HumDard – chapter 5


The sky, filled with midday clouds and shining stars of night, made it a classical evening with shades of night and some great unusualness in those wondering hearts. Hate was love, pain was happiness, dream was reality, and two hearts became one. Arjun got a hold of her soft delicate tiny wrist, and her move along with him, close to his heart. They came out of his office and looked around the whole area. Thet saw everyone standing together including sam, neil, piyali, samrat and all other friends. Sam was standing in center with neil holding her hand. Radhika and sam were totally looking into each other’s eyes and then suddenly sam jumped into radhika and gave her a very tight warm hug. The hug was very tight. They both could hardly breathe. Tears silently fall down on radhika’s shoulder. Radhika could feel her pain and tears. She losened the tight hug slightly to see her deep painful eyes.

“Chashniiiiiii!!!!! I’m sorry. I know I shouldn’t ask for forgiveness and I don’t have any right. You suffered so much for me and I treated you like that. I’m sorry!”,sam said with all the redness that settled smoothly on her painful face.
Radhika slowly yet in quick manner wiped her tears and said…

“I’m mad at you sam. I think you don’t even consider me your chashni, do you? If you did then you shouldn’t have said sorry”. After saying this radhika turned a side slightly and folded ber hands. At this sam again hit into her in hug a d said:

“Oh my chashni, you got such a big heart. Without saying anything, you forgived me so easily. You are truly my chashni.” Few soft tears rolled down her cheek but radhika wiped them again. Then neil came and said, “Enough of tears now, I’m bored. Let’s dance and party. I’m also done with preparations also.”

Everyone looks around and sees the whole office decorated. They were all amazed by seeimg this. And then teji comes and says, “Yes let’s party. It’s been alot of days since we danced together.” Sam and radhaika look at eachother and huge smile comes to their face.

The song ‘chitya kalaiya ‘ plays and all of them start dancing except piyali, samrat and arjun. They were standing at side and watching them. Arjun smiled as he looked at her radhika smiling and dancing. Sam came and pulled him towards the group indicating him to dance with everyone. Arjun danced a bit and then collied with each other. They had an eye lock while everyone was dancing. Arjun smiled and she was just staring at him. Others dancing moves broke their special eye lock. Radhika while half dancing and half running came out from there and was standing on a side. Piyali looked at ber from far away and came closer to her. Now she was standing near her and radhika saw her.

“Beta (daughter)…you have a very big heart….a thank you will not be enough now….may god bless you!”,sbe said in a very soft and lovely voice. Radhika turned her face to sam who was still dancing and so did the piyali do.

“Aunty please don’t say thank you. It was my duty to protect sam and it will be always.”,radhika replied still staring at sam.
Piyali gave a pat on her back and smiled. And then she went away from there.

Arjun who was far away from them was listening their whole conversation. As he saw piyali go away, he came near her from behind and softly touched her waist. She could feel his presence and turned around to see him. They both had an eye lock again. But this time a verh deep eye lock. Once again they were disturbed by everyone but now they stood together and arjun still holding radhika’s soft waist. Soon they started to go home as it was already late. Neil and sam went together and everyone left leaving arjun and radhika alone. They were standing awag from each other. Arjun came towards were and her breathe got heavy.

“Radhikaaa..I want to ask you something”,he said.
Radhika didn’t reply but her eyes showed that she want to him to ask.

“Will you able to forgive me for what I did?”, he continued.

“Arjun why are you asking for forgiveness when you didn’t do anything.”she replied.

He was satisfied now that she forgived him and in return he gave her big soft hug. Then made her move along with him, out of the office. They reached his house now. Radhika was very tired after all tbe incidents that happened in the early morning and wanted to jump directly in bed. Arjun was also tired and wanted to sleep. Arjun was in the room waiting eagerly for her. She came and saw him waiting for her. She closed the door from behind and slowly moved towards him. He took her in his arms and moved towards bed.They had an eye lock again and then slowly arjun gave a pat on radhika’s forehead to make her sleep. They both slept togehter in each other arms. And their day ends here, leaving each other close to their hearts forever!


So here is next part….thank you sooouch for support and love…..keepp commenting… u alll 4ever….???


Credit to: ? Ameena ?


    • ? Ameena ?

      Heyyy nisha…thanqu sooooo much for commenting….aww that’s soo sweet of u….I love u dear….u r my everything….???
      One lovee?


    • ? Ameena ?

      Heyy saran…thanquu sooo muchhhh for commenting…will update sOOn….love u dear….keep smiling…???
      One lovee?


    • ? Ameena ?

      Heyyy manha….thank youuuu sooo muchhh for commenting….love u 4ever….???….
      One lovee?


    • ? Ameena ?

      Heyy devi….thanquuu for commenting….love u 4ever…???
      One lovee?


    • ? Ameena ?

      Heyy roshini….thanquuu soo muchhhh for commenting….love ùùù….???
      One lovee?


  1. bhavna

    Hi itna late updt kyu yaar …i egrly wait for ur updt…u tk v long tym to upt..tdys updt ws rwally v we need long updt n fst updt..srry if u got hurt…luv u????

  2. Rg

    Hi nice one ameena. It’s lovely . If possible can u make it longer update ??? I know u have exams so after tat…. Waiting 4 more. All the best for ur exams

  3. Harani

    Wowwwwwww…..luv u dr ….aradhika rockzzzz….ur narration makes it real as if I am watching them …..loads of luv fr u….and giv our aradhika more luv scenes yaar ….nt nly romance …bt emotional scenes too dr …considering it as request ?

  4. Shree

    Ayeeeee !!!! Such a cute update!! Neil decorated so fast?! I loved every part of it …. From start to end… Icing on the cake wala episode… Come back soon with another banging update…

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… All he best for your exams … Bear hug

  5. nisha

    hey ammu dear how r u love u aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lot dear.

    Really missing u and ur humdard a lot dear. Awesome showsome update dear.

    I really love each and every scene feel it by heart dear. I reallly miss this scene in manmarziyaan love u a lot for reviving it dear.

    Meri jaan how r u dear.

    its been time to talk to u dear.
    How’s life going dear my sweet 16 friend . I knw just a lttle more than 16 I read that dear. But love u alwahys by heart dear my ammu you always give lots of hearts to me naa .

    now this one is for you lots of hearts dear.

    love u ammu by heart tight hugs for u dear. Keep smiling always Once a friend always a friend.

  6. Brity

    Hey.. Ameena… My cutie pie…Lovely episode… Just ROCKED it..!!! Keep writing such sweet stories…!!!

  7. ? Ameena ?

    Heyyyyyy guyzzzzzz……thank you sooooooo much for love and support……I love 4ever…the love u all gave me made my every moment soo precious and special….the bond I created over here is the best thing I ever did in life….nd I guess now I umderstand what love means……I want to say u all something…..but before I say it….I hope u understand my situation….I’m forced by someone to end everything…to end this new love friendship…that person is not one of my family member….that is one person from whom I hid this all….I guess he would never understand and see that what happened….everything was fine 2 hours ago….but I guess these hours changed my life….How in the world I’m supposed to end things just like that??….I’m only allowed to write this last message to u guyzzz…..what u all been to me is what anyone else will never be to me….I love u all from my heart…..don’t think I betrayad or think like that if that makes u fine…..I wish this day never came in my life…..It’s not about ending of good times but of my whole life….I will come and read all the ff’s and when I will start typing out my heart in comments I will stop myself…..I will beg him if needed to continue my ff…..I hope u all understand my situation…I’m crying right now…how can someone be soo mean….I guess that’s how ppl are….and that’s what they will be 4ever…..I love u from the heart in me….I love u with every thing in me…..I hope u all never forget me…..I may come back if my fate allows me….I will definitely come back….I can’t live without my life….and I hope he understand this….it be better if he understand this sooner….no one have any right on me to separate me from my heart and my life…..plzzz don’t hate me…..what I made here is something with cannot be explained in words…I’m not lying or joking…I’m sorry guyzzz…bye and hope u all never forget me….love u alll 4ever….???
    Unlimited lovees ????


    • Hayathi

      Ammu what happend dr is there any hurdles in ur life dont worry ma give sometime after that all will be alright keep smile dr…. and plzzzz try to write ur stories

  8. Brity

    Hey.. Ameena… Dear, who is he? Are you married?.. Is he your Husband? Or, he is your Boyfriend??… Why ”He” is doing so?? What Happened?? Don’t say such words that you will never come back…!!! Never say like this…. !!! NEVER EVER…!!! I know even if you can’t write but you are reading our comments… Please don’t cry… Be strong…It’s Just a invisible online friendly advise…

  9. i hope he will understand u some day just be strong ameena……………….!!!!!!!!

    you r our friend, our love…….i will never forget u until my last breath luv uuu 1000 times!!!!!!!!

  10. Lakshmi

    Hey Ameena ,i don’t what happened with u but plz don’t cry yaar .U said he didn’t belong to ur family so he can’t force u to do anything that hurts u.I didn’t mean to continue ur ff or comment but don’t let anyone to compel u to do anything that u don’t want to, with their own decision until they r ur parents or family members.Because they don’t hurt u and gives u right suggestions which r good to u .I wish lots of happieness in ur life and don’t be sad do well in exams .I will never forget u in my life dear…hope u will come back with ur smile .love u amu …love u soooooo much ……one lovee……

  11. ameena

    I’m sorry i will be not able to reply to ur messages from now on . I’m helpless ….sorry….he said he will update my stories..I will write them and he will type it there of course without my fav hearts and all….I will not comment but will secretly come there to read comments… sorry guysss plz understand me n plz don’t take me wrong. i will try to get back to u .
    sorry once again
    one loveeeeeeeeeeeee
    loveeeeee u……….

  12. aastha

    Hey Ameena wat happened?????who s tis guy?????ur bro????or dad?????plzz dnt cry dear…..b strong………..
    . I loved tdays epi vry mch….
    Hope u’ll gt well sooon ‘ll cme bck in all vigour….n spirit… u a lot….

  13. nisha

    hey ammu , I think If the person stops you that means he is important in your life . YOu gave him the right . I think this is the love towards him or her what makes you stoop and understand him or her.

    But nevertheless ammu I totally understand coz u and I on the same boat dear . I know the person try to control you for your good may be in thinking about you dear.

    Its ok may be he or she can think that this place is not safe for a sweet and innocent girl like you always our dear ones think tat . I know.

    But this is the time when you need to tell him or her that this place is not scary or dangerous you are going each and every step with so many precautions you are not sharing here anything about your real life. .

    If the person loves you I am sure he or she will than they understand you. First try to make them understand your situation. Then get permission for just to comment then to write your ff. what ever he or she say yes than your work will be done . Its not difficult my sweetheart nothing is impossible .

    And ya if that person is sit with you . Then I want to tell him or her. Please I really respect your emotions towards ameena but I am also here for quite some time and this place is not dangerous . We are coming here with so many precautions nothing sharing at all from our real life. Me too a girl Sir or Madam,. and Me too love my parents too . And also studying or working whatever you consider and running my life successfully . So please this is a request to you to please let ameena at least came here to live her life to live her heart . to say things that comes straight from her heart.

    Me too a very practical person . But this place is for making friends . We are just friends here. Just sharing our heart that’s it nothing harmful . And we all are of same age . Please understand her vision. And more than that I am with ameena and till that I am with her I am taking the responsibility that she will not share anything personal. . Plz make her come at least make her comment at least . PLease let her come. I am sure you love her so much and just want her happiness . So please give her her happiness. Its a request from my side as a friend of her sir/ Madam,.

    Your’s faithfully

    hey ammu , don’t worry dera, I don’t care situation are good or bad I visit each and everyday here for you . I know you came soon I wait for you my sweetheart ammu. Love u always.

    And yaa don’t cry now. Keep smiling would you forget my line.

    and Once a friend always a friend. Now smile with a hope we will meet soon.

  14. Rg

    Hi ameena plz don’t worry everything will b fine. And nisha tats a beautiful letter . I fully agree with u on tat account. And ameena give a cool of period. And slowly try making tat person understand. Plz don’t cry. And take care. Even if by chance u don’t come back I will always remember u through ur ff. U r special. All ur ffs r too gud. And thank u for such beautiful stories. I hope u I get to read more of ur ffs after a short period. Plz take care. I will pray for u to b bac as soon as possible.

  15. Devga

    Omg aftr this wonderful epi I was like yeaaaahooooo and came very much happy to the comment sessions but to my disappointment now onwards ameena will not comment 🙁 ……

    Ok no prob ameena u take care ….. I will never forget u ….. U try convincing tht person I am sure he will understand ….. Now smile and smile as u r reading my comment …..

    Don’t cry just face the hurdles in ur life strongly ….. Ok don’t ever become weak …. B happy always ….

  16. nisha

    hey ammu how r u dear. I really miss u dear. And I know you came soon dear , here we all miss u a lot dear. All are waiting for your story and especially we all and somehow I am more waiting for you to come dear. soon.

    YOu know you and your bulk hearts lovely and how can we forget ammu secret Who am I ????

    Love u ammu dear, soon we meet each other dear.

    hey ammu dear I think u made this link and if possible then do connect on google community with each and every friend I think this may be suitable with your dear ones talk to them may be they say yes for it.

    Well I try to reach to the community but as of now doesn’t successful some errors are showing dear.

    But really want to see my ammu on any page dear. love u by heart and you know what if you get time then mansi also start a new awesome story I give u the link read it and don’t worry if possible then comment or else we all love u a lot.
    mansi new story dear.

    Love u ammu waiting for you eagerly . Whenever I catch your name anywhere I came to meet for sure till I am on Tu ki galliyaan dear.

    Keep smiling meri jaan luv u ammu sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.

    Once a friend always a friend.

  17. aastha

    Hey ammu I miss u…….plzzzz sir plz do let ammu cme here….we assure u tat we’ll do no harm to hr…………….plz reconsider ur decision n do let ammu cme here………

  18. nisha

    hey ammu how r u dear Miss u so much meri jaan. I leave a message for u on my page too dear. Wish u a very Merry christmass dear Love u loads Hope this christmass you will get the permission to came here as a gift dear . Enjoy this christmass a lot Tight hugs for u dear May god give u lots of happiness this Christmass dear Keep smiling meri jaan.
    Once a friend always a friend.

  19. nisha

    hey ammu dear how r u dear . Well miss u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much . dera Love u always by heart Keep smiling waiting for u and ur humdard and the another who am i also dear . Love u by heart keep smiling always

    Once a friend always a friend

  20. Lakshmi

    All the new year renews all the happiness and good tidings,hope the joyful spirit keeps glowing in your heart forever! Happy New Year Amu…and to all friends here…

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