HUMARA TASHAN E ISHQ – Twinj – A PERFECT LOVE STORY by Yashu !!!!!!!!

HEY GUYZZZ UR DEAR SISSIE CUM FRD YASHU IS HERE!!!!!!!!!!! ACTUALLY WAS NT IN A MOOD TO WRITE MY TWINJ FF SO THOUGHT TO WRITE AN OS HOPE TUMHE ACHA LGE AND YA EVERYTHING IS ALLOWED EXCEPT EGGS……………

HATE THEM…………………………..
AND LOVE U ALL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE OS BEGINS………………………………………
A girl is shown partying with her friends , dancing like a mad , hooting , shouting and doing a lot of fun and then her phone rang, she didn’t saw as the music was very loud, then someone called her telling that there’s a call for her , she attends the call
Girl1 – twinkle where r u , come fast mam is taking round and I’m dam sure that she’ll come to check wether u r here or not so come fast yrrrrr
Tw – ohhh hooo meher why r u taking tension , I’m coming u just wait for me……
Meher – ohhh very funny how will u come from maindoor guards will not allow u and then mam will come and then she will create a big issue , that why I tell u not to party at night but u , u never listen to me , u r soo stubborn
Tw – ohhhhh meri maa , chup kr ja , just lose your mouth , 1st thing parties r always done at night , 2nd thing it’s not time for counting my qualities and 3rd thing who said that I’m coming from main door

Meher –then……
Tw – just wait and watch………………
Scene shifts………………..
A boy is studying lying on the bed…….. just then his roommate enters
Boy1 – wowwww dude , u know today party was owsm ,if would have joined u too would have enjoyed
Boy2 uninterestingly – hmmm…..
Boy1 – ohhh hoooo kunj whats ur problem yrrrrrr , how much will u study , from the day we met u r only studying studying and studying , aren’t u bored studying soo much , ufff!!!!!!!! Till now haven’t seen a boy studying so much that too son of such a rich man………………………………..
( yes the boy whose studying is our hot-chick KUNJ vesse u already knew it….)
K – it doesn’t mean that a son of rich a man cant study and please sleep and let me study ayush
A – ohkkk as u wish…………………
And he sleeps while kunj cont. with his studies…………………………
Scene shifts to the girl’s college……………………

The mam knocks the door of twinkle’s n meher’s room , meher is tensed but as mam knocks it louder and louder she opens the door……………….
Mam shouted – y did u take such a long time…………….
From behind a sound of yarning came and she was our Ptakka Twinkle is her night dress
T – ohh hooo mama b itni raat ko ullu (owl ) ki tarah uthe toh rahenge nhi k imam ayegi aur humme aapka swagat krna he , obvio hum so hi rhe the ki aap aa gyi…………..
Mam – yes yes whatever me bas tum logo ko check krne ayi thi ki kahi bahar toh nhi gye huye………….
T – mam raat ko neend se utha kr check krne ka kounsa rule bna he yrrr , mujhe toh samjh nhi ata aap teachers ki problem kya he………………..
Mam – wt do mean……………

T – mean toh me bht kch krti hu but aap samjhoge nhi chodo jao aap bhi aram se so jao aur hmme bhi sone do wo kya hena hume subah jaldi uth kr college bhi jana hota h
Mam – tumhara matlab kya he ki mujhe subah koi kaam nhi hota
T – yeh toh mene kaha hi nhi , yeh toh aap hi bol rhi he…………………..
Meher – twinkle just shut ur mouth , mam aap jayiye aapko kal subah uthna bhi toh hoga na…………….
Mam – hmmm , better and she goes…………………….
Twinkle jumps and sits on bed…………..
M – tu ayi kab aur kaha se…………….

Fb is shown
Twinkle came in by climbing the pipes and entered the washroom , then changed and came out……….
Fb ends……
M – tu bhi na me toh darr hi gyi thi cha lab so ja , kal college bhi jana he…………………………
T – ha ha chalet he sone meri jaan aur kaha jayege…………..
M – tu kch zyada hi filmi nhi ho rhi………….
T – abhi tak me hui hi kaha hu…………….
M – wo bhi sahi he , kher tujhe koi milla , joh tere liye perfect ho…………..
T – jaaneman mille toh bht par nt made fr me , aur fr me banda perfect nhi love story perfect honi chahiye………………
M – ohhhh hooo toh love marriage krni hi decided he………..
T – yups dear , TWINKLE AUR __________________________ KI PERFECT LOVE STORY………………….!!!!!!!!!!!!
M – tu bhi na twinkle……………… cha lab chal sone…………………..
Scene shifts……………..
Both twinkle and meher leaves for college………………………
T – meher tu ja , mujhe na library me kch kaam he……………..
M – theek he toh fir milte he
Twinkle leaves for library and took some books and started to study , but she couldn’tunderstand anything and to her next a boy was sitting , twinkle saw him and was mesmerized but he didn’t even notice as was busy studying twinkle takes book from his hand and kept admiring him , he was confused and said “ hello hello “ but no response as twinkle was not in her senses she was just admiring him……… he snapped his fingers…………..
Boy – hey miss r u fine……………???
T – abhi tak toh thi , ab nhi hu

Boy – wt ?? and shakes her…. And she came to her senses
T – I mean ……..mujhe na…….ha…..mujhe pdna he…
Boy – so what , padhlo
T – lekin kch samjh me nhi aa rha aur tumhe dekh kr lgta he kit um bht padako honge , sooo hope you’ll help me……………
Boy – ya sure………
T – ur name
Boy – kunj………… kunj sarna
T – twinkle taneja…………..
K – nice too meet u

T – same here and gets lost in his eyes……….
K – twinkle twinkle r u there
T – yes yes………………….
Then he explains her something which she said she didn’t understand but whole time she was just admiring him and both shared eye lock many times……….. but then the bell rang ( ohh pity twinkle kunj ko aur dekh bhi nhi payi )
K – I have my class , and these r the notes they will help u , bye………….and he leaves…………………….
Bt our twinkle is our PATAKKA, she ran after him…………. KUNJ KUNJ………………..
K – ha anything else………….
T – yes actually woh tumhara…… number chahiye tha…………….

K – kyo………………..
T – ummmm…………. Woh kal mera test he toh agr kch samajh nhi aya so will call u , aur vesse bhi tum bahut acha samjhate ho………………
K – ohhkkk take and he gives her his number…………… and started to leave……………………
T – kunj………….
K – ab kya address bhi chahiye
T – nhi woh baad me le lungi , I ….. I mean that tumhe ek baat batao…..
K – jesse na bolunga toh tu nhi bataegi , ha bata
T – u knw tum pehle ladke ho jisne mere saath flirt nhi kiya , I mean u r shooo cute ……………… i……… I mean will u become my friend……………….

K smiles – yeah sure , and tub hi pehli ladki he jisse mene itna frank dekha he , pkka ur mom-dad would be blessed……………
Twinkle becomes teary eye but say – yes they r ohhkkk bye see u , and leaves from there………………………..
Kunj thinks on that and leaves behind her……………
Twinkle was sitting in a bench and crying……………she feels a hand on her shoulder and wipes her tears and turns around………………… and it was kunj……………………
K – twinkle, tu ro kyo rhi he kya ho gya………………..

T – kch nhi kunj ,
K – abhi abhi dost banaya aur bhul gyi ki dosti me kch chupate nhi he , kya hua
T – kunj actually mere mom-dad nhi he…………… meri sirf ek dii he jinhone mujhe mom jessa pyaar diya , papa jesse glti krne par data aur dost jessa saath diya , mere mom-dad jab me 8 yrs pehle hi death ho gyi aur tab se dii ne hi mera dhyaan rkhha he……………..
K – I’m soo sorry tw….
T – nhi kunj ab tum bhul rhe ho frdshp k rules , n u knw tum pehle ho jisse mene yeh share kra…..tum kch different hi ho kunj , aaj tak saare ldke mujhse dosti k naam pr flirt krna chahte the but tum who ho jiski dost me bnna chahti thi , aur jo 2 min me hi mera itna acha dost ban gya……………… and hugs him , kunj also hugs her back……………….
T – ohhkk kunj tum jao me theek hu…………..
K – theek he apna khyaal rkhna aur ha agr koi doubt ho toh phone kr dena……
T – doubt , kisme ????

K – tere test k liye……………..
T – kounsa test , mera koi test he hi nhi ( and then realizes n stick her tongue out ) wo….
K – rehne de me samjh gya , pagal ladki……………. And he leaves
Twinkle also leaves……………
At HOSTEL
She was dancing on bed……………………
Uff mere dil me thodi khalisi jagah thi
Uff tune aake bin kiraye ye jagah li
Kuch keh bhi na saki ye kaisi bebasi
Yu chupke chupke aaya bin bulaye mehman
Uff mere dil me thodi khalisi jagah thi
(Hamko na khabar kab kaise aaya woh
Dil se kuch kuch farmaya woh) – (2)

Uff mere dil me thodi khalisi jagah thi
Uff tune aake bin kiraye ye jagah li
Kuch keh bhi na saki ye kaisi bebasi
Yu chupke chupke aaya bin bulaye mehman
Uff mere dil me thodi uff mere dil me
Uff uff mere dil me thodi khalisi jagah thi

Kya kya karaogi khwabo me hamse
Badlu me rang kitne khamakha
Udda udda banke gubara mera dil buddhu bichara
Hole hole tune pukara jana ye diwana jaye
Chala chalo yu aankhe miche
Dhire dhire ye tere piche
Jara jara ye khiche khiche
Dekho na kedho
(Hamko na khabar kaise aaya woh
Dilse kuch kuch farmaya woh) – (2)

(Kehno ko to tere wajahse hai
Sara jaha nayi jagah se hai) – (2)
Sabko khabar aur sabko pata hai
Ye jo hua dekho woh bhi to
Chhdo ab tumbhi abhi bahana ye

Dil ke badle dil ka najrana do
Hamko na khabar kab kaise aaya woh
Dil se kuch kuch farmaya woh
Uff mere dil me thodi khalisi jagah thi
Uff tune aake bin kiraye ye jagah leli
Kuch keh bhi na saki ye kaisi bebasi
Yu chupke chupke aaya bin bulaye mehman

Uff mere dil me thodi khalisi jagah thi
(Hamko na khabar kaise aaya woh
Dil se kuch kuch farmaya woh) – (2)
Ooo uff mere dil me thodi khalisi jagah thi – 3

Meher came and looked whole room was a mess and twinkle was dancing…………
M – twinkle , tu kya kar rhi he , room ki halat toh dekh , kyo usko yeh kabad khana bna rkha h
T – meher wo….. aaj na me bht khush hu
M – kyo bhai aaj aesa kya ho gya………..
T – kch nhi bas aesehi dance krne ka man hua tohkar liya kyo nhi kar skti………………….
M – nhi nhi mene aesa kab kaha
SCENE SHIFTS
AT KUNJ’S ROOM
Kunj was sitting alone and was thinking about twinkle and smiling , he took out his guitar and sang…….
Tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara

O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara…
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaaun
Jo tu karde ishara
Kahin kisi bhi gali me jaaun main
Teri khushboo se takraaun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwaab tu…
Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu…
O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena gawara
Maine chhode hain baaki saare raste
Bas aaya hoon tere paas re
Meri aankhon mein tera naam hai
Pehchaan le…
Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaunga kabhi tujhe chhod ke
Yeh jaan le
O karam Khudaya hai
Tera pyar jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main behta musafir
Tu thehra kinara

Ayush – woahhhhhhhh bro , I mean aaj tak pehli baar tere haatho me books k siwaye kuch aur dekha he…………. Tu itna acha gana gata he yrrrrrrrr
K – nhi bas aesehi time pass
A – rehne de bro , vesse aaj koi special din he kya , mtlb kahi aaj suraj west se toh nhi nikla
K – pagal ho gya he kch bhi
A – nhi matlab tu aur gaane – wane , no padai , it’s impossible…………..
K – samjh le , k aaj kch aesa hua jisse me badal gya…………….
A – dam sure tujhe pyaar ho gya he…………….
K – shut up …………….. kuch bhi…………………..
A – mat man par yhi sach he and he leaves…………..
K – shayad ha…………………
Days went like this and twinj became very close to each other , twinkle loved kunj but was afraid to tell and the same situation was of kunj both loved each other more than themselves but were not able to express , but all this was seen by MEHER ( twinkle’s sis ya she is her sister )……………………….
AFTER 4 MONTHS
Twinkle was sitting in her room looking at her phone and smiling , she was teary eyed……………….. meher came and took her phone , twinkle ws shocked and meher saw that she was smiling seeing kunj’s pic……………..
M – twinkle , tell me one thing do u love kunj……….
T – lo….love…..no…..nothing like that meher , tub ht zyada hi soch rhi he…………….
M – tw tu kisse jhut bol rhi he , mujhse ya khud se , teri aankho me saaf saaf dikhta he pyaar kunj k liye , aaj tak tune mom-dad k bare me kissi ko nhi bataya phir usko kyo…………………..
Twinkle was shocked……………………( actually meher was present there when this hppend )
T – meher wo…. Woh toh mene aese hi …………..
M – bas tw , tu kyo jhut bol rhi he aur kyo……………….. ja apne pyaar ka izhaaar kr , isse pehle bht deer ho jaye , ja use bta de…………
Twinkle hugged her…………………..
T – par meher kya pta agar woh mujhse pyaar krta hi na ho , aur yeh sab bol kr me apna dost bhi kho du…………………………
M – aur yeh bhi toh nhi pta he na ki won hi krta , ho skta he jesse tu darr rhi he btane se wo bhi darr rha ho………………….
T – hmmmm….. par mujhe thoda wakt chahiye , aese kesse jaake bol du I LOVE U , kch sohcna bhi toh pdega……….
M – mtlb tu propose karegi,,,,,
T – no option left……………….. yes……………..
M – wowwwwwwwwwwwwww
And both hugged…………………..
Scene shifts……….
K – yrrr bhai mujhe teri help chahiye……..
A – kyo twinkle ko propose krna he
K – tujhe kesse pta
A – bhai tum dono ke swaye sab ko pta he kit um dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar krte ho……………
K – acha , theek he par mujhe samjh me nhi aa rha ki me use kya bolu
A – I love u bol pagal aur kya bolega…………
K – wo mujhe bhi pta he par kesse………………………
Scene shifts………
Twinkle gets a call……………… yes from kunj……………….he called her and she goes to get ready , she’s wearing a baby pink off shoulder gown , and has tied a bun with curls ( like she did in miss. Amritsar competition )
M – ohhooo meri miss world , kaha jar hi he aese saj dhaj k………
T blushes – wo…..wo……. actually kunj ka phone aya tha……………toh wahi jar hi hu………..
M – ohhhooo matlab use tujhse pehle akal aa gyi
T – kya
M – kch nhi kch nhi u go……………
Twinkle leaves for the venue , when she enters it’s totally dark………………
T – kunj…………….kunj………………tum ho yha par………………….
Suddenly the lights r on and the whole place is decorated with red and white balloons and it’s an amazing view……………….. and then someone comes from behind and closes her eyes……….. she whispered KUNJ , he opened her eyes n kneels down…………

Kunj- hey miss Amritsar kabhi socha nhi tha ki yeh kahuga , par jabse tumhe dekha h kuch kuch hta h, tumhare iss hassen chehere ko dekhte hi dil me ghanti bajti he , tumhari iss ghayal kar dene waali muskurahat ko dekhta hun toh dil kuch kho sa jata h , tumhari in katilana adao ko dekh kr man me ladoo footne lgte hein ms. Twinkle Taneja, ha twinkle , ha I luv u………… I luv u………….!!!!!
Tw – yes kunj yes, I luv u too……luv u……….and hugs him , both hug passionately………….
Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa (x2)
( both breaks the hug n started to dance )
Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun tto nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar
Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa
( Kunj turns twinkle n moves his hand from her should to her hand n then crossed his fingers with her n lifts her n swings )
Aisi kabhi pehle hui naa thi khwaahishein
O.. kisi se bhi milne ki
Naa ki thi koshishein
Uljhan meri suljha de
Chaahun main ya naa
Aankhon aankhon mein jataa de
Chaahun main ya naa
Mere chhote chhote khwaab hain
Khwabon mein geet hain
Geeton mein zindagi hai
Chaahat hai, preet hai
Abhi main na dekhoon khwaab woo
Jin mein na tu mile
Le khole honth maine
Ab tak the jo sile
( n he keeps twinkle down, n turns her , now both of them r face to face, tw blushes n is about to go but kunj holds her from her waist n pulls her towards him, tw’s one hand is on his chest n one on shoulder , both r very close,)
Mujhko na jitna mujh pe
Utna iss dil ko tujh pe
Hone laga aitbaar
Tanha lamhon mein apne
Bunti hoon tere sapne
Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar o o..
Poochungi tujhko kabhi naa
Chaahun main ya naa
Tere khaabon mein ab jeena
Chaahun main kyun naa!
Tu hi yeh mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa
( both closes their eyes and kiss each other passionately , it was a long one after few minutes they broke it due to lack of oxygen and started to breathe heavily )
Both again hugged each other…………………… and they hear sounds of clapping and they turn and see that usha , manohar , meher and ayush r there both of them blushed…………………
Usha – ohhh hooo kunj , I didn’t thought that u were soo romantic
Manohar – aakhir mera beta he , kyo haina
U – aap toh rehne hi do ji and goes to twinkle………..
U – bilkul chand ka tukda he , sirf sundar hi nhi iski shakal me hi masoomiyat jhalakti he……….
T smiles but then – unty ji , shayad aapko pta nhi he ki mere mummy – papa nhi he………… kya aap mujhe apna payegi she said teary eyed………..
U – beta aesa kabhi mat kehna me hu na ab tum meri beti hu , aur me tumhari maa hu theek he
M – ha beta humme kunj ki shaadi tumse karwani he tumhare mummy – papa se nhi…….
Twinj – shadi………..????
Meher – ha twinkle , teri aur kunj ki shaadi he 3 weeks baad……..
A – ha bro saari tayari bhi ho gyi……………… aakhir me joy ha hu n winks………
U – toh beta tum dono tayaar ho na………
T blushes n hids her face in meher
U – twinkle ka toh jawab mil gya tub hi bta de kunj
K – ha he says shyly…………
After 3 weeks
Twinj’s marriage takes place and both takes blessings……..
Tw comes to meher and hugs her n weeps………..
M – dekh twinkle aaj tera sapna pura ho gya TWINKLE AND KUNJ – A PERFECT LOVE STORY…………….
T – nhi meher twinkle and kunj do alag log nhi he hum dono ek hi he……….
K – ha isiliye TWINJ – A PERFECT LOVE STORY………………
All of them smiles………………..
At twinj’s bedroom…………….
Twinkle was waiting for kunj , kunj came , closed the door and comes towards her , twinkles heart beat increased………..he unveils her and both looks in each other’s eyes……….
T teary eyed – today I’m very happy kunj……………
K – me bhi bahut khush hu twinkle……….
Twinj together – humara tashan e ishq…………….
T- twinj..
K – a perfect love story………
Both hugged each other and consummated their marriage………
HIII DEAR HOW WAS THAT U KNW WROTE THE WHOLE IN A DAY , HOW WAS THAT DO COMMENT YRRRRRR……..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE U ALL MERE DEAR READERS…………………. LOADS N LOADS OF LOVE TO U ALL M AND ONLY ONE WISH DO COMMENT AND DO BIG COMMENT AS I LOVE COMMENTS N AM VERY FODDIE SO SMALL SE MERA TUMMY FULL NHI HOTA…………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

46 comments

  1. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Wah! Kya OS tha! Buhat acha! Just loved it! Seriosuly Twinj a perfect LOVE STORY 👌👌👌 Very good! Keep going like this!

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
    Love u sisso ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    -Zuha

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Awwww Love u meri Zuha !!!!!!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
      i will going like this dear ………………😘😘😘😘

      .keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘

      Your Drama queen – Yashu ❤❤

  2. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Amazing yashu seriously
    It’s it a twinj perfect love story
    😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    U nailed it yaar
    Loved it to the core

  3. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    Oye Yashu It was Amazing…I hope you dont mind if I call u yashu…It was superb, Mind blowing….Loved Twinkle and Mam’ s Convo…It was tooo funny….Even I am also a foddie…
    BTW you are only one year elder to me Thats why I will not calll you DI if you dont have any problem…BTW loved our cute, lovely, bubbly Twinkle…It was amazing dear…

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Not at all yrrr me toh khud kehti hu ki call me yashu……………… even i liked their convo………hehehehe………………..
      ya ya it’s absolutely fine…………………..i’ll never have any pblm dear
      thanxxx for the lovely cmnt Prakriti dear

      keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘

      Your Drama queen – Yashu ❤❤

      • Prakriti19

        |Registered Member

        Main to hamesha smile karti houn…BTW Who is this Sweet, small, cute girl in your cover pic Yashu???I guess Its you…If yes then you are so cute….
        BYE and Take Care Yashu…
        Love u loads..
        YOUR CUTE FRIEND- PRAKRITI

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      yes dear u r right………. thats me only
      thank u fr compliment dear
      Your Drama queen – Yashu ❤❤😘😘😘😘😘😘

  4. SidVee

    Wow yaar.. it’s was truly a perfect love story.. really loved this cute and amazing os by a cute and shetan bachhi😛😛 you’re truly talented dear.. keep writing more os.. love you 😘😘

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Awwww thanku meri pyaari Yashvee dii !!!!!!!!!!! ab cute + shetaan toh me hu hi….hehehehe
      will keep writing dii…………
      Love u infinity 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

      keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your Drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  5. Sanjanaagrawal

    |Registered Member

    Myyyy dramebaaz fooodie yaashuuuu ….. it was not gooooood 😞😞 ….. I didn’t liked it …… but I loved it pagli …. 😘😘 really my punjabi pataka twinkle rocked ……. love u twinky ……. and yashu ….. today only I robbed something from ur bank …. ur hearts ….. take it ….. aaj bohot saare de rahi hooon. …… and haaaan …… once again u rocked my yashuuuuuy ….. keep smiling and stay blessed ……
    😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    Bas bas now my hands are panning …. bye …… bye ….

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Haye tu chor bhi ban gyi yrrrrrrrr…hehehehe……
      .love u too meri sanju………..😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  6. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Yashu…meri darlo…meri swtheart…haye…kya likha hai re…tere ff pe comment nii kr paa rhi hu…but this was stupendous! Love uh re😘

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Awww Love u meri jaan……………… 😘😘😘
      missed ur cmnts shooo shoo much on my ff…………….

      Keep smiling n stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  7. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Hey yashu !!!!!!!!
    It was so Awsome
    In fact u r so Awsome😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙
    Itne achhe ideas tere dimaag mein aate kaise hain ………. ab phir se main pooch ri hun tujhse jadi booti k baare mein……………batadiyo agar mille toh 😆😆😆😆
    N thank you thank you so much (ab soch rahi hogi kyun bol ri hun 😋………actually u wished me best of luck for my practical n really it was superb ) thanks once again
    N again this os was amazing
    Loved it
    Aur jaldi apnaa ff bhi continue krliyo
    Love u 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Hiii daamini.hey bhagwaan itne saare thank u
      tu thank u bol me love u bolti hu…………
      love u love u love 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      wowww happy that my wishes worked n ya will give u that jadi boti agr milli ih hehehehe…..
      will cont. asap……….
      LOVE u infinity…………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  8. rochika

    Yashu!!!!! Kya kahu yrrrrr????? Itna itna itna itna itna itna itna amazingggggg!!!!!!! Dil khush kar diya!!!!!! Aur maar bhi daala!!!!! No words are left for u yashu!!!!! Matlb…kya yrr…kya khaate ho….?? Yeh ideas mujhe aaj tak samaj nhi aata ki kaha se aate hain?….itna awesomeeeee!!!!!!!!!! What a story what dialogues…matlb….
    PAISA WASOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!
    JHAKAAAAASSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! aise hi os and ff’s likhte rehna aur tei ka naam roshan krte rehna……HATS OFF TO U!!!!! I give u full marks in this os……and aapka tummy fulll toh ho hi gya hoga i think so…but agar nhi hua toh yeh lo…….


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    Agle os ya ff mein….abhi ke liye itna hi
    .bye….hahahahahaha

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    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Awwww LOVE u yrrrrrrrrrrrr…………..😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      chal acha he aaj tune logo ki kurbaniyaan nhi lagai…………😆😆😆😆
      Haye me maar jao , kuch kha k yrrrrrrrrrrr !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
      such an amazing cmnt……………..

      LOVE u infinity…………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  9. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Goddd yar i lovedddd ittt!!!! 😘😘😘😘😘😘 👌👌👌
    Too good it was just mind blowing such a cute story of twinj 🙂

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thanxxx dear Romaisha…………..for giving such a lovely cmnt 😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  10. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Yashu jaan hi lelo tum meri…. Haan aur kya yrr itna acchi story padhne ke baad I’m not able to control my happiness ☺☺☺☺😊😊😊😊😀😆….
    Dil khush kr ditta tumne…. Kya likthi ho yr tum…. Amazing… Awesome…. Too good OS….. 👍👌👏…..
    Loved it to the core…..

    Thoda sa apna talent mujhe bhi sikha do… U really write amazingly beautiful……
    Love u 😆😍💓💕💖

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Awww mein apni Sayu dii ki jaan kesse le skti hu bhalla……………..😘😘😘😘
      thanxxx fr such a beautiful cmnt……..

      hawwwww really a very bad joke khud toh writing k talent ka bhandaar ho aur mujhe maang rhi ho…………. dnt joke ha…..

      LOVE u …………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thanku Varsh dii………………awwww sho sweet………………..

      LOVE u …………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  11. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Ehem Ehem……..!!!!
    Hyyyyyyyyy yashu !!!!! My darling
    It was so so……not good I don’t like it…..koi aisa kaha toh Mai uska mooh god doon…..!!!!
    It was fab !!
    Dhamakedaar….!!!
    Block buster….!!!
    The perfect love story……!!!!!
    U r soooo amazing writer itne ache thoughts Lati kahan se hai yr mujhe Bhi koi tips de behen….!!!!!!!
    I m in love with this OS……
    The dialouges OMG just luv them y r u tooo gud bata na….!! Hahahaha
    God bless u yrrrrr…!!!
    Keep writing like this…….!!!
    Take care now
    Love u mostest se Bhi bht bht bht ziada
    By by darling……!!!

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      Thats really sweet of u dear………………… this is one of the precious cmnt as given by my dear darling Maria…………………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hmmmmm aesehi likhti rahungi n thinking 2 write an OS on shraman…………………..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

      LOVE uinfinity …………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  12. Baby

    |Registered Member

    haye yashu dear amazing
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    .sch mein amazing
    yr it was 2 gud isme toh diffrent bhi thi
    twinkle ko phele pyarr hua
    she was mesmerised to c kunj
    n i was mesmerised o c dis os of urs yr osm adorable
    luv u dear n an u were fab

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thankew thankew
      my dear baby………………..
      ya i thought 2 make smthng diff…………… tw ko pehle pyaar ho love at 1st sight………..

      LOVE u …………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

  13. sujina

    ur os is just lyk soothing melodious song…sobg selec was fav…all my fav list song…
    love 2 d core…n do write wonderful swt luv story of twinj lyk dis….love u…

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thanxxx dear sujina……….. ya dear even they r in my fav list will keep writing…………….

      LOVE u …………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

    • Yashasvi

      |Author

      thanxxxxx halima dii

      and sorry to u , hassy n hally dii actually i read ur ff but didnt cmnted as i’m having fever these days so mom doesnt allow me ……………………. shooo shoo sorry……………….

      LOVE u infinity …………….😘😘😘😘😘😘

      Keep smiling and stay blessed 😘😘😘😘

      Your drama queen – Yashu ❤❤❤❤

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