Hum Tum-os by ufaq

suman was roaming in the mall
suman; excuse me how much it cost????
salesman: mam 1500
suman: what 1500 are there diamonds stuck in it let me see
salesman:mam price is this
suman : OK tell me the final one
salesman: mam 1400 is last
suman: bhaya 1400 due to think I m fool do u know how many zero r there in 1400
s.m: but mam see its quality
suman: quality should b kept at side OK don’t play bhaya plz Bhya not fair
s.m OK mam how much u can give
suman: 1000
s.m : mam thousand r very less
suman: say thanks to god that I m giving u 1000
s.m: BT mam OK fine I will pack it
suman : thank u
suman to herself: ullo bnaya bara maza aya hahaha bechara:-)
suman takes the packet and leaves she enters a shop of watches she was selecting the watches when she collides with a man
suman: oh I m sorry
boy: its OK
boy moves and she gets busy in selecting watches for herself
both were busy when the fire alarm rang every one ran outside except boy and suman because someone had closed the shutter of the shop
sumu: bhagwan g kahan phansa dia kapron ki shop main to phansate kamse kam unhen dekhne main hi time nikal jata ab idhar kia krn ge main oh God
suman sees the guys
suman: hey u blue pant white shirt
boy turns
boy: what
sumu: tm b phans gae ho?????
boy : phans?????? nae to main to yahn maze kr raha hn I m enjoying alot(taunting)
sumu: oh to tm angry young man ho………
boy: excuse me???
sumu: excused acha btao nam kia h tmhara
boy: tm Jan kr bravery award de rae ho mjhe???
sumu: oh God tm to bht kharoos ho
boy: thanks for the compliment
sumu: anyway hi I m suman singhania
boy: hi I m sharavan
sumu:sharavan?????
boy: oh sharavan malhotra
sumu: pleasure meeting u
shr: don’t expect the same from me
sumu: ohGod Pta nae tmhari biwi kese jhelte hogi tmhein
shr: wese hi jese tmhari ma tmhein
sumu: MATLAB tm shadi shudda ho???
shr: g nae
sumu; umar kia h tmhari????
shr: 28
sumu: abi tk shadi nae ki Ku????
shr: busy person

sumu: president ho India k????
shr: g nae bs mjhe interest nae h
sumu; oh acha
shr: tmhari age kia h
sumu: 23
shr: tm ne shadi nae ki????
sumu: tm nae mile na isliye
shr: kia?????
sumu: just joking
shr: oh PhD thk h
sumu: acha friend bano ge mere????
shr: tmhara friend age difference dekha h tm ne hamara???
sumu: to kia hoa…..
shr: r agar tm fraud Nikli to
sumu: r agar tm fraud nikle to???
shr: I m not fraud
sumu: me too
shr: OK fine friends
sumu: good chalo mobile number do apna
shr: Ku???
sumu: tm se BT krne k liye
shr: tmhein nae lgta tm mere sath ziada frank ho rae ho
sumu: so what u r my friend na
shr: hmm anyway ye lo
they exchange their mobile numbers

after sometime fire extinguishers come and they extinguish the fire both of them come out of mall
shr: OK bye
sumu: nae coffee pene chalte hain
shr: nae m late ho raha hn
sumu: plzzzzzzzzzzzz
shr: noooooooooรดo
sumu: main tmhara gala dba Dun ge
shr: Ku???
sumu: tm chal Jo nae rae mere sath
shr; so u will murder me???
sumu; yes r pta h news reporters kia kahen ge
“ghor se dekhye is larki ko Jo shakal se h kitni bholi lekin ek coffee k chakar main is ne mar dia ek ameerzade ko g han yehi h WO larki”hahahaha
shr starts laughing like hell
shr: hahahaaaha kitna acha copy kia hahahahaah
sumu sees him and gets mesmerized
sumu: thank god finally u laugh
shr: hmm chalen
sumu: kahan????
shr: bhool gae coffee
sumu: han chalo
they went to nearby coffee shop ,drank coffee and left to their respective places
one day suman enters restaurant with her friends she sees sharavan there with a girl she fumes she goes to him
sumu: hi sharavan
shr: hii suman kesi ho???
sumu: I m gud tm yahan
shr: han coffee pene aya hn
sumu: oh who is she??
shr: woo ye mere fiancee hai ( jhot)
girl looks him
sumu: fianceee???
shr: han
sumu: oh hello
girl: hi I m sania pleasure meeting u
sumu: same here
Sarnia: aao betho
sumu: nae u guys enjoy
she leaves with teary eyes without any reason she was weeping
Sarnia: bhai y u lied ( yes the girl was sharavan sister Sarnia malhotra)
shr: for a strong reason
Sarnia: what???

shr: tjhe Ku btaon moti
sania : haaaa bhai OK mat btao
next day a guy family comes to see suman
suman goes meet with the family but don’t raises her eyes to see anyone alliance gets fixed everyone leaves suman cries and says
” ullo gadhi kis she yar kr Lisa us sharavan se jis ki inti sari girl friend hain ab bhugat bwwaquf larki”
suman cries all night
engagement day
suman dressed in pink and white lehnga and was looking amazing but eyes swelled up due to crying
she goes downstairs and does not raises her eyes just make him wear the ring and goes to up stir after sometime
she was staring at the moon diamonds are following through her eyes someone pats her shoulder she turns
sumu: sharavan tm????
shr: ro lia ya abi rona h???
sumu: tm yahan kia kr rae ho????
shr: pehle btao melo drama finish
sumu: han an jao tm yahan se
shr: ese kese pehle cold drink lao
sumu: tm mere sath ziada frank nae ho rae ho???
shr:han to tm fiancee ho meri
sumu: kash hoti pr Hn nae
shr: wese tm ho bari batameez
sumu; ku?????
shr: tmne mjhe bulaya nae na
sumu: oh a cha us k lkiye
shr; kia acha tmhwin PETA h mere engagement ho gae
sumu; KB??????
shr: aj
sumu gets sad
shr : chalo milaon tjhe us se
sumu: mjhe nae Jana
shr: chup kr r chal
he takes her to the pool side without sumu permission he just drag her
he stands at the pool side
sumu; yahan Ku lae ho
shr: vo dekho water ki reflection us m nazar aae ge WO
sumu sees her own face
sumu: ye to main hun
shr: exactly sweetu
shravan kneels down
shr ; will u marry me I really love u…..
sumu gets happy and say
sumu: I love u too and yes I will marry u
sumu hugs him tightly
sumu: lek in sharavan engagement
shr shows him his ring which is the same ring which she made wore to the boy
sumu gets happy and hug him tightly

The End

Credit to: ufaq

39 comments

  1. Marie

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    OMG wat a story……good best outstamding mindblowing fab…!! ๐Ÿ˜€ or jitne bhi ache comppliments hain sb…. ๐Ÿ˜‰ api u nailed it……
    U r awesome….!! God ๐Ÿ˜€ how can u get such a great ideas..?
    Plzz plzz write another1 romantic lyk dis…..!!
    Love u most…..!! my sweeto api
    take care

  2. Fatimagulesarfraz

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    Awwww??? … What a mind blowing story dear !!!!! Really I m amazed while reading this stuff? .. very nice … nd the dialogues ,,,OMG the dialogues r fantabulous … I m short of words right now … I hv no words to express my happiness after reading this ff .. very very nice dear … u r very talented??? .. keep up the gud work going .. ?
    Thnk u !!!

  3. Fatimagulesarfraz

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    Awwww??? … What a mind blowing story dear !!!!! Really I m amazed while reading this stuff? .. very nice … nd the dialogues ,,,OMG the dialogues r fantabulous … I m short of words right now … I hv no words to express my happiness after reading this ff .. very very nice dear …
    u r very talented??? ..

  4. Nikita

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    This was so cute.. Mind blowing.. Loved it.. :*.. ๐Ÿ™‚ ^_^ lots of love…

    keep writing os’s Ufaq!

  5. Khushi

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    Ufaq…..who r u yr…I mean such mind blowing ideas……kaunsa dimaag hai tumhare paas and kitna bada …..u nailed it dear….it was sooo amazing…. Loved it
    Ahhh bindass sumo I loved her alot….the way she bargained it was so cute and when she said kapron ki dukaan mein band ho jaati toh kapre hi dekh leti ab kya karun???
    And then our hero ….sumo totally overpowered him……kya mast scene tha amazing the at last the end…..it was just fabulous
    Love u dear …..aise hi aur ache ache OS likhti rehna….love u loads????

  6. Prettypreeti

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    Lovely mindblowing excellent amazing super duper fabulous sweet fantabulous kamaal kr dia year kya kagho itni achi is likhti ho bahut maza aata hai loved it keep it up

  7. Affaa

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    Don’t talk to me…you didn’t you informed me about your os…I’m angry to you….by the my chull bulli became great writer…Really what a story superb and tooooo cute like you…I just loved it….

  8. Angel_pari

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    It was soo cute nd lovelyyyyy……. Especially that book part and tht dialogue is it ur dad came sharv no sumo: its my dad,s cafe superb ufaqqqq ek or os toh bnta h na……

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