hum tum bane ek duje ke vaste (os) intro

Hello im a silent reader.i love edkv and shraman very much.thank you riya di and nandini di. im writing with other account.so there is the intro of my first os

suman tiwari-a middle class and naugty girl.loves her sister.her parents died when she was only 10.her nanu(grandfater) raised them
shravan malhotra-a rich and sareef (decent) boy he loves his family including his brother pushkar
pushkar malhotra-brother of shavan.loves his brother and his wife. hates his parents for some reason (not hate but don’t like them)
preeti malhotra- wife of pushkar.loves her family .a calm girl who tolerate every thing . opposite of sumo
nirmala malhotra- a pati vrata woman .mother of shavu and pushkar
ramnath malhotra-father of shavu and pushkar.a selfish man.treats his wife like a servant pretend to be a decent man
rest of the characters will be introduced later

sorry if there are any writing mistake
nandini di and riya di can i add you in this os

24 comments

  1. sona

    Welcome neeti..😍😍😍☺☺
    Its a nice intro..story kis angle mey honey wali hai..ye bats chal gayi.. Shuru kab kar rahi ho..πŸ˜‰
    All the bestπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰β˜Ί

  2. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Wow neeti dear…!! It WS awesome yr….!! Loved it !!
    Plzz post soon !!
    Desptetlyyyyyy waiting..!

    Lota of luv
    Maria…!

  3. Nandini aka Nandu

    Yes even i do. And its just a name so u can use it anywhere as per ur wish. And no need to thnak us. Btw if u are calling me and riya ‘di’ then whts ur age? In which class are u ?? Do reply and post the ff soon.lots of love neeti.

  4. Neeti

    |Author

    Baise itro to Maine show jesai hi likha to tarif to show ke writer Ki wah bah hi honi chaihe i wrote in profile but still can anyone guess which country i belong to

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