Humdard (Episode 6, Last)

Episode 6 (Last)

They hugged each other
Pal Do pal ki kyun hai zindagi
Is pyaar ko hain sadiyan kafi nahin
Sanskar wiped his tears n looked up at sky
Tu khuda se mang loon muhlat mein ek naye
Rehna hai bas yahan ab door tujh se jana nahin
Sanskar tight his grip on her back
Jo tu Mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Both were crying n sharing their grief with each other
After some time they broke the hug n kissed her forehead ……….. sanskar kept his hand on swaras shoulder
Sanskar : lets go its too late now
Swara wiped her tears n nodes ok
They went inside shut the door

In Room
swara was sitting on bed n sanskar was drinking water
Swara : by the way sanskar ur proposal was so boring
Sanskar stopped drinking n looked at her : ohh really???
Swara : yes I thought u will propose me like prince
Sanskar : ahan I can lets try again
Swara : no no if my decission gets change wht will u do
Sanskar : I know u cant change ur decission because u love me so stop all this n lets go to sleep ……. we have to do so much preparation for tomorrow
He lye on bed n also made her lye beside him
Now swasan were lying on bed …….. sanskar was trying to sleep but swara was looking at fan
n smiling ……… then she stared sanskar whos eyes were closed
Swara : by the way sanskar wht will we do after marriage
Sanskar smiled n opened his eyes : ann… I will go office daily n u will wait for me …… then I will come back at evening …… we will fo lunch together then……hmmm….. in night
He gave an evil smile ……. swara was unaware about his attentions
Swara : in night wht???
Sanskar went closed to her ear n whispered : in night I will whtever I want (he winked)
Swara punched his chest : besharam 😛 😛
Sanskar : really now I will tell u how besharam Im….
He dug his face in her neck n started kissing her neck
Swara laughed : sorry sanskar I was kidding sorry
Sanskar : gud next time dont call me besharam …….. lets sleep now
Both slept in each other embrace ……..
Next Morning
Sun rays fell on sanskar n disturbed his sleep ……. he woke up n saw his life beside him …… he kissed her forehead n carefully got up ………he got ready n went down for preparation
After some time swara woke up ……. she touched sanskars side but no one was there …. she got up n searched him every where in room but he was not in room ………. she became scared …… ran out side ……… she was shocked to saw the decoration of house ……… all the servants were busy ……… her eyes were just searching him …….. after some time she listened his voice 4rom back …….. she turned back …….. there she saw her life…….. who were busy in lighting the house ……… he was happily doing all this ……. a smile appeared on swaras face while starring him busy ……. she slowly moved towards him n put her hand on his shoulder
Swara : sanskar y r u doing all this yeh sab kar lein gy
Sanskar : swara its my way to show my happiness
Swara : I know but stop it now
Sanskar : swara I dont have a family thats y Im doing all this
Swara : sanskar Im ur family na so dont say that again
Sanskar smiled : ok fine but plzz let me do all this buht sara kaam para hai …….. u just go n get ready for me 😉 😉
Before swara can leave sanskar caught her hand n pulled her towards him n whispered
Sanskar : swara …
Swara : hmmm
Sanskar : nothing I just wanna say that ……. I LOVE U 🙂
swara blushed n he left her ……….. she ran to the room n locked the door

In Evening
That ws time of swasan wedding all the guests were joining them on their special day …………. sanskars best friends their wifes …….. sanskars relatives n employs all r present n waiting for the bride to come n start the rituals of wedding
Sanskars masi (as Ap) : sanskar where is ur bride tell her to come down na
Sanskar : yes anti she is just coming ……. let me call her
He went to the room n knocked the door
Sanskar : swara it been 3 hours u r getting ready come out na everyone is waiting
Swara : then wait na just coming today is my dream coming true I want to make it my best day
Sanskar : waoo swara that mean u wanna kill me
Swara : shut up im just coming wait for 5 min
Sanskar : ok sweet heart Im waiting ….. he left
Swaras Room (in chubara)
Aapi bi was sitting on floor with swaras money box n crying……….. while she was crying aama bi entered inside
Aama bi : today is her marriage with sanskar
Aapa bi : nai ho gi……
Aama bi : how u know
Aapa bi : do u forget ….. me too faced the same at her age ……. lakshman took me out 4rom this world …….. u know wht I thought now Im free no one can send me in this hell again …….. but I was wrong……. do u forget aama bi wht all happened with me …… at that my aapa bi gave me that bottle n said when this world disrespect u n deny to accept u na then drink this n if u cant do this then come back………. I did not have courage to drink thats y I came back ……….,. But I know swara will drink that …….. because she is so brave ……. aama bi today is not her wedding ……. today is her death day …….. I wish I can save her 4rom this society but I cant …….. I cant aama bi
She cried n aama bi consoled her …..

In Maheshwari Mention
Swara got ready n came out 4rom the room …….. sanskar got mesmerize to saw her ………. she was looking like an angel …….. she wore red lehnga with half shirt ………. her royal jewllery giving her an elegant look …….. no one can take her eyes off 4rom her face ………. sanskar forgot to blink ……… after some time sanskar came back n sens n broke the silence ……….. he went ner swara n hold her by waist n introduced her with everyone
Sanskar : here is my would be wife swara …..
A man : I have seen her some where
Swara became nervous n hold sanskars hand
2Nd Man : let me think ……. hmmm…….. husan aara …… she is husan aara a pr*stitute …….. I have spend a night with her ……. her beauty omg I still remember
Sanskar fumes n anger n pressed swaras hand tightly …….. he was about to beat him ……. but swara stopped him n whispered
Swara : sanskar Its my past :'( :'( :'( ………. u cant change it
Sanskar : how can she say all that
1st men : ya husan aaraa ……..(he came near her)…….. do u remember me??? ………. we spend a night in that hotel ……….. ohh ya u cant remember …. I mean u spend nights with so many men na ……..
Ap hold sanskars hand n pulled him : is she really pr*stitute ?????? is true sanskar
Sanskar : masi it was her past y u all r making n issue ???
Ap : its an issue sanskar she is a dirty women leave her hand
She separated their hand
Sanskar : masi I love her n u know wht that was her compulsion to do all that
Swara was just stood like a statue ………… she did not know wht was happening around her………. only one sentence were trumpeting in her ears (she is a dirty women )
While sanskar was arguing rahul put more oil on fire
Rahul : exactly I was saying the same …….. she is a garbage ……… but masi he ignored me even beat me yesterday in mall
Sanskar : u just shut up rahul ……. I will kill u if u say a word against her (he went near her n put his hand on swaras shoulder ) I told u all that it was her compulsion ……..she was not enjoying all that
Ap rushed towards him n jerked his hand 4rom her shoulder : sanskar u mother gave ur responsibility to me I will not allow u to do this mistake n dont touch her she is a doxy
Then she moved towards swara : n u strumpet listen to me stay away 4rom my son ………… u r not compatible for my son u r a escort n my son is an honest person ………… u r a lady of the evening n we used that time for sleeping ……. our family is an honorable family so plzz for the sake of God spare us
Swara was just looking at her n like a lifeless body her heart was terribly lacerate n her head was torn with ambivalent …… her dreams were shattered …….. she put her hand on her ears n ran to the room
Sanskar : swara …… listen …
But swara locked her self in room …………. before sanskar can follow Ap hold his hand but sanskar jerked her hand
Sanskar : masi u r a women how can u say all this to a women ……… tell me who wants to sale her dignity no one ……… if she was doing thats mean she has a reason behind it
Ap : sanskar I dont want to listen anything …….. she is a doxy n I will never accept her as my DIL
Sanskar : n I will marry her in front of ur eyes n will prove that I pr*stitute can also settle her house better than a common girl
In Room
Swara locked the door n fell on her knees she cried her heart out ………… then she remember something ……. she rushed towards the cup board n took out a bottle
Flash Back
When swara was leaving with sanskar 4rom chubara aapa bi stopped her
Aapa : swara when this society will not accept u na at that time u have only two ways ……… come back to me or drink this …….. when I was on ur place na my aapa bi give me this ……. I choose this world because I did not have courage to drink it …… now its ur turn …….choice is urs
Flash Back Ends
Swara : aapa bi u did not have courage thats y u accepted that life but I have ……
She opened the cap of bottle n drink it ………… sanskar was beating the door but no response ……….. after 1 min she opened the door ………. sanskar cupped her face n wiped her tears
Sanskar : r u ok swara ???? Dont listen to them ……. just trust me
Swara : sanskar I wanna say something
Sanskar : han swara say
She slowly went in the middle of the house
Swara : sanskar u want to know na y was I doing that work ……..
Sanskar : swara leave it …… its our wedding time
Swara : I was just 15 years old when my father died n mother got married again…….. I thought I got a father again ……… he used to play with me but one day I got to know about his bad attentions on me ………. I started maintaining distance with …..but failed because one day my maa left me n went out of city ….. at night he came in my room ………
Swara closed her eyes …… tears were continuously shedding 4rom her eyes ……. she screamed : ahhhh …….. aahhhhhhh I wanted to screamed like but … he put his hand on my mouth
Swara : that was the first person who attacked on my dignity ………. then he knew very well that I will tell my mother about it that y we took me there
Flash Back
Swara was crying in her room his step father came near her
S.F : swara stop crying now n if u tell this to ur mother na then I will kill u
Swara : I will maa ….. u forced me
He slapped her ……… I will not leave u now ……. he hold her hand n pulled her …….. then he tied her hands n feet with rope n threw swara in car
After some time he stopped the car n untied her then he pulled her towards a place ……. that was so dirty place ……. swara had never seen anything like this …….. then he threw her down in the feet of an old lady
S.F : take her n give me money
That women hold swaras face n made her looked up …… swara screamed in pain n tried to released her self
Lady : gud ….. how much money u want for this fresh flower
S.F : 2 lacs
Swara did not know wht us happening with her ………… that women gave 2 lacs to her step father n he left ……
Lady screamed : amaa bi ….. aama bi
Another woman came out 4rom the house : yes madam
Lady : take her inside ……. she is new member of our family
Aama bi : ok
She took swara inside n cleaned her face n changed her dress
Swara : I want to go back to my maa …… she must be worried for me plzz leave me
Aama bi : now forget ur mother beti ……. because u came in a prison
Swara : plzzz I wanna go back its a dirty place Im not a girl like this
while swara was requesting her that old lady came inside
Lady : do u wanna go??
Swara : yes
Lady : I have paid 2 lacs for u ….. give me 1 lac n go 4rom here
Swara : I dont have money
Lady : then do wht ever I say………. aama bi make her ready n send her for dance classes
Present
Swara started dancing : n she taught me dance there same like this …… (she showed some dance moves ……… after some time she stopped her dance )……. then she one night first time they made me ready as a bride
Flash Back
Aama bi made her ready like a bride : swara beti welcome to our world ……. today its ur first night with ur first client
Swara : means???
Aama bi told her : mean 4rom now u will spend every night with a night
Swara immediately stood up n stepped back : wht r u saying …… I will not do anything like this
At that time old lady came inside : really u will not do????
Swara : yes I will not do
He came near swara started beating her : now ….. tell will u do or not
Swara cried n screamed in pain : leave me …… maa plz save me ….
Then she put duppata on swara n took her out 4rom n send her with a man
Present
From that day ….. that lady killed swara n give a birth to husan aara …… n after her death aapa bi took her seat………. swara was crying ……… then she started screaming again
Swara : is it my sin that my father died …….. is it my sin that bl**dy man sold me ……… is it my sin that lady charged money for my dignity tell me everyone……… y u all r silent now answer me ….. wht is my fault …….. today I thought I will kill that husan aara again ……but aapa bi was right we pr*stitutes cant change our past ……
Then she came near Ap : one more question …….. if Im a dirty doxy n sanskar will became dirty by touching me then y all men want me at night on their beds ????
Then she moved towards rahul : u all men used us for ur lust ….. then y u call us garbage ????
Swara : this society made me hussan aara n now if I want to become swara so Im dirty …….. where were u all when I was becoming hussan aara …… u all did not protest at that time ………tell me……… answer me …… anyone have answers of my questions ????
Everyone were silent ….. swara felt dizzy n was about to fall sanskar hold her : swara Im with u……. I have promised na I will never leave u
Swara touched sanskars face : sanskar u r a very good person …….. forget me n move on in ur life …… sans….kar …… I love u ….. I love u so much ….. u r my first n last love ….. I will love till my last breath n also after my death …..
Sanskar : swara listen ….. we will get marry
At that time a drop of blood came out 4rom swaras mouth n she felt vomit ……. she stood up n threw out all her blood by her mouth ……. then she fell on floor ……. sanskar hold her n put her head on his lap ..
Sanskar : swara wht have u done with u??
Swara : I ate poison ……. sanskar u gave me happiness of my life so I preferred death on that dirty life …… sanskar …. I …l..o…v…e….u…. thud
She smiled n died in sanskars embrace

Sanskar screamed : swara ……, swara….. open ur eyes …. swara I love u too …… I cant live without u…..Swaaaara😭😱

Sanskar turns back…nd goes to ap…

sanskar: happy😢…r u happy now…ya u must be…u get it what u want…today all of u must be happy….(poiniting to everyone standing there)..u know what today i will tell u the truth….the truth is that.. she is not unpure😳….unpure r all of u who r standing here…who were cursing her….u all r unpure from your heart….nd u (pointing at ap)….i feel shame to having a relation with u…i think u as my mother…nd what u did😢..u snatched my life..my happiness…my love….my swara😭😭……this is not suicide this is a murder…. nd u know who r the muderers…? u.😳…..u all r her murderers😳😳😳….because of u i lose her😭😭😭 (he broke down)…..nd if my swara is not in world..the whats my use to be alive..😳…

Ap.: sanskar!!😳😳 no sanskar u cant do this…

Sanskar: no i will…

he turns back nd take the poison bottle which was in swara’s hand..nd drinks the remaining poison….

Sanskar: 😢😢…swara i have said na…i will leave u….i will always be your HUMDARD…then how can i broke my promise….your sanskar is coming swara…your sanskar is coming….for u..for us…for our promise….. your humdard is coming…..😭😭😭

he lay down beside swara….holds her hand…take her in her embrace nd take his last breath😢…..

finally both move to other world where is only there love..no society..no bad peoples..no taunt..only love..😍

END OF OUR SS…..

The End

First of all thank u so much for giving an amazing response to our bold concept ……… we were so nervous while writing this but u guys made this story so special for samadi………………. I know u all must be angry on swaras death but …. its reality of our society …… no one accept these type of women ….. we wrote this story of a girl whos wish was only to get love n get rid 4rom that dirty place …… at the end she got freedom but people did not accepted her thats y she attempted suicide we cant give it a happy ending because its a tragic story n it will look non realistic also …….hope u like it….plz silent readers comment today…..this ss is really close to our heart……today is the last part feeling sad😞😞😞😞😞😞….anyways today waiting for all of your comments…share your views..about our ss…the scene u like the most??….nd everything…whatever is in your mind

Credit to: Anu

12 comments

  1. Jj

    Hi,this is nice,really I will the story I am crying. Because how cruel this world all man can do dirty deed but they only give name for girl as prostitude and unpure,how bad these mans are chii..but good ending

  2. Jwala

    |Registered Member

    really true .. awesome ending.. all stories may not have a happy ending. . it is hard to get justice to swara. because our society will not accept an impure girl. it was so realistic. I’m happy that at least sanskar loved her and she got little joy in her life. . well done. come with other ff

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