Humdard…… Part 5

Hola! I am back with part 5….Apologies to every writer for not commenting….all thanks to my irritating projects of class 10 ….ufffff…….so much work!! Ek mahine ke chutti mein bhi kaam dena hota hai !!…..Now without any further ranting…Let’s go……….
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# I did something right in my life when I gave my heart to you……#
[Morning….@4:45 am]
Everyone in the room is sleeping away,releasing their tiredness off….Amidst the quietness a boy wakes up , yawns,removes blanket from his legs , quietly gets up and sneaks out of the room…….He comes out of the room and stands at the entrance[main gate] of the orphanage and stretches his arms in the air ……
B- Good Morning !!! and he is Kunj….

K- What a beautiful morning!
The whole sky is painted with hues of blue with a tinge of orange …..the moon is still spreading it’s light ….birds are making the environment cheerful by their melodious chirping……
Kunj starts walking from the gate towards the beach….oh that’s the beauty of having a sea shore in front your house…..He is walking calmly, with cool breeze caressing his face….
Kunj reaches his favorite sitting spot [ Marine drive kind of sitting platform you can imagine…..their orphanage is made in front of that platform, like in Spain you have houses built ] f

But he could see someone already sitting there , from a distance …..
Kunj-yeh kaun baitha hai? itne subah-subah……and he walks further….[ Who is sitting there at this point of time?]
Kunj-Ohh oh yeh baithe hai yahan ….woh bhi itne subah-subah …..Idea!!! [ Ohh so she is sitting here and that too so early…Idea!!]
He went behind that person and BOOOOO!!!
Person- aahhhhhhhh!!!!!! …….

Kunj- hahaha…hahee
Twinkle- tum??? Pagal ho kya??? haaan!!! and the the person who is none other than twinkle runs behind him just as a lioness runs for her prey …….She caught him and started beating him but not playfully ……
Kunj- chod de naa!! Sorry !! sorry.. Twinkle ……..
Twinkle – huh!! As Twinkle got tired she left him and sat on the platform ………
after a while kunj also sits there…
Kunj- tu yahan kya kaar rahi thi ?? ha?? woh bhi itni jaldi?[What were you doing here? and that too early?]
Twinkle – Tumhe kya hai?? Merii marzi…meri jagah,mera mann ….sirf tumahre jagah nahi hai ye…[ Do you have any problem ? My will , my place,my wish!! It is not your personal place]
Kunj-Mujhe bahut kuch hai ….samjhii….[I do have problem…. understand]
kunj keeps his head on her shoulder and says….-Bata naa!![ Tell me!!]
Twinkle – Aaj man kiya , jaldi uthkar aane kaa toh aa gayi…[Today I felt like coming here early ,so I came here…]

Kunj- hmmmm…
Twinkle – Kunj,see the sky is looking so beautiful …isn’t it? …
Kunj- hm….
Twinkle- Kunj, after sometime the sun will rise and dispel the darkness…Bilkul waise hi jaise meri zindagi se andhera chala gya , tum dono ke aane par….[ In the same manner , as you both dispelled darkness from my life…] Kunj….Kunj??
Here,Mr. Kunj had already gone into his slumber….
Twinkle quietly hums a breathe and twists his ear with right hand….

Kunj-ahhh!! twinkle mera kaan chod,chod ……ahh…[ ahhh! Twinkle leave my ear…]
Twinkle — mazza aya? [Did you enjoy?] after few seconds she leaves his ear….
Kunj holds his ear in pain while Twinkle giggles…He gets furious and frowns like a grumpy kid…
Wah ! Wah ! Mera bina Mazze kiye jaa rahein hain?? a voice is heard ….
Twinj trun their heads and see the owner of the voice, who is none other than Yuvraaj
Twinj- Lo aa gayi …Soti Sundarii…[ oh! so sleeping beauty has come..]
Uv-accha and slaps on their heads…..
TwiNj- oww!!

Twinkle- Aao Raja, yahan baitho , by my side….
Uv thinks–Teri paas toh main hamesha rehna chahta hoon..[ I want to be by your side forever!]
Uv- jaroor..[ yes,Why not?]
Now , when the triple bond got completed again chatting,giggling started…….
Kunj-Mujhe Twinkle ke paas rehna itna accha kyu lagta hai? Kahin mujhe twinkle se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya? Nahii ..nahii…Yeh kya soch raha hoon main? Aisa nahi ho sakta…Lekin phir yeh aajeeb si feeling kya hai??[ Why I feel Good when I am with Twinkle? Am I in love with her? No…No….What am I thinking? This can’t happen…But then what is this strange feeling?]
After spending their time at the shore , they start to go back to the orphanage , to freshen up…
While walking Uv seems lost and he is continuously staring Twinkle with love…..
Twinkle- Kya hua Uv? Aise kyu dekh rahe ho? Mai kya bhootni lag rahim hoon? [What happened Uv? Why are you looking at me like this? I am looking like a witch?]
Uv-Haan …. bahut darawni bhootni and he acts like a witch…..aoiii….Main hoon twinkle bhootni…[ Yes…Extremely scary …..]

Kunj is shaking his head in dismay! kunj- Oh God ! yeh doono bhi naa….
Twinkle- accha ? Tum bhi chaalu ho gaye?[ Oh is it ? You also started off… She goes behind his back and pats his back with force ….
Twinkle- yeh loh! [Take this!] but Uv being Uv pulls her up on his back by her arms and starts running giving Twinkle a piggy back ride….
Uv- tuh yeh le !!
Twinkle- haahaa !! Uv chodo !! ….She giggles like a kid …..Kunj is smiling admiring Twinkle and Uv is happy seeing Twinkle happy…..
NOW, THE MUSIC STARTS PLAYING ……..[ Plug in your earphones or listen like that…Song from Purani jeans- Dil Aaj Kal Meri Sunta Nahin…. Do listen to it to go with the flow…]
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi…………

Dil aaj kal paas rehta nahi………..X 2

[The heart doesn’t listen to me these days,
The heart doesn’t live near me these days..]

Ye tujh se hi milne ko chaahe…
Ye teri hi karta hai baatein…
Kya tum ho.. Kya tum ho wahi…Kya tum ho…Kya tum ho wahi ?
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi………. Dil aaj kal….
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi…… Dil aaj kal..

[It wants to meet you only,
It talks about you only..

Are you.. Are you the one?]…………..

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Days passed but still they were unsure if it was love…….

Music Continues……
Yuvraaj and Kunj are seen admiring Twinkle…..They are seen chatting,giggling but something had changed…..the way they both behaved had changed…They were always lost in their dreamworld……….

@ College , instead of paying attention in the class kunj was secretly watching twinkle……but ultimately gets a scolding from the teacher…the teacher became angry as Kunj was smiling innocently…….

Teri aankhon ke raste ye chale jaata hai …………..
Jo bulaaoon main kabhi, laut aata nahi …………..
Bekhabar ye zamaane se takraata hai ………….
Bedhadak mujh se kehta hai ‘Main hoon yoon hi’ …………
Ye tujh se hi mil ke huaa hai Jo teri nazar ne chhuaa hai………..
[Through your eyes it goes..
When I call it, doesn’t come back..
Carefree, it fights the world.
fearless, it tell me “I am like that only”..
It has happened after meeting you only,
that your sight has touched me.]
Kya tum ho,
Kya tum ho wohi Kya tum ho, Kya tum ho wahi.. Dil aaj kal…….

MUSIC CONTINUES……
At the orphanage Twinkle is seen playing with the kids there….Yuvraaj was looking at the innocence which twinkle had on her face…..
Uv- Yaar ! Kya karun main?? Mujhe Twinkle se pyaar hone laga hai ………[ God! What do I do ?? I am falling in love with her……..]

Hai hunar ek naya is ko tujh se mila Muskura ke ye milta hai sab se abhi …..
Aadhi raaton mein mujh ko ye
deta utha Mujh se pooche
ye raatein kyun kaT-te nahi
[It has got a new skill from you,
Now it smiles and meets everyone.
In the middle of nights, it wakes me up,
and asks me why nights don’t pass.]
Ye tujh se hi milne ko chaahe
Ye teri hi karta hai baatein
Kya tum ho, Kya tum ho wohi
Kya tum ho, Kya tum ho wohi..
Dil aaj kal…………….

MUSIC ENDS….with TwiNjRaj in the church…..
Kunj- God!! I have fallen in love with my Sherni…..he smiles…..Main is Jhalli se pyaar kar baitha….Mujhe pata nahi tha ki main apni bahut se bhi bahut acchi dost se pyaar kar baithunga…Bas abb Twinkle ko apne dil ki baat bata donga, Army Academy join karne se phele…..God ! Aap hamesha is par apni blessings banaye rakhna….[ God! I have fallen in love with my Sherni…I have fallen for this crazy girl…I did not know that I would ever fall in love with her….Now , i will confess my feelings to her before joining the Army Academy ..God! Shower your blessings upon her..]
Uv- Kitni ajeeb baat hai naa? Muhje sach mein twinkle se pyaar ho gaya hai…..Now, I can happily say that I have fallen for my real life baby doll…..
Twinkle-Thank you God ! for everything that you gave me…Thank you for giving me a family…Thank you for bringing joy in my life…God ! shower your blessing upon these two..and may we remain like this forever…..

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A lot of time had passed during this phase , they had completed their studies, given their exams…only their convocation ceremony was left which was nearly a week away…..
KuVi had decided since their childhood that they would serve their Motherland….And wouldl be called SOLDIERS so they had decided to join Army Academy in Goa after their Graduation…………

TO BE CONTINUED……
PRECAP- Graduation Day…..KuVi’s dilemma………………….

So guys .. here I end this part….share your views on it …..And one important thing …People please comment…it won’t take forever to comment.See i have taken this as a relationship between a reader and a writer and for this relationship to work 100% I need your support , If i am writing here it’s my 95% effort and 5% effort you have to put in as a reader … Writers do feel bad when they do not get desired comments and feed-backs then we have to end our ffs because we think you don’t like them. Frankly speaking when writers used to end their ffs i used to think chalo kya hai yeh? comments ke liye beg kar rahein hain , sympathy ke liye end kar rahein hai ….but no I was totally wrong I have realised this thing after being a writer myself.I have seen people commenting on the posts written by their friends only and not on new writer’s posts. It won’t take much to comment and no I am not begging for comments or something like that but I am just talking with you all and expressing my views….so feel free to give your feed-backs ,tell me if don’t like anything , criticize but constructively not destructively …… .I think I have spoken a lot and it’s time to say goodbye…
Byeeee………..
See you all soon…..

34 comments

  1. Sameera

    Sameera

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    Wow yaar cheena amazinggggg loveddddddd it sooooooooooooooo much yaar 😍😍😍😘😘😍😍😍😘😘😘😍😍😍…haayeeee ek kudi 😛😛😛…aur 2 bande bhtt na insaafi hai 😂😂😂😂…
    Well loveddddddd each n every scenes twinj twiraj everything can’t wait for next one …
    😛😛😛😘😘😘😍😍😍😍…
    Do post whenever u get time ..
    ✋✋✋✋✋👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

  2. Purvi128

    Purvi128

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    Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry…!!!
    I m sooooo sorryyy Cheenu (can i call u that?) Actually na tumne delha hi hoga.. me kisi bhi post pe comment nhi ker rahi thi…. pata mhi kitny din hogaye… something happened bcoz of which I was depressed that’s why wasn’t reading or writing anything…!!!
    Is liye sorry for not commenting….!! I m feeling very guilty..! Really sorry yrr…!! M sorry… 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
    Wo sb chodo….!!
    This was just mindblowing… kitna cute sweet epi tha….!! I just loved each scene of it.. specially kuvi realizing their love for twinkle…!!
    Ek secret bataun??? Bata deti hun…..!!
    U knw…. I m also a Twiraj fan….!! Mujhe itny pasand hain na wo i can’t tell yrrr….!! In the starting of the show They were so adorable… but when cvs turned uv villain i really didn’t liked that but Zain’s acting made me fall for him…!! His crazy acting.. uff.. But haan yeh tha ke jb kunj ki entry hui to I always wanted twinj.. esa nhi tha ke mujhe twiraj chahiye thy… but i adore them … twiraj were 😍😍😍😍
    Me bhi konsi batein ly ker beth gayiii…!!
    Can’t wait for next…
    Jaldi post kerna…
    Love you ❤❤❤😘😘

    • Cheena2001Cp

      Cheena2001Cp

      |Author

      It’s Ok ☺…No worriers and I am happy that you have read it…Thankyou so much for a lovely comment😳…..And a secret— Initially jab TEI start hua tha, I never watched it , I thought that it would be a crap show..but then one day I saw it when kunj had entered, at that time I used to find him a Villain and inferior to Uv….seriously but then , I started loving his character… And
      eventually Twinj☺…..And no doubt Zain is an amazing actor….
      😘Byee….

  3. Ashitha

    Hey! super.please post the next soon.dont make me wait. I usually rarely comment on tu. That means for me your story is different and unique.so dont feel bad. You are really an amzing writer. 😃😃😃

  4. Zoya9

    Sorry diiiduuuu
    For not commenting on your ff
    As,I have a fever
    The episode was superb se bhi upar
    Loved it to the core
    I think it is a love triangle
    Loved it so much
    Post soon
    Love u ❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Keep smiling ☺☺☺☺☺

  5. Sohi

    Sohi

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    Really a sweet episode
    Loved this love triangle
    But the doubt is to whom twinkle loves

    And yaar sorry for late comment
    Waiting for the next update
    Do continue

    • Cheena2001Cp

      Cheena2001Cp

      |Author

      Thanks Sohi 😘…..you’ll get to know everything slowly,slowly…..koi sorry worry nahi, at least you commented sis😘….Byeee💕

  6. Yashasvi

    Yashasvi

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    Hey pehle toh i cn understand …
    jab cmnts kam ho jaate he toh kitta bura lgta…
    same m was feeling bt yrrr have to write fr the one who support u..
    so u also write……..
    and the ff was amazing …..
    and dear either u make it twinj or twiraj i’ll read it
    b’coz i love u…….

    and vesse ur ff name Humdard….
    makes me remind of the song jo tum mere humdard ho…
    hayee Ek Villian was sooo awsm…

    Keep smiling and stay blessed😘😘💕💕
    LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! 💖💕💖💖💕
    Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Cheena2001Cp

      Cheena2001Cp

      |Author

      Thankyou so much yashu for encouraging..☺ And yes I can say that now you have got a little hint from the title…smart haa??😁….I will not end it because it’s all preplanned and definitely I am not going to waste that…😘Byee yashu….

  7. Sidmin ki sadia

    aapko pata bhi hai ki mein aap ke ff ka kab se wait karri thi finally you posted luv u.
    Fabulous. Epi
    Mazza aagya lekin ek question hai ki twinkle kis se pyaar karti hai uv ya kunj ?
    Bahot confusion hai lekin next epi mein confusion. Clear kardena

    • Cheena2001Cp

      Cheena2001Cp

      |Author

      You made my day with your lovely comment!! Thank you 😃😃….aur haa ….saree confusion will be cleared…Maybe…😉….
      Byee ….😘

  8. nrk

    nice….
    loved it..
    waiting to see how this love triangle going to work
    post next epi asap

  9. msmahi

    amazing mindblowing cheenu😍😍😍
    srryyy yrr late ho gayi cmt karne me par kya karu itna kaam h maaf kar de aapni iss badi sis. ko sryy
    post soon
    luv u😘😘😍

  10. Baby

    Baby

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    hayeeeeee prabhu pranam aapko charan kahan hain aapke…….♥
    kya likhti hai yaar tu :O
    I mean srsly I am in love wid ur writings ♥
    uffff kuch jyada hi yrrr……♥
    loved it soooooo mch iss apni bhn ko maaf krde ki yeh late hai busy thi wid scul……♥
    aaj chutti par hun……voh bhi pata hai kun kunki mei late ho gayi uthne mei hahahahaa…bevakoof hun mein kitni uffff……..♥
    srsly loved it alotttt……♥♥♥
    osm ♥
    cute ♥
    n gonna b soooo emotional pata nahi kya hoga…….♥
    kunj yrrr m myself in a big wala dilemma ♥
    srsly do post nxt asap I cant wait at all…….♥
    love u sooooooooo mch ♥
    muaahhhhhh ♥♥♥♥

    • Cheena2001Cp

      Cheena2001Cp

      |Author

      Meri Khushi ke maare death hi ho gayi!!😳😳😳…Thank you soooo much!!😘😘…..I am so happy that you are liking it !…Keep encouraging like this baby jii,…aur haa sorry wali koi baat nahi Hai 😘…Byee….lots of love to you…💕💕

  11. Virat_ki_adeeba

    Virat_ki_adeeba

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    Sorry for this much late commenting cp my exams r going on..hpe u understand my problem dear😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
    Now about the episode it’s really amazing yrr and wah love triangle😉😉😉😉 interesting but twinki kisko pyaar krti h???
    Chal ab jaldi se post krdo plzz
    And about ur note i really understand ur situation even i suffered from it nd how it feel i can understand..
    No problem write fr those who love ur ff..
    Biee
    Tc.
    Love u..

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