Hum saath saath hain-YHM,IPKKND,Swararagini,ETRETR SS Part10

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Hum Saath Saath Hain Part 10
After a few days…

Arnav went to Gupta house.
Garma:Arnav beta…Prerna is consulting the astrologer to fix your wedding date with Khushi.
Arn:I know.But sorry auntiji.I can’t marry Khushi in this stage.
Shashi:Arnav…we all know that very well.Even we are not in a hurry to conduct your wedding in the midst of family problems.Khushi also understands that.
Khushi came.Shashi and Garima left leaving them alone.
Arn:Khushi…I am sorry.I can’t marry you now.Are you angry with me?

K:Arnav,how could you even thiLaksh that I will be angry with you for that?Don’t you know that I can read your mind very well?Your family is my family too.And I also don’t want to get married now.We will get married when our family is full of happiness and peace.
Arnav held her hand:ThaLaksh you Khushi for being so understanding.You are my luck.
She smiled emotionally.

Arnav came back home.
Prerna:Arnav…the astrologer said that this month there is a good date for yours and Khushi’s wedding.
Arn:Oh stop it mom.I don’t want to get married when my Raman bhaiyya is isolated by you.When he is in tears I don’t want to get married and enjoy.I will marry Khushi only when Raman bhaiyya smiles happily from the bottom of his heart.
He walked away.Prerna became dull.

All were having dinner.All were silent.
Prerna:Why so much of silence in this house now?No jokes,no laugh,no chat…Nandu…you used tojoke a lot.Now what happened?
LAKSH:Mom…Don’t call me Nandu.
Prerna:Why?
LAKSH:Because you call me Nandu when you feel so much of love for me and I don’t need the love which you don’t give Raman bhaiyya.
LAKSH walked away.
Raman felt sad:LAKSH…
Arnav:Even I don’t want food.
Arnav walked off.
Rishab,Raman and Ishita became upset.
Prer:Raman,did you see it?Because of you my sons hate me.
Raman’s eyes became wet:Maa…
Prer:Don’t call me Maa.If you really considered me as your mother you would’nt have turned them against me.
Raman:No Maa.You are misunderstanding me.I never tried to turn them against me.Believe me Maa.
Prer:I am not a fool to believe your fake tears.I know that you are happy to see my sons turning against me.You are too cruel Raman.I hate you.
Raman was shattered:Maa!
Ishita was in tears.
Rishab:Prerna…what are you saying?You used to love Raman a lot.Was it fake?Must be fake.If your love was true you would’nt have admitted that you hate him now.I hate you Prerna.Now I regret marrying you.

Prerna’s heart was pricked.
Prerna:Wow!You made my husband also hate me Raman.
Raman:No Maa.
Prerna:Don’t come in front of me.Get lost.
Raman:Maa!
Prerna:I don’t want to see your face again.
Raman was shocked.
Raman:Maa…do you want me to leave this house?Tell me.
Prerna:Yes.Leave this house.
Rishab,Raman and Ishita were shocked.
Rish:Prerna…what are you saying?
Prerna was silent.

Raman cried while packing his luggage.Ishita tried to console him:Raman…control yourself.Don’t be weak.Your brothers will also be upset.And trust me.Mummiji’s misunderstandings will go and she will love you like before.

Raman:Ishita…like you think Maa does’nt hate me.She still love me.It’s just that she is angry with me.I am sure that one day her anger will melt.
Prerna who overheard this said in her mind:Raman…when others think that you really hate me why are you always sure that I love you?You are great Raman.

Seeing Raman and Ishita leave Arnav and LAKSH cried.Rishab was numb.Khushi and Ragini who were there also became upset.
Arn:Dad,why are you not stopping bhaiiya from going?
Rish:Let him leave.That’s better.If he leaves he will get peace of mind.Here he will only get taunts.
LAKSH and Arnav went near Raman and Ishita painfully.They hugged Raman-Ishita and cried.
Raman:Don’t cry…We will be back one day.Maa will accept me again.Wait and see.
Ishita:Yes Arnav Devarji and LAKSH devarji..we will definitely come back.This is only a temporary exit.

Raman:Take care of papa Maa.
Arnav-LAKSH nodded tearfully.
Ishita to Khushi and Ragini:Take care of my Devarjies Arnav and LAKSH.
Ragini nodded tearfully.
Raman smiled:Ishita.. is there any need to tell Khushi and Ragini to look after Arnav and LAKSH?They will even worship your devarjies.
Ishita was in tears:You are right Raman.We don’t need to worry about that at all.

Khushi wiped her tears:Yes Ishita bhabhi.We will not let them know your absence.But the truth is that we can never replace you.
Ishita felt emotional.
ISHITA:I am so lucky to get such sweet devranies.Khushi,my sister turned out to be dearest Devrani.And Ragini …you are the sweetest and perfect for LAKSH devarji.
Khushi and Ragini hugged Ishita tearfully.
ISHITA:Khushi…Ragini…don’t send us with tears.We won’t be happy.
They wiped their tears.
Ragini:We will not cry Ishita bhabhi.Come back soon.We will be expecting it.

Khushi:Devi maiyya will surely bring you both back.

Ishita and Raman smiled:Sure.
Raman-Ishita left waving hands at them with tears.

LAKSH:Still bhaiyya has so much of hope that mom will call him back.
Arnav wept.

Arnav:Mom,are you happy when Raman bhaiyya left this hiuse?
LAKSH:You stooped so low that you made him leave the house.Why mom?
Arn:Because you don’t trust Raman bhaiyya’s love?But how could you forget so easily that Raman bhaiyya risked his own life to save our life during childhood?Because of that incident he lost his health and got ridiculed by the whole world for his physical defect caused by that accident.But you forgot that very fast because he is not your real son?
LAKSH:Raman baiyya lost so much because of saving us.Still youdoubt his love and loyalty?How could you mom?
Prerna struggled hard to control her tears.
Rishab stared at Prerna:If you were not my children’s mother the moment you kicked out Raman and Ishita I would have sent you out.
Prerna was stunned.
Raja and Rani came.
Rani:Why are you all upset?Where are Raman bhaiyya and Ishita bhabhi?
Laksh cried:They left the house.
Rani was shocked:Why?
Arnav:It’s all because of mom.
They told her everything.Rani was shocked.She burst into tears.
Rani:I never expected this from you mom.You are so stone hearted.I feel ashamed to be your daughter.
Prerna ran to her room crying.
Rani cried:How could mom do this to Raman bhaiyya?
Arnav embraced her consoling her.

Raja entered Prerna’s room.
Raja:Mummiji!
Prerna:Raja…everyone hates me for what I did to Raman.
Raja became dull.
Prerna:But nobody knows that I did’nt do it purposefully.I was forced to do it.I love Raman very much.I did this only following your advise.
Suddenly Prerna saw Rishab,Rani,Arnav and LAKSH at the door way.They were stunned.
Arnav:What did you say mom?You were forced to do it as you obeyed Raja?

LAKSH:It means Raja only asked you to make him the managing director instead of Raman bhaiyya?
Rani:It’s because of Raja that you kicked Raman bhaiyya out?
Prerna was silent.Raja was sweating.
Rani looked at Raja:Mom is not saying anything.Tell me Raja…is it because you wanted to be the owner of our family property that mom did all this?
Raja could’nt face Rani.
Rani:Your silence speaks the hidden truth Raja.
LAKSH,Arnav,Khushi,Ragini and Rishab were shocked.
Rish:We considered you as our son.But you blackmailed Prerna to do this?Because of you I became so rude to Prerna.
Rishab to Prerna:I am sorry Prerna.You love Raman a lot.But I doubted your love for him.Sorry.
She cried.

Prerna fell into his arms and cried.
Arnav,LAKSH and Rani wept:Sorry mom for hurting your mind.
Prer:No children..
Rani:Sorry mom.Without knowing the truth how much did I shout at you shamelessly?
Prer:Don’t cry beta.
Rani:I don’t even deserve to be your daughter.
Prer: Don’t say like that Rani.
Prerna kissed her forehead and tried to console her.
Khushi:Rani,don’t cry.

Rani:Khushi bhabhi….I hurt my mom trusting my unfaithful husband blindly.
Rani hugged Khushi crying.Khushi caressed her:Rani….don’t cry too much.Everything will be alright.
Rani:No.Everything is over now.
Khushi became upset.

Khushi looked at Raja tearfully.Khushi remembered how she used to have fun with Raja and Rani.

K:I considered you as my brother.Remember the good times you,Rani and I had.I can’t believe that you are the same person.How could you do this Raja?
Raja wept silently.

Arnav stared at Raja pulling his shirt:Because of you we almost hated our mom.

LAKSH:Why did you do this Raja?
Rani:I trusted you blindly.But you hurt all my family members.I never thought that you were so cruel.
LAKSH:Rani…no need of talking to a cheap person like him.
Rani did’nt hear anything.She looked at Raja with burning anger.

Raja:Rani…
Rani:Don’t call me Rani.I hate you call me

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Raja was shocked:Rani..please don’t hate me.I can’t bear it.

Suddenly Rani slapped Raja.

All were shocked.Rani pulled his collar tight:You deserve only hatred.You are a destroyer.For wealth and position you ruined our family relationships.
Suddenly Prerna moved away Rani from Raja.

Prerna:Don’t hurt Raja.He is your husband.Don’t forget that.

Note

I never write ff on the movie which is perfect.I had seen Hum Saath saath hain long ago when I was a kid.I thought the film was perfect.Still I wrote this SS for fffan123.Butsince I don’t like writing ffs on perfect movies I was thinking whether I made a right decision by writing this SS.But After watching the movie again recently I don’t regret writing on this movie now.Because I did’nt like a loving stepmother like Mamta turning against her sweetest stepson Vivek just because someone brainwashed her.So I decided not to show the sweet step mother turning grey in my SS.This SS is my small attempt to show all the family members sweet unlike the movie where Mamta turns grey.

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30 Comments
  1. Superb dear

  2. IQRA222

    awesome

  3. nice update pls show ishra scene

  4. Asra

    superbbb dear…

  5. OH MY GOD JAS!!!!

    Lot of twist that I made and you changed some. Raja becomes selfish person and he follow Manorama way. Children have their right to hate Perna for what she did to Raman. Perna forget that children are Rishab’s children and also sibling. Arnav is right to say that Raman is not her real son and have stoop to low. Raja consol Perna then Perna blames Raja for children hatred which shocked Rani and family. Rishab and children fumed on Perna and Raja for destroy the family.

    Perna should not stop Rani and tell her that Raja is her husband. Everyone should question her for being a mother to Rishab’s children and love. Perna will realised that children are Rishab’s life not her.

    1. Jasminerahul

      Prerna loves Raman very much.But bcz of what she did obeying Raja, Rishab and children misunderstood prerna.They thought that she is a typical stepmother to Raman

  6. Mansi

    Amazing update??arnav has done a good choice of not marrying khushi now due to family problems and khushi too understood him grt??how can prerna just tell Raman to leave from house and Raman still thinking prerna loves him kiddos to him?rani too got to know of Raman leaving home and started hating her mother for it but then the truth came which raja was hiding from her but I guess there is more to raja like he too doing this on someone’s instruction right???Shocking rani slapped raja?yes u made a right decision by writing this ss on the movie….Even I too dint like Mamta turning grey due to her friends influence in the movie….M liking ur twist in this ss a lot..Keep going…Update soon?

    1. Jasminerahul

      I decided to make Prerna positive in this SS.She was only pretending to be angry with Raman following Raja’s order.Actually she loves Raman very much.Thanks 4 ur support

      1. Mansi

        Ur welcomes Jasmine?good to know abt that?

  7. superb yaar

  8. Fairy

    Superbbb dr…loved it!!!keep rockng n stay blessed?????

  9. Nice episode

  10. Shakaib

    First of all..very very sorry from me for late comment…Back to episode… It was amazing…. surprise by your note! Though you’re the first who tell me to write a fan fiction on Movie zameer, else I’ve never write fan fiction on movie. Can you please write a Fan fiction or Short Story on movie PK..?? It will nice one. It was emotional and funny movie. was sad that All accuse prena because they thought that Prena is typical stepmother to Raman but later, it get disclosed to everyone that prena is doing all this on Raja’s order..wonder why she follow Raja’s saying. Is there a secret which only raja knows about prena. Like arshi, raglak and Ishra scene. Like all cursing Raja for his deeds. wish Ishra comeback soon in next episode.

    1. Jasminerahul

      thx a lot.I have not seen PK properly.And its not a luv story.U know that all readers want only luv stories.U can suggest some other movie.I will try to write a ff on it

  11. Shakaib

    Okay! I think you can write ONE OF THEM on KKB, SNS, PMHMD, YHM.So, The other movie which is in my mind is,
    1.Koi Mil Gaya.
    2.Yeh Jawani Hai Deewani.

    1. Jasminerahul

      right now i’m writing 5 ffs.after finishing them i’ll go 4 ye jawani.but it won’t b exactly like the movie.i’ll b making changes

  12. Shakaib

    Of course you can make changes. BTW on which you’ve decided to write.

    1. Jasminerahul

      ranbir deepika would be abhigya.kalki aditya would be arya.Evelyn Sharma will be Ragini n Laksh will be her hero.thinking of including roli as pragya’s sis opposite siddhanth.

  13. Shakaib

    OMG! Abhigya ff…can’t wait…. you don’t include SNS leads for it also?

  14. Shakaib

    OMG! Abhigya ff…can’t wait…. you can include SNS leads for it also?

    1. Jasminerahul

      I don’t know if gohem can be included. if you want I can give them guest appearance or supporting role

  15. Shakaib

    I think you’re Writing 3 ffs here on telly and 2 on IF..RIGHT?

    1. Jasminerahul

      my ishra arshi ff love and emotions are over.hum saath, mohabbatein and fanaa are going on.on India forums I have 5 ffs including mohabbatein and fanaa. will be posting one new ff titled ae dil hai mushkil soon

  16. Shakaib

    Its okay! Though Gohem can’t be included as main characters but you can include them as supporting role. By this we can get to see some scenes on them. BTW on which Serial your new fan fiction ADHM Will be di..??

    1. Jasminerahul

      ok..i will include Gohem too.ADHM will be on MATSH n Arjun Mouni.will post soon n hopefully u will read n comment as Arjun Mouni r there

      1. Shakaib

        Of course I’ll comment…though I have not watched MATSH BUT WILL ENJOY THEM…WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO POST IT?

  17. Kumud

    Awesome ff

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