“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 26)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 25

Yuhi’s room
Yuvraj entered the room and saw Mahi making the bed. He locked the door and went inside. He went and hugged Mahi from back. “Oh you’ve come. Now, help me”, said Mahi. “Mahi, did you think about what Maa and Bebe told?” Mahi turned around and said, “What?” “Grandchildren?”, replied Yuvraj. “First have your own children then think about grandchildren Yuvraj”, replied Mahi and was about to go away when Yuvraj held her wrist and stopped her. He picked her up in his arms and started walking. “What are you doing?”, asked Mahi. “I was planning about grandchildren so, I first need children. Don’t you want to become a mother?”, said Yuvraj. Mahi nodded her head in a yes and looked away because of shyness. Yuvraj smilingly placed her on the bed and switched off the lights. He came on top of her and they again consummated their marriage.

Twinj room
Twinkle entered the room and saw Kunj asleep. She went and sat next to him. “Dekho, kitna bhola lagta hai sotey waqt. Aur jab uthta hai toh saari badmaashiyaan chalu”, (Look, how innocent he looks while sleeping. And, as soon as he wakes up all his naughtiness will start) saying this she kissed his cheeks and was about to get up when Kunj held her hand and sat up straight. Kunj smiled at her while Twinkle said, “You didn’t sleep yet?” “How can I sleep without you? Anyways, if I would’ve slept then who would listen to you?”, said Kunj. Twinkle rested her head on his chest and said, “Hmm.. by the way you must be tired.” “You also must be tired”, replied Kunj. Twinkle sat up straight and said, “Today it was funny at the dining table no! The way di and jiju spilled out the water.” “Even we should think about it now”, said Kunj. “About?”, asked Twinkle. “Kids”, replied Kunj pulling Twinkle towards himself. “Are you mad? We only are kids”, said Twinkle. “So, you mean we are bound in a child marriage?”, asked Kunj sarcastically and kissed Twinkle’s cheeks. “No, I mean.. whatever forget it. By the way, Kunj don’t you feel tired?”, said Twinkle. “No, how can I feel tired after seeing you?”, replied Kunj and kissed her forehead. Twinkle pushed him back and got up. “But, I’m too sleepy”, said Twinkle. She was about to go when Kunj came and stood in front of her. He picked her up in his arms and placed her on the bed. Kunj said, “Now sleep.” He stood up straight and was about to go when Twinkle said, “Thank God! I thought..” Kunj quickly turned around and leaning towards her said, “What did you think?” Twinkle was about to reply when she saw Kunj smiling at her. Twinkle wrapped her arms around his neck and said, “I was thinking.” She pulled him closer and kissed his lips. Kunj remained shocked for sometime but, later reciprocated. After sometime as they were out of breath, both of them pulled back. Kunj said, “What was that?” “Don’t you know what that was! It’s called kiss”, replied Twinkle. “What do you think? Only you can do all this?”, added Twinkle. Kunj said, “No, I mean. Forget it. Good night!” Kunj went to his side of bed and laid down while Twinkle hugged him and both of them fell asleep.

Morning
Hall (Around 8)
Everyone was in the hall having their morning coffee and tea. Kritika came down and said, “Where is my cup?” “It’s in the kitchen. Will you take it?”, replied Twinkle. “I’ll bring it”, said Rahul interrupting their conversation. “No di, I was just asking. I didn’t want to have. But, it’ll be wasted now”, said Kritika. Rahul got up and after sometime came back with the cup of coffee. He forcefully made Kritika drink it and said, “Now, it won’t be wasted.” Kritika shouted, “Can you please not do all this nonsense?” Rahul was about to reply when Kritika ran to the door and hugged a boy in his mid 20s standing at the door tightly. “Chill baby doll. I’ll have fracture all over my body”, said the boy. Kritika pulled back and said, “Akshat, don’t talk rubbish. By the way, long time. Where were you for so many days?” “Oh actually I wasn’t keeping well that’s why”, replied Akshat. She placed her hand on his left cheek and said, “I hope you’re fine now.” “Ya, now come. We’ll be late otherwise”, replied Akshat holding her hand. “Ya. Rahul are you coming or not?”, said Kritika in a stern voice. Rahul who was boiling in anger seeing the closeness between Kritika and Akshat in an angry tone replied, “Ya.” Kritika and Akshat went out to the car while Rahul followed them.

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Rahul (POV)
Look at her! She has been ignoring me for the past three days. She doesn’t even talk to me and when she does she’ll always say in a stern voice. And, now God knows who this Akshat is and from where he has come! Look the way he’s sticking to her and how dare he call Kritika”baby doll”? Only I can call her by that name. Huh!
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They went to the car. Kritika went to the driver’s side and was about to get in when she saw Rahul sitting in the front. She peeped in through the window and said, “Akshat is sitting in front. Please go back.” Rahul turned to look at Kritika who had turned her face away and was looking here and there waiting for him to sit back. Rahul murmured, “Iss Akshat ki toh main!” (This Akshat, I’ll screw the sh*t out of him!) He got out and went back while Akshat and Kritika got into the front seats.
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Hey all! Thank you for all your lovely comments and support and ofcourse the love. Love you all loads. Thanks to all my silent readers too.

Nimmi, I would love to chat with you. By the way you asked me to write a fan fic on Sadda Haq too but, I’m sorry dear. Tashan e ishq is the only show I watch.

Shatakshiiiiii, I love you!! ? I read your comment so many times because it made me feel so good. Thank you for such a beautiful comment.

Sayeeda, I’m so angry at you. This isn’t fair at all. How many times do you tell “sorry”? I’m so shameless that I’ve never said a “sorry” and on the other side you tell it so many times. What matters is your comment not when you comment.

Shamz, I’ll show the past soon. I’m just thinking how should I portray it so, that’s it. Once I plan it out then I’ll show till then please bare with the ignorance and arrogant track.

Ayesha, that was such a big compliment. Love you loads dear.?

Did you all like the sudden manner in which Twinkle kissed Kunj? I mean many of you were unhappy that Twinkle always resists to it that’s why I’m asking. Is Rahul jealous to see Kritika and Akshat together? But, why? Who’s this Akshat? Is he only a friend? So many questions right! I’ll soon come up with the answers.

Yay! Finally I completed 25 episodes. I would like all of you to comment whether till now I was able to portray the emotions of the characters. If I wasn’t able to, I’ll work upon it and will try to improve it. Also, do suggest me if you want to see any track.

I hope you all have been to the celebrations of Silver Jubilee. If not, here is the link please do visit.

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 25) (Silver Jubilee Celebrations)

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 24)

I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow. I hope you all will like it. Also, tell me how many of you thought that “celebrations” was the only the post from my side today? Yes, because as a habit I had written “Chapter 25”. Sorry for that.

Please don’t forget to throw your comments for this chapter below whether it’s positive or negative. I would like my silent reader to comment too but, I won’t pressurise anyone.

40 comments

  1. Kruti

    Kruti

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    Congo ria for completing 25epi…….awesome epi
    Amazing story till now……loved it to d heights of infinity
    Thank u for giving us such a lovely twinj story

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Kruti! I’m glad you liked the chapter. I’m glad you’re liking the story too. I shall thank you all for giving me the immense support which allowed me to write further.

  2. Sayeeda

    Sayeeda

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    Hats off ….agar isse bhi zayada Kuch hota hai toh woh bhi ….yrr the way u handle nd portray the scenes of each couple is outstanding ….
    Twinj scenes were fab …finally twinkle is also getting close to kunj in the same way kunj is …
    Yuhi scenes were awesome ….so cute ones…
    Kritika nd Rahul scenes more than good …best …The way u showed jealously part nd dialouges were commendable ….
    Thanks for giving such a awesome ff nd frnd like u ….hope ur ff crosses 100 …do entertaining us like the way u always do ….love u

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sayeeda,
      Thank you so much for this huge bunch of appreciation. I’m really glad you’re liking this fan fic. Also, I feel happy that you’re liking the current tracks related to each couple. Hope I can continue to entertain you all further and you all keep supporting me. Love you loads Sayeeda!??

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Ayesha! It all depends on you all dear and your support. If you all support I surely won’t end it.?

  3. Angita

    Angita

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    I loved rahuls jealousy for kritika .and yes we liked the way twinkle suddenly kissed kunj.amazing episode but I m confused of akshat though.anyways just keep our beloved twinj unseperateble.loved it

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey Angita,
      I’m glad you’re liking all the current track related to each couple. Let’s see who this Akshat is!

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Arundhati! I’m glad you’re liking my fan fic.. The next chapter will be uploaded soon.

  4. Shatakshi

    Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey ria
    The episode was so cute
    U know u love such bold twinkle
    N rahul jealousy track is interesting
    Love u tooooo….❤❤❤❤❤

  5. RiaA MendeZz

    Ria, I commented on your jubilee really late. I’m sorry but I hadn’t the time because of my job na. The comment is still waiting to be moderated I think.
    About this epi….wowwwwwww. Twinkles kiss give me shivers. Yuhi’s consummation took my imagination to a whole next level. Will mahi get pregnant? Tht would b great. Also, I dnt like tht kriti is being mean. I real hurt for rahul. The pain is almost real. But all in all, this was marvelous, outstanding, awesome, beautiful. It was ur silver jubilee yesterday but u deserve gold as ur award.

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey RiaA,
      You won’t believe but, I was waiting for your comment. When I saw your comment I was literally so happy.
      Thank you so much for the appreciation. I’m glad that you’re able to understand the emotions through my writing. Kritika’s mean behaviour towards Rahul would soon come to an end. Let’s see whether Mahi becomes pregnant or not. Thank you so much for the last sentence too. It really means a lot.??

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Aamu! It’s okay.. don’t say sorry.. I don’t mind a late comment because not the time but your comment matters.

  6. Saby

    Saby

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    I m so so sorry ria….. I m too late….. And didn’t even comment on ur 25th epi…. I was out so….. I hope uh understand…. Again a big sorry…. But I love ur ff….
    And the epi was just too awesome….??

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      It’s alright Saby. I understand. I’m happy that you commented. As I always when you comment matters, not when you do. Anyways, I’m happy that you’re liking the fan fic. Thank you so much for the appreciation as well as the support. I’m glad you liked this chapter.

  7. Romaisah

    Hiiii congrats on ur silver jubilee yaar!! Im super happy n made it this far n u have a longbway to go bcz ure writing skills are amazing imma hugeee fan of it these episodes are always lot with surprises !!! N yes i can’t wait to c the mystery behind rahul kritika n akshat
    Sorry im not commenting regularly im feeling bad im always reading just not getting the chance tp comment my exams will be over soon n ill try to comment regularly 🙂

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Romaisah for your well wishes. I’m glad you’re liking this fan fic. I hope you all like the upcoming twists, turns and tracks. Kritika, Akshat and Rahul’s mystery will open up quite soon. Do read it everyday else you might miss the track.
      And, please don’t say sorry for irregular comments. You commented on my special day, the silver jubilee of this fan fic is a lot to me.
      All the best for your exams.

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