Mr.Sanskaar..??
San:- Yeah I am Sanskar..say..
Opp:- I am piyush, Miss Swara gadodiya’s assistant and I am informing you that….congratulations mam selected you…

San:- omg…Is this true?
Piyush:- yes sir , it’s true..mam called you tomorrow at 10 a.m….best regards..

San:- thank you..
He cut the call and started dancing like a mad…
But he stopped when something strikes in his mind… His expressions change into serious once​.

He looked upwards and started his sad talks with god..
San:- oh my god…!! I am happy that I got selected..but you know na..in my life..2 sad news are free with one good news..

Just then the bell of his room rang..
He went towards the door and when he opened it..he shouts “ahhhhhhhh….hey.!!.shu….hus…!!!”

It was a dog who started licking sanky’s shoes..
San:- oh god!! Who’s dog is this..??
Just​ then a guy came with lots of bags..he said
“jammy!!..hey don’t lick his shoes..they are dirty.. Yuck..!!”
(I HOPE YOU ALL GOT THAT WHO IS THIS GUYπŸ˜‰)
Sanskar fumes in anger
San:- Hey mister..!! Who are you ?and Why you left your dog open…?

Guy:- First of all he is not dog… He is like my lil bro…awww….my jammy!! And secondly..I am Laksh..hiiii..! I didn’t felt nice after meeting you 😏

San:- oyeeee..First of all your dog was licking my shoes…hwwww…my new shoes.. And Let me clear your doubts I also didn’t felt nice after meeting you…πŸ˜’

Lak:- Again you said ‘dog’..I told you na..he is jammy..!!! Now side please..(he slightly pushed sanky who was standing in the entrance)

San:- hey!!! Wait..wait!! Where are you going.. it’s my room!!!

Lak:- And me and jammy are your new roommates..savagat nhi karoge hmara😜(won’t you will welcome us??)
San:- what?????….

Lak:- yes…
Jammy again​ went near sanky swinging its tail..

San:- nooooo…..stay away..I have allergy with dogs…aaachuuuu…(he started sneezing)
(Monologue):- oh god..!! I knew that two bad news will come with one good news…one came.now I am waiting for the next….πŸ˜‘

Lak:- jammy… Did you liked the room..
Jammy nodded his head in noo…

Lak:- ohh you didn’t liked it..I can understand… You didn’t liked this guy na…

Jammy nodded in yes with bow..bow….

San:- hey you…… Don’t irritate me Mr.laksh.. And if your​ dog didn’t liked this room then you can live in other one…

Lak:- hey what’s your name ?? Ok leave it.. Arrange your stuff in left half side..me and Jammy will live in right half side..

Before sanskar could say something lucky went with jammy and his guitar….

Sanskar kicked lucky’s bag..
San:- wawoooo you proved god that I can’t be happy anywhere…!!!!!

Here lucky was sitting in garden..jammy was not there at that time…
He was playing his guitar while singing…

Pani da rang vekh ke
Pani da rang vekh ke
Pani da rang vekh ke
Ankhiyan jo hanju rul de (hanju: tears)
Ankhiyan jo hanju rul de

(A car stopped near him.. And swara stepped down from it…she sat near lucky..lucky didn’t noticed her as he was playing his guitar without looking upwards..)

Mahiya naa aaya mera
Mahiya naa aaya
Mahiya naa aaya mera
Maahiya na aaya
Ranjhna na aaya mera
Mahiya naa aaya
Mahiya naa aaya mera
Ranjhna na aaya

(Swara smiled seeing him playing the guitar as he was playing it very nicely..)

Ankhaan daa noor vekh ke
Ankhaan daa.. noor vekh ke
Akhiyan cho hanju rul de
Akhiyan cho hanju rul de
Akhiyan cho hanju rul de…….

Lucky stopped as he hears someone screaming…
“Hey……hus…. Stay away…”
Lucky stood up and he saw jammy running towards him and a girl who was standing in between lucky and jammy was crying…
Lucky didn’t saw her face as he was facing her back…

Lucky moved towards that girl who was standing 3-4 steps away from him…
He placed his hand on her shoulder
Lak:- see…miss.. He’s my pet..he won’t hurt….
Before he could say further that girl turned and hugged lucky…
She was none other than swara…
Lucky got shocked by her sudden hug…
He was now also didn’t able to see her as she was hugging him hiding her face in him…

Lak:- hey are you ok….miss..see..he is my pet he won’t hurt you…

Swa:- nooo….I am scared​ of dogs…
Just them jammy barked”bow…bow..”

swara:- mummy!!!!!!

Lak:- no not mummy….his name is jammyπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Swara broke the​ hug and looked upwards towards laksh..

Both saw in each others eyes and got lost in eo’s eyes

They came in sense when jammy barked again
“Bow…bow..”

Lak:- hey… You are swara gadodiya right…
Swara nodded her head…

Lak:- you know what..I came Mumbai for giving you audition as a guitarist…

Swa:- Ya.. you play it very well…I am selecting you…

Lak:- really???? Omg..thanks…

Swara smiled..
Swa:- yes.. Really…come at 10 pm.at my music company… And really sorry for today’s incident..

Lak:- I will reach there on time… And ya..no need of sorry…

Swa:- ok..then bye…
She went from there…

But her car stopped in the middle..
She was driving​ her car herself..so no one was there to help her…

The she came out to check but rain started…
Swa:- oh shit!!!! Now How I will be able to go home… This rain also started….

Neither any vehicle nor any person was passing from there…
Swara sat in her car..
She started remembering today’s incidents.. Lucky’s guitar playing.. Their hug..

But her chain of thoughts broke when the door of her car opened..
Swa:- hey..who are you??? How you can come in my car….

Two men were there..they were seeing swara with lust…
1st man:- hey.. Miss.. It’s your mistake you didn’t locked your car.

2nd man:- thank God she didn’t locked it.. Otherwise how we will be able to meet this beauty….

1st man:- exactly…you are right bro..hey..she is the best singer na…Miss Swara Gadodiya…

2nd man:- yaa…hey sweetie sing a song for us na…

He hold swara’s hand and pulled jer out of the car…

Swa:- hey… What’s this nonsense.. Leave my hand or…..

1st man:- or what…
Swara somehow managed to free her hand
2nd man:- sing a song na… Please..sing oh come on… Please..

He moved towards her she was moving back…
But she stopped when her back got hit to someone..

She turned and found sanskar there(wawoooo my plan of letting her door opened work..πŸ˜‰)

San:- hey I am also a singer will you want to listen my song too….

Both men look eo..

San:- Oh swara will also sing..but you​ don’t know why she was not singing… She don’t sing without music… Especially of piano..

1st man:- oyee hero…stop your nonsense..
Sanky hit his mouth with a strong punch..

2nd man:- hey…how you punche him..
San:- you also want to know ok..I am fulfilling your wish….

He punched him also on mouth strongly..
Both men fall on the road..
Their teeth started shaking…as due to getting these​ strong punches they became loose..

San:- all right..now your teeth became piano..now she will sing…
Sanskar kneeled down and sat near them..
San:- how were my punches..
I don’t know about swara but you must be singing in your heart…
“Lage 440 volt chune se tere…chune se tere…”
πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Sanskar stood up
And went near swara..who was laughing..
San:- are you fine….
Swa:- yes..thank you…
San:- no need of thanks
Swara smiled..

San:- come I will drop you…
Swara nodded..

Swasan sat on sanky’s bike and drove off…

Precap:-swasan moments and sanlak encounter number 2..

Now guess the movie:-

Zindagi mein teen cheez kabhi underestimate nahi karna … I, Me and Myself!

76 comments

  1. IME

    IME

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    Awesome
    Loved it
    Waiting for next part eagerly!!!
    Iss bar jaldi post karna
    Don Ka order hai πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Love u
    Take care
    Byee😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Ishu..kya karu yaar aaj kal time hi nhi milta…today was Sunday that’s why I became able to post it..
      But I will try my best to follow Don’s order πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Love you tooo😘😘😘😘😘😘

  2. khusubu

    Oh my God very funny & interesting specially sanskar’s dialogue to goon.
    sanlak meeting is also nice
    please update next part soon i am always waiting for ur ff

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Hey thank you​ very very veryyyy much dear 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      Thanks for liking it and omg… You wait for it … It’s my pleasure​ dear 😊😊😊😊
      I will try my best to post the next part soon.
      Take care
      Keep commenting πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Thank you very very muchhhhh for reading it 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      I will try to post the next part soon..πŸ˜‡
      Take care
      Keep commenting
      Bye😊😊

  3. Kakali

    Kakali

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    Waaaaaa love it Mickey!!.It’s soo nice.! You know what, duno why after seeing the cover pic I was about to ignore the FF but instantly remembered that its written by you, Soo padh liyaaa. πŸ˜€ Continue soon sis..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Hwww…diii how you even thought to ignore it….
      But it’s good that you read it…if you ignore it..I will become very sad πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
      But thanks for liking it😘
      Love you 😘😘😘😘😘

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you very muchhhhhh for reading and commenting here😊😊😊😊
      I will try to post soon…
      Take care
      Love you 😘😘😘

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Diiii thank you very muchhhj for reading it..As I told you this story will revolve around swsanlak and the particular pair will be get decided only in the last part.. 😊And I am posting Roke na ruke naina also..it will take some time for it to be get postedπŸ˜‡
      Love you..
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  4. Nive

    Nive

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    Hey mickey it was awesome awesome 😘😘😘😘😘😘 I was laughing and laughing πŸ˜‚ superb writing dear update next episode soon…i just love you 😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Thank you very muchhhhhh😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      Hahahshaha…!!! My pleasure that I made you laugh πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚I will try my best to post the next part soon…..
      Take care
      Love you 😍😘😘😘😍😍😍😘😘😘

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you sooo much diiii 😘😘😘😘😘
      Diii your answer is correct sooo a 🍫 for youπŸ˜‰πŸ˜„
      I will try to post next part soon
      Keep commenting
      Take care πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thanks dear 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      Keep commenting..
      Take care πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you diiii for liking it😘😘😘😘😘
      I am super happy that you liked it 😊😊😊
      Keep commenting
      Love you 😍😍

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you soooo much diiii for reading and commenting 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      I am very happy that you liked it😊
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    • Yashu24

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      Thank you very much dear 😘😘😘 I am really happy that you liked it…
      Keep commenting
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    • Yashu24

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      Thank you my Dear friend 😊😊😊
      I am really glad that you liked​ it 😘😘😘
      I will try my best to entertain you πŸ˜„
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  5. Raina

    Raina

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    funny story mickey!!!!!! really so much interesting!!!!! read everything in a go!!! i am sorry again for forgetting it!!
    the story is so cute and lovely!
    love triangle?

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Awww…di thank you very much for liking it 😊😊😊
      I can’t tell you anything now sorry…πŸ˜…
      I am feeling very happy that you liked it😘😘😘😘
      Take care…
      Keep commenting
      Love you 😘😘

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Keep patience my sweetie….πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
      But thank you very very much for liking it and enjoying it…I am super happy that you liked ittt😊😊😊
      Take care…
      Love you 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much for reading and commenting here…😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      I am very happy that you liked it
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  6. IQRA222

    IQRA222

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    angelll tell me what should I say about this episode you have left me speechless how can I describe the episode

    It is too lovely too awesome for words
    lucky and jammy are cho cute
    and sanky dialogues are just oh la la
    can’t really wait for the next part

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Awwww….my sweetheart😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 I can’t believe that you liked it this much that you became​ speechless πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
      Sooooo sweet of you my lil princess 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      Love you loadsssss!!!!!😘😘😘😘😘
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Stay blessed 😊😊😊😊😊

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      I am very happy that you liked it
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    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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    • Yashu24

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      Thank you sooo much for reading and commenting hereβ€¦πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
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    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you sooo much for reading and commenting hereβ€¦πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
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    • Yashu24

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      Thank you soooo much dear for liking it
      I am very happy to know that you enjoyed itβ€¦πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
      I will try my best to post next part soon..
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    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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  7. Ishanvi

    Micky Di!!!! It was awesome!! Superb chapter!! Loved it!! Sanlak’s encounter was too funny!! Waiting for their second encounter ..please post next chapter soon..Love you Di..

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Awwww…my cutie pie thank you dear😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍
      I am very happy that you enjoyed it and you felt it funny 😊😊😊
      You have to wait for their second encounter as I don’t get time nowadays to write ffs…
      Take care
      Keep commenting
      Keep smiling😊😊😊😊
      Stay blessedπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Love you 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you soooo much dear for liking it
      I am very happy to know that you enjoyed itβ€¦πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
      And yes your answer is right.. You are second one to answer soo a 🍫 for you too…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„
      I will try my best to post next part soon..
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    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you soooo much dear for liking it😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😘😘😘😘😘
      I am very happy to know that you enjoyed it…
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      Keep commenting please….
      Take care 😘😘😘

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Aww… Thank you dear for reading and commenting 😘😘😘😘 I am glad that you liked it 😊 keep commenting
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    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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  8. Manasvi

    Manasvi

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    Hey dii..
    Sorry for commenting late..
    I read it yesterday only by the time you sent the link but wasnt able to comment..πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
    Sorry..
    And the episode is Awesome and funny tooπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Sanskar is awesome.. And jammy and lucky..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Love you dii.😘 take care..
    Movie name- Ready!!

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Nooo need of sorry sweetie 😘😘
      And I am very very veryyyy happyyy that you liked it!!!!!😘😘😘
      And your answer is right soo a 🍫 for you…
      😘😘😘😘😘
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Stay blessed 😘😘😘😍😍😍😍
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  9. Sonia.L

    Sonia.L

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    Wow…Mickey. It’s s good and interesting. Sanskar’s dialgue to goons and the song about 440 volt…they are hilarious.
    And the Sanlak meeting, specially jammy and sanskar…so funny. Looks like jammy loves sanky…hehe.. Post next episode soon…eagerly waiting for it and eagerly waiting to see the pair.
    Take care… πŸ™‚

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Awww…di my extreme pleasure that you loved it…I am really very very very happy that you liked it😘😘😘😘😘😘
      I will try to post soon..
      Take care..
      Keep smiling 😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you soooo much dear for liking it
      I am very happy to know that you enjoyed itβ€¦πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
      I will try my best to post next part soon..
      Keep commenting please….
      Take care πŸ˜‡

  10. Soumya85

    Soumya85

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    Wow yar it was just amazing I loved it u r a very good writer….it was comedy,romance,action wah awesome pls tell me the pairs…love u sisy post the next part soon

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

      |Author

      Aww…my extreme pleasure that you liked my ff😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      And I can’t tell you the final pairs sorry*holding my ears*..
      I will try to post the next part soon…
      Love you somu diiiii😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you soooo much diii for liking it
      I am very happy to know that you enjoyed itβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
      I will try my best to post next part soon..
      Keep commenting please….
      Take care
      Keep smiling 😘😘😘😘

  11. Rabia

    Rabia

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    hahahahaha mickeyyyy that was justt superbbb i read allll :* πŸ™‚ the story was mind blowing :*…

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Awww…di my extreme pleasure that you loved it…I am really very very very happy that you liked it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      I will try to post soon..
      Take care..
      Keep smiling 😘😘😘
      Love you 😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Yashu24

      Yashu24

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      Thank you very very much dear😍😍😍😍I am super happy that you liked it😊😊😊 and about swasan!! I will make this ff as any particular pair in the last part till then it will be swasanlak ff…
      Take care
      Keep smiling 😘😘😘😘😘😘

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