I still love u!!!! (Saanveer) (Part 1)

Hello guys I’m her with Savitri Devi college and hospital serial this is from veer and saanchi separation track

Let’s start….

Screen starts with veer blaming saanchi for choosing Kabir over him

Saanchi: I’m not toy veer to go here and there now I’m wife of Kabir and I will choose to be like this now (sad tone) whatever the situation may be veer I married to Kabir I made promise to him veer I can’t leave that in between

Veer: (hurtful tone) then what about the promises u made to me saanchi u just signed the papers but we married with all rituals with full of heart the what about that promises

Saanchi gets silent doesn’t speak anything to his question saanchi took Kabir and married him again infront of veer it broken him totally

Veer: tho u married to Kabir again sannchi then see even I will get married with 2 days infront of u mrs saanchi Kapoor (range full tone)

Savitri saanchi Kabir got shocked listening him Savitri was trying to stop him but veer made his decision final

Veer: maa i said I will marry in 2 days and that’s final

Saanchi: plz veer don’t take any stupid decision in anger I don’t want ur life to get wasted (worried tone)

Veer: (laughs) acha I made my decision in anger then what about u u had time then y didnt u choose me when u always say that u love me let me clarify one thing now mrs Kapoor from today form this second I will hate u and I hate u so much that u can’t love others u will regret for this decision and I will make sure of that mrs Kapoor (to kabir) waise dr Kabir I will tell u a free advice u plz take care of ur wife or else u know she may go to another man like she chooses after me

Saanchi gets hurt listening him she can’t able to take up this much hatred towards her by him

Kabir: (stern tone) hold ur tongue veer u r talking about my wife

Veer: (smiles) arey thats y I’m telling u na plz take care okie

Kabir gets angry and took saanchi from there holding her hand

Veer leave from there and went out and saw pic of swara in marriage bureau without any discussion he said the mediated to fix this has my wife saying he went back to home drinking he was not in senses which he want now if not he may can die with this pain he was going to his room with unsteady steps saanchi looks at him and gets sad he was about fall but saanchi stops him before falling down seeing her holding veer gets angry and pushes her

Veer: (fake sad tone) arey u fell down don’t worry I will call ur husband he will help u kya hai na I’m ur ex na so u won’t like to take my help so I will call Kabir wait

Saanchi: (gets ups and hold his shoulder) veer what u r doing to urself

Veer: arey what I’m doing I’m tho saving myself from dieing u know if this bottle won’t be there then u would have seen my dead body by now (laughs) and I know u will get more happy if u see me dead hai na but I won’t give u that chance to get happy from now I will give only pain

Saanchi gets shocked listening dead word from him she was unable to react but veer hold her hand and took her to room where ethey shared their personal space but now it was of Kabir saanchi room

Kabir was working in laptop gets shocked to see both of them somewhere he gets angry seeing veer again near her

Veer: hello dr Kabir (jumps on him) arey u got married today then u both should have 1st night na chalo u know in this bed na I and saanchi used talk and sleep but hugging eachother and sometime romance to u know what dr Kabir I feel that u r not responsible for anything u know who is responsible let me tell u sit here I will tell u dr Kabir

He made him sit on the floor and points towards saanchi

Veer: this Girl na she was responsible for all this distrabances in my life not u

Kabir and saanchi got shocked listening she was just blank not getting anything she was just seeing with teary eyes

Kabir: (shocked) what r u saying veer she was not at fault I was the one who made her helplessnes

Veer: yea thats true but she can tell secretly about ur deeds leave that but she would choose me now but no she was just stuck to u saying u r her husband then what about me even I’m her husband once y she didn’t choose (took Kabir hand and placed make him to place hand on his own heart) now tell Kabir if u where in my place will u keep waiting for her like I’m waiting for her

Kabir didn’t answer anything he was just silent now he know he can’t love saanchi like him veer slowly feel unconscious and slept on floor

Saanchi: (keeps his head on her lap) I’m sorry veer but I was bound to the promise which I gave to Kabir to save ur life plz forgive me

Veer: (whispers) don’t leave me saanchi plz don’t go away from me I love u

Saanchi: dr Kabir plz take him to room plz (holding her tears)

@next day

Veer slowly woke up from sleep he was getting headache but he was about to get up but saw lime water near his head he slowly took it and drank without thinking anything

Veer: (monologue) how I came here anyways I have to prepare for my marriage he stood and gets fresh up

@Kaabir and saanchi room

(Guys I didn’t like to join their name that’s y I’m writing separately)

Both woke up from their respective places and got freshen up

Saanchi: (monologue) I hope veer is fine (she goes to his room and looks at him still sleeping) yesterday he drank so much I will make lemonade for him (she kept glass and left the room without distrubing him)

Kaabir saw saanchi coming out from veer room but he silently left the place with sad face

Veer also gets ready and comes out of his room with stern face again

All are having bf on dinning table even saanchi and Kabir was having their bf seeing them veer again remember the betrayal of saanchi he can’t able stand there more time so he was about to left the place but stopped him

Saanchi: (sees him and stops) veer where r u going without bf

Veer: mrs saanchi Kabir Kapoor now u r not my wife to question me remember that if u ask like this to me may be ur present husband will feel bad (sarcasticat tone) and waise bhi my stomach is full seeing u both together

Saanchi got hurt seeing him tears made her way veer left the place with stern tone Kabir come near saanchi to console her

Savitri: (come near Kabir and saanchi) once I thought may be I’m wrong and my son choice is correct but no I was only right u are just a selfish girl who thorwed my son into darkness and u dr Kabir u always say that u love saanchi right then is this ur love or jelous on my son saying this she left the place

Kabir and saanchi get into thoughts

Saanhci: (monologue) yes maa u r right I’m selfish but save my veer life I promised on veer that I will give a chance to this relation which I can’t break now may be Kaabir sir was bad but now he was changed

Kabir: (monologue) is aunty saying correct more that my love on saanchi I gave importance to hatred towards veer i know I did worng but saanchi choosed me I didn’t forced her to do anything

Soon both came out the thought and left to hospital

@hospital

Both went to their respective works but saanchi mind still in veer thoughts she can’t able to concentrate on her work her mind is fully filled with veer like this day passed when both where going to home

Kabir seeing saanchi in thoughts thought to cheer her up

Kabir: saanchi u know I love ice cream will u share ice cream with me plz I can’t eat alone na

Saanchi seeing his face she said okie Kabir smiled and left to get ice cream again saanhci lost in her thought but it was broken by veer who was drinking middle of the road a car was coming on his direction Sanchi eyes got widen seeing veer

Saanchi: veer move aside veer move (runs to save him)

Veer saw saanchi but still he stood there seeing her like thinking it was his dream and started drinking without giving attention to her

Kabir got confused listening her shouts and looked at the direction somehow saanchi thorwed veer aisde and fell on him veer saw her head going to hit stone but he kept hand on her head so that she don’t get hurt

Veer: u r real or dream but I can’t let a snatch on u saanchi (whispers and fell unconscious)

Saanchi was shocked to see him fell unconscious

Saanchi: veer veer open ur eyes veerrrr (shakes him but he doesn’t respond)

Kabir sees her and ran to her

Kabir: (shouts) saanchi r u mad who will run near car like this

Saanchi: (angry tone) when my life is in danger how can u think I will not save him (to veer) veer get up veer plz veer open ur eyes

Kabir got shocked listening her soon he took veer to hospital

@hosptial

Kabir observed veer and bandaid to his right hand which got hurt Soon after sometime he came out

Saanchi: (worried)how is he dr Kabir is he fine

Kabir: he is okie saanchi he just fell unconscious bcoz of alcohol that it

Saanchi signed in relief she sat on chair with heavy sign

Kabir: relax saanchi I will aunty and we will go home now

Saanchi: no dr Kabir till he gets conscious I won’t leave

Kabir: okie saanchi i will call dr Malhotra

Saanchi nodes in agreement before he can call to Malhotra he heard a slap sound and looks in that direction shocked to see scene infront of him

Kabir: ( holds saanchi) aunty y did u slap her

Saanchi: maa

Jaya: wow mrs saanchi Kabir Kapoor I was shamed myself when sunny told me the truth but what u did now making me feel that I would have killed u when u where born

Kabir: aunty (shouted)

Saanchi: dr Kabir this matter between me and maa so plz

Jaya: wow what an acting mrs saanchi Kabir Kapoor just bcoz of u decession u made a life joke u throwed a life into darkness just bcoz of ur stupid decision veer was in this stage (shouts)

Kabir: aunty y can’t u understand saanchi decision

Jaya: y should I understand her did she now what she did with a life drags saanchi near veer cabin and showed him see him how he was life less y can’t u understand that without u he will die what’s his mistake saanchi to love u more than his life morethan everyone (to kaabir) and what u r saying u want to me to understand her decision will understand her if she choose veer over u

Kabir: yes aunty if she would have choose veer also I would have stand by her side

Jaya: (shouts) then y u married saanchi when she love veer when she choosed veer tell me dr Kabir

Kabir doens’t got any words to say Jaya saanchi was just looking at veer soon she left the place lonely without Kabir

Days are passed Jaya doens’t talked to saanchi veer was in his pain Kabir was not getting anything in mind saanchi was only thinking about veer. Veer was so pain that he was unable to live without alcohol

@marriage day

Veer was going to marry swara saanchi came to stop the marriage (same has serial veer refused her and sat on mandap again)

Veer was doing all ritual absent mind final it was the turn to fill maang and mangalsutra but veer was unable to do his mind was saying to do but heart stoping him but he can’t able to do anything he left the mandap and stood infront of saanchi and dragged her near swara

Veer: (to swara) swara she was my 1st wife whom I love the most or u can say I love her morethan my life just bcoz of her I choosed u marry in anger but I can’t marry u my heart is not accepting to fill ur hair line to adore ur neck with mangalsutra which I gave to saanchi only I wanna ask ur forgiveness now I don’t know I’m worth of it or not but I can’t marry u swara I’m sorry plz forgive me

Listening him all got happy except Gayatri and swara and her family

Veer: (to saanchi) I loved u with all my heart saanchi but u broken my heart u snacthed my soul don’t think bcoz of u I stopped this marriage I stopped this marriage bcoz I can’t give ur place to someone like u gave mine to dr Kabir but I want to open my heart infront of u y u did this saanchi y u choosed Kabir over me is my love is so week that u left me I think I’m waste useless fellow infornt of u may be I’m less infront u may I don’t deserve u but still I wanna say I love u saanchi I love u so much that I can’t tell in words it’s okie now u love dr Kabir I won’t come in between u both u dont worry I’m leaving u forever and Ver u both can happily romance and lead ur life like u want

Saanchi: (worriedly holds his arms) what do u mean my veer what u did tell me veer what u did

Veer: (smiles sadly) don’t worry mrs saanchi Kabir Kapoor I will say don’t worry

All got shocked listening him

Veer: (to savitri) maa I love u so much may be I can’t love u like u always love me and I want to say one thing maa always be strong I will be always with u I will never leave u maa when ever u remember me keep hand on ur heart I will be infront of u (smiles sadly)

(To Malhotra) plz take care of my mother mr Malhotra I know u love ur secretary than my mom’s but pls she is very good pls change ur mind money can’t give u happiness it will only give stress plz give this hospital to Jaya aunty this their hard work plz don’t snatch their hard work (emotionally) I wanna tell u one thing now I love u so much papa I really love u

(Jaya) hello maa I know u r angry on ur daughter forgive her let her live her life if she was happy with dr Kabir then let her stay with him dont stop her I know u love her so much but bcoz of me u started hating her but give her a chance to explain maa

(To gayatri) I never talked to u with respect but pls take care of my mom and dad plz create any disturbance in them and I want to tell u ur daughter will get all the property of Malhotras so u don’t worry about that

For the 1st time Gayatri felt bad seeing veer in bad state may be she never love him it doens’t mean that she hate him

Veer after talking to everyone he came and stood infront of swara and saanchi

Veer: (swara) I already aksed ur forgiveness still u don’t want forgive me u can punish me swara

(To saanchi) u asked me na y I’m saying all this bcoz I’m deing I ate poison (cleans his blood which is coming out from his mouth) I love u saanchi I can’t marry anyone other than u and I can’t become like dr Kabir for u I thought u will change ur decision seeing my pain but u where stick on to it but Im bye forever

Saanchi was shocked to listening him she hold his face in her palms

Saanchi: (to veer) what are saying I did all this to say but u took ur life with ur hands then what’s need of my promise now (shouts) I promised dr Kabir if he saves u I will become his wife and he saved u like he said but in this process he was changed but plz u don’t leave me plz pls veer tell me what posion u had I will get antidote plz tell me veer

Veer: (smiles sadly) it doens’t have antidote saanchi he puks blood

Seeing blood all ranned to him all are shocked to see him like this till now he said slowly bcoz of that no one listened his voice but seeing blood all came towards him runnigly

Savitri: beta what happen to u y this blood is coming veer chalo we will go to hospital

Veer: we can’t go maa plz let me sleep in ur lap soon his breath got uneven he died on spot but all took him to hospital for treatment

Seeing saanchi fell unconscious Kabir got shocked and took her to hospital he got to know that he was pregnant with veer baby

All waiting out side the wards Kabir co doctor came out and said to all of them that saanchi is pregnant

Doctor: but she was so stressed so keep her happy

All got shocked to listening him one side they got to know veer died and one side a good news for them

@leap of 9 months

In all these months Kabir always tried to keep saanchi happy but she never respond to anyone even he was saying in Malhotra mansion she always eat just for baby Savitri and Jaya forgive her to veer even gayatri and Malhotra was changed with veer death Kabir was always in guilt

Veer left the world saanchi never cried for him she was just waiting for her death when it will come to her she was unable to be in guilty

Kabir: (monologue) I’m Kabir that great heart specialist in India but I’m big failure person just bcoz of my jelousy I made a happy family broken I become reason for a family distruction till now my mother never talked to me she was giving her silent treatment to me but the guilt I was bearing is more than all pains I hope God will give me my punishement soon his thoughts where broken by Sound coming from down

He saw that saanchi was getting pains he immediately took her to hospital all looking at her worreidly

After few hrs they all listened a baby crying sound

Nurse gave baby to Savitri saying it’s a baby boy

All are having happy tears but soon it turned into sad tears listening the death of saanchi all got shcoekd to listening doctor words that she left the world soon giving birth to baby

Saanchi soul was moving up seeing her son she was happy that she was going to meet her love

@heaven

Veer was sitting on bench and seeing her family in happiness he was seeing his junior who was having broad smile on his face soon his thoughts where broken by someone tapping her he turned to see who is it but shcoked getting more beating to him

Veer: saanchi what are y are u beating me

Saanchi: how dare u to leave me how can u leave like that I came to stop the marriage so that I tell u the truth but u ate poison that to which doens’t have antidote who will do like that (crying in tears)

Veer: arey that was past leave that see our son how cute he is like me see when he become big na he will become like me like Joly types not like u kaddos mood

Sanachi glared him angrily

Veer: okie okie I’m sorry I just said the truth (bites his tongues for his mistake again) Looked at her and smiled sheepishly

Both holded their hands and adoring their son who was with their family

Screen freezes on Saanveer faces

***********The end*********

I hope u all like guys I didn’t get better ending than this and I thought veer death is better punishment for saanchi if anyone doens’t like it plz forgive me for that

Keep smiling guys……

Bye bye….

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  1. Kya bakwaas story I don’t like though I’m vk fan but this was worst

  2. Likhna aata bhi h kesi bakwas story likhi h😏 pure OS m Kabir ko guilty or akal h ya nh Kabir was blackmailing her for more than 1 month and 1 month we will take to marriage of KANCHI/SABIR and in these 2 months she didn’t realise she is pregnant had h and 2 months m us ko pta bhi nh chala k vo pregnant h kuch bhi dimaag k bina paida hui ho kya??

    1. Agree with you

      1. Swasanangle

        Hello plm u agreed with warsha so plz read my reply I have given to warsha

    2. Swasanangle

      Hello warsha usually I don’t give reply to negative comments but now im giving just bcoz of u r insulting me 1st of all I think u r not a science background so let me tell u that there are so many case where pregnancy ladies can’t identify that they pregnant for 5months u r just talking about 2 months and bla bla and one more thing if u want to give veiw u can but not in a way of insulting others if u would have told this in proper way then i would have understand u but u r insulting me

      1. Ofcourse there r these types of cases but it usually happens with teenagers or obese adults did u understand that?? And even if they r not aware about their pregnancy then they got to know about it on delivery time And if they got to know then in 20 weeks as u said 5 months and it happens with 1 in 500 plus I am a SCIENCE STUDENT

      2. Swasanangle

        Then y can’t u consider this case in 1 in 500 πŸ€”

      3. Bcz it happens with 1 in 500 an they get to know about it in 20 weeks while Sanchi just got to know about it in 2 months

  3. BaBa ji thulluπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘Ž

    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ iss ghatiya veer se aur kya umeed ki ja sakti hai .LOVE SICK PUPPY . Ek ladki ke liye apne MAA (JO 17 YEARS KE BAAD MILI ). BAAP(
    Jis ke paise par AAWARAGARDI karke ash ki ) .BAHEN.DADI (MAA nahi thi dono issko sambhala) .Unn logo ne usse bachpan se pyar kiya unki iss Ghatiya veer ko koi kimat nahi . Unko chodkar one year pahele mili ek ladki ke liye marna pasand kiya πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚kamina Tommie. Arre Gadhe KISI BHI INSAN KI JINDAGI ME KOI BHI EK INSAN ITANA IMP NAHI HO SAKTA KYOKI EK INSAN SE BADI APNI FAMILY HOTI HAI ,FAMILY SE BADA SAMAZ HOTA HAI AUR SAMAZ SE BADA APNA DESH HOTA . Bevkoof nahi hote vo log jo apna ghar parivar chodke iss samaz ke liye desh ke liye mar mitate hai .Par ye baat dum hilane wale kum brain wale veer ki samaz me kaha aayegi jo pyar ka matalb hi nahi samza kabhi .veer ke liye to pyar sirf ek jid hai .
    Darpok insan . Upar jake jarur narak me gaya hoga . Gaya to gaya baccha paida karke gaya .p
    Pysco Physical relationship ka desperate 😑😑😑

    1. Swasanangle

      Hello baba ji thullu (sorry don’t ur name so using ur username) I agree with what u r saying but veer was a person who doesn’t got the love of his mother (he think she died) and father I agree he has his sister and dadi who bought his up but here veer was dependent on saanchi or u say it’s story plot that veer loved saanchi like his life only depends on her then the person who thinks his life is his love then suddenly she left him without making him understand without thinking about him she left that saying now she was Kabir wife then what will be his life…. And this my veiw I respect ur veiw but this my responsibility’to know about my veiw so I hope u understand πŸ™‚

  4. Warsha,bak jo vi ho girs or boys how dare you both ………..if you are not sanveer fan then alright but why you both insulted a writer………..serial mae toh bhot unlogical thing hote hae tab toh kuch nahi bolte ho……..by the way I don’t have any intention to hurt anyone……..if I hurt anyone by my comments then I am really very very sorry for that……….Hey swasanangle………. welcome dear in this page……….. and a big sorry from everybody………i know yaar you are hurt so much by those people comments………please yaar sad maat ho…….. though I am a kanchi i like this story so much yaar………..not only i like this story but also I love it so so much………..the concept of the story is really amazing and mind blowing………….we don’t imagine about this concept yaar…………thanks a lot yaar for give us such a beautiful and gorgeous story…………… please yaar write some other story………….I am really waiting for your post friend………..and Happy Friendship Day yaar…………….take care …………….

    1. Oh hello apni opinion apne pas rakho humein zarurat nh story m logic hona chahiye and m ne vahi bola plus I have all the right to show what I felt and ye Kanchi fan bolke sachai chup nh jaati bohut log dekhe hein

      1. Swasanangle

        Acha then tell me how did Kanchi married bcoz if couple marriage period is less than a year then they should stay with eachother for 6 months but in serial they got married soon after divorce how this happened tell me plz and ha one more thing even this is my opinion

      2. Did I mentioned anywhere writers of SDCH write logical things ?? Tell me where I wrote that

      3. Swasanangle

        May be u didn’t mention logically but ur comment show that and ya still I’m saying again I’m not at all Kanchi nor sanveer fan i just wrote this bcoz story play was not good and even in place of veer if Kabir would have been I would have written the same leave it I think u where unable understand my veiw..

      4. U can take it as u want I don’t care😏

    2. Swasanangle

      Thank for supporting me Kanchi and happy friendship day you to dear πŸ˜€

  5. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ pehle ek baat batao.. apni beizatti karwane me maza aata h kya 101 post aur itna bada bakwas πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ and yaar abtak lagta tha ki cvs se ghatiya writer koi nhi but aaj pata chala cvs writes far better than some people. Anyway tumhe khushi mil gyi ye bakwas likh ke so enjoy your own bakwas. Coz though I don’t like Sanchi veer but atleast aisa baised story aajtak nhi padhaπŸ˜•πŸ˜• kuch bhi likh dete ho πŸ˜₯ and after scanning (not reading coz seeing the title only i decided not to read) I’m feeling pity πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ ki kuch bhi likh diya jata h apne satisfaction ke liye πŸ˜₯anyway enjoy. Bye 😏

    1. Ok.. Fine you must be a great writer na.. Why don’t you try writing a same long story.. Then we’ll see who’s a great writer… Seriously like i don’t know why you guys don’t appreciate people huhh?? And dear swasanangle.. You’re a great writer.. And it was an indeed a wonderful story… I’m a Kaanchi fan but i really enjoyed this… Don’t let these brainless people demotivate you.. Just keep going with your writings and ignore such people who only know to degrade others.. I really enjoyed reading it and i hope to read more of your articles.. Love you tc..

      1. Well you might have enjoyed this but if I didn’t liked this why can’t I give reviewπŸ˜• when cvs was showing illogical things it was disaster and now when this is more than a disaster you are blaming me. Idc whether you are a kaanchi fan or not but putting all the blames on a single person that’s WRONG.and about appreciating if I ever write atleast I will never write something due to which any of the fans will feel bad for their favourite. Enjoy 😊

      2. Swasanangle

        Thank you so much for supporting me or I can say my story kanchiaN πŸ˜€

    2. Of course you have the right to give your review.. But please at least use the correct way.. It takes so much efforts to write such a long article and if people like you degrade writers like that then it kills their motivation.. If you didn’t like anything then just say naa that yes this was not satisfying but at least be polite.. That’s what I’m saying.. And if you felt that it was a so called disaster then you should have quit reading it simple, like most of us Kaanchi fans did when show was getting boring..

    3. Swasanangle

      Hello Suhani 1st I don’t know this cvs what ever it is but I got to know clearly that u r Kabir and saanchi fan and let me clear u one thing before itself I’m not even Saanveer fan I just wrote has story plot was not good if writers want Kabir and saanchi has couple then they would have married when they showed their marriage scene but they didn’t but they made Saanveer has couple where are leading their life leave that they made Kabir Villain just bcoz saanchi trusted veer not dr Kabir if u don’t remember then see in every scene whatever he does he only say that i felt the pain let veer also feel the same pain is this love on saanchi or jelousy on veer? if he would have become villain just after Saanveer marriage it would have been different but they didn’t showed like that they showed when saanchi didn’t trusted him and last thing u can give veiw but in a way of insulting others u can’t judge my stories my writing skill bcoz u r no one to judge some one if u want express ur veiw then there is way a proper way and I stressing again A PROPER WAY!!

    4. Swasanangle

      read the story has normal reader not keeping ur fan love on that bcoz they are just a characters not real hope u understand that.

      1. Wowwwww the great Swasanangle is saying others to keep ur fan love aside so what u did when u wrote that u don’t like to join their names didn’t u keep ur fan love in ur so called OS?

  6. Dishani01

    your writing skills and imagination are nice.. All the best to became best with more story you get 20dislikes it’s cool because earnings hates and rise above haters are awesome feeling ..😍😍😍
    Keep writting in your own world sweet heart tc

    1. Swasanangle

      Thank you so much dishani01

  7. RuCh23

    Guys please dont fight. This isn’t the real story. It’s just an ff and the author has every right to write his/her story as per his/her will and imagination. If you don’t like it, then fine! Don’t like it! But please don’t discourage the author.

    1. Swasanangle

      Thank you so much ruch23

  8. Poori

    guys pls don’t discourage someoneit is just a serial don’t take it serious it is their will and wish to present a story and don’t fight thats it and swasan angel you presented the story very well tc

    1. Swasanangle

      Thank you for supporting me poori πŸ™‚

  9. Priyanshipp

    Hey dear swasanangle don’t be sad dear… being a writer I understand how we feel when we get negative responses. And I understand being a Sanveer fan what you all must have gone through. Same happened with us that time. And ffs are the best way to pen down your emotions and you did same. I respect what you wrote but dear I feel you should have written which was acceptable for both the fandoms. You wanted to reunite it’s ok but blaming kabir for everything it isn’t right. In March same happened with we kaanchi fans and from starting it’s happening but I don’t guess any kaanchi writer showed veer which was not acceptable by veer fans. And the above commentators I felt bad while reading their comments but I guess they wrote those out of anger… I’m sorry but as a friend I just said what I felt. Hope to see interesting and happy ending stories more ☺😘 all the bestπŸ‘πŸ‘

    1. Swasanangle

      Hello priyanshipp thank for commenting and one more thing I’m not Saanveer fan plz take his from ur mind i just wrote this bcoz I didn’t like the story plot I felt bad veer bcoz he loved her like she was only his world but suddenly his world got collapsed that’s the reason I felt bad for him so I just wrote it and if u all can see in every situation Kabir only said that I felt pain seeing saanchi with him now let him know my pain it made me think that more than his love he was caring for his revenge he know saanchi love their friends, her maa and her love but he made everyone against her blackmailing her it made me write this plot that it I’m not at all Saanveer fan not Kanchi hater I hope u understand my point and I’m sorry if u felt I hurted u again I’m really sorry form my side even if u got hurt with my story I’m sorry for that I hope u understand my point πŸ™‚. And plz think has story not with fan love just bcoz of this fan love only u all are feeling bad but I don’t think i have written wrong bcoz if Kabir would have become villain after Saanveer marriage that would have been different for me but he started hating him when saanchi trusted veer not Kabir even now I’m saying I didn’t like the story plot even in veer position Kabir would have been na I would have wrote like this only dear…

  10. Hai this off was amazing no more comments about that and
    But guys before we was seeng so many of fan fictions it was amazing for both sanveer n kanchi fans but after the boring track of soch in show many of fans left seeng this show n written updates also but the gf was really amazing
    So many of pol left writing in middle plz guys don’t do like that
    I really want to study bcoz more that show off writer are good

    1. Swasanangle

      Thank you pari πŸ™‚

  11. ChandanaSSV

    Hii swasanangle… Nice plot dear…. And don’t be sad for dislikes or comments…. We write our point of view…. And pls ignore them all….. Tc dear…

    1. Swasanangle

      Thank you so much Chandana for supporting my work and for reading my story πŸ™‚

  12. Guys why are fighting for this girl’s story cant you see that this girl big kaanchi hater… that’s y she wrote this

    “@Kaabir and saanchi room

    (Guys I didn’t like to join their name that’s y I’m writing separately)”

    and you guys are fighting with each other for her… let’s forget it and her so called story.

    1. Swasanangle

      Hello Anju with this comment even i got to know that u r Kanchi fan but u r wrong in prediction about me was wrong bcoz I’m not not Kanchi haters bcoz there is a lot of difference between hating and not liking I didn’t like how they protrayed their chaaracters once again I’m mentioning I DIDNT LIKE how they protrayed their characters and important thing I have a user name so better call me with that name other than using “that girl this girl words” I hope u understand….

  13. Anu88

    Hey friend………… welcome dear in our sdch group……….first of all sorry yaar for reading and commenting late…….I am really sorry for some others friends comment……….I know their comment hurt you………… please yaar forgive us and continue your writing in this forum………….. please yaar write some more story about our dancer and kanchi(actually o kiya hae na i am a kanchi fan)………..I know my comments is not suitable for this os yaar it’s really amazing and mind blowing concept and story yaar……….it’s really so so beautiful and emotional story friend…………. please yaar post some more story it’s our humble request…………..lots of love for you dear…………tc friend

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