hum tum bane ek duje ke vaste (os) intro


Hello im a silent reader.i love edkv and shraman very much.thank you riya di and nandini di. im writing with other there is the intro of my first os

suman tiwari-a middle class and naugty girl.loves her sister.her parents died when she was only 10.her nanu(grandfater) raised them
shravan malhotra-a rich and sareef (decent) boy he loves his family including his brother pushkar
pushkar malhotra-brother of shavan.loves his brother and his wife. hates his parents for some reason (not hate but don’t like them)
preeti malhotra- wife of pushkar.loves her family .a calm girl who tolerate every thing . opposite of sumo
nirmala malhotra- a pati vrata woman .mother of shavu and pushkar
ramnath malhotra-father of shavu and pushkar.a selfish man.treats his wife like a servant pretend to be a decent man
rest of the characters will be introduced later

sorry if there are any writing mistake
nandini di and riya di can i add you in this os

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  1. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hmmmm nice intro!!!! ?? .. post soon !!!

    1. Thank you will try to post soon

  2. Welcome neeti..???☺☺
    Its a nice intro..story kis angle mey honey wali bats chal gayi.. Shuru kab kar rahi ho..?
    All the best???☺

    1. Thank you

  3. Sumo

    NYC! post soon.. ?

    1. Thank you

  4. Sharmansangel

    Look neeti its your os u can do anything and I give u full permission to use my name
    Lots of love???

    1. Thank you di

    2. Sorry di galti se galat email address de diya .dont no whose account but not mine

  5. Marie

    Wow neeti dear…!! It WS awesome yr….!! Loved it !!
    Plzz post soon !!
    Desptetlyyyyyy waiting..!

    Lota of luv

    1. Neeti

      Thank you i will post asap love to you too?

  6. Nandini aka Nandu

    Yes even i do. And its just a name so u can use it anywhere as per ur wish. And no need to thnak us. Btw if u are calling me and riya ‘di’ then whts ur age? In which class are u ?? Do reply and post the ff soon.lots of love neeti.

    1. Neeti

      Thank you baise age to meri 13 he but class bataongi to shock lage ga so let it be

  7. Nikita

    Great intro.. Loved soon

    1. Neeti

      Thank you love you nd your ff will post soon

  8. pretty preeti

    Nice neeti
    Post soon sweety pie
    Love from my side
    Nice intro

    1. Neeti

      Thank you pretty di love you too aur hamesha Ki tarha will post asap

    2. Neeti

      Thank you pretty di i will try to post soon

      1. Neeti

        Galti se do agaya

  9. Angel_pari

    Intro is nyc itself loved it post soon

    1. Neeti

      Thank you will post soon

  10. nyc intro. interesring n ya i wll wait fr ur epi 🙂

    1. Neeti

      Thank you di

  11. Neeti

    Baise itro to Maine show jesai hi likha to tarif to show ke writer Ki wah bah hi honi chaihe i wrote in profile but still can anyone guess which country i belong to

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