HumDard – chapter 7

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*DARKNESS*

Immeresed in the darkness of empty walls as the fear settled in their minds, Radhika and Sam were scared, confused, broken, in tears at the same time. The hope that remained in them was that their heroes will come to protect them, it was the only hope that was untouched. Both were unaware of everything happening and wondered why were they here when they were supposed to be with their family. Finally, Sam mumbled something. It was unclear but was clear enough for Radhika to hear.

“Chas…chasni I told you to stay then why did you run behind goons?” Sam said still shivering with cold fear.

Closed eyes as tears ran down the cheeks, they remembered everything that happened a while ago.

*BAD TIMES*

Thud!!

“Sam what happened? Are you okay?” Radhika turned around to see her as she heard some kind of unusual noise.
She was shocked to hell as she saw her with mans taking her in arms, near the window. Sam kept struggling in their arms and started beating them. Radhika saw this, and came running towards her.

“Who are you all? And put Sam down”

As Radhika’s delicate body came in between the struggle, one of the men pushed her hard on the floor. Her head started to bleed. One of the man, took out his phone and hurriedly called someone.

“Boss, you said there is only one lady to kidnap but their is also other one” the man spoke as still struggling with Sam.

“What?” the voice came from other side.

“Get her also then” the voice replied in sullen tone from other side.

“Chas…chasni go away…runnnnn.”

*TWO DEVILS TOGETHER*

As they looked deep into each other eyes, someone kept walking towards them. Their faces turned around to see that person without any movement of their attacted bodies to chair and rope all around.

“Nandini di you here” Radhika asked as she was completely shocked.

“Yes me…Missed me?” Nandini replied with a mock smile on her face.

“So you came back to create havoc in our lives again” Sam said with that angry stare and red face.

“Oh Sam dear, now you know about everything. Well yeah you should know everything by now. But don’t worry, this time I won’t create any problems in your life” She replied back with the mock smile on her face again. That mock smile and expressions showed that she was again upto something. But what?

“And Radhika, my sweet bhabhi, I have a gift for you” Nandini added.
Radhika simply frowned at her.

“Arey you are excited for your gift”
Nandini pointed someone to come inside.

“See Radhika, your gift” she continued.
But Radhika still didn’t turn around and kept her head fixed with that frown.

“Arey look at your lover” she said, as she got a hold of her chin and turned her face towards him.

“Saral!” Radhika said with a complete shock.

“Radhu did you miss me? I missed you a lot. And now I will never leave you. And are you excited for marriage?” Saral looked into her tearful eyes and grinned evilly.

“Marriage” Radhika gasped out with tears gently rolling down her cheeks.

“Yes, don’t you remember? Our marriage. And the good news is today no one will stop us.”

*BROKEN HEARTS*

“Mom don’t worry, we both will bring Sam & Radhika back” Neil assured her.

Piyali nodded while having tears in her eyes.

“Neil, can we go now?” Arjun grumbled.

Neil nodded at him, and both left the house. They both went in search of their Sam & Radhika.

*WHERE IS SHE?*

Few hours passed but still no clue of them. Neil & Arjun looked almost to all the possible places for them. Arjun was just hating himself because of this continuous fear of losing her again. This fear just shook him completely. Why did the fate always used to laugh at him and eyes only used to have tears? Tears ran down, down to the depth of hearts.

He took a deep breath and drove recklessly on rough roads. Finally, he reached his destination.

He knocked on the door. A old man opened the door and was shocked as hell to see him. He was very shocked (??). Arjun didn’t wanted to create any fights. He was already so tired.

“Kaka, I know you know where is she!” Arjun said.

“Wh…who she?” the old man eyes opened widely but didn’t dare to look into his eyes.

He folded his hands in front of him and almost begged him to tell the truth.

He says “please kaka, I beg you to tell me. Please!” He now had tears in his eyes.

“Please!” he pleaded.

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After he left, Rana kaka immediately dialled Nandini’s number.
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That’s it for today….ugh I’m soo sorry for not explaining this last part…it’s like I only gave a brief summary … if any questions regarding this update then do ask me….pls forgive me for typos and grammatical mistake…I think today’s chapter is useless….I just donno what I wrote…and there is a shock…but in upcoming chapters…sorry it was a short update…pls do give me ur feedbacks guys…luv u all ????

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Credit to: Ameena

57 comments

  1. aastha

    Finally an ff…….i ve been up all night ? bcoz I wanted to upload sme files and ten send it to my beloved…….so I ws checking every nw n ten jst to see if anyone hd updated bt to my great sorrow nobody did………finally I saw tis….i jst hd finished reading all humdard episodes once again …..n i ws vry happy ? to see it ………

    Ammu y s tis a short 1 ??????r u soooo busy????????plzzz update nxt part dearie n NVR tell tat it s a waste………tere ws another ardhika story wich u started n din complete ir update any mre……plzzzupdate tat too if u ve time………

    Lve u…..❤ and gud mrng ? dear (wat a girl i am wishing gud mrng last….sry)

    • Ameena

      Aastha yaar thank u soooo muchhhh…. oh my love u made my day… I sometimes wait for whole day to come here…and when I see no update..feel like my day is not complete…not at all… yeah this one is veryy veryy short…sorry dear actually I wanted to write more..but then I just stopped….no I am not busy at all…I am sick…high fever….and tooo lazyyyy….Nd my other story heart 2 heart…hmm actually I wanted to write more for that…but then u guys were like where is ur humdard?…so I thought to update this soon…but don’t worry I’m not going to leave that one…I will definitely update that one….anyways bye…tc n luv u ?????

  2. Rg

    Hi nice. Thou a bit short I suppose. As u have left it as a cliff hanger can u plz update it soon?? Hope radhika is fine.

  3. manju

    u nicely carried the original track……….
    i thought u left it dear
    pls update whenever u can and entertain us with your story

    update next part very soon with long update darling

    we will meet u with another update of your story until then take care………….keep smiling dear……………

    • Ameena

      Manju dear thanks for commenting… Yeah I will try my best to update soon and entertain u all…next time will try to make it long…will meet u soon…luv u ???

    • Ameena

      Well don’t worry…wait for next update nd u will get to know everything…yeah nandini is kinda mad…no I think puri ki puri pagal hai…thanks for commenting…luv u ???

  4. mittu

    gud mrng…….. ameena, well done dear i lov ur update…… keep it up…….. and also am new hear. i was a silent reader. kya aap log mujhe bhi aapki frnds group mein add karogi kya…. plsss………… I lov ur frndship……….. hai everyone……..

    • Ameena

      Mittu thank you soooo muchhhhh….for coming out of silence….ofcousre u r in our friends group….hum sab dost hain yehan toh tum bhi hamari dost…luv u ????

    • manha

      mittu once u enter this manmarziyan ki galliyaan then u r a member of this mad group girl. so u r already our friend. Actually we hav to thank u making mad n crazy people as ur friends. loveeee u .

      N as our sweet nishuuuuuuu says

      ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND

  5. Shree

    Amuu!! What did you do? Nandini ko kya ho gaya? And Saral?! He wants to marry Radhika?! What’s going on?! Arjun and Neil find your princesses soon…. I hate it when Arjun has that fear…. God I feel like crying…

    Aye .. No don’t say that… Not useless… Never say that…. I was a pretty update… Cute one… I’m waiting eagerly for the next one… ??

    Please take care…. Don’t stress much…. Love you loads…. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug… ??

    • Ameena

      Shreeeeeeeee….
      Thanks a lot…nandini pagal ho gayi hai…. aur saral ki tension mat lo…woh bohot jald bhaag jaye ga….yeah me 2 hate it when arjun get that feeling ..and don’t cry pls…I will try to update sOOn…luv u n tc..???

  6. Manha

    Amu plz sorry mat bolo ab tum. You updated even though ur health is bad. Thats very much enough. N don’t worry of story. It is superbly explained n u gave each detail clearly. Last part i know u will it clearly in next part.
    I think saral is a physco, some brain screws r loose. Don’t know what he thinks n nw nandu is with him. Oh god why is this happening. I know heroes will come. Bechara arjun, tum log use itna kyun rula rahe ho.
    Plzz amu take care of ur health. Eat healthy,stay healthy, keep smiling. Lots n lots n lots of love.

    • Ameena

      Manhaaaa dear thanks alot for not only commenting but being such a good friend… yess saral is a physco…things are going to be more complicated in next update…

      Pata hai mein chate hoon ke abhi ke abhi puri ki puri story baata doon…but I can’t do that…wait karna aur wait karwana meri aadat hai…kiya karo aadat se majbor hoon…anyway I donno y I am saying this to u but I just wanted to….anyways luv u sooo much…tc…???

  7. nisha

    hey ammuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    how r u dear ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    ooh laa laa dear what an episode I love to see this nandani di and the evil devil saral here. some spice gonna add in the story and its become more tasty

    Well some day I get the recipee for sure . and we both gonna make our manmarziyaan with each other.

    Loved the update totally dear seriously I love the nandani special line miss me ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    Maar dala dear totally fully like .

    Meri jaan, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm you are saying sorry , sorry for what

    You give update late but what a fadoo update you didn’t update on page but making it till now in your mind each and every scene was very well narated dear .

    LOve u my jaanemann how r u I hope you are fine dear now . Or not if toh arjun and radhika see bol doo they will take care of you after all we have strong relation with them what say my jaanemann.

    Love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much meri jaan by heart

    You don’t know that how much I am happy to see ur fff today dear . I know u are smiling now.

    Kisikee nazar naa lage

    LOve u dear

    Keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Ameena

      Nishuuuuuuuuuu..
      O my cute nishuuuuuu….
      I’m fine, I guess…well not that much fine…high fever…my face is completely a laal tamatar…in other words I’m looking like a joker… thank u soooooo much….do u remember what manha once said? THAPPAD SE DARR NAHI LAGTA PYAAR SE LAGTA HAI….aur tumhara pyaar itna meetha hai….ke pata nahi kya ho jaye ga mujhe ab…. yaar arjun n radhika are taking a very good care of me…bilkul tumhari tarah…yess I am smiling a lot now after reading soo beautiful comments…luv u soooo much…yess once a friend, always a friend….tc dear…????

  8. nisha

    hey mittu dear wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo w

    first thing first what a name dear such a cute name mittu loved it totally
    secondly there is no charge to came in the group nor you need any permission dear to came in the group

    The bond is Manmarziyaan which bring us all together and which connect us all in a group .

    So you are already in the group when you commented first dear meri jaan.

    And yaa if you came in the group so you need to stay meri jaan mittu

    We want to meet u again and again our sweetheart friend silent reader mittu.

    Vaada kiya hai nibhaana padega

    yeh dosti ka rishta hai nibhaana padegaa

    Love u meri jaan always

    Keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

  9. nisha

    helloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

    HOw r u deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    manhu dear love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mucg

    helooooooooooooooo aasthu dear

    Love u allllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll so much

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend

    • Richa(titli)

      oyeeeeeeeeeeee pikachu were r ur nd nattys updatesssssssssss????????????????????????????????????
      AMEENA super yaaaaarrr its after long i read ur fic….
      nd pikachu a flame thrower on u nd natty 😛

    • daizy

      Hey nishu dear….why are you not updating your story…. I really miss it…and I miss interacting with you too…….I feel very happy after reading your comments..n after talking with you…. I m not commenting daily here….that why miss you more…… Howz your life going dear……keep smiling dear…. And always stay happy…. Bcoz I like my joyful nishu….love u dear…..

  10. Surabhi

    Hi guys ..I’m a silent reader of mmz…ff.. All d ff ver choo cute ..loved it….thank u guys fa making mmz more memorable.. Loved it …love u guys….

  11. Daizy

    Hey ameena…wat an episode dear………n why are you saying that it’s useless…. It’s not at all like that…. I m really loving your story….plzz don’t say like this…… Saral and nandini’s entry made this More interesting….. I m really excited to see what is going to happen next…. Plzz make arjun and Neil to save their lady love before anything happens… I m eagerly waiting for next…. Plzz come soon with a long update…..

    • Ameena

      Daizy thanks a lot for ur support…ur comments n ur support make my day…well u r gonna see what will happen next soon….I will try to comeback with a long update….luv u????

  12. nisha

    hey daizy dear how r u meri jaanemann Love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear totally

    yes me too miss it dear but what a zaalim time dear in my life need time a little to came but try to meet you all

    Really love u dear daizy I too want to give u so much but the zaalim time is not allowing me to came dear but somehow I run away from there soon dear love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much meri jaan. yes a little sweet and a little sour my life is going like that .

    But still we all love our life . After all we have to live it then why we cry all the time sometime we all need to laugh a lot cry a lot .

    This is what we called a perfect life one day cry one day smile and another day came here to see all ur names and get a wide smile on my face .

    Luv u meri jaanemann.always by heart

    keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

    hey my poky richu dear how r uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    really miss u a lot dear yes I am saying it right dear its been a week and I am to continuously coming to eht but waha thoda mausam gumsum hai nobody is there nor friends nor ur ff dear
    but still ahope to meet u well I read all ur spoilers of swaragini also and they are awesome showsome yaar meri jaan how r u dear
    yes naty is on a trip for sometime but when I can see her name anywhere no matter where I catch her coz I also miss my deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.
    and time to time try to meet u all coz

    Once a friend always a friend. Luv u poky richu Keep smiling dear always love u by heart

    and yeah once again

    Once a friend always a friend

    hey surbhi heloo dear a silent reader again wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow heloooo dear how r u .
    Very happy to see always silent readers voice as I also in back a silent reader
    This is a request to all silent readers to came forward and speak and fulfil your manmarziyaan in this page

    Its another joy of life to speak your heart here

    luv u surbhi love u by heart dear

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Roma

      O meri nishaaaaaaa, my sweeeeeet musical friendddd, how r uuuuuuuuuuu? Missed you loads…plz update your story meri jaan. …plz post at least a short episode so we can be moving…ek pyaara sa song dedication for you n my alllllllllll deariiiiiiieeess…

      Kacchi kali kachnaar ki todi nahi jaati
      Ek baar ki jo dosti wo todi nahi jaati

      Aur koi bhi Kahani adhuri chhori nahi jaati…my sweeeeeet request…

      Love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh

      • manha

        wah wah. kya kaha hain romaji aapne. dil chura liya. just need nishuuuuu meri jaaan to read n understand it. plzzzzz nishu alllll r waiting for it. plzzz ek baaar phir se time nikaalo aapne in innocent se deariesss par. plzzzz

    • richa (titli)

      mmmm nushuuu yeh zaalim waqt yar butt read last chap winter tail k i just wanted to finish it sooo alll other updates xept ACLS aree gumsum 😛

      • richa (titli)

        nywayss nshu ma updatess ralwayss sooo virAAAn only 1 day cmmnting nd i tooo dnt chk after 1 week thats y i dnt reply 😛

    • Ameena

      Nishuuu well I can understand that time is being very heavy on u…but what to do yaar??…without the dose of ur story…I feel incomplete…my days are incomplete…but I’m very very hopeful that u will update soon…luv u sooooooo much….

  13. Roma

    O ammu my dearrr, it’s superb episode, so much going on looks like watching block buster movie where scenes are shifting from one to another to show what’s happening in that very moment at those places…loved it yaaaaar…n don’t say sorry, this update wasn’t useless at all, itna achhe likha hai…aur wo bhi saare emotions n feelings ke saath that i was watching as reading it…so stop criticizing yourself n be confident…we loveeeee youuuuuu n this story is going really very god…Sam n rads kidnapped by sardini, the threats from them, n ours heroes sorrow, fears, frustration, but courage to get their ladyloves back in the life for forever was awesome…I really appreciate your love for us that being sick you updated this story…but please it’s my humble request take a very good care of yourself n take lots of rest…when feel good then update…we can wait but your good health is most important thing for us…love you loads and very very tight warm hug…keep smiling. .. 🙂

    • AMEENA

      Heyyyyyy my roma dear….thank you for u is not enough at all…. dear those sweet heart touching words always motivated me n always will motivate me…dear I appreciate ur concern for me… I promise I will take a lot of rest as even now I’m lying on my bed…luv u ????

  14. Roma

    Hi manha, daizy, shree, aastha, Rg, liya, richa, natasha, nisha, surabhi, roshni, mittu, manju and maaaaany mooooreeee….how are you honeyyyyyy….take care n keep smiling…love you loads….

  15. manha

    hiiiiiii my dear lovelieeeeesssss. i hope all hav u read MANMARZIYAN- AN OVER VIEW written by our very own sweet heart renu.
    Actually it is like a discussion thread or else like a chat session. whatever u deariessss chose to.
    so please share ur views n feelings on our superb lovely awesome show which kept us bounded to each other like a glueeeee. DOSTI YAARIYAAN MANMARZIYAN

    here is the link to it

    http://www.tellyupdates.com/manmarziyan-an-overview/comment-page-1/#comment-783253

    plz do come n comment.
    u can say anything like fav scenes, explanations, ur views abt the show, abt the characters,…………………………………………………….

  16. Lakshmi

    Hi amu… superb update dear…It’s not atall useless dear…. n arjun thought their would be nandu’s hand in all this.
    Will be waiting for next update..
    love u… take care…

  17. ÃMĖĘŃÅ

    ANd one more question guys…I want to write short story on mmz….do u guys want me to start with it??

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