Humari Adhuri Kahani — SWASAN OS




Swara gadodia and sanskar maheshwari both were deeply in love with each other….its been three years dating eachother….they share a great bond of friendship as they were childwood frds..they used to fight a lot when they were friends …..they were possessive about each other…Although they knew that they share a different bond with each other.. they got to know about their feeling …when sahil and kavita entered their life…. they confessed their feelings ….
In that process when their parents came up with the alliance they both immediately said yes unknowing to the fact that they were not marrying each other but their respective siblings laksh maheswari and ragini gadodia….
It was hustle bustle around discussing about the preparations to be done for the engagement…both the familys came together for shopping and buying ring for the couples…
in shopping mall while selecting the ring….ragini for every selection she took advice of sanskar but he shrugged it off…she was his bestfriend afterall..
while selecting the ring swara was about ask sanskar for the choice…but she was cut by ap
ap: why are asking sanskar beta…ask laksh coz he is your would be husband… I know your feeling shy but phir bhi…and everyone giggled…
He was about to retort but was cut by some or the other way…and swara was numb all the way…
they reached their respective houses …
sankar was about to blurt out the truth…
when laksh expressed his feeling …that how much he loves swara…how much he adores her and etc…he was hurt he was not able to see his brothers love…he thought he would talk with swara then tell the truth to the family…..same case with swara…ragini was continuously why how when she fell in love with sanskar then this alliance happened…..
both swasan decided to meet next morning and discuss it out …sleep was far away from them..they were continuously crying … CURSING THEIR FATE ALL THE WHILEE…

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam
Na huyi.. Ek adhuri
Si humari kahaani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen
Yeh zaroori nahi
Jaan le.. jaan le..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi
Manzilein manzilein..
Rang thhe noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha
Yeh jahaan…
Waqt ke reet pe
Kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya
Tu kahaan..
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani..
sanskar and swara always used to fight…for every silly reason…
then the in college they had new entries helly and varun …both were in love with each other…just to make each other jealous started moving close with each other….and sanky and swara were helping them in their mission …all the students started gossiping ….they were hot topic…
In this process of helping both started neglecting each other out off jealousy..
when sanky and helly hugged each other..swara saw this and felt a pinch in heart…she was hurt deeply when realized about her feelings..which is love..
when sanky saw swara happy with varun joking around with him and spending most of the time with varun…sanskar didn’t like their moving closeness of them he was irked by their behavior…
the limit was the party where varun was holding swara by waist and they were laughing around…this irked him…
sanky dragged swara out from the
s: what the hell were you doing with varun (he yelled at swara)
sw: what is your problem haa …. I can do anything and anywere with any one…its non of your business ..(she to yelled)
s: (he just catch hold of her arm pulled towards himself..catch her by her waist….) your not being with anyone get that…I cant see you with anyone do you get that…and fix in in your small brain…
sw: why does it matter to if I be with anyone haa??
s:Because I care you…and I LOVE YOU DAMMIT
(They were seeing each other as sanky confessed …swara was numb to react …then finally she said)
They both hugged each other

Khushbun se teri
Yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte
Dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye
Jannatein agar yaheen
Tu dikhe kyun nahin
Chaand sooraj sabhi, hai yahaan
Intezar tera, sadiyon se kar raha
Pyasi baithi hai kab, se yahaan
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani..

they both broke the hug ….
the distance between their face…it slowly decreased with every inch off breath…then their lips collided each others…at first their kiss was slow and affectionate…then later on their kiss become passionate and the long one..
they broke their kiss when they were out of their breath..
they rimincing their memories …their hugs..kisses…valentines day…their birthdays…their dates…everything was flashing in front of them
] Pyaas ka yeh safar
Khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa joh tha
Pura ho jayega
Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mil gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka sama
Doliya hain saji
Khushbuein har kaheen
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani..
next morning arised soon … As decided they met at their regular spot where no one could know…
As soon as both reached their just ran towards each other and hugged each other…tightly..then when they realesed each other and slow turning opposite side of each other…like they making them selves strong to say something..swara broke the silence..
sw.: sanskar I think you should marry ragini..i know her she will be broken if we say the truth sanskarr please marry my sister sanskar…(choking and breaking voice)
s: I know swara it is not easy for …. I know if we say the truth laksh state would be no different..
I think we should break this relation and move on
(tears were continuously flowing in their eyes..)
(Both thought…and dispersed in either directions)

sooo here I end this os …
hope you guys liked it…
chappal tamataar sab chelega I am sorry..
if I hurt anyone I am sorry before hand only..
and lastly do tell me your view s on this os…
do comment …love you all loads..:*

-cutieepiee(shruthi s)

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  1. Abirsha

    is this d end????i thought swasan will be united…..k its nice

    1. Shruthis

      this is end dear…sorry dear and thank you for commenting 🙂

  2. nice…..

    1. Shruthis

      thank you anu dear 🙂

  3. Harshitha

    Nice os but its a sad ending next OS u make it a happy ending please

    1. Shruthis

      pakka i’ll make sure to write happy ending in next os 🙂 thank you dear for commenting 🙂

  4. Feeling like cry….just awesome dr…….

    1. Shruthis

      i’m soo sorry dear ..thank you for commenting dear 🙂

  5. Awesome Write story as u want.. Don’t think about others… X

    1. Shruthis

      thank you sooo much dear…surely i will keep that in mind 🙂

  6. Serena

    Awesome n don’t worry for me the further story is… Accidently swasan got married coz of the viels on brides face n sehra on grooms face….n swasan n raglak led a peaceful life..?????

    1. Shruthis

      hehe …i have no problem with your imagination 😛 … thank you for commenting dear 🙂

  7. Nyc….. bt wt abt ending….

    1. Shruthis

      this the end dear they break up…thank you for commenting 🙂

  8. MedhaMB

    Very nice..just awesome..

    1. Shruthis

      thank you soo much dear for commenting 🙂 it means a lot to me 🙂

  9. thamiazh magan

    hey im very sad with the end… how can a person live happily thereafter

    1. Shruthis

      im sorry dear…its just a sad love story ..thank you soo much for commenting dear..:)

    1. Shruthis

      thank you maryum dear 🙂 for commenting

  10. Awesome really loved it

    1. Shruthis

      thank you k.. for commenting 🙂

  11. It was really good. I mean every where ppl write happy endings. I write them too. But this was so heart touching. It was beautiful. No chappals and tamatars from me. I’m out of stock anyways?? just kidding I loved it. Keep writing:)

    1. Shruthis

      heheh ..thank you soo much for commenting..i’ll try to write more os 🙂

  12. write part 2 also

    1. Shruthis

      sorry dear it has only one part…i am soo sorry…thank you for commenting 🙂

  13. SwenWoni

    This was shoo GUD!!!!

    1. Shruthis

      thank you soo much dear for commenting dear 🙂

  14. awesome………

    1. Shruthis

      thank you soo much for commenting dear 🙂

  15. RUPA


    1. Shruthis

      Thank you soo much for commenting dear 🙂 I hope this os is up to mark..:)

  16. A.Kavya

    Aww.. u made me cry dear ?..!! Great story.! Love you loads

    1. Shruthis

      Awww kavya i’m sorry to make you cry dear 🙁 …thank you soon much for commenting dear love you too a loads :* 🙂

  17. Nita D


    1. Shruthis

      thank you nita D dear for commenting 🙂

      1. Nita D

        Call me Nita only dear.
        I think i have read one more os by Shruti. Was it u ??

      2. Shruthis

        okiee dear i call you only nita …which one can you please tell title name?

  18. nice n heart touching…

    1. Shruthis

      thank you soo much for commenting dear 🙂

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